Selected Examples: (200 1 Full Score Composition of College Entrance Examination) Title: The art of honest choice of Henan candidates' life is the art of weighing gains and losses. The young man abandoned the "honest" backpack on the bumpy boat. Maybe he thought he balanced the gains and losses. But in my opinion, he abandoned a pillar of life and made the wrong choice. The breeze outside the window blows on my slightly hot cheek, and my thoughts come to mind ... If I were Venus of Milos, I would never give up "beauty"; If I were Plato in ancient Greece, I would never give up "intellectuality"; If I were Shylock in Venice, I would never give up "money" ... If I were just myself, then I would never give up "honesty". Living in modern times, I am first and foremost a person, an independent person after leaving my mother. I am eager to change my self-cultivation with good moral standards; Honesty is the most basic. "Faith" originates from "sincerity", which is more sincere because of "faith". "Honesty" occupies a large proportion in the culture of the Chinese nation. Qu Yuan, who was exiled to Xupu, Su Wu, who was grazing, and Wen Tianxiang, who died, proved their sincerity to the motherland with their actions. Sima Qian, who was imprisoned, and Yao Chong, who was demoted, abandoned their own camp, and proved their frankness to their friends and masters with their actions. Every time I open these historical scrolls, I will be shocked and moved by them, hoping to add my name to their names. Some people say that you chose "honesty", so what did you give up? Actually, it doesn't matter what you give up. I only know that the choice of "sincerity" can balance the gains and losses, and make my work and life less sophisticated and sleek, more moved and communicate with my heart. Professor Xie, who designed and built Citigroup Tower, a skyscraper in new york, proved this to the world. When there were loopholes in his eureka tower design, which might be broken in the gale, he resolutely submitted an investigation report to the municipal authorities. All the honors, money and applause seemed far away from him, but he sent out sincere words on the radio: "I don't beg for forgiveness, I just hope that the building can be strengthened as soon as possible." Ordinary words touched ordinary people. Thanks to Xie's honesty, his career as an engineer continued. This gave birth to the strongest World Trade Center. How many people in real life understand the true meaning and importance of "honesty"? They took other people's faces as the theme, their words as rhetoric and their emotions as embellishment, and wrote a ridiculous life without sincerity. When you are at the crossroads of life, think carefully about what is human nature and what is more important, and make a rational choice. Only in this way can we let colorful clouds shine on ourselves and let life feel the sincerity of human nature and the infinite happiness of life. Comments on substantive arguments and visual expression are the characteristics of this paper. Take Venus, Plato, Qu Yuan, Su Shi, Sima Qian and other nine Chinese and foreign celebrities as examples to show people's different attitudes towards honesty from different angles and sides. The seventh paragraph further demonstrates the importance of honesty with a typical example of Professor Xie who can correct his mistakes. With the help of metaphor, the eighth paragraph expounds the absurdity of dishonesty from the opposite side, and transforms abstract reasoning into image interpretation. This paper not only skillfully uses examples, but also is good at using image expressions such as description and lyric. For example, in the second paragraph, meticulous description and lyricism are integrated, especially at the end of the article, rational discussion turns into passionate expectation, and several examples are given to readers. Life is like a Rubik's cube, and many things happen by accident. Many people think that accidents happen by accident, but they are not. As long as we carefully analyze its cause and effect, we will find its inevitability and find that everything is reasonable. How can there be fruitful results without paying? In the second CCTV "Touching China" released this year, it seems that a few of them have never entered the public eye, but in the past year, unknown people moved China together with shining people. Walking from the bustling city into the depths of the mountains, he carried the fallen classroom and the poor and lonely Xu Benyu with his tender shoulders; Liang Wanjun, who saved the test flight prototype in a crisis and created a miracle; Send warm, Gui Xi 'en who gathers love and uncovers the cover of AIDS; Ming Zheng Bin, the fearless hero of drug control in the border area who was scared by drug dealers, didn't buy it ... When the names of these ordinary people appeared on the list of "touching China", many people were surprised, but without selfless dedication, indomitable predicament, perseverance and extraordinary achievements and actions, how could they touch China? Visible, some unexpected things, the reasons are actually reasonable, only pay will be rewarded! Not only at home, but also abroad, we can see many seemingly unexpected examples that are actually reasonable. Marx was still able to write Das Kapital when he was down and out. Madame Curie can become the only female scientist in the world who won the Nobel Prize twice. Newton discovered the law of conservation and transformation of energy; Bohr founded a world-class school of quantum physics; Bell invented the telephone ... these unexpected achievements are inseparable from the scientific spirit of being brave in questioning and innovation, and from their unremitting efforts. From great scientists and historical figures to relatives and classmates around us, we can find things that are "unexpected and reasonable". Looking at the results of the "dark horses" on the report card, while admiring them, have you ever thought about the dark night behind the results, the expression of concentration in class, and the opportunity belongs only to those prepared minds? Unexpectedly, there are countless things that are reasonable. From these things, we see the unity of contingency and inevitability, and understand the true meaning of "unexpected, reasonable"-how can we have fruitful results without paying? Comments: This is a typical argumentative essay. Over the years, most candidates have abandoned this style and often pursue novelty excessively. As everyone knows, rejuvenation at this time has become a sense of freshness and uniqueness. The idea of this paper is very clear: first, put forward my own argument-"no pains, no gains", then demonstrate my own point of view from domestic, foreign and real life examples, and finally echo the first paragraph, so that the full text can be integrated, step by step, flowing smoothly, without the slightest sense of stagnation, and the language of the article is concise, which shows that the author has a good writing skills. The materials selected in this paper are typical and persuasive, reflecting the candidates' extensive knowledge and keen observation. In 2007, Hunan College Entrance Examination (Hunan Volume 2007), please write an argumentative essay or narrative with the theme of "living poetically" in connection with your own life and feelings. Note: (1) Pay attention to the word "ground" in the title. (2) Don't copy. Living Poetically Heidegger, a Hunan examinee, said, "People should live poetically." When birds soar in the sky, when flowers bloom on the earth, when people smile, poetry begins to flow in life. People should live poetically. Living poetically stems from the harmony in people's hearts. Ji Xianlin once said: True harmony is the harmony in people's hearts. "True harmony is the harmony between people." Imagine how a person with a turbid heart can make his life full of poetry. A person's attitude towards life is often a true reflection of his heart. As a result, sister Lin, who is as clear as water, lived in Xiaoxiang Pavilion, shed tears in the wind under the lush bamboo trees, expressed her feelings for the moon, and sang a few light and strange poems. Xue Pan, who smells like wine and meat, only knows how to guess the rules and talk nonsense about "a mosquito groans". People who are harmonious in heart and full of love for everything can live poetically. Mother Teresa brings love to every poor person, and love makes her life full of poetry; Father Pierre sent warmth to the homeless, and his care made his life full of poetry. Academician Yuan Longping sends hope to the hungry, and love makes his life full of poetry. Only when people have inner harmony and love everything can they learn to live poetically. To live poetically, people need to draw nutrition from reading. Let reading become a part of life, and life can become poetic. When people explore the way of being a man from the classics of Confucianism, Taoism and Mohism, when people open the mirror of history from Sima Qian's bamboo slips, and when people realize the writing method from the works of eight masters in Tang and Song Dynasties, wisdom begins to nourish people's dry souls and inject poetry into them. When people think about the hermit's feelings from Tao Yuanming's Chrysanthemum, when people feel the change of life and death from Shi Tiesheng's Altar, and when people find the peace of life from Rousseau's Walden Lake, thinking begins to put wings on the soul and let it soar in the poetic sky. Only when people gain wisdom from reading and learn to think from reading can they experience a poetic life. To live poetically, people need to let nature soothe their impetuous hearts. Modern people's life is full of running for their livelihood and future, full of noisy whistle and noise, and full of indifference and vigilance between people. People need to find the poetry of life in the breeze and birdsong. The vast and desolate forest brought rich and sad feelings to Shakespeare who lived poetically, the flowing Danube brought beautiful charm to Strauss' family, and the ancient and vicissitudes of Fenghuang ancient city brought historical simplicity and profundity to Shen Congwen who lived poetically. The agility and purity of nature make people live more poetically. When people live with inner harmony and love, when people gain wisdom and thoughts from reading, and when people seek comfort from nature, people can live poetically as Liu Yuxi wrote in My Humble Room. After putting forward the viewpoint that "people should live poetically", the excellent review article discusses it from three aspects: inner harmony and love, drawing nourishment from reading, and letting nature soothe impetuous hearts. The first level can be regarded as the premise and condition of the latter two levels, which are the deepening of the former level and profoundly answer the question of how to live poetically. Finally, the full-text collection is convenient and the structure is rigorous. The viewpoint of the article is more personal; Rich examples, showing a good knowledge reserve; The language is fluent and the sentences are vivid.