During the Spring and Autumn Period, Qin Mugong secretly sent troops to attack Zheng. At that time, a businessman named Gao Xian in the state of Zheng was going to Luoyang to do business. On this day, on the way, I met Qin Jun, who hurried to the east. He knew at a glance what was going on He used his quick wits and immediately calmly took out four pieces of cooked cowhide, plus 12 cows. On behalf of Zheng, he comforted and said, "The monarch of our country heard that your army has come, which is very welcome. This is a little gift from me to show my gratitude. " At the same time of handling, send someone to report to Zheng quickly.

The generals of the state of Qin knew that Zheng was prepared and could not sneak attack, so they stopped moving eastward and returned to China. Zheng's talents avoided a disaster. They rushed to tell each other: "Gao Xian is really a patriotic businessman!" "

Material 2:

China * * * Party held high the banner of patriotism in history and wrote patriotic heroic poems. Martyr Fang Zhimin wrote "Lovely China" in prison; General Yang Jingyu's belly was full of grass roots and bark after his sacrifice; Martyr Lin Juemin sacrificed everything for people's liberation. Their patriotism is the true soul of China.

Material 3:

/kloc-in the summer of 0/848, Mr. Zhu Ziqing got a serious stomach trouble, and his family was poor and had no money to treat him. One day, Wu Han asked Zhu Ziqing to sign a declaration of "protesting the American policy of aiding Japan and refusing to accept American flour assistance". Zhu Ziqing said: "I would rather die of poverty and illness than accept such insulting charity!" Then, he meticulously signed his name on the statement. After Wu Han left, Zhu Ziqing wrote in his diary: "This matter will cost 6 million francs a month, which has a great impact on the family, but I decided to sign it, because I am anti-American and anti-Japanese, and I should start directly from myself." On August 12, 2008, Mr. Zhu finally died in Peiping because of poverty.

Material 4:

Zhang Xinyi, director of Changchun Institute of Physics, Chinese Academy of Sciences, who studied under Madame Curie, obtained a doctorate in physics by defending her doctoral thesis. His papers were read at international physics conferences held in Belgium, Japan and Germany, and published in scientific journals in these countries respectively. On the front page of his thesis, he wrote "Dedicated to my motherland" in six Chinese characters. A western student asked him, "Do you really only think about your motherland?" Zhang Xinyi replied: "The motherland grows in my heart." When the typist asked why the first page of his paper didn't say "for my wife", he replied with a smile: "My motherland is everything to me, and she includes all my relatives!"

Material 5:

1830, polish musician Chopin decided to go abroad for further study and win glory for his motherland. When he left, he gratefully accepted the silver cup filled with the soil of the motherland presented by his friends. He traveled to Vienna, London, Paris and other places, and through his art, he enhanced the sympathy and understanding of the people in western Europe for the Polish nation who was suffering at that time. However, in an unstable life, he became seriously ill. 1849, his sister came from Warsaw and spent the last few days with him. Before he died, he told his sister that the Polish government would not allow his body to be transported back to Warsaw, and he demanded "at least get my heart back." According to his last wish, his heart was sent to Warsaw. It symbolizes Chopin's strong love for his motherland.

Material 6:

On the report that Harbin Normal University students applied to work in Xinjiang, a graduate named Li Guangwu wrote: "Give me a rope of the times, China's cart, and we will pull it!"

Reference examples of topic refinement

From the above arguments, the following themes can be extracted.

1, patriotic regardless of seniority

2. Chopin's heart-a portrayal of patriotism

3. Valuable Businessman-Chord Height

4. Patriotism-the true soul of China.

Our motherland is everything to us.

6, China car-we pull.

Evaluation of application success or failure

China's cart, we pull!

Shi Yulong

"On the muddy road after the storm, China's carriage began to move forward again. Someone is sitting in the car complaining that the speed is too slow. I just want to say,' Give me a rope of the times, China sent a cart, and we will pull it!' This sentence was written by Li Guangwu, a graduate of Harbin Normal University, in a report about his application to work in Xinjiang.

How well he speaks! "... China cart, let's pull! "Recalling his heartfelt words repeatedly, I was deeply moved by his every word and struck the ground. Isn't that what it is? After ten years of hardships, China's carriage began to move forward again. After the storm, the rough road became more and more difficult to walk. At this moment, those who just sit ...