Topic review
There are all kinds of doors in life, tangible and intangible; Open and close; Different connotations of the right and wrong door lead to different stories and feelings.
Please use it? Door? Write an article on the topic, self-defined, self-defined, self-selected style, no less than 800 words.
Writing instruction
? Door? This topic can be interpreted from the following aspects.
1, in form, can be divided into concrete and abstract.
(1) Concrete doors, that is, tangible doors, refer not only to the entrances and exits of houses, vehicles, ships or places enclosed by walls and fences, such as front doors and doorways, but also to barriers made of wood or metal materials that can be opened and closed, such as iron gates; It also refers to something that looks like a door in shape or behavior, such as a switch, goal, gate, etc.
(2) The abstract door is invisible, so we can refer to the laws of methods and skills, such as door diameter and tricks. It can also refer to desire, emotion, realm, thought and soul, such as the door of communication, understanding, old and new ideas, tolerance, friendship, dedication, heaven, hell and rebirth. It can also refer to religious and academic factions, such as Confucianism and Buddhism.
2. In terms of connotation, it is rich in connotation. The door can be the starting point, the boundary or the end point; The door can be a departure, a leap, a takeoff and a sublimation.
3. From the point of view: (1) You can write a true story caused by a concrete and tangible door. For example, the door of the boys' apartment in school is always closed late, because the old doorman risks violating discipline for a mountain college student who studies hard under the toilet light after turning off the lights; You can also write about the changes of doors, from no doors to doors, to wooden doors, to iron doors, and even to the current security doors. The change of door reflects the development of history, the improvement of social material life, the weakening of real feelings between people, the psychological changes of deepening diaphragm and so on. You can also treat the door as a growing process. Writing about life has to go through many doors, from birth to home, school and society, and writing about the process and feelings of people's growth and maturity. (2) You can only write abstract and invisible doors, such as opening the door of the soul, learning to be tolerant, friendly and grateful, and abandoning narrowness, selfishness and indifference; Open the door, reform and opening up, communicate with all nationalities in the world, take its essence, discard its dross, absorb advanced culture and critically inherit traditional cultural heritage. (3) We can also combine abstract doors with concrete doors and regard them as obstacles to progress. Only by crossing the threshold of life and undergoing repeated tests can we achieve real eternal life and moral sublimation.
4. Stylistically, it can be written as prose (narrative prose, lyric prose, philosophical prose), argumentative essay (such as opening the door of honesty, talking about the importance of honesty, calling for sincerity and trustworthiness), or it can be imagined, written as fairy tales and fables to clarify the philosophy of life. It can also be written as an exposition (on the changes and history of the door), but it is not easy to write an exposition.
Wen Yi: Push the door open.
Several ancient love, with the passage of time, through time and space, like a beautiful woman, floating from far and near, it is the most classic page in the history of love.
A pair of butterflies flew from ancient times, namely butterfly lovers. Their love was short and beautiful, and they told the classics through feudal ethics. Their love is sincere, and the door of love is pushed open because of their sincerity. They couldn't walk through that door, but the butterflies both flew into the hall of love.
A pair of mandarin ducks are from a book, namely Jiao Zhongqing and Liu Lanzhi. Their love can stand the test of blood relationship. Puwei line, such as silk, rock without turning? Such an oath of loyalty opens the door to love. They crossed the door of love and performed another classic.
The door of love was also pushed open by Cui Yingying's infatuation, by romeo's unswerving determination to Juliet, and by the White Snake's waiting for twenty years under the Leifeng Tower.
The door of love is usually pushed open by the persistence of the soul. By pushing this door open, love has been sublimated; Facing this door brings endless reverie.
Butterfly lovers's love is long gone, the classic of Jiao Bird has long since become history, Cui Zhang's swan song of marriage has long been exhausted, Romeo and Juliet's loyalty has long been buried in the grave, and the love between man and snake has long been a much-told story. But they all pushed open the eternal door, and they performed one classic after another, one legend after another.
? Hold your hand and grow old with your son? A simple oath can open the door to love. Push open the door of love, you may face the choice of affection and love, the test of life and death separation; But to open the door of love, show the classics everywhere and reveal the true feelings everywhere.
It is not enough to just push the door of love. Whether we can have love and protect it forever is another puzzling question throughout the ages. ? Love needs constant renewal, growth and creation? Lu Xun further explained the connotation of love. Zijun and Juansheng broke the shackles of ethics, pushed open the door of love and entered the hall of love, but they failed to stay together for a long time, which was heartbreaking and thought-provoking. Pushing open the door of love, we should stick to it, cherish what we have and keep it forever.
Comments: This article closely follows the topic, carefully selects materials, and lists the classic stories such as become a butterfly, Jiao Bird, Cui Yan, and the love between man and snake side by side. The materials are rich and handy. From ancient times to the present, the writing ideas are clear. At the end of the article, the topic is profound, revealing the philosophy of life that love must persist. In addition, the language is fluent and refined, and the literary talent is flying.
Appreciation of masterpieces: three doors
Seeing the iron gate in the distance, I remembered my mother's words: Go, son, go boldly! ?
Walking into the iron gate, the boss asked? You're here for the job, right? I nodded.
The boss said, young man, whoever wants to apply here has to go through three doors first. The first one is this iron gate. ? The boss made one? Please. This posture is really interesting.
I pushed the door gently, but it didn't open. So I pushed hard again, and the door seemed to push tighter and tighter. I had a brainwave and pulled the door outward, not wanting to be gently pulled open. The boss cast an approving look and said, Young man, you are very creative! ?
The second door is a pair of red wooden doors, closed but unlocked. Just a pair of wooden doors! I pushed and pulled hard, but the door didn't open. I feel ashamed and angry. At this moment, I heard my mother say, Son, every door has its own unique way of opening. ?
However, how can this door be opened?
I like watching mice steal food. I often put the sealed box containing food in the place where rats are infested, and then secretly hide it to one side. The mouse quickly found the food, bit the paper box with its teeth, and then got in and ate it. I suddenly found myself a mouse. As long as I have something to eat, I can do whatever I want. So, I found a big stone and smashed it in.
The boss stood in front of me and smiled. Young man, you have a lot of courage. ?
The third door is very special, a round door, surrounded by glass.
The boss said, it's where you work. ?
I saw the decoration in the room and the scene of 2 1 century modernization. At the same time, I saw my unkempt hair and beard turned white by the wind from the glass. I wonder how a young man of mine became a bad old man in such a short time. I hesitated and dared not open the door. I am afraid of failure.
The boss asked tentatively:? How come? Don't try.
I heard mother say to me again. Children, try it boldly. Actually, everyone has a key. ?
Where will the key be? I've asked myself a thousand times.
The boss said: This is the last door. ?
Yes, I went through two doors. Should I give up the last one? I don't want to miss the opportunity, no longer hesitate, striding towards the door.
The door opened by itself.
The boss said: congratulations, after three doors! ? Say it again: There are three doors inside. Dare you go in? I nodded. I think I can! Then how do you open those three doors? Use the key. Where are the keys? In my heart! ?
The boss smiled knowingly.
(Selected short stories)
Outward bound training (1)
Topic design
There are all kinds of roads in the world: roads and paths, straight roads and detours, dirt roads and cement roads, ordinary roads and expressways. The society is developing and the road is changing, from narrow and short to wide and long, from tangible to intangible. About the road, how many stories are exciting, how many stories are unbearable and how many stories are memorable.
Please use it? Road? Write an article on the topic, self-defined, self-defined, self-selected style, no less than 800 words.
Writing skills
? Road? That is, Tao has original meaning, figurative meaning and extended meaning, so there are tangible and intangible points, namely, real Tao and virtual Tao. You can write only one of them, or you can write them together and give them. Road? It has richer connotations.
1, take its original meaning, and conceive ideas and layout from the perspective of tangible road (that is, real road).
(1) Borrow? Road? Lyrics written in narrative or prose. For example, write about your hometown road, witness your growth, leave your hometown for a long time, and express your homesickness; Write a campus path, witness your progress, bid farewell to your alma mater and embark on a new journey, and express your nostalgia and gratitude; The development and change of writing road, from narrow and short to wide and long, from dirt road to asphalt road, witnessed the progress of society and the improvement of people's living standards, and praised the party's policy of enriching the people.
(2) Introduce the development and evolution history of Lu, and write an expository article. This paper mainly introduces the formation, development and function of roads, and looks forward to the development trend of roads. But it needs a certain amount of data, which is difficult to write and not easy to shine.
Note: All the above are tangible ways. If you only stay in a tangible way, it is difficult to write articles with profound thoughts and rich connotations.
2. Take its metaphorical meaning and conceive, lay out and discuss it from the angle of invisible road (that is, virtual road). Different roads explain different lives to people.
( 1)? Way out? And then what? Dead end? . In the face of adversity and setbacks, we should dare to face up to the bleak life, keep forging ahead, find a way out, never go to a dead end, laugh off the hardships in life, look forward to the future and never give up, just like Wang Guozhen said? There is no mountain higher than man, and there is no road longer than feet? . ? There is no way to doubt the mountains and rivers? After that, it must be? Another village? . Because? God never shuts one door but he opens another, okay? ,? All roads lead to Rome? .
2 who is the author? Road? According to the characteristics of different roads, we can dig out deeper meanings, such as the road of learning, the road of teaching, the road of seeking art (proficiency-skill-diligence), the road of success, the road of struggle, the road of degeneration, the road of failure, the road of exploration and the road of innovation. Feel different life philosophies from different life paths.
(3) Combination of original meaning and figurative meaning, multi-angle conception and layout. From the phenomena and facts about roads in real life, we can generate associations and expand our thinking. For example, roads are divided into fast lanes, slow lanes, motor vehicle lanes, sidewalks and other rules, which are related to certain social order, certain principles of human survival in the world, and certain laws of things development.
From the perspective of the combination of figurative meaning and original figurative meaning, we can write an argumentative essay or an argumentative essay (such as the road to innovation, courage, will and action, optimism, etc.). ), or as short stories, fairy tales, fables, plays, etc. To clarify the philosophy of life.
Outward Bound Training (2)
Topic design
What's in Du Fu's Wang Yue? Once you climb to the top of the mountain, you will see that all the other mountains look short under the sky. ? In Wang Anshi's Deng Fei Laifeng? Don't be afraid of floating clouds, just because you are the highest level? They wrote about the lofty sentiments of climbing mountains and used them to express their spiritual hugs. As Liu Xie said in Wen Xin Diao Long? Mountaineering is very emotional, and watching the sea is also very emotional. . Climbing the mountain is pleasing to the eye and refreshing; Facing the mountains, people are full of emotion and imagination.
Please use it? Mountain? Write an article on the topic, with self-defined ideas, self-defined topics and self-selected styles, with no less than 800 words.
Writing skills
? Mountain? There are mountains of nature and mountains of people's hearts, that is, tangible and intangible, so by? Mountain? The feelings caused are different. For what? Mountain? The train of thought of this topic can be interpreted from the following aspects.
1, tangible mountains, such as those in hometown, are symbols of hometown and can be used to express homesickness and homesickness; In the mountains of nature, Fu and Wang Anshi can borrow mountains to express their lofty aspirations.
2. Invisible mountains can be associated with mountains and write different connotations of mountains.
(1) Family ties are mountains. The mountain has its temperament-calmness. The calmness of the mountain gives people an honest, deep, solid and reliable feeling. Father's love is a mountain, deep, rough but gentle, both rigid and soft.
(2) Dignity is a mountain. For example, a poor student kneels on the street begging for college tuition, instead of relying on his own labor (such as working as a tutor, etc.). ), thinking that begging for money comes quickly, but I don't know? There is gold under a man's knee? Dignity is a mountain, and dignity is priceless!
(3) Obstacles, obstacles, setbacks, conservatism and backwardness are all mountains. However, it is also a tool to temper people's will. Mountains are stubborn, difficult to change and conquer, and are obstacles to people's progress. If difficulties are mountains and conservative forces are mountains, then people need tenacious will and unyielding spirit to overcome them.
Door, a common thing. Who has never dealt with a door in his life? When I was a child, home was our warmest harbor; When we grow up, the school gate is the most loyal friend who accompanies us to study and study; When we step into the society, the doors of factories, shops and hospitals evoke many beautiful dreams and reverie. Maybe someone will go abroad, maybe someone will go to prison. What kind of door will life open for me, you and him?
Would you please take it? Door? Write an article about 800 words for the topic, the topic is self-made, and the style is not limited to poetry.
Examination guidance
Doors can refer to concrete doors, and can also be compared to barriers between people, artificial obstacles, or closed symbols. ? Open the door? It can be understood as communication between people, or breaking some kind of closure, or opening the country: Close the door? It can be understood as self-enclosure or artificial barriers and obstacles. With the above understanding, writing ideas can be opened. You can use a specific door as a clue to describe a thing, describe a person, and write a fairy tale or fable; You can also associate various metaphors and symbolic meanings of the door and write lyric prose or argumentative essays. You can also use anthropomorphic techniques to write an introduction in the form of a sketch. Door? A description of the origin, types and functions of the door.
[Idea 1] Conceived from the door-building motivation. Now factories, mines, hospitals and schools attach great importance to it? Facade, the door of your unit will be changed every three or five times, right? Borrow money? . Have you ever been in this situation? How do you feel about this? Write down what you see and feel, which can be used to write people's notes or to criticize the current shortcomings. The front door is evil, too Alert the world from the perspective of ... [Idea 2] Start thinking from the metaphorical meaning of the door. Your academic performance is not ideal. Can you give up on yourself? Years of friendship have been misunderstood. Do you have the heart to make a clean break? Learn to cross the threshold that makes you hesitate and depressed, overcome yourself, and bravely approach happiness and success. The full text should focus on describing the psychological change process before and after crossing the threshold and the specific behavior when crossing the threshold, giving people positive enlightenment. [Idea 3] Think from the negative impact of the door. For example, the owners of the same apartment don't know each other, and the security door enters the homes of ordinary people, imprisoning neighbors in a narrow world, which makes people insensitive to general social communication, and then appeals to the door owner: in your spare time, please open your security door, pass a smile between the doors, or invite several neighbors to have tea and chat, and open the door to their hearts. To express the desire for ideal interpersonal relationships. [Idea 4] Start thinking from the perspective of the nature of opening the country twice. This paper focuses on the comparative analysis of the national conditions and results of the two opening up to the outside world, and then draws a conclusion, aiming at inspiring the descendants of Emperor Yan to make great efforts to enrich the country and strengthen the people. In addition, you can also download from? Just opened the door. Space gate?
Inspection angle: ① Inside and outside the door. What's the difference between the world inside the door and the people outside? What is the mentality of people inside the door to the world outside?
② Close the door and open the door. The door is closed to keep people away, not to let others in, and I don't want to go in. Can you open the door and make a world out of it?
③ Passive door opening and active door opening. The Manchu dynasty was opened by western warships and guns, leaving behind untold shame. In the 1980s, an old man opened the door, and the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation began to take the fast track.
4 giants are cold. ? No more than three generations? With what? Red plums are born in the cold, and poor people produce talents? . ? Thirty years in Hedong? With what? Thirty years in Hexi? The evolution of the rich and the poor.
Heaven and hell, truth and error, success and failure are the same door. Once people can't master it, the situation is completely different. These two extremes are our real world.
The story of the front door and the back door tells us how to make our political life go to the sunshine zone. ⑦ The door of history. Communicate with the ancients in history and learn from them. Don't forget the past, the teacher of the future? .
8 Go abroad. Many people gave their lives and blood for your dignity and integrity.
Pet-name ruby has an abstract heart. Whether it is self-enclosed or open-minded, suspicious or upright, the tragicomedy of life has evolved. Attending the door of thinking. A person with a broad mind is naturally comfortable in life. A person is not enterprising, rigid and conservative,
Life is naturally stretched and flustered.
⑾ There is also the door of people's understanding, the door of a person, a country, a nation's development, the door of literature and so on.
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