Please choose your favorite poem from the six poems in the first unit of the compulsory course of People's Education Press, and write a review article of not less than 500 words according to the template of literary criticism.

Training objectives

1. Reread and explore the poems in this unit through writing.

2. Understand the elements and basic requirements of argumentative writing, be able to write an argumentative sentence with a clear point of view, "My favorite poem is ……", and explain the reasons for liking it from at least two angles.

3. The writing task to be completed in this training is to answer the question-which of the six poems in Unit 1 do you like best, and explain the reasons why you like this poem from different angles.

The template is as follows

Problem elaboration

This assignment is the first time for senior three to write argumentative essays, and most students are also exposed to argumentative essays for the first time, so they don't know enough about stylistic features, so there are some * * * problems in writing, which are listed here. I hope students can evaluate their compositions on the premise of learning excellent works.

Question 1: replace ideas with titles. Some students' topics are opinions, such as "My favorite poem is Qinyuan Chunchangsha", which is very good. But the first paragraph still needs to express this view in obvious places.

Second, the main part has no structural awareness and can't see the discussion ideas. A few students failed to explain the reasons from different angles.

Question 3: Ask Du Niang and copy Du Niang. Reference is a way to acquire knowledge, but if we don't think and choose, then our attitudes and opinions will be influenced by others and lose the light of our thoughts. In addition, if you simply learn from the questions without reviewing them, you will inevitably answer irrelevant questions and fail to complete the writing task.

Excellent work

Please read the excellent homework below, pay attention to the teacher's comments and think about how to upgrade your homework.

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Upgrade to practice.

1. The following paragraph is a student's main argument about this composition. Please refer to the teacher's comments to rewrite.

Second, please upgrade the following articles from two aspects:

1. Add a clear opinion sentence to the first paragraph.

2. Rewrite the main part with reference to the comments and add an appropriate opening sentence (sub-argument) for each sub-argument paragraph.