1, no problem or unclear problem. The correct way, the whole paper, should be around a specific problem, the paper is problem-oriented, is to find problems, find problems, solve problems, the paper is to study problems, there is no problem, it is not a paper at all, it may be an exposition, it may also be a narrative.

2. The information is too old. It's just that the cited academic materials such as papers and works are too old. In fact, the reason is very simple. If you can't even see the latest materials, if your materials are too old, your paper can't be innovative. Old materials, in any case, can not write innovative papers.

3. There are too many conclusive contents. Some papers have too much content in the conclusion part of the first draft, and some have published 8 pages or even 10 pages, which is unreasonable and should not be. No more than two pages at most. More space and content of the paper should be used for analysis and demonstration. There are too many contents in the conclusion part, which means that you have come to a conclusion without analyzing and demonstrating at all.

4. There is no logical relationship between the contents of each part. The first draft of some students' papers, the content of each part, especially the conclusion part, is basically irrelevant to all the previous contents, and there is no logical relationship! The whole paper should focus on the problem, and there should be a strict logical relationship between the parts. Otherwise, it is a hodgepodge, that is, putting irrelevant content together.

Writing significance:

Writing graduation thesis is an important measure to test students' academic performance in school and an important link to improve teaching quality. College students must finish the task of writing graduation thesis before graduation. To apply for a degree, you must submit the corresponding degree thesis, and you can get a degree only after your defense is passed. It can be said that graduation thesis is the intermediary and bridge to end college study and life and go to society.

Graduation thesis is the first exposure of college students' talents, a weighty answer to the motherland and the people, and a register for joining the cause of socialist modernization. Although a graduation thesis can't fully reflect a person's talent, it may not directly bring huge benefits to the society and have a pioneering impact on the major.