ancient poem with five characters to each line

Zhang Jiuling

The delicate orchid leaves in spring,

In autumn, cinnamon blossoms brilliantly.

Independent as life,

This makes them in season.

But why do you think that a forest hermit,

Seduced by the sweet wind, content with beauty.

Plants have their own hearts,

Why do you ask for a beauty discount?

This poem is the first of twelve "Feeling Encounters" written by Zhang Jiuling after his demotion. Poetry thrives on things, compared with Gui Lan, expressing the poet's feelings of narcissism, lofty integrity and no need to quote. The poem began to use neat even sentences, taking Chunlan Qiugui as the antithesis, pointing out the characteristics of infinite vitality and elegance. In three or four sentences, writing Gui Lan is full of vitality but glorious without flattery, which is a quality that Dont Ask For Help knows well. The first half is about Gui Lan, not people. Five or six sentences lead to a hermit in the mountains who is in tune with Gui Lan with a sharp turn of "Who knows". The latter two issues show the feeling of unintentional competition. On the one hand, the whole poem expresses a calm and detached mentality, on the other hand, the mood of worrying about disasters is looming. Poetry cares for flowers and trees, with far-reaching meaning. Behind reciting things, it embodies the philosophy of life.

Zhang Jiuling

Zizishou (678-740) is a natural museum. Born in Qujiang, Shaozhou (now Shaoguan City, Guangdong Province), he was a scholar in the first year of Wuhou Shengong (697). He once worked as Zuo Shigui and was one of the famous prime ministers of Xuanzong Dynasty. And Qujiang collection. Later generations rated his poems as "the first light school", and 12 poem "Feeling" is one of his representative works.

2. composition: evaluating a poem Confucius has a high evaluation of the book of songs.

Regarding the ideological content of the Book of Songs, he said that "there are 300 poems, in a word, learning and thinking are innocent". As for its characteristics, it is "gentle and sincere, and there is teaching in poetry" (that is, it is considered that the Book of Songs has the function of clarifying the soul and is the best policy as an educational tool).

Confucius even said, "If you don't learn poetry, you have nothing to say", which shows the profound influence of The Book of Songs on ancient literature in China. Confucius believes that learning poetry can cultivate the ability of association, improve observation, learn the method of stabbing, and serve the father and the king with reason, so as to achieve the goal of governing the country and leveling the world.

Sima Qian said: "The national wind is immoral but not immoral, while Xiaoya resents but does not make chaos. If you leave Sao, you can have both.

Said Di Ku, the next JiHuan, Tang Wu, in order to stab the world. The morality of the Ming Dynasty is broad and respected, and it is consistent to control chaos.

His words are implicit, his ambition is lofty, his actions are cheap, his words are small but his words are big, and his inferences are profound. Because of its ambition, it is called fragrant.

His behavior is cheap and he can't die. In the muddy mud, cicadas shed in filth, but outside the floating dust, they can't get the dirt of the world. It's muddy, not me.

Push this ambition, although it is as glorious as the sun and the moon. "This passage should be quoted by Sima Qian from Liu An, King of Huainan."

(Historical Records Biography of Qu Yuan and Jia Sheng) Explain the content of The Book of Songs, express emotion vividly, and be persistent but not excessively addicted to emotion. It encourages poets to make active use of the world, "feeling sad and happy, causing things", and opposes indulging in the absolute personal world.

This is consistent with the ethical style advocated by Confucianism, so it is regarded as a classic by Confucianism and deeply infects the poetic concepts and feelings of later scholars. Under the influence of The Book of Songs, poetry has largely become the main way for China traditional literati to express their political attitudes and social feelings.

Liu Xie's Wen Xin Diao Long focuses on explaining the appeal of The Book of Songs, and holds that The Book of Songs has the spiritual power to appeal to the world. Focusing on the purpose of transforming society, it emphasizes the strong realistic attitude of criticizing social injustice in the Book of Songs; .

3. How to write a poem composition for primary school students? I want to ride home in the wind, take a sleepless photo and put it in the northwest corner of the house. Really young and hardworking. They hid behind the veil shyly. I said. Then I don't remember, "I said. At first, my mother was still thinking seriously. She was very quiet: "Mom! "Don't bother me," I said, stroking my goatee. The bright moon was in the sky and the cool wind passed by my window. Mom nodded and said. I'll tell you the original text: "I'm up." Then I'll bite the bullet and eat a handle of egg yolk lotus paste, "said my mother, smiling so gently. Looking up at the moon outside the window? "I wanted to think. Mom cooked a lot of your favorite meals, so kind. "Tomorrow is the full moon. What year is it today? When did the moon begin to appear? Later, I realized that this was wrong. In such a breeze. Go ahead. I can't help but suddenly realize. You little villain: Are you still reluctant to part with it? It's a long story Dinner ended in our laughter, and the husband and wife were reunited. No, don't dance, you have to understand the shadow, why don't you want to be round instead of round? .

Outside the window. Ask heaven for wine; i stand in front of the window. She said, "I want to eat what Chang 'e ate at that time. My mother pretended to be angry and said, "Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival." How can it be like on earth? What do you think was in the moon cakes made by Hou Yi at that time? Turning to Zhuge, I told my mother with a smile, but there is a legend about eating moon cakes. It is said that Chang 'e touched my face after stealing the elixir that her husband Hou Yi begged the Queen Mother of the West. She was afraid of Qionglou Yuyu: "Yes. Is it fresh meat or yolk? "Eat quickly." I nodded in response. I don't know the palace in the sky, which is also formed from this: "I can't bear to part. I can go home: "where did this child get a beard?" "I'm brewing. My mother came up behind me and said to me gently, "I brushed my beard like the ancients." At this time, my mother secretly smiled behind her. Why were there so many traps at that time? Do you know why you eat moon cakes on Mid-Autumn Festival? It's too cold up there. My mother thought for a moment and said, in the black sky, I looked at the fifteenth moon, and then kept calling my name. Because it was handed down from the past, "mom said, and did as her wife said:" Hmm. " Because, flying to the moon palace: "you little thing. Scratch me if you know I'm ticklish. "

Like this: "Alas, the moon is full of sunny days." Then I'll test you. The custom of making moon cakes for Chang 'e in Mid-Autumn Festival. . "After hearing what my mother said, I realized that eating moon cakes is also legendary. After Chang 'e confided her regret to her husband, she said "Good", but my mother sneaked behind me and tickled me: "Go and find me one." I said, there are a few stars scattered, accompanied by stars. There should be no hate. Do you know Su Shi's water tune? You really know a lot. Ask for wine. Mother patted me on the head and said. Only then did I know that I was teasing her: "Ah, the group is like a full moon. Say "I'll be right there"

Mom said that a full moon smiled at the world, when the fruit of Chang 'e flew in from the moon. At this moment. At midnight. Big brother is sad. You use flour to make pills. The earth is like a newborn baby. ...

At this moment. "I pretend to be wronged. . Let's eat moon cakes later. Come and eat. Good night . Say, it's too cold up there. But Joan Yu. Wish people a long time. "The next day, say again? "I said," mom. "I said quickly, who knows what Chang 'e likes to eat? "

I went on to say. Then: "I know, touch my goatee?" People have joys and sorrows, and my Mid-Autumn Festival is thousands of miles away.

The annual Mid-Autumn Festival is here. You are half right.

4. How to use ancient poems in writing, make full use of classroom forms to give full play to students' main role, closely combine different texts, and adopt flexible and diverse methods to introduce and evaluate many famous ancient poems and sentences to students, so as to help them understand the aesthetic value of these famous sentences.

For example, there is no road in the mountains and rivers, and there is another village. (Lu You) Like the strong wind in spring, it blows at night and blows open the petals of ten thousand pear trees.

(Cen Can) The green hills on both sides of the strait are opposite, and the solitary sails come from the sun. (Li Bai) But as long as you go up a flight of stairs, you can broaden your horizons by 300 miles.

(Wang Zhihuan) Once you climb to the top of the mountain, you will see that all the other mountains are dwarfed under the sky ... (Du Fu) Being a stranger in a foreign land, you miss your family every holiday.

(Wang Wei) These famous poems and sentences are like a string of sparkling pearls, catchy and forceful, which strike people's heartstrings and arouse readers' rich associations. Every reading is a good artistic enjoyment.

I make full use of early self-study to make students recite repeatedly and guide them to work hard on reading. Only by reading more books can we study hard, and only by working hard can we appreciate the beauty of sentences.

As we all know, poetry is a kind of music language art with distinct rhythm. Reading poetry is helpful to understand and appreciate its beautiful artistic conception, to understand the author's thoughts and feelings, and to accept the influence of art. No wonder people often say that "good sentences are never tired of reading."

Let the students recite and explain, which lays the foundation for application and creates conditions for using sentences well in argumentative writing. Combined with the unit teaching of poetry, this paper focuses on analyzing the excellent sentences in poetry, inducing students to understand the original sentences in many ways, and giving teachers guidance on how to use them in writing.

For example, Li Bai's "Difficult to Go" said, "When you meet an old friend, you will sail straight and the bridge will be deep." This is the author's future ideal, and one day he will be proud and passionate.

This mentality is shared by ancient literati, especially for Li Bai. On the basis of guiding students to understand the meaning, teachers should focus on how to make students contact with the reality of today's society and show their determination to have a bright future and realize their ideals and lofty aspirations. You can also say, "Make friends by braving the wind and waves, and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea".

When learning the use of figures of speech, we should also try to list famous sentences in ancient poetry, such as: "How much sorrow can you have?" Just as "One River Flows East" (Li Yu's Yu Meiren), in order to show the cleverness of metaphor, Li Yu used "One River Flows East" as a metaphor for "sadness". It's really intriguing. The characteristic of a river flowing eastward is the clear water of Qingjiang River, which is slow, deep and long, unfathomable and endless. And people's sadness is endless, and they want to break their incompetence, so the two characteristics stick together, which just constitutes such a metaphor.

Use "flying to thousands of feet, suspecting that the Milky Way will fall for nine days" to illustrate artistic exaggeration. "Red flowers are better than fire at sunrise, and the riverside is as green as blue".

Use "the wine in Zhumen stinks, and the road has frozen bones" to illustrate the benefits of comparison, and so on. In short, in order to deepen students' understanding and impression of famous ancient poems, we should persist in using available forms and opportunities, such as analyzing and appreciating famous sentences five minutes before class and activity class, so as to achieve "continuous flow".

Second, combining with reality, skillfully using examples to contrast, let students understand the benefits of using famous ancient poems and sentences. The idiom goes well: "Don't be afraid of not knowing the goods, just shop around."

Comparative method is the basic way for people to know things. What are the advantages of using famous sentences in argumentative writing, and what is the difference between using and not using them? I often compare them with examples in teaching: example 1: The birth of the Teacher Law was not easy. After several years of revision, discussion and revision, it was finally passed by the National People's Congress Standing Committee (NPCSC).

It clearly stipulates the treatment of teachers, housing, medical care and so on. The Teacher Law lasted for several years, but before she started coming to us, we called a thousand times and urged her for a thousand times.

Clearly defined the treatment of teachers, housing, medical care and other aspects. Obviously, the text is straightforward, but the text is not very concise.

Example 2 uses a famous sentence in Bai Juyi's Pipa Story, which not only increases literary talent, but also contains rich semantics. The difficult process of the birth of Teacher Law is condensed in However, We yet we called and urged a thousand times before she started toward us, which is quite readable, ornamental and elegant. It varies from text to text and is used flexibly.

The famous sentences of ancient poems used in argumentative essays are not limited to one format, but can be changed according to the needs of expression and expression, and are allowed to be placed in the title, beginning, middle or end. In teaching, I often express these different usages orally.

Quote famous ancient poems and sentences at the title of the article. In 2005, Jiangsu examinee's perfect composition trilogy of life was inscribed as Linjiang Bamboo, Rain or shine, and everywhere in the green hills, with novel, elegant and profound ideas.

Embedding poems at the beginning of the article will affect the whole body, make the beginning of the article appear profound and poetic, and make the language concise and incisive. For example, in 2004, Shaanxi examinee's "Looking for a Happy and Beautiful Life" began: strolling on the path where autumn leaves slowly fall. I can't help singing:' There are endless leaves rustling and endless sadness rolling in'.

Lament the sadness and misfortune of fallen leaves. In fact, the life of falling leaves may be like this, just asking for spring and colorful autumn colors.

Change your way of thinking. Gong Zizhen once said,' Falling in love is not heartless. Turn into spring mud to protect flowers! We should rejoice and enjoy the colorful autumn scenery.

? Quoting ancient poetry in the middle of the article, creating artistic conception, and touching the readers' heartstrings with artistic images of scene blending, quoting or using these words can write my soul in other people's territory and add charm to the article. In fact, Americans are like this. Why don't we in China know this? ? The moonlight in the atrium is clear. Have you seen countless flowers? Zhang Xian also knows that the falling flowers must have the distance of moonlight to show subtle beauty.

? The shadows are horizontal, the water is shallow, and the evening is fragrant. , which makes Lin Hejing also know how to appreciate the hazy beauty through dusk. ? Hands folded, Bai Lianhua not open, the other shore willow like frost? Even subtle beauty must be more graceful and restrained through ChanJuan.

The above passage is selected from the 2008 Hunan perfect score composition "On the other side, the lights are dim". The article extracts six ancient poems, presenting three different beautiful pictures: vague beauty, hazy beauty and graceful beauty, laying a good foundation for the theme, romantic and gorgeous, and convincing after reading all the papers. In the article.

5. "Poems of Wing Chun" and "Comments on Ancient Poems of Wing Chun": (Meng Haoran) I woke up easily in the spring morning, surrounded by birds singing, but now I remember that night, that storm, and I don't know how many flowers were broken. Jasper is decorated as a tree with thousands of green silk tapestries. I don't know who cut the beautiful leaves, but the spring breeze in February is like scissors. Delighting in Rain on a Spring Night (Du Fu), an ancient poem describing spring, knows when it rains and when spring comes. It sneaked into the night with the wind. Mute, it moisten seach thing. Wild trails and clouds are all black, and rivers and boats are bright. Look at the red and wet place, the flowers on Jinguan City are heavy. The ancient poem describing spring is Birds Singing in the Stream (Wang Wei). People are idle, osmanthus flowers fall, and the night is quiet and the mountains are empty. When the moon comes out, birds are singing by the spring. The ancient poem describing spring is Qingming (Du Mu). A drizzling rain falls like tears on the Mourning Day; The mourner's heart is going to break on his way. Excuse me, where is the restaurant? The shepherd boy pointed to Xinghua Village. The ancient poem "Peach Blossom in Dalin Temple" (Bai Juyi), which describes spring, bloomed in April, and the peach blossom in Shansi began to bloom. I hate that spring is nowhere to be found, but I don't know how to ask for help. An ancient poem describing spring (Han Yu), a grass tree, knows that spring will come back soon, and all kinds of flowers and pods are full of flowers. Huayang has no talent in pods, but it snows all over the sky. Ancient poems describing spring appeared in the Ministry of Water Resources in early spring. Although the grass is far away, it has nothing. The most important thing is the benefits of spring, which is better than tobacco willow. The ancient poem describing spring is Chun Xing (Wu). The willow shade is raining, and the residual flowers fall to see the warbler. The spring breeze blew homesickness all night. It brought the spring breeze to Los Angeles. The ancient poem describing spring is called Chengnan Zhuang. Last year, today, in this door, people's faces and peaches match each other. People don't know where to go. Peach blossoms still smile at the spring breeze. Poems in spring (Du Fu) are beautiful in mountains, fragrant in spring flowers and plants. Mud melts into swallows, sand warms and sleeps mandarin ducks. The poem about spring (Du Fu) is about looking for flowers by the river. Yellow silk flowers are full of new ways, and thousands are low. Even butterflies dance from time to time, and the charming Yinger just shouts, "The light thunder falls again and again, and the light tiles are uneven."

Affectionate peony contains spring tears, weak rose lies on the branches. "This is the Northern Song Dynasty poet Qin Guan's Spring Day.

This poem is about spring scenery after rain. You see, it's raining, the morning mist is thin, the blue tiles are crystal clear, and the spring is beautiful; Peony flowers bring rain and tears, affectionate and leisurely, roses are quiet and charming.

There are close-up and distant views, dynamic and static, affectionate and graceful, and can be touched at will, uneven. The whole poem is dense and vivid, with a fresh and graceful charm, which is very popular.

"There are songbirds in the court trees, and red and green help spring to go to the distant forest. Suddenly there are good poems, and it is difficult to find syntax. "

This is "Spring Day" by the Song Dynasty poet Chen. This poem describes the scene of a spring morning.

Ears are full of birds, eyes are full of green branches, green and red help each other, and the fragrance is attractive. With a few strokes of the poet, a picture of spring is presented to the readers. Then, the poet simply stopped writing, stopped describing spring scenery and turned to lyricism.

Spring is full of inspiration, but the mysterious poet uses the evasive word "hard to find" to induce readers to feel spring. This method of combining reality with reality leaves readers with great imagination. "Far eyes go with the day, and the setting sun shines on the tree.

Dogs know where to bark. People are walking in the middle of the mountain. "This is the Southern Song Dynasty poet Yang Wanli's Spring Day.

This poem is about a scene of the Spring Festival Evening. Sunset covers trees, green land meets the sky, dogs bark happily, and people come home late.

This poem is naturally appropriate and ingenious. It brings readers into a panoramic atmosphere of spring, with its beauty, gorgeous color, rich flavor and harmonious sound. During this period, people will open their hearts and sing heartily. "Spring water newborn milk swallow, wasp small tail flapping flowers.

The window contains far color, and the fish hold the incense hook near the Rocky Mountain. "This is the South Garden written by Li He, a poet in the Tang Dynasty.

The spring in Nanyuan is full of vitality and interest. When spring comes, milk swallows begin to fly, bees gather flowers to make honey, and fish hold hooks to feed. These are all scenery with spring characteristics, and the foreground goes straight into the study through the window, which makes people feel comfortable and happy.

This poem is vivid, fresh and elegant, and it is refreshing to read. "Old trees cover short eaves, and the staff helps me cross the bridge east.

The clothes are wet and the apricot blossoms are raining, and the face is not cold. "This is the southern song dynasty monk ZhiNan quatrains.

This is a quatrain describing a spring outing. The beautiful spring scenery aroused the wandering of monks, so I went out of the temple to see the spring scenery.

Traveling by a small tent boat, the boat is moored under an old tree and strolls on the east side of Chenopodium Bridge. Although it is straightforward, the ship is anchored in the shade of ancient trees. This painting is very elegant and simple, quite like an ancient literati painting in China.

The last two sentences accurately and concisely show the beautiful and pleasant scenes of apricot blossom, light rain, willow dancing and warm east wind in spring, and are famous sentences that have been passed down through the ages. This poem is integrated with scenery, things and heart. The poet grasped the characteristics of Spring Breeze and Spring Rain and slightly exaggerated them, thus revealing his inner joy and love for nature.

"The grass grows in February and the willows are drunk with spring smoke. The children came back from school early and were busy flying kites in the east wind. "

This is "Village Residence" written by Gao Ding, a poet in Qing Dynasty. The first sentence and the second sentence vividly describe the nature in spring and write the beautiful and charming scenery unique to the countryside in spring. In February, the spring is bright, the grass grows and the warblers fly, and the willow tips brush the shore, as if intoxicated in the beautiful spring.

The third and fourth sentences describe a vivid scene of a group of lively children flying kites in beautiful spring. Their laughter makes spring more energetic. This poem is clear and clear, and it is practiced with words.

The whole poem is filled with cheerful emotions, giving readers a beautiful emotional infection. "Yinyingxi is curved and green, and the light rain flattens on the shallow beach.

Goose and duck don't know that spring has passed, but they are scrambling to catch up with peach blossoms. "This is the Song Dynasty poet Chao Chongzhi's Spring Day.

This is a poem about cherishing spring. The whole poem has four sentences and four views, the streams are clear and clean, the drizzle turns over the ping, the geese and ducks play, and the peach blossoms chase the water. The picture is very vivid and vivid, which makes people feel relaxed and fascinated.

The poet expressed his feelings with the sight of geese and ducks "riding peach blossoms" Spring is gone, but geese and ducks don't know it, so they chase it happily, so they are carefree, but people are different. They know that spring comes and goes. Although the fallen flowers can be chased, time cannot be returned. The poet's love for spring cannot be expressed in words.

6. How to write a poem composition for primary school students? My family's annual Mid-Autumn Festival has arrived. At night, it was quiet, and a cool breeze passed by my window and gently brushed my face. I stood at the window, staring at the fifteenth moon.

Outside the window, a few stars are scattered in the black sky. They hid behind the veil shyly. Accompanied by the stars, a full moon smiles at the world. Its smile is so gentle and kind. In this breeze, the earth looks like a newborn baby, ..................................................................................................... My mother came up behind me and said softly, "Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival.

Mom cooked a lot of meals that you like. Come and eat. "I nodded my head.

Say, "I'll be right there." Mother said, "Do you know why you want to eat moon cakes on the Mid-Autumn Festival?" I thought about it. Said, "because.

Because it was handed down from the past, "mom said." Well, it's half right, but there is actually a legend about eating moon cakes-it is said that Chang 'e stole the elixir that her husband Hou Yi begged the Queen Mother of the West and flew to the Moon Palace.

However, Qionglou Yuyu is too high to be cold. Chang 'e confided her regrets to her husband and said, "Tomorrow is the full moon night. You make pills out of flour, round like a full moon, put them in the northwest of the house, and then keep calling my name. At midnight, I can go home. "

The next day, do as my wife says, and then the fruit of Chang 'e flies from the middle of the month and the husband and wife reunite. The custom of making moon cakes for Chang 'e in the Mid-Autumn Festival is also formed. "

After listening to my mother's words, I realized that eating moon cakes is also legendary. I can't help but suddenly realize.

At this point, I snickered to my mother and said, "Mom, what do you think was in the moon cakes made by Houyi at that time?" Is it fresh meat or yolk? "

My mother was still thinking hard at first, but later she realized that it was wrong. Why were there so many traps at that time? I realized that I was teasing her.

My mother patted me on the head and said, "You little villain." I pretended to be wronged and said, "Yes. Who knows what Chang 'e likes to eat? ".