"When Myanmar and Guangxi were in full bloom, the landlord and one of her adopted daughters took a ladder to pick them. Better and better every day, they picked them and took them to the flower market to sell. She is probably afraid that tenants will pick her flowers indiscriminately and often send some to families. Sometimes send a seven-inch plate, which is full of Burmese osmanthus! Burmese osmanthus with rain beads makes us soft-hearted ... "
-Wang Zengqi's Rain in Kunming
The sweet-scented osmanthus sent by the landlord and mother is full of warmth and wisdom, which makes people "soft-hearted". Write an article: tell a story about how you get along with your relatives, teachers, friends and neighbors ... with warmth and wisdom; Or talk about your understanding of how to get along with others. Don't deviate from the meaning of materials and leads.
Requirements:
(1) The topic is self-made and the style is optional.
(2) sincere feelings, have their own thinking, and may not copy.
(3) There shall be no real name, school name, place name and other information in the text.
(4) No less than 600 words.
(5) write carefully.
Writing instruction
202 1 The composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Yangzhou, Jiangsu Province changed the form of propositional composition for many years and adopted the form of "materials+introduction+requirements". . The topic of this essay has local cultural characteristics, and the article of Yangzhou cultural celebrity Wang Zengqi is selected as the material, which not only highlights the local characteristics, but also comes from the teaching materials.
First, review the materials. Among the materials, a mother and daughter picked flowers and sold them in the market. In order to prevent tenants from picking flowers indiscriminately, they send flowers to tenants first. In fact, this story contains a philosophy: lovers love to return, care for others and help themselves. This shows the wisdom of getting along with others and learning to turn. The last sentence "Our Hearts Are Soften" tells us that getting along with others with "wisdom" not only warms others, but also warms ourselves. This material can imply several key words: communication, wisdom and warmth.
Second, the introduction of the trial. Then let's look at the first lead: tell a story about your warmth and wisdom in getting along with your relatives, teachers, friends and neighbors. "You" defines the writing object. Candidates must write about themselves, what happened to them, and describe their writing in the first person "I". "Relatives, teachers and friends, neighbors" tips are best written in getting along with people around you, and ellipsis tips can also be written in getting along with strangers. A "story" requires writing a narrative, which should pay attention to the elements of the narrative, and the time, place, characters, beginning, process and result should be reflected. Of course, this story should reflect "warmth" and "wisdom". "Wisdom" is the skill of getting along with others, and "warmth" is the benefit of getting along with others with wisdom. When writing a composition, these two points should also be reflected. Look at the second layer of the introduction: or talk about your understanding of how to get along with others. The words "talk" and "understand" in this sentence require you to write an argumentative essay. Of course, this "way to be a man" should reflect "warmth" and "wisdom". Layer 3: This is not out of the meaning of materials and leads. Here once again, when writing, we must pay attention to the requirements of materials and clues, don't be divorced from materials and clues, show our wisdom with others, don't digress, and have a clear style. Junior high school students' ability to control words is relatively not so strong, so it is not recommended to write articles with narration and discussion.
Third, the trial requirements. The requirements of composition are similar to those of Yangzhou senior high school entrance examination in previous years. The topic is self-made, not a topic, and we should make some efforts to draw up the topic. Because it is a composition for the senior high school entrance examination, we should pay attention to conciseness, deduction and novelty when drafting the topic. Although "style is dispensable", after choosing a style, you must write according to the requirements of this style. Narrative should be like narrative, argumentative writing should be like argumentative writing, and you must never write "four unlike" articles. If you have sincere feelings, you should write them from your heart, not make them up.
According to the above analysis, this composition is to write a story about how to get along with people around you, or to write an understanding about how to get along with people. If you write something, you will show wisdom and warmth in the narrative process. If you write an argumentative essay, you must have a clear point of view and elaborate from multiple angles, which will be more profound.
Intention analysis
1. Describe school life and show the story of "I" getting along with my classmates.
I get along well with my classmates and teachers. At first, I didn't know how to get along with them I always do things directly, which makes my classmates and teachers lose face and make them unhappy. Later, he changed his strategy and considered others, which won the praise of his classmates. Both of them were very happy and showed warm smiles.
2. Describe family life and write the wisdom between "me" and my parents.
Getting along with parents is sometimes casual, and even a little rebellious in adolescence. If you turn a corner and let your parents know your inner thoughts, your parents will be enthusiastic and you will feel like a spring breeze.
3. Talk about your own understanding of getting along with yourself, and your views should be clear.