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Innovation of classic materials for conquering desire composition.
New Material Composition-"Desire"

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Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required.

A beggar wandering along the street thinks every day, if only I had 20 thousand yuan in my hand. The beggar happened to find a lovely puppy, and when he saw no one around, he took the dog back to his cave and tied it up.

The owner of this dog is a famous monopoly in this city. The millionaire was very anxious after he lost his dog. Because it was a purebred imported famous dog, he posted a dog-seeking notice: If anyone finds it, please return it quickly and offer a reward of 20,000 yuan.

The next day, when the beggar was begging along the street, he saw the notice and hugged his dog, eager to get a reward of 20 thousand yuan. But when he hurried past the notice office with his dog in his arms, he found that the reward on the notice had become 30 thousand yuan. Monopoly couldn't find a dog, so he raised the reward.

The beggar couldn't believe his eyes. He stopped suddenly, thought about it, then turned around and took the dog back to the cave. He tied it up again. On the third day, the reward went up again. On the fourth day ... until the seventh day, the reward surprised the citizens, and the beggar ran back to the cave to hold the dog. Unexpectedly, the lovely puppy has starved to death, and the beggar is still a beggar.

Requirements: choose the right angle, clear ideas, choose your own style and draw up your own title; Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.

Instruct writing

This is a new material composition test. Analyzing the materials, it is not difficult to see that the beggar starved to death because of his great desire, and he didn't even get a penny for writing new materials. We can start from the overall situation of the proposition and adopt the method of peeling bamboo shoots layer by layer to conceive the writing.

The topic of "desire" has two sides, so when analyzing materials and conceiving a composition, we should explore the connotation of this topic from a dialectical point of view. Desire is human instinct, and it is innate. The right desire should be the desire we can control, and the desire beyond the limit will bring harm to people. This limit certainly includes ethics, public opinion, legal provisions and so on.

To write this question well, we can adopt the method of seeing the big picture from the small, focusing on the big picture and starting from the small. At the same time, whether writing argumentative or narrative, we should choose typical materials.

Examples of excellent works

Air-condition a heart full of desire.

Desire is sometimes an angel, giving you the motivation and courage to move forward; Desire is sometimes the devil, dragging you to the abyss of regret.

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The desire for knowledge is the motivation of students' learning. It gives students the courage to advance in the sea of knowledge. We admire Tao Yuanming's "picking chrysanthemums under the hedge" and Du Fu's "reaching the peak and falling in love at first sight". It is the desire for knowledge that brings us into the temple of knowledge.

Learning is really hard, but with the desire to learn, learning is no longer boring, and you can overcome difficulties and make great strides.

Money worship is the bait for people who pursue money to fall. It set a trap for the Philistines who entered the eye of money. When Yan Jiansheng was dying, his stingy eyes were hard to close because two wicks were wasted at home. On his deathbed, Grandet asked his daughter to open the vault and let him see his beloved gold. Abagong, who regards money as his life, "twitches at the sight of people reaching out." It's like everyone has their guts out. They all look at money and become slaves to it. The claws of desire will eventually destroy their bodies and souls. How pathetic! Desire kills!

People can't be influenced by greed and ugly desires, but should become the drivers of desires, overcome bad desires and set up lofty ideals.

Countless corrupt officials have fallen into the abyss of evil because they can't resist the temptation of money, and their evil desires have devoured the souls of countless people. But the law has been restored, and they have not missed it. In the end, they cannot escape the punishment of law and justice.

In this world, you can't be a slave to desire, and you can't be dominated by greedy and ugly desires. You should be the driver of desire, and you will become a strong person in life and control your desire. You will achieve noble character, be swallowed up by ugly desires, and you will become a walking corpse. A strong man who suppresses ugly desires will become a model of making contributions.

The value of life lies not in length, but in width and breadth. In the course of struggling life, let us all become the drivers of desire, control desire, control greed, establish ideals, and find our own innocence and happiness with beautiful pursuit!

Friend, when you can't control your desires, don't forget to install an air conditioner in your mind to cool your fiery desires, warm your frozen heart, let you see the direction of progress, steer the ideal boat and sail to the bright front!

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The highlights of this paper are: 1. The title is novel and vivid, and metaphor is skillfully used to turn abstraction into vividness and concreteness; 2. The young author has a strong dialectical thinking ability. He can look at things in two ways and thoroughly analyze his desires from different angles. 3. The application of pros and cons is very prominent and convincing.

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Stern

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-democritus

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-Ruskin