A gesture
After getting up in the morning, I tidy up my schoolbag. As the senior high school entrance examination is coming today, you must check whether everything is complete. When I zipped up my schoolbag, I heard the door of the opposite room suddenly open, accompanied by a rush of footsteps: "Where is my daughter?" I haven't left yet! " It's dad waking up. He asked his mother nervously. Suddenly, when he saw me, he suddenly became like a child, as if he had found a lost toy. He stood in the same place excitedly, gave me a thumb and said, "My daughter is the best!" " "I know he is cheering me up, and I want to respond to him indifferently, but this time I feel different. This is my father's support. Until I said goodbye to my parents and went downstairs, I saw my parents crowded at the door and gave me four thumbs up. I set off with these two small brackets with a smile. ...
in short
At school, I read a book a few minutes before the exam. Everyone in the class is studying hard, and the teacher is handing out admission tickets one by one. Soon, the teacher came to my residence. She told me not to lose the admission ticket and handed it to me carefully. Then, she patted me on the shoulder and whispered in my ear, "Come on! Be careful when taking the exam. " Thanks to the teacher's support, I keep this sentence in mind. I think I will try my best to get good grades in the exam.
smile
When the time is up, the candidates begin to walk to their own examination room, and the students walk together. We cheer each other up and face the first turning point of life with a calm and nervous heart. There are always several people on different stairs who want to say goodbye, and now they are about to arrive at my proving ground. Nervousness is starting to bother me. My good friend suddenly gave me a smile, and my anxiety was relieved at once. A chill came to my mind and calmed my mind. At that time, the strength of my classmates' smiles gave me support. I didn't have time to marvel at its power, and I wanted to give her my sincere blessing and support, so I smiled and gave it to the person who gave me a smile, hoping it would also bring her support.
A gesture, a word, a smile, their power seems small, but they will also give people great support and immeasurable motivation. Remember, give support to others, no matter how small the strength is!
Comments:
After reading this article, I think there are two biggest benefits. First, stick to the topic and highlight the center. The author directly highlights the keywords "no matter how small" and "support" in the title through the opening sentence and the sentence "sometimes it is just inadvertently hidden, and for me, even the smallest strength is also support". The selection of materials is only three small fragments of the "minimum strength" that I have experienced from going home in the morning to entering the examination room. Simple lines convey the strong "support" that the author can feel in his heart.
The second is to start with the details of life and describe it delicately. "A gesture, a word, a smile", such humble details, convey the author's most powerful support and quantity from parents, teachers and classmates. This kind of strength is the nourishment of love in the family, the concern of the teacher's exhortation, and the transmission of friendship between classmates. These details enhance the emotional point of the article. For example, the article says, "Mom and Dad all crowded in the door and gave me four thumbs.". From the details of "squeezing" and "stretching", we can easily understand that the author feels confident, supportive and encouraging from these seemingly insignificant little supports. There is not enough time to polish the composition in the examination room, so it is a key to get good grades by sticking to the theme, highlighting the center and selecting typical materials.