In daily study, work and life, many people have written compositions. According to the characteristics of writing proposition, composition can be divided into propositional composition and non-propositional composition. You always have no way to write a composition? The following is what I collected about composition evaluation, for reference only. Let's have a look.

Regarding the composition evaluation 1 1, the introduction of father in the article is comprehensive: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!

2. Careful conception and profound thinking show that you grew up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to write in the future. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.

3. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.

It is not the privilege of adults to care about life and society. From the article Accident, we can see that in your heart, there are not only childlike innocence, books and schools, but also endless concern for social worries. This article is full of twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.

This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.

6, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but can be detailed and focused.

7. It is really "writing like a god". It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.

8 ... it is both practical and contains simple and profound philosophy, and it is both exciting and emotional to read.

9. You are a very independent and knowledgeable student. I quite agree with you, but it would be even more icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact.

10, reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh conception of your article. As the saying goes, "You can appreciate the sea as much as you appreciate it." You are a conscientious person in life, and you touched others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.

1 1, Wenneng Yansheng, I think the article is a reflection of your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.

12. Although writing is not your favorite, you keep writing like a snail at every step, never stopping. Your spirit is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break into your own world.

13, the language is appropriate and romantic, and the context is smooth, which shows the image of a bookworm's bosom friend and the affection between "me" and "bosom friend", which is smart and elegant.

14, writing is like a person, and your article is as simple and open-minded as your person. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.

15, deepen the theme by contrast; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.

16. Usually we seem to have heard a lot about the topic of fragility of life, and it can disappear in an instant. If you walk in the fields and forests, step on fallen leaves and look up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life. Life needs to care for each other. This is the theme of your chapter. ()

Wen neng yi Qing 17. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.

18, exquisite and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom. Steady and down-to-earth, is the direction of your writing efforts in the future.

19, such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling. This is really what teachers should learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?

It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.

2 1, snow can be associated with the pursuit of life. Starting from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?

22. This paper chooses a brand-new angle to let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".

This article fully and appropriately exaggerates the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the main points of the article.

24. After reading your article, it seems that a stream flows in front of my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.

25. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are a good young man who makes progress. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.

Regarding the composition evaluation 2 1, this argumentative paper has a clear point of view and a clear inscription. In the text, I used the methods of quotation, example demonstration and reason demonstration to demonstrate my own point of view, which is a successful work.

This is a short literary review. The author enthusiastically affirmed the "phoenix head" and mercilessly lashed the "phoenix belly" and "phoenix tail", which was completely relevant, novel and full of personality. The full text has a clear-cut banner and spicy language, just like "Erguotou", which makes people feel feverish and see stars.

This argumentative paper comes straight to the point and puts forward the viewpoint that "music has wonderful functions", which is clear, simple and intriguing. This paper is clear in structure, natural in transition, profound in level, distinct in level and rich in meaning.

4. This argumentative paper has a clear argument, and uses rich examples and convincing vivid language to make the full-text argument clear, with novel, rich, typical and rigorous structure. The thought of the article is profound and makes people think for a long time.

This is an argumentative paper about setbacks, which comes straight to the point and puts forward the central argument in the form of rhetorical question. The level of argumentation is clear, the structure is clear, which arouses readers' thinking, is clear-cut, clear-cut, easy to explain, and emphasizes the central argument again at the end.

6. This paper begins with a clear definition, and then lists Cooper, Populus euphratica and Meihua to analyze their strong perseverance, and compares them with "I", pointing out that "I" as a human being should be better than them, thus demonstrating the importance of perseverance to success.

7, caring, is a lingering love thread, "cutting constantly, the reason is still chaotic"; But without care, can people still call people? This article talks about the past and the present, and expresses a deep understanding of care. Compared with the changes of people's expression of concern in ancient and modern times, the author shows nostalgia for pure and innocent feelings.

8. Judging from your composition, you can change it like this: put aside the provided topic and write it from your own point of view, and change the topic to "Time leaves us a heavy gift". The first paragraph is full of philosophy, as long as the last sentence is changed to "a heavy gift left by time", it can guide the full text. If the following paragraphs can be revised according to this idea, I think a good composition will be born.

9. The topic of your composition "Ignite the hope of tomorrow" shows that you chose the topic "Time is the hope of life" to write. However, instead of focusing on this point, you let your thoughts be written. The first paragraph of the article does not buckle the topic, the second paragraph writes that fast-paced life makes us numb, and the third paragraph writes two meanings, one is that memory makes us know ourselves, the other is that time can witness everything, and the last paragraph closes the above and points out the topic. The whole article does not revolve around the topic except for a few local points and topics and the topics at the end of the article. This digression is a taboo in composition. I hope you can pay enough attention to it.

10, fluent in language and rich in ideas, which is the overall impression left by your composition; Your composition can be written better, which is my trust and expectation for you.

1 1, the article conforms to the meaning of the topic, as can be seen from the topic "How can I see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain?" Finally, ask the question again and the center will be clear. As an argumentative essay, the language of the article is fluent, less dull and boring than the orthodox argumentative essay, more vivid spirituality and aura, and more resistant to personal reading. The author has a deep understanding of the relationship between "growth and frustration" and can make a thorough analysis with examples and quotations, achieving a thought-provoking expression effect; The use of metaphor, parallelism and rhetorical questions makes the whole article colorful.

12, this argumentative paper begins with explaining what life is, and naturally leads to the following. In the discussion part, we pay attention to reasoning, make good use of metaphors to reason, and discuss the different manifestations and results of the same situation very clearly through comparative argumentation. The author's discussion combined with his own experience is convincing.

13, this is a normative argumentative paper. The opening language is concise and clear. The discussion part is divided into two parts, and the main purpose of the central sentence is to give examples. The example is typical, the angle is different, and it is very measured. The ending thought is positive and inspiring.

14, this argumentative essay, come straight to the point and make the argument clear. The discussion process is reasonable and pure, and the arguments are novel and rich. Full style and clear paragraphs. According to the structure of "what, why and how", the full text is a model of an argumentative essay.

15. At first glance, the structure of this argumentative paper is not clear, but reading the whole article vertically, this arrangement has its own hills and valleys in the mind of the little author. The article is full of old sayings, and a lot of reasoning skills are also enriched. This article is profound in content and philosophical in language. The whole article vaguely contains the ancient Zen and unique values of the East. It fully shows the depth of the author's thoughts and the richness of knowledge. (.)

16, this "dream is the driving force of life" is lofty in thought and refined in language. The author analyzes with examples that "as long as we have dreams and work hard for them, we will usher in the most brilliant spring in life, because dreams are the driving force of life".

17. at the beginning of this paper, the central argument "gratitude, we should not ignore it" is put forward, and then the central argument is strongly demonstrated with several sub-arguments. Can comprehensively use a variety of argumentation methods to demonstrate opinions, with clear arguments and strong arguments.

About composition evaluation 3 I. Handwriting

A, the writing is delicate and neat, just like the streets of seaside towns. It's really comfortable to see your handwriting as beautiful as it is printed.

B, whatever, why isn't the handwriting like a cat's? The word is not in the middle of the grid. Of course, they don't like it. Your handwriting is uneven. Is it because the wind is too strong today? I don't believe your handwriting is bad. You will always scribble carefully and patiently, and you will write better than me.

Second, the content

A, this rich content is similar to that written by the screenwriter. Your practice is flesh and blood, and it is really a great enjoyment to read. Your composition is specific, and I enjoy reading it.

1, the content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of the times and showing the flavor of the times.

2. The context is clear, the sense of hierarchy is strong, and the narrative is orderly and not chaotic.

3. Appropriate details, clear focus and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailor-made for the theme.

4. The narrative is detailed and concrete, the details are vivid and vivid, the characters are vivid and prominent, and the images are full and vivid.

5. The environment sets off the emotions of the characters, and the scenes blend, and the feelings are in the scene, and the scene follows the scene.

6, rich imagination, strange ideas but not divorced from the reality of life, tied to the association of life, broaden the reader's thinking, make people feel lively and interesting.

7. Scenery description is vivid and lifelike, words and sentences are appropriate, scenes are born together, and scenes blend together, just like a vivid sketch painting presented to readers.

8. Fantasy imagination comes from life and is higher than life, which broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm.

9. The description of the event process is detailed and specific. Although there are many contents, it seems to be orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and planning ability for the layout of the article.

10, the appearance is vivid, the characters are lifelike and well dressed, just like a mirror reflecting the characters' personality, which is really called "life depends on each other".

1 1. The description of the environment is objective and true, and the environment serves the characters, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the characters' personalities.

12, the expression is vivid and vivid, and the personality characteristics of the characters are clearly outlined in a few words, and the words and manners of the characters have distinct and unique personalities.

The contents before and after (1) are not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article. (2) The narrative is short and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics. (3) Improper arrangement of details and unclear priorities. (4) The content is mostly outlined by lines, and there is a lack of detailed description based on points. ⑤ It doesn't match the flavor of the times, and the content is too old and aging.

B, the dry content is like boiled water, and there is no taste at all. Just add some beautiful words and you can drink it. Not as many words as primary school students (or name other poor students). Don't you feel a little embarrassed? Your composition is like a 90-year-old woman's mouth, dry and empty, and everything is missing.

Third, the theme

1, with prominent focus, clear center and clear concept.

2. The views are clear, and the likes and dislikes are clear, which makes people clear at a glance.

3. The theme is directly prominent in content, clear and to the point, and there is no redundancy. 4. The theme is serious, the thought is noble, and the enterprise is strong.

(1), the center is not clear enough, and the thinking is not clear enough.

(2) The theme is obscure, the meaning is vague, and the purpose of writing is unknown.

(3) Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough, false, empty and powerless.

(4) The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.

Fourth, the plot

1, the plot twists and turns, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curve beauty of the plot and is fascinating.

2. The plot is strong in faltering, and accidents usually occur, which can attract readers' attention.

3. The plot changes unconventional, with occasional suspense and waves, which is unexpected. The development process of the event embodies the author's innovative ideas.

(1), the plot develops relatively smoothly, lacking certain ups and downs.

(2) The plot changes are unremarkable and lack new ideas.

(3), the plot is straight, there is no suspense, and it seems to be a running account.

(4) The process is detailed, but the ending is short and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.

5], the idea is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, and it cannot reflect the truth of life.

[6], the plot is ups and downs, the conversion is too fast and not coherent enough.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) sentence

A, fluent and vivid sentences, like Lushan Waterfall, go down the river, and the metaphor is very appropriate, which shows that you have been carefully observing how you came up with such a clever rhetorical question of anthropomorphic sentences. How appropriate is it to use here? This exclamatory sentence expresses your true feelings at that time, and the quotation of ancient poetry is just right. I will use the poems I have learned in my composition and in my two-part allegorical sayings in the future, and I will laugh until my stomach hurts.

1, the sentence is fluent, the sentence meaning is fluent, the text is beautiful, the narrative is vivid, the image is vivid, and the language expression ability is strong.

2. The language is concise, to the point, to the point, concise and powerful, and full of pen power. A few words can convey the appearance of the characters.

3. The language is fluent, detailed and vivid; The meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, with profound implications. After reading it, it is like a lingering fragrance after drinking.

4. The language is vivid and humorous, which makes people laugh.

5. Behavior description

The words are delicate and accurate, and the verb series vividly highlights the psychological state of the characters and points out their personality characteristics.

(1) The language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent.

(2) The language is not fluent enough, and the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling.

(3) The statement is verbose, and the words fail to convey the meaning. Only if the details are not omitted, the words will be lost.

(4), the language is too brief, like an outline narrative, but failed to get an outline, the meaning is incomplete, and the narrative is boring, dry and lifeless.

B, the composition is uneven and uncomfortable to read. It's like walking on a bumpy road in the country. If you are not careful, you will easily fall down. This sentence seems to have been cut off. If you read it carefully after writing it incompletely, you will find that you can't be afraid of trouble. Good articles are all revised. You should learn to modify every sentence by yourself.

Sixth, rhetoric:

1, the metaphor is vivid, vivid and appropriate, and the ontology is similar to the metaphor, which greatly enhances the interest and persuasiveness of the article.

2. Properly use the method of comparison and comparison to prove the center of the article through the disparity and difference between things.

3. Take the opportunity to use parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways, which not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.