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Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required.
Water flows from the plateau from west to east. There is a fish at the mouth of Bohai Sea, which goes upstream. It crossed the shoal, rushed through the rapids, crossed the layers of fishing nets in the lake, avoided the pursuit of countless waterfowl, flew to the swift Hukou Waterfall, crossed the mountain stream, squeezed through the stone stream, and finally swam to the plateau. However, before it could give a whoop of joy, it was frozen into ice in an instant.
A few years later, a group of climbers found it still swimming. A young man sighed, "This is a brave fish. It went upstream, broke through many obstacles and finally reached its destination, although it died without regret. " An old man sighed and said, "This is indeed a brave fish. However, it has only great spirit, but no great goal. It pursues it extremely reversely, and finally only gets death. "
It is required to choose a good angle, define the concept, clarify the style and draw up a good title; Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.
Writing instruction
This is a new allegorical material composition. The material itself is divided into two parts: the first paragraph vividly describes the process of fish going upstream; The second part describes the words and deeds of young people and old people on the surface, but in fact they have different cognitive and emotional attitudes towards this matter. Accordingly, we can directly grasp the second part of the discussion and key words. Young people are full of praise for the "sigh" of fish, and their view is to reach their destination "bravely", although they die without regret. The old man's "sigh" is obviously helpless, thinking that fish "has only great spirit and no great goal", so it can only face death. To sum up further, both of them are actually talking about "courage" and "ideal goal". Grasping this key point, we can choose our own writing angle and conception according to our own ideological understanding.
From the perspective of young people, we can support their brave pursuit of praise spirit, because the ideal place to live is also heaven; It can also be corrected or criticized, because in the young battlefield, youth should not and cannot be frivolous. If we think from the perspective of the elderly, we can agree that the elderly should have both spirit and goals, because a person must always look up, have a goal to have a direction, have a goal to have motivation, have a goal to be stronger and more persistent, and have a goal to succeed and go further and further. The same is true of a nation. Learn to look up at the stars, and there will be a future. Looking deeper, each of us has the opportunity to succeed and the courage to go forward. Sometimes, we just lose ourselves because of the loss of our souls, which leads to the ultimate extreme and failure. Of course, we can also analyze and discuss the lack of dedication of the elderly.
Finally, we should pay attention to a series of requirements, such as the style can not be written as four unlike, the title should conform to the stylistic characteristics, to be unique and novel.
Examination room masterpiece
Be a wise man who dares to go upstream.
It is admirable to be brave against the current, but it is futile to be brave without a goal. Only by being a wise man who dares to go upstream can he succeed. (Cut to the chase, make a pertinent argument, have a fair point of view, be concise in meaning, and be closely deduced)
As the old man said in the material: "This is indeed a brave fish, but it only has great spirit, but it has no great goal. Its extreme reverse pursuit can only get death. " Yes, the fish in the material dare to go upstream, which really deserves our admiration, but we might as well think more about it. What is this for? I think it may not even know it, and all it can get in the end is death. If it can share its great spirit with half its wisdom and become a great and intelligent fish of the brave, it may become a new world. (Ask questions to arouse suspicion, then compare and demonstrate through positive and negative analysis, and then highlight the view of "being a brave fish")
Speaking of wise men who dare to go upstream, we have to mention1Cui Qi, a Chinese American who won the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1998. Today, when the world is drifting with the tide, he dares to go upstream, stay away from politics and concentrate on his own research. In the United States, where information technology is the most developed, he faced the difficulties as a computer-illiterate, overcame many difficulties, and completed all his designs in one stroke. Relying on the unimaginable courage of ordinary people, relying on the efforts that ordinary people can't pay, and relying on the perseverance that ordinary people can't surpass, that is to say, he can still be regarded as a wise man who dares to go upstream. (This passage focuses on "courage" and "wisdom". The examples are very accurate and typical, and the discussion is very convincing. )
All wise men are not born with their wisdom, and their wisdom should be interpreted with their own goals. (Further discuss "wisdom" and lead to the following explanation of "goal". The viewpoint is divided into segments independently, which is clear and prominent)
At that time, Rene Liu was commented by a famous musician: "Your voice is as unattractive as your appearance. I think it is difficult for you to develop in the music world. " After that, Rene Liu didn't choose to leave, but dared to go upstream. She serves tea and water for others, she sets a performance schedule, she takes performance costumes for singers ... When people ask her why, she says it's for her own goals. On her way to achieve her goal, wind and rain are inevitable, but she is indeed a smart person, a smart person who dares to go upstream! Finally, one day, she stood on her own stage with a smile and touched everyone present with a warm but not stunning voice. Therefore, she was rated as "the most realistic singer". She succeeded, and her courage to go upstream was not in vain, because before she made up her mind, she had set her own goal, and from the moment she had a goal, success was close to her. (Illustrations are vivid; Analytical reasoning, meticulous and rigorous)
In today's society, there are very few people who dare to go upstream. It is not easy to be a wise man with goals and courage to go upstream. At this point, I think we should know how to do it. (Echoing the opening summary of the full text, responding to real life, thought-provoking)
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As a wonderful argumentative paper, this paper mainly has the following points that we can learn from: First, the argument is accurate and clear, with strong generality. The argument that "the courage to go upstream is admirable, but the courage without a goal is futile, and only a wise man who dares to go upstream can succeed" not only captures the spirit of "courage" respected by young people, but also covers the "goal" emphasized by the elderly to avoid the consequences of "being frozen into ice", thus establishing a brand-new viewpoint. Second, the arguments are concise, and less is better than more. Although this paper only selects Rene Liu and, because of their strong pertinence, the interception and demonstration are just right, and the effect of taking light as a deterrent is achieved. Third, the structure is clear and the organization is clear. After the central argument is put forward, the relationship among "courage", "goal" and "wisdom" is demonstrated one by one with hierarchical structure, and the transition is made with independent argument sentences, so that everyone can master the full text easily and smoothly.
Inverse scale reverie
As the article says, what about a fish that goes upstream and eventually freezes to death on the plateau? Young people will sigh, and so will old people. I don't think it matters. Compared with the similar species in the ethereal ocean, it is a great honor for this fish to be lamented by future generations. Even at the cost of death. (first deny and then affirm, so that the point of view will stand out, which will be even more amazing and shocking. )
Of course, I don't know what the fish thinks, and I can't tell why it is retrograde. I just suddenly feel like this fish against the current, in the torrent of life and society. Struggling to erect its tail. (expand the following through association, because fish, but also through fables and social life)
Living uneasily, I want to be a lone ranger like the writer Chi Li. Looking at all kinds of people around us, they all climb towards the same goal-the same place without exception. For unbridled! I'm really scared. I've changed my original color in this vat of life. (The author's image of cleanliness is vividly displayed in this metaphor. I wonder: is this fish like me, seeing his companion entangled in fishing nets, afraid that he will be canned and put on the shelves of the supermarket? So, it is ready to escape and run to the highest plateau. ...
Perhaps I am stingy, how can I understand this stubborn fish? "Is the golden scale a thing in the pool?" There is a hope in my heart, towards my highest dream. What about Rapids? What about retrograde? Just for a little dream, fearless retrograde! Clever rhetorical questions, golden dreams, persistent beliefs and high emotions bring us a supreme and lofty beauty. ) I was wrong, I was really wrong! If you want to have your own beliefs in the long river of life, can you escape? This fish, why not abandon the collective and ordinary for its own beliefs? I have the perseverance to be intoxicated by thousands of people and the courage to open up the future for myself. Really, gold scales are the things in the pool!
Of course, the ending of the fish is tragic, but in a sense, its death is valuable! How can there be such a resolute and brave fish who dares to challenge the "rules" and despise the "creed"? How can it not be praised and praised? People are inherently mortal, either heavier than Mount Tai or lighter than a feather. In a secular society, how many people are sober and how many are drunk? )
Spine and today's society, but how many slices can there be? Most people are used to this "quiet" life without ripples. Don't! You can't say that! It should be said that everyone is used to chasing the so-called "fame" and "profit" life, but it is difficult to have a fish that is unwilling to "mainstream". People's way of life is the same, walking at others' feet again and again, repeating others' lives again and again. That's all, life is so slight, without a ripple.
It's better to learn to be a lamella! Just for the faith and pursuit in my heart, I got rid of the social conventions and chose to go retrograde in the torrent of social decadence. Perhaps, there is a new world at the source of the big river!
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As a lyrical prose, this paper has rich imagination and association from "Li Li", and then talks about life and society, expressing the author's persistence in life ideals, firmness in life beliefs and tenacious resistance to secular concepts. This article is like flowing water, full of rhetoric. He skillfully uses whole sentences and loose sentences to increase the sense of rhythm and fluency of the article, making the language both natural and poetic; Among them, rhetorical questions and exclamatory sentences are often used to enhance artistic conception and language potential, thus fully demonstrating the author's literary talent, spirit and personality, and reflecting the spirit of justice of the author's era and the vigor and vitality of young students.
Related material
Wang Meng: The Winter Olympics champion in limbo.
Wang Meng, an athlete of China women's short track speed skating team, has won the World Cup many times. In the 2006 Winter Olympics in Turin, the 500-meter gold medal was successfully defended in the 20 10 Vancouver Winter Olympics, becoming the first person to defend in China. 20 1 1 On August 4th, 2008, the Winter Sports Management Center of the State Sports General Administration announced that Wang Meng, a two-time champion of the Winter Olympics and a famous short track speed skater, had been dismissed from his position as captain of the national team, disqualified from participating in all competitions at home and abroad.
Wang Meng was born in 1984. 10 years old, coached by qitaihe city Amateur Sports School, started his speed skating career. In the sports team, Wang Meng showed great domineering and was a notorious naughty boy. He often fights for the bullied players. Because of the superior family conditions, she also generously distributed the fruit drinks sent by her parents to everyone to show her "blessing". She is still recognized as a "pistachio". As long as the teacher is away, she laughs and plays happily, which makes the atmosphere in the team extremely active. In the sports team, Wang Meng is the youngest, but she is strong in training and competition. Every link will be completed with high standards and high quality, and she never "cuts corners". Because I am too "haggle over every ounce", my grades have improved rapidly. 16 years old, Wang Meng won the bronze medal in the 9th National Games and advanced to the national team. In 2002, Wang Meng won the women's 500m champion at the first World Youth Championship, becoming the first champion in China. Since then, Wang Meng has made brilliant achievements on the short track speed skating stage at home and abroad.
Material Interpretation: When young people make mistakes, God will forgive them. Wang Meng made many mistakes, but there is no need to kill him with a stick. Fired, banned, give a deadline?
Applicable topics: moral education first, having both ability and political integrity; Draw lessons from the past and save lives; There is no privilege in front of the system ...