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1. "No punishment, no achievement; If you don't suffer, you won't understand sweetness. The sentence "punishment is gold" points out the function and effect of "punishment" In affirmative sentences, punishment can make achievements and let you know the sweetness of life. This is a point of view, and candidates can write an article centered on it. However, we can't just focus on "pain". Suffering can be punishment, but not all suffering is punishment. For example, Beethoven's deafness, Hawking's paralysis and so on are not punishments for doing wrong, but the hardships of life.
Let's make an analysis of "punishment". Punishment, which means punishment, is a verb and an act. It can be analyzed from the following points: (1) Why should it be punished? There are two reasons for this. Did something wrong, didn't do it right. (2) How to punish. Broadly speaking, it can be divided into physical torture and mental torture. Physical torture is easy to understand, and mental torture includes life blow, verbal criticism and so on. (3) the result of punishment. Punishment for carelessness makes it serious, punishment for lying makes it honest, punishment for selfishness makes it universal, punishment for laziness makes it diligent, punishment for not making progress makes it hard, punishment for stealing makes it law-abiding, punishment for greed makes it satisfied, and punishment for impulsiveness makes it calm.
..... To sum up, punishment can shape a perfect personality, contribute to success and promote the harmony of interpersonal relationships. (4) How to treat punishment. If so, then change it. If not, Jia Mian regards punishment as a rare treasure in life (punishment is gold), actively accepts punishment, and grows, progresses and perfects in punishment. (5) Examples of punishment. Find it from life (one's own experience, what one sees and hears) and from textbooks (Xiang Yu was defeated and committed suicide because of stubbornness, and Sima Qian was punished for violating the emperor ...)
2. Demand analysis. Although you can choose your own angle, according to the materials and instructions, you should still focus on "punishment". This topic is suitable for writing in different styles. Narrative can show the role of punishment in a person's growth by telling one or several things he has experienced, and can also make up stories to show that punishment is the inevitable result of doing something wrong. Argumentative writing can analyze the reasons, ways and results of punishment.
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When it comes to punishment, I can't help but think of a news: American boy Fay accidentally doodled someone else's car when he was in Singapore, and was severely punished by the Singapore government. Even if the President of the United States came to intercede, the Singapore government remained impartial, adhered to principles, and enforced the law like a mountain, leaving four deep whip marks on Fay. When the news came out, it caused a sensation all over the world, and people talked about it in succession. There is sympathy, confusion, anger and appreciation. I am amazed: these are really four sacred whips, which are struck hard enough and imposing enough to awaken people's vigilance and make people rethink and examine morality, law and life.
Life is a big stage. When we are constantly moving on the stage to find the best position, it is inevitable that we will jump down from our own stage from time to time and find no direction. At this time, we need a whip to drive us back to our own world. This whip is punishment.
However, when some teenagers are criticized, they just shake their heads and confidently say, "Go your own way and let others talk!" " "Dante's famous words have now become a shield when people who do wrong are punished. How angry his old man will be when he learns under the spring! During Dante's period, feudalism was powerful. They advocated the Renaissance, but they were suppressed and persecuted. They were forced to issue the slogan "Go your own way and let others talk". This is the pursuit of light, contempt for decadent forces, not a cover-up of mistakes, not an excuse for doing evil. When you are punished for breaking the school rules, when you are accused of doing something wrong, when you are warned for knowingly doing something wrong, if you put on a attitude of going your own way, let others talk! That's either ignorance or ignorance! To create a style on your own stage, you should not only follow your own path, but also be aware of your own shortcomings and accept the necessary punishment and guidance with an open mind.
You got what you lost, and you didn't know what was right until you made a mistake. However, what acts as a medium is the punishment after making mistakes again and again. Whenever I suffer a punishment and experience an unforgettable reflection, my thoughts will have a qualitative leap, my personality will become much more mature, and the stage of life seems to become broader. On the bumpy road of life, in the mistakes again and again, face yourself frankly and accept the punishment sincerely, which is the stepping stone for you to move steadily towards success.
This is a relatively standard argumentative essay. The conciseness of quoting materials at the beginning, the accuracy of analyzing materials and the nature of the topic make this article enter the standard argumentative writing format from the beginning, which shows that the student is skilled in argumentative writing. Next, use a "but" to turn it into real life. Point out celebrities to the point; The essence of famous sayings as an excuse for making mistakes: l ignorance or narrowness, which puts forward the correct way to deal with mistakes and punishment. Then, the article emphasizes the important role of punishment in life in philosophical language, and naturally receives the full text of Cambodia in encouraging language. The structure of the article conforms to the format of "starting from a commitment and turning it into a combination" in the argumentative paper, with clear thinking, starting from the attitude towards punishment and a small starting point, which can be discussed in depth. In terms of language, this paper also has some highlights, such as occasional parallelism sentences and whole sentences, which make the text literary. However, there are still some problems in this paper. In terms of content, it is still a little thin. The article only talks about how to treat punishment from the attitude of teenagers to punishment. Although it has certain pertinence and persuasiveness, it still cannot cause a wide range of * * * sounds. If we can talk about social life again, the content of the article will be enriched.
Punishment is gold.
Classic examples of students
1, the famous Russian chemist Boutleroff was particularly interested in chemical experiments when he was a child. Once, accidentally, there was an explosion during the experiment, which was discovered by the teacher and was punished by hanging a big sign around his neck. The sign also said insulting words: great chemist. At that time, the teacher just wanted to have fun. Unexpectedly, this kind of punishment has become the internal motivation of Boutleroff. He held his breath and studied hard. He must be a chemist. Sure enough, he made some achievements in organic chemistry and really became a chemist.
Boutleroff said: "This title was a punishment for me 19 years ago, and now it has been realized." Thanks to this punishment, it was this punishment that gave him inner motivation and mobilized his enthusiasm. He succeeded. Therefore, punishment is a person's internal motivation.
2. Punishment is golden, which can make people know themselves clearly and learn from others modestly after being complacent; Punishment is gold, which can make people truly appreciate the value of the original things and cherish what they have now after missing it; Punishment is golden, which can make people see their shortcomings clearly and correct them seriously after being careless and impetuous.
3, small trees are not repaired, it is difficult to become pillars; People can't do anything without punishment. Therefore, the punishment is gold.
Punishment is the father's hatred of iron not to produce; Punishment is a manifestation of the teacher's unbearable pain; Punishment is a checkpoint set by the state on the road of crime. Punishment can make people who are lost awake, and punishment can make people who have leisure become diligent. Punishment is gold, which can be exchanged for endless wealth and achievements.
4. The unruly monkey, grandson, claiming to be the Great Sage of Qitian, made a big scene in the Heavenly Palace and made a big mistake. Finally, he was punished by the Tathagata, imprisoned under Wuzhishan for 500 years, and then protected Tang Priest to learn from the West, and finally became a holy Buddha. If the Tathagata doesn't give Wukong a certain punishment, Wukong will be different from the demon. It is because of such a heavy punishment that he suddenly woke up, returned to the right path and achieved positive results. Therefore, punishment is gold.
King Chu Wen was punished and reformed.
King Wen of Chu once indulged in hunting and womanizing, regardless of state affairs. Taibao applied for the life of the former king and demanded that King Chu Wen be flogged. At the insistence of Taibao Shen, King Wen of Chu fell on the mat. Taibao Shen tied 50 thorns together, knelt on King Wen's back and picked them up again. I did this twice, and then I said to King Wen, "Please get up!" King Wen said, "It's the same reputation as being whipped that really hits me!" From then on, King Wen no longer hunted or indulged in womanhood. He made great efforts to annex 39 countries and expand the territory of Chu.
6. Curse of coming back to life (to be summarized)
There was a Kuomintang army major general named Xu, who heard the admiration and introduction of Xiong Shili from his friends, and saw Xiong Shili's book "A New Theory of Perception" in his boss, which greatly admired him. He wrote a letter saying that he was interested in learning to ask questions and hoped to get advice. Xiong Shili wrote back and talked about the truth of studying and being a man. Once, Xu wore an army uniform to visit Xiong Shili at Mianren College in Chongqing Jingangbei and asked him what books he should read. Xiong Shili told him to go back and read Wang Chuanshan's Reading as a Mirror.
Xu said that he had read it in his early years.
Xiong Shili was very unhappy and said, "You don't understand. You should read it again. "
A few days later, Xu went back and told me that the book "Reading as a Mirror" was finished.
Xiong Shili asked, "What experience do you have?"
Xu Guanfu felt that he had read very carefully and could not help feeling a little proud. He said that there were many places in the book that he disagreed with, and then he began to say them one by one.
Before he finished, Xiong Shili angrily scolded him: "How can you read such a thing as a book! Reading like you means reading a hundred books. What benefits will you get from books? Reading is to see its advantages first and then criticize its shortcomings. It's like eating, digesting and absorbing nutrients. For example, reading as a mirror, how meaningful this paragraph should be; Let's take that paragraph for example, how deeply you understand it. Do you remember these? You got it? It's really hopeless for you to study like this! "
This scolding shocked the major general's army.
It turns out that reading is to understand the benefits of books first!
"This is a curse to bring me back to life." Xu understands this truth. "Young people, middle-aged people and old people who are smart and conceited but have not entered the door of learning are probably the bane."
After this reviling, Xu changed his reading style, and later became a famous scholar and writer, making outstanding contributions to re-examining and promoting China culture.
7. When Lu Xun was a child, he went to a private school once and went late. Mr. Wang punished him by hitting his palm hard with a ruler and it was swollen, but through the teacher's punishment, Lu Xun was never late again. From this perspective, everything must be punished first in order to improve yourself.
8. In the movie "Out of Amazon", Hu He of China People's Liberation Army was brutally punished by the instructor for his cruel training and repeated violations of discipline in Amazon "Hunter School". But under these punishments, they strengthened their faith and tempered their will, and finally won the medal of "International Anti-Guerrilla", and the red flag of China fluttered in the sky. It can be seen that punishment can temper people's will, strengthen people's beliefs, and ultimately make people successful.
9. The publication of Hemingway's first novel, Three Stories and Ten Poems, was criticized by the world. A year later, the publication of his other book, In Our Time, was also criticized. Hemingway regarded criticism as a punishment for the world, sought gains from it and persisted in writing. The third book, The Sun Also Rises, caused a sensation throughout the country and sold well. Punishment is Hemingway's success.
It can be said that punishment is like a ball falling from the sky and falling heavily on the ground, and instant pain is inevitable, but then it has the courage to climb higher and higher and bounce high from the ground, showing an irresistible power.
10, Jim killed a girl with his car. The girl's family asked him to send a bunch of flowers to the girl's house every month. This punishment made Jim feel very guilty. He knew it was so cruel to kill a person's life, so he began to devote himself to protecting his own life, dedicated his life to it and made great contributions. Punishment makes people aware of their conscience, thus truly loving life and giving love.
After each punishment, you will get a profound lesson from your own mistakes, let you remember it, and ensure that you wake up from your mistakes and go straight to the other side of success.
1 1, at first, Gou Jian, the king of Yue, was addicted to the life intoxicated by money, and he didn't know how to be prepared for danger in times of peace, how to understand the people and didn't listen to the minister's advice. Finally defeated by Wu, he became a prisoner of Wu. In the face of such punishment, he did not sink, but learned from a painful experience, repented and reformed, and worked hard for ten years. It was punishment that brought the King of Yue back to life.
12. Punishment is a rare experience in life and sometimes a fortune. Ji Wenzi, the doctor of Lu, is a high official and generous. However, his wife dresses simply, and horses don't eat millet. Zhong Sun thinks that his actions are detrimental to the image of the country. Ji Wenzi not only criticized him, but also told his father that his father had been in prison for seven days. Zhong Sun, it repents seriously. Naturally, clothes are only seven liters, and horses are not good or bad. Ji Wenzi saw that he accepted punishment and repented seriously, so he gave him a heavy job. Isn't this getting rich because of punishment?