However, praise is the driving force of our progress, and honest criticism, though unpleasant to hear, is conducive to action. Praise is the driving force of progress. We need the encouragement of others to do everything, so that we can be full of confidence and go all out to live up to others' praise.
However, too much false praise will reduce complacency. In the Song Dynasty, there was a gifted child named Fang Zhongyong. When he was 4 years old, he could write poems quickly and well. Everyone admires him, so he is often invited to dinner, and his parents don't consider taking him everywhere to socialize.
After a long time, just because I didn't continue to practice seriously, it's nothing strange to be an adult, just like ordinary people. It can be seen that what we need is proper praise, not excessive praise.
Criticism is a beacon of progress, because only criticism can make progress. As the saying goes, "To err is human?" All saints and sages are at fault, not to mention us mortals! And if there are mistakes, someone must correct them, so as to improve.
There is a saying: "the authorities are fascinated, and the onlookers are clear." Often when we do something wrong, we need to borrow others to criticize and correct us unconsciously. Therefore, we must accept others' criticisms and suggestions generously, so as to make progress.
In the Tang Dynasty, Emperor Taizong suggested that Wei Zhi be his advisor, and he talked with him about everything. Whenever Tang Taizong was wrong, he protested directly, and Tang Taizong was generous enough to accept criticism from others, so he became a good emperor that everyone loved.
Soon after Wei Zhi died, Emperor Taizong said sadly, "Taking copper as a mirror can correct the crown, and taking people as a mirror can correct the word. When Wei Zhi died, it was like losing a mirror. " This shows that others will be willing to accept criticism as long as it is measured.
Don't be too proud when we accept compliments from others; When others criticize us, we should accept it humbly. Only in this way can it be perfect.
2. Criticism and praise as the topic of composition criticism and praise.
Criticism and praise often give people the feeling that they are two different extremes, which obviously cannot be compared. But looking back, think about it carefully, they may merge at two extremes. Criticism is undoubtedly equal to failure. Of course, praise represents success, and failure is the mother of success. Usually, repeated failures are like a trivial drop of water until the whole container is filled with water. At this time, that drop of water will become the source of success.
Yes, I don't deny that as a primary school student, I hope there is no criticism in this world, only praise. No matter what you do, whether you study or create, what awaits you is the praise of others, but think about it. If there is only one sweet word in the four flavors of life, the world will become empty and tasteless, then there may not be really talented people in the world.
There was a college student who wrote a poem in his composition book. As a famous professor in the university, mom and dad thought his poems were bad and severely criticized him, which made the college student never dare to face himself again and finally embarked on the road of drug abuse. Let's think about it. If his parents had given him a little praise, would the result still be like this?
Bud. When Schulberg wrote his first poem, his mother's evaluation was "wonderful" and his father's evaluation as a screenwriter was "terrible". Many years later, he took out the poem and found it really terrible. Therefore, he feels very lucky. He has a mother who will praise him and a father who will warn and criticize him from time to time, because he thinks criticism and praise are indispensable things for a writer and a person. Praise is the source of writing and life, and the power of criticism will always tell itself: "Be careful, pay attention, summarize and improve."
Me and Bud? Like Schulberg, I feel lucky because I have the same father, mother and teacher. Dad always said, "well, there is no progress at all." Mom always says, "Did you make this? Great! " And my teacher, when I succeed, she will say, "Zhang Mengrui, yes, but don't be proud!" " "When I fail, she will say," Zhang, don't lose heart, success always comes after the storm! " "The people around me combine these two extremes. They will criticize me and praise me at the same time. My life has become meaningful and colorful.
I think that only by combining the two different extremes of praise and criticism in the world forever can there be hope for the future of the world and a brilliant chapter be written.
3. Praise and criticism, criticism and praise often give people the feeling that they are two different extremes. Obviously, this is not the same. But looking back, think about it carefully, they may blend at two extremes. Criticism is undoubtedly equal to failure. Of course, praise represents success, and failure is the mother of success. Often, repeated failures are like a trivial drop of water, until the whole container is filled with water, then this drop of water will become the source of success.
Yes, I don't deny that as a primary school student, I hope there is no criticism in this world, only praise. No matter what you do, whether you study or create, what awaits you is the praise of others, but think about it. If there is only one sweet word in the four flavors of life, the world will become empty and tasteless, then maybe there will be no truly talented people in the world.
A college student wrote a poem in his composition book. His parents, as famous professors in the university, thought his poem was terrible and severely criticized him, which made the college student never dare to face himself again and finally embarked on the road of drug abuse. Let's think about it. If his parents had given him a little praise, would the result still be like this?
Bud. When Schulberg wrote his first poem, his mother's evaluation was "wonderful", while his father's evaluation as a screenwriter was "terrible". Many years later, he took out the poem and found it really terrible. So he feels lucky to have a mother who will praise him and warn his father from time to time, because he feels that criticism and praise are indispensable for a writer and a person's life.
Me and Bud? Like Schulberg, I feel lucky because I have the same father, mother and teacher. My father always said, "Well, there is no progress at all." My mother always says, "Did you make this? Great! " And my teacher, when I succeed, she will say, "Zhang Mengrui, yes, but don't be proud!" " "When I fail, she will say," Zhang, don't lose heart, success always comes after the storm! " "The people around me combine these two extremes. They will criticize me and praise me at the same time. My life has become meaningful and colorful.
I think that only by combining the two different extremes of praise and criticism in the world forever can there be hope for the future of the world and a brilliant chapter be written.
4. Criticism and praise composition criticism:
I remember that it was the fifth grade of primary school and I was criticized for the first time. It always makes my memory sad, so I dare not make mistakes now.
It was a Chinese class, and all the students were listening attentively to the teacher except me and my deskmate. We played under the table, she hit me with a pen, and I rubbed her with a pen. At this time, the teacher who was lecturing saw that her eyes were clairvoyant, she could see everything and speak. It was terrible. Her eyes seem to have a magic power. Suddenly, we
After school is finally over, the teacher still wants some students to stay as usual. At this time, I am very scared. From grade one to grade five, I listen carefully in every class and am often praised by teachers and loved by my classmates. But this time, alas, I have nothing to say. The teacher began to call the roll:, Li Ming,, Zhao, Xie and you. The teacher pointed to my nose and said:
At this time, my feet seem to be filled with lead and I can't get out. My head seems to be crushed by a boulder of fate and I can't lift it. When I entered the office, my face was as red as a patient with a fever, and my heart was still pounding. The teacher called me first, and she spoke to me earnestly. She said, "You know it's the final term, but I didn't know you've been here recently." When the teacher said this, he let me go. I completely understood on the road again!
From then on, if you don't attend classes, you won't dare to attend classes!
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My beautiful motherland and lovely hometown.
With the continuous progress of the wheel of history, from the four great inventions to the ascension of "Shenzhou V", "Shenzhou VI" and "Shenzhou VII" today, for thousands of years, no Chinese people have fought for them with patriotism. Back then, the great geologist Li Siguang risked being detained in Germany and decided to return to China to serve his motherland. This year marks the 59th anniversary of the founding of People's Republic of China (PRC). Fifty-nine years old is a symbol of old age for a person, but for a country, it is a moment to shine. She is not old at all. She not only gave birth to the sons and daughters of China, but also inherited and carried forward the 5,000-year-old civilization of China.
1937 during the lugouqiao incident, Japanese imperialism invaded our motherland, and our great PLA soldiers bravely shouldered long guns, short guns and bullets to fight for peace in China. Japanese imperialism finally surrendered unconditionally on August 1945+05 with the determination of soldiers, the responsibility to the country and the unity of our Chinese sons and daughters, and the people of China celebrated their victory with the brightest smiles. From poverty at the time of the founding of the People's Republic to today, our dear motherland has finally become strong after numerous hardships. In 2004, China won 32 gold medals at the Athens Olympic Games. This year, as the host country of the Olympic Games, China won 5 1 gold medals, making it the first place in the 29th Olympic Games. We should be proud of this!
The motherland, with an ancient civilization of 5,000 years, has a long history that allows us to witness the crystallization of the wisdom of Chinese sons and daughters, such as the writing brush, which not only has a strong interest in China, but also symbolizes the elegance of historical literati. Wushu is famous at home and abroad. Those mysterious and ancient secrets of kung fu have made foreign tourists linger, and our Chinese sons and daughters have also inherited and carried forward these rich achievements of civilization. If Jackie Chan and the third runner-up were not modern, Jet Li's kung fu would be very good.
What a cool breeze! Blow it! Blow it!
I want to praise my motherland,
I want to praise my beautiful China.
Please turn my praise into clusters of flowers, which filled the sky, covered the earth and sprinkled on the vast land of China.
Yesterday, the dragon, the ancestors danced; Today's sun is held up by our ancestors. Who will write the history of tomorrow? It's us! It is our young teenagers who are bathed in the sunshine in harmony with the country. As the hope of the nation, we must shoulder the heavy responsibility of defending the motherland and add a lot of color to the more glorious history of the motherland tomorrow.
5. Praise and criticize the love of father's love, just like a clear spring and a continuous mountain. The long mountain can't control the trickle, because this mountain represents the broad mind of parents, and this water represents the selfless care of parents.
I remember that in the first semester of the fourth grade, I got the first place in my class in mathematics, with 97 points in each subject. I thought: Mom must be very happy. After school, I ran home happily. When I got home, I quickly showed my mother the test paper and proudly said, "Mom, the test paper has been issued, and English and math are the first in the class." After reading the paper, my mother's eyes lit up and cried happily, "son, you are great!" " "I laughed like a flower when I heard my mother's praise. I waited proudly for my father to come back. Soon my father came back, and I quickly showed my father the test paper. What I'm waiting for is a storm. "Dad suddenly flew into a rage:" Look at you, you are so careless that such a simple question can go wrong. "Say that finish, I threw the paper on the ground and bowed my head in shame. Later, I picked up the test paper, found out the reason for this mistake and corrected it.
The love of parents can't be described in words. Some love is beating and cursing; Some love is encouragement; Some love is gentle; Some love is severe; In a word; Fathers express their love in different ways, but they are all for our own good and for our future. We must never fail our parents' hopes for us.
6. Asking for an 800-word article entitled "Criticism and Praise" often gives people the impression that they are two different extremes. Obviously, this is not the same. But looking back, think about it carefully, they may merge at two extremes. Criticism is undoubtedly equal to failure. Of course, praise represents success, and failure is the mother of success. Usually, repeated failures are like a trivial drop of water until the whole container is filled with water. At this time, that drop of water will become the source of success.
Yes, I don't deny me now. I hope there is no criticism in this world, only praise. No matter what you do, whether you study or create, what awaits you is the praise of others, but think about it. If there is only one sweet word in the four flavors of life, the world will become empty and tasteless, then there may not be really talented people in the world.
There was a college student who wrote a poem in his composition book. As a famous professor in the university, mom and dad thought his poems were bad and severely criticized him, which made the college student never dare to face himself again and finally embarked on the road of drug abuse. Let's think about it. If his parents had given him a little praise, would the result still be like this?
Bud. When Schulberg wrote his first poem, his mother's evaluation was "wonderful" and his father's evaluation as a screenwriter was "terrible". Many years later, he took out the poem and found it really terrible. Therefore, he feels very lucky. He has a mother who will praise him and a father who will warn and criticize him from time to time, because he thinks criticism and praise are indispensable things for a writer and a person. Praise is the source of writing and life, and the power of criticism will always tell itself: "Be careful, pay attention, summarize and improve."
Me and Bud? Like Schulberg, I feel lucky because I have the same father, mother and teacher. Dad always said, "well, there is no progress at all." Mom always says, "Did you make this? Great! " And my teacher, when I succeed, she will say, "Zhang Mengrui, yes, but don't be proud!" " "When I fail, she will say," Zhang, don't lose heart, success always comes after the storm! " "The people around me combine these two extremes. They will criticize me and praise me at the same time. My life has become meaningful and colorful.
I think that only by combining the two different extremes of praise and criticism in the world forever can there be hope for the future of the world and a brilliant chapter be written.
7. How to write your feelings and comments after reading the composition? Evaluating and correcting students' compositions is an important part of Chinese teaching and the crowning touch of this link. It is also the teacher's response to the students' enthusiasm for writing. From the writing psychology of students, what students are most eager to know after each composition is the teacher's feedback on the composition, so as to find their sense of self and academic achievement from the comments on the composition. So every word in teacher composition evaluation is direct. Below I will talk about my understanding on how to write a good composition evaluation for my peers' reference. First, the advantages of students' compositions should be affirmed and praised through reserved criticism of the forms and skills of compositions. Similarly, it is necessary to correct and criticize the shortcomings of students' compositions-avoiding their shortcomings can promote their strengths. Besides, the composition is different from the usual talking and chatting, I want to say. A, b, c, d, the pen is average, and the writing has no focus; Indiscriminate use of dialect slang, coining words, saying irregular words, etc., must be pointed out in the comments, but it should not be killed with a stick, and hope and encouragement should be given. "I believe you can make things clear one by one in your next composition." "If we can make a long story short, the effect will be multiplied." "Your article is beautiful, if the text is also beautiful. Students will not be bored, but will be very comfortable. They accept their opinions from the heart, will write with greater enthusiasm and energy next time, and will try to avoid similar shortcomings. Second, use interesting language. Cheng Yi, an educator in our country, said, "If you don't teach people interest, you won't be happy to learn. "Comments, too, are boring and rigid, and students will not be happy when they read them, which will not play a guiding role. It can not only create a pleasant learning environment-even if it is criticism, students are willing to accept it and become the adhesive between teachers and students-but also achieve the effect of "not making people think after laughing". A student can't use punctuation correctly in his composition. Once he teased to the end, I commented after his composition: "Stop staring at his round eyes, the eyebrows of quotation marks raised, and the exclamation point began to cry; My little master, how did you neglect our proper position in the text? "Third, comments should pay attention to literary talent and make public personality. Writing evaluation is actually a teacher's job. Beautiful and personalized comments, well-written comments and comments on the floor can give students a refreshing feeling, a literary influence and a pleasant aesthetic enjoyment with its unique charm, which will be unforgettable for a long time and for life. For example, writing an article about scenery, writing "to observe", "please observe carefully" and "observe carefully" over and over again, students turn a blind eye when they feel bored. It says: Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. This subtle expression, although of the same meaning, can not only make students appreciate the teacher's literary talent, but also make students remember it easily. Try to improve the form and form of comments. For example, the use of ancient poems, famous sayings, exquisite fables, philosophical stories, wonderful metaphors, punctuation patterns and so on. To evaluate, try to be vivid, novel, fascinating and impressive. Personalized and eclectic comments are not just demonstrations for students. It is a tangible education and an intangible spur. 4. Psychologist Maslow believes that people's needs can be divided into low-level and high-level, among which respect needs and self-realization needs are the highest needs of people. For the problems existing in students' exercises, teachers should stand on the angle of understanding and respecting students, change the image of the preacher in the past, and communicate with students in an equal and patient spirit with a tone of consultation and inquiry. Let students feel the teacher's concern for him in an atmosphere full of humanity, let them have a natural understanding of their own values, stimulate their interest in writing, arouse their thinking about problems and make progress. For example, can this word be changed? This sentence is too long. Can you separate it with punctuation marks? Are you right? Look carefully again and see if you can find anything, can you ... once, a teacher found that a student in the class copied someone else's article, but he didn't find it immediately and scolded him loudly. He just wrote in the comments: Teacher, thank you for recommending this article, and the source should be indicated in future recommendations, but when can I read your excellent works? Such gentle and drizzly words full of humanistic care not only protect students' strong self-esteem, but also enable students to easily understand the implication of the teacher and accept and correct it calmly, which is beyond the reach of rude criticism. In short, the teacher's evaluation of the composition written by the students should not be a simple sermon, but an eloquent conversation. Because a few words of praise from the teacher will communicate the hearts of two people and bring great encouragement and joy to the students.
8. Praise and criticism of argumentative materials are the sunshine that illuminates life. Without sunshine, we can't grow; Criticism is also the light of life. Without this light, we might get lost.
Everyone likes to hear good things. A compliment is like a spring breeze, which warms people's hearts, drinks nectar, nourishes the root of the tongue, stays in a fairyland and revels in dreams.
The world needs praise, there are great rivers and mountains to praise, and there are intoxicating scenery to praise. Learn to praise and let the beauty of this world fill our side.
3. I think that every praise is a pause on the road of life, because the praise of life will never stop; And every criticism is a semicolon. When criticized, sort out your thoughts and regain your confidence next time, and there will be another beginning. The torrential rain can't stop our progress, and the dull gloom can't erase our persistence.
No matter how desperate life is, we can catch that tough and beautiful vine.
9. Praise and criticize argumentative materials. Speaking is an art. An appropriate greeting can warm people's hearts and spleen, and an unintentional bad word may harm people. We are born to talk, but we never know how to speak. Speaking is an art, which requires an introduction. First of all, you should know what "good words" and "bad words" are.
Everyone likes to hear good things. A compliment is like a spring breeze, which warms people's hearts, drinks nectar, nourishes the root of the tongue, stays in a fairyland and revels in dreams. The world needs praise, there are great rivers and mountains to praise, and there are intoxicating scenery to praise. Learn to praise and let the beauty of this world fill our side.
The world needs praise as well as criticism. No one likes to hear ugly words, everyone hates criticism, but everyone loves to say ugly words, and it is difficult to express their inner resentment. Appropriate criticism can sometimes play a huge role. Wei Zhi was the most famous remonstrator in the prosperous Tang Dynasty. He wrote to Emperor Taizong 100 many times in his life, and often criticized current events with great acrimony. However, it was these timely criticisms that made Tang Taizong wake up and avoided reckless acts of committing heinous crimes again and again. Criticism is important, but it is not unreasonable. When western advanced civilization entered the late Qing Dynasty, this dynasty was full of pedantry and sour taste. Some people shouted "national subjugation" and resolutely resisted all foreign goods. Some people, regardless of the changes of the times, try their best to spread rumors that Machamp is in chaos. What is ridiculous is not the accusation with ulterior motives, but the absurd criticism. Criticism is not to take out the grievances hidden in the bottom of my heart to mislead other people's children, nor to spread rumors in the market. Criticism is the hope for a better tomorrow, so we criticize the present, and we strongly criticize the reality because we want to praise the Chinese Odyssey.
Praise should not be excessive, and excessive praise is also a precursor to disaster. Since criticism is difficult to master, we just need to praise it, okay? This is not right. Wang has a masterpiece handed down from ancient times, which once described a gifted seven-year-old child, intoxicated by people's excessive praise, and gradually became a mediocre generation. Adou, who couldn't afford to help, was surrounded by sycophantic officials and slaves, so he enjoyed singing and dancing and eventually became a prisoner of national subjugation. (China Composition Network)
Speaking is an art, proper praise makes people forge ahead, and excessive flattery often leads to disaster. Timely criticism can turn Gan Kun around, and absurd accusations will only make people laugh. Learn to criticize and praise, learn the art of speaking. May we all become eloquent artists.