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Comments on tutor's graduation thesis
The model essay of the tutor's graduation thesis is introduced as follows:

1, with the title of xx. Focus on the problem of xx, and then put forward effective suggestions for the problem. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable. The reference materials are closely combined with the theme.

2. The paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can be a good investigation of existing problems. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy, reasonable logical structure, accurate expression of views and proper application of research principles. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.

3, the language expression is general, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.

4. The length of the article is completely in line with the regulations of the college, the content is basically complete, the hierarchical structure is general, the main points are logical, but there is a lack of personal opinions.

5. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.

6. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. Each part is closely related, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, and the argumentation content is convincing, but the article lacks its own original content.

7. The idea of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are clear, and the opinions are expressed accurately. The literature materials consulted and referenced are closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure.

8.xx treats people sincerely and has a simple style. The student strictly abides by the rules and regulations of our unit. During his internship, he was never absent without reason, late and left early. He can get along well with colleagues in the unit, communicate harmoniously, learn from each other's strengths, be open-minded and eager to learn, and pay attention to teamwork.

9. The title of the full text is xx. This paper mainly discusses and analyzes the problems existing in xx Company and their causes, and puts forward some operable countermeasures. The full-text topic is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing.

10, xxx students work actively, study hard, respect teachers and treat others sincerely. Over the past year, their technical theoretical level and operational level have been greatly improved. I hope to strengthen my study in the future and succeed at an early date.

1 1. The topic not only conforms to the training objectives of the administrative management major, but also shows strong characteristics of the times and practical application. The structure of the full text is basically reasonable, the thinking is clear, the language is fluent, the level is clear, the views are basically accurate, and the arguments and arguments are basically the same.