Seven, writing (60 points)

2 1. Read the following text and write as required. (60 points)

A famous singer talked about her changes in an interview with CCTV: In the past, her first sentence in front of the audience was "Hello everyone, I am coming!" Now she says, "Thank you for coming!"

Maybe similar changes happen to you or around you, maybe you have your own feelings and thoughts about it. Please write a narrative or argumentative essay of at least 800 words.

Look down on yourself

Koizumi is a trickle and will not dry up when he enters the sea; Lonely and proud, you can't break into the mountains. The spring is big, and the forest is loose and wide. Only when you look down on yourself and are willing to blend in with others can you become immortal.

It is wise to underestimate yourself. Please clear the smoke of history. Can you hear the horses hissing and whistling in the west wind? In this voice, I saw Emperor Gaozu. "My general is not like Han Xin, his strategy is not like Sean, and his army is not like Xiao He. I don't know if it is possible. " You see, you see, Liu Bang, who imposed himself on the world when the wind was blowing, is like a child at the moment, thinking that everything in the world depends on people. Is that really the case? The answer is no, Zhang Han can be a general, but Liu Bang can be the three men, and he thinks very little of himself, in exchange for three loyal ministers to hold him higher.

"If you always think of yourself as a pearl, you will always have the pain of being buried. It is better to be a clay figurine with peace of mind and let everyone step on you. " The poet Lu Li once said.

There are also people who think highly of themselves. There is a disease in psychology called narcissistic personality disorder. This kind of person has a strong sense of superiority, accompanied by heavy taboos and fragile self-esteem. They think they are the center of the universe, which can almost be called the morbid embodiment of "idealists". This kind of person's life can be imagined, which is simply betrayal. In medicine, it can be summed up in two words-"sick".

"Man Chun of flowers, full moon of the heart." Master Hongyi said. If there is only one flower in spring, isn't it barren? If there is only one round of jathyapple in Tianxin, wouldn't it be lonely day and night? Look down on yourself, broaden your horizons, and the world and mind will grow at the same time. Grandma Bing Xin once said, "When you appreciate the flowers in the corner, the world becomes smaller." That's right.

Look down on yourself because others help you too much. How can that famous actress be famous without the support of the audience? Without the help of Galileo Descartes Hooke, how could Newton sum up the three laws? Without Tycho's decades of efforts, how could Kepler discover the laws of planetary motion?

Li Bai XV learned sword, and Sun Ce XVII made Jiangdong. I am seventeen years old. In front of us is an infinite world, with grass growing in front of us. I know this is not my own work. If my father hadn't pushed me up day by day like Sisyphus, and if my mother hadn't given me strength from time to time like Kaiya, I wouldn't be like this today! I love my family. We regard ourselves very lightly and each other very seriously, so the love in our family is very strong.

Laozi said: "The husband does not dispute, and the world cannot contend with him." Friend, look down on yourself like that famous actor, let time make you rich and let others make you proud!

Brief comments:

This paper comes straight to the point and puts forward its own point of view: "Only when you look down on yourself and are willing to integrate with others into a comprehensive marine forest can you achieve immortality." It is in line with the elements of "weakening self-awareness", "respecting others" and "gratitude" contained in the given materials. Meet the meaning of the question.

The main part demonstrates the central argument from two aspects. First of all, it demonstrates the first argument "it is wise to underestimate yourself" from both positive and negative aspects. Liu Bang's "self-esteem is very low, in exchange for three loyal ministers to hold him higher", while those who have high self-esteem are often "rebellious". "Look down on yourself and broaden your horizons, and the world and mind will grow at the same time."

Then, the article demonstrates the second argument "I look down on myself because others help me too much" with many examples, pointing out that "Galileo Descartes Hook's help" made Newton, "Tycho's decades of efforts" made Kepler, and my parents' help made me who I am today. So, be grateful to those who help you.

Finally, it can be said that "look down on yourself, let time make you rich, and let others make you proud" comes naturally.

In this paper, the methods of comparison, example and quotation are used, which are thorough in reasoning, flexible in sentence pattern, scattered and unified, and strong in expression. (Zeng Yuan comments)

Jiangsu Volume 6

Reject mediocrity

I am a mediocre stone, born in barren hills. I have a stone brother who was born in the toilet. His name is smelly hard. The stone man, who was also born in Qingji Peak, is famous for his "Stone Story" engraved on his back. I am neither smelly nor famous. I am mediocre, and the wind and rain beat me. It's really that stones are more annoying than stones. Occasionally, a bird landed on his head, leaving a lump to fly away. ...

Suddenly one day, a man from a quarry came up from the barren hill and walked around me, grinding like a donkey, touching my ass and exclaiming, "Good stone, good stone! Do you want to be mediocre all your life, or are you willing to go to earth with me? " I think life should be more colorful, so I followed the people in the quarry and rolled to the quarry's home. One day, the quarryman brought a bearded man home. The quarryman said, "Get along with him. He is a sculptor and can make you no longer mediocre. " So I rolled into Beard's backyard. "ah! Stone, what do you want me to carve you into? " "long live! I want to be A Qin Huang Hanwu, or Genghis Khan. " "no! Don't! No! " Beard shook his head and said, "My poor stone is so mediocre." "all right! Then I will become a bird and a fish. " "no! Don't! No! " Beard shook his head vigorously. "My poor stone, this is even more mediocre." "all right! All right! Then you can carve me into a tombstone. " "no! Don't! No! " Beard almost shook off his beard. "My poor stone, this is even more mediocre than before, which is an insult to my craft. Don't you want to be a great artist, like me-"

What? I don't agree with an ugly beard. What did I come out for? Isn't it just to stop being mediocre? I reject this mediocre plan. Rejection is invalid! From then on, the beard walked around me with tools every day, grinding like a donkey. Under his carving, the stones on my body were carved away little by little, and I became smaller and smaller. Slowly, I have hands and feet, a face ... more and more like a beard, I am disfigured!

One day, Beard covered me with a piece of cloth and his shadow disappeared for several days. When he was away, I picked up the tools at my feet, refused mediocrity and carved myself. When the beard appeared again, it attracted many people. "Ladies and gentlemen, this is my work." Said and pulled down the cloth on my body. "Ah ... stone monkey!" Beard opened his mouth wide. "Grandfather!" Thunderous applause rang out from the crowd.

Scoring highlights

Imagination is magnificent, and there is wisdom in daily life. Starting with a stone that has lived in the mountains for a long time and is extremely mediocre, the author wrote the legendary experience of the stone, which makes people think. Observing the reality with a stone eye and revealing the views on mediocrity and greatness with casual language is a rather short novel.

Language humor, cadence. Obviously, the author has a deep understanding of language. In writing, while carving stones, he did not forget to carefully carve his own language, such as: "There are more stones than stones, which makes me angry" and "It looks more and more like a beard, and my face is disfigured". At the same time, the language is humorous and easy to read, such as: "This is even more mediocre than just now, which is an insult to my craft" and "Walking around me with tools every day, like a donkey grinding". The usual description implies profound meaning.

Jiangxi Volume 7

Enjoy education

Fortunately, I have been taught by talents in the world.

On the one hand, Bole was lucky to meet a swift horse.

Frustrated people all say that "a thousand miles is common, but Bole is not common". It is difficult to find a bosom friend and a wise master. It makes sense. If we are less angry and more rational, and think from the perspective of Bole, we find that although we have the heart of Bole, sometimes it is difficult for us to find talents. David has made countless contributions in the field of chemistry. Someone asked him what his greatest contribution was, and he filled in Faraday, a student. In his view, meeting a swift horse is far more difficult than the discovery in the field of chemistry. Talent is rare, and education is a blessing. On the way to explore the reform of colleges and universities, South University of Science and Technology has encountered policy restrictions, and it is difficult to teach talents in the world. However, 45 outstanding students resisted the pressure that they might not have a diploma recognized by the state after graduation and took the independent entrance examination. Without these 45 talents, South University of Science and Technology will exist in name only, and an exploration of educational reform will probably end. Bole is lucky, South University of Science and Technology is lucky, and China education is lucky.

Secondly, we are lucky to learn from each other in teaching.

Talented people come forth in large numbers, and teachers and students in the same field will certainly collide with sparks of thought and learn from each other. Russell, a famous philosopher, was once an advocate of "new realism", but later he recruited a student named Vitesse Gentan, who always didn't believe his research, but his "objection" was always well founded. Russell was reborn in the collision with his disciples' thoughts, and his philosophy was transformed into "logical positivism" Vitesse Gentan later became a famous professor at Cambridge University. The collision of ideas made them go further in philosophical research and learn from each other. Russell is lucky, Vitesse Gentan is lucky, and philosophy is lucky.

Third, the luck of realizing value.

Talents in the world place their hopes on the motherland, cultivate their hopes and cultivate talents as pillars. Tomorrow and the future are in our own hands, which is not only a heavy burden, but also the embodiment of educators' life value. There are 3,000 disciples of Confucius, among whom 72 are outstanding, and there are countless disciples of the next generation. Mencius is one of them. If the value of Confucius is only to establish a Confucian system, then he can only be brilliant for a while at most. It is precisely because of his outstanding talent in the world, Confucianism is everywhere, and the value of Confucius can be maximized, so we can call him a "saint". Confucius is fortunate to be taught by talents in the world, and Confucianism is fortunate.

Are you happy with these three kinds of wealth? With these three blessings, can we not entertain and educate?

Scoring highlights

Have lofty thoughts and profound themes. For most students, the first two songs of Meng Zi's Sanle may be closer to their own lives, while "cultivating talents in the world" seems too far away, which makes people feel far away, but the author of this paper has chosen this angle, which can be described as lofty. The author cares about the world and education, so he deeply expresses his understanding of education and his concern for education in China.

Clever structure and beautiful language. The structure of the author's article is clear at a glance, and the significance of "educating people in the world" is discussed from three aspects, each of which has far-reaching significance. The author's language is capable and he doesn't drag his feet. He quoted refined materials and elaborated on examples. Three aspects step by step, concrete analysis. Clever conception, distinctive language style and unique conception make this article stand out.

Hunan juanba

A low-key aristocrat

There is a nobleness called low-key.

You may be a little confused. I grew up in the cry of "I am important", and I am used to shaking my mind and flaunting my personality. I'm used to young and frivolous fresh clothes and red knives. Why should I lower my profile and lean over to smell the flowers on the roadside? Then please slow down and listen to me in detail.

Do you know a gentleman's modesty as jade? The nobleness of gentlemen is that they always bend down, reach out and ask the world if it needs help with a smile. At the moment of bending over, the gentleman's gentle and jade-like cultivation will flow out like a clear spring, making the world fragrant.

A noble head may be a sign of your heroic spirit, but stones you don't pay attention to may trip your feet. Floating thoughts will feel empty if they have no roots and refuse to bend over. Bend down, maybe the scenery of life is on the side of the road, waiting for you to find it.

You have heard that Master Hongyi repeatedly told his disciples to put a bowl of clear water next to the corpse when he died, just to let the ants who smell the smell have a place to live when they burn. Master Hongyi, whom everyone admired, lowered his posture, put it in the dust and noticed the ants and insects in the world. How touching it is to keep such a low profile! The flowers he bent over in the mud, white, huge and patchy, lit up the scenery of his life and laid out the artistic conception of his life, far away, fantastic, awe-inspiring and eager.

I noticed the surprise and approval in your eyes. You must be moved by Master Hongyi's low profile. So, listen to me again.

You know that Qi Baishi, the most famous master in the history of painting in China, is also a modest gentleman with a low profile. It's a common fault that scholars despise each other, but he always looks down upon them humbly. Zhang Daqian held an art exhibition and was the first to join in. He worshipped three painters in the same industry and expressed his ambition with poems: "I would like to be a lackey of Jiuquan and turn around at three doors." This low-key is admirable, touching and even more awe-inspiring. The demeanor of a master lies not in his strong appearance and outstanding achievements, but in whether there is a full seed under his mature appearance, which can take root in the deep soil of the world, blossom full flowers and proudly bloom all the glory and belief, prosperity and dreams of life.

There is an expression in your eyes. The image of a generation of painters is outlined in your mind, and I hear you say in your heart that it is also noble and elegant to lower your posture and bend down.

Yes, you have been shocked, and the fluctuations in your heart have reached my heart through your eyes, but I still have something to say to you.

After getting off the plane, Premier Wen whispered "I'm sorry" to a long-awaited mother and son, which touched the world. Lin Chi-ling took a group photo in a commercial performance. Because she was so tall, she bent down to be flush with others. More than 70 fans lined up and she bent down 70 times. They are noble people, but they leaned down and saw the earth, smiling. They put a low profile and took themselves off the distant stars and sent them to the world. Countless starlight dotted the noble ocean and continued to shine in the spring breeze.

You know, frivolity is not a crime, and passion is not wrong. If you can take root in the soil of life and not be a floating cloud, your life will be full of poetry, and you can turn a poem into a painting by intercepting a paragraph.

I saw the light in your eyes. Your mouth is up, and there is an expression in your eyes.

What about you? You ask me.

I will lay low and bend down to smell the fragrance everywhere. I answered.

Scoring highlights

Unique perspective and novel insights. The article takes the second person as "you" as the perspective, which makes people feel very cordial to read. The author, like an old friend of the reader, sat opposite the reader and explained, every word was so cordial and sincere. At the end of the article, the author once again cultivated our sentiment with the help of imagination. I believe that readers will smile after reading it, and their mouths will rise!