But what is this? It not only causes indescribable harm to drug addicts, but also brings great harm to drug addicts' families and even society.
Negative influence, anti-drug propaganda and post-reading composition.
On Monday, our school held a colorful and touching photo exhibition on drug control and drugs. I only have a little time to see it.
Those pictures and real events are shocking!
When I got there, the first exhibition board caught my attention: "There is an orphan named Didiu who was sold by Wang to Li.
Three drug addicts, Li Moumou and Wang Mou, used various vicious methods to vent their children's drug addiction. "So,
I also saw a display board that read: "A woman in a city took drugs during pregnancy, and her fetus suffered greatly in the mother's body.
It's suffocating and cramping. Since then, the mother must take medicine before breastfeeding, and the baby will eat, otherwise it will cry and endanger life. "
In other words, drugs are the chief culprit in devouring teenagers' youth and bodies, and bloody scenes come into view, so cruel,
Drugs are cruel,
After reading these exciting contents and thinking of horrible pictures, I have a deeper understanding of drug abuse and hate drugs even more.
Go to sleep. Drugs never stop, and drug control never stops. We should lead an honest and clean life, stay away from drugs, refuse bad temptations and make people's lives more exciting!
It's really scary to see some propaganda pictures with the theme of drug control today. These pictures tell a terrible story. Parents sell their children to others to buy drugs because of drug abuse. They also tell a tragic story. Their bodies rot because of drug abuse ... Because of "poison", those weak children have to endure torture, and those who were originally happy and healthy are eroded by it. Looking at the end of life in the picture, I began to resent why the world. But after reading the propaganda pictures, I have a new understanding of "poison". It turns out that heroin, ice and white powder are all drugs. Poison harms countless people and is the chief culprit leading to death. It has separated thousands of happy families in Qian Qian and is the greatest enemy of mankind. "Is there really nothing we can do about this erosion?" I can't help asking No, as long as we can resist its temptation and have strong willpower to overcome it, we can stop everything it brings. Don't schools often educate students about drugs? Although the education in this field is very strong, I still hear that some students don't agree with it, and they still try it with curiosity, and the result is still hurt by drugs. We should remind ourselves that no matter what sweet and delicious food anyone gives us, we should not accept it casually, not even our closest friends. Here I want to send you a sentence, I hope you will keep it in mind: "cherish life and stay away from drugs." Extended reading.
The so-called feeling
It can be the truth or subtle thoughts learned from the book, the thinking and association inspired by the contents of the book, the determination and ideal inspired by reading, and the attack and irony of reading on some ugly phenomena in society. The expression of the feeling after reading is flexible and diverse, which basically belongs to the discussion category, but the writing method is different from the general argumentative essay because it must be based on reading. Write well, have experience, be knowledgeable and have feelings.
First, read the original text.
The feeling of "feeling after reading [1]" is caused by "reading" and is the basis of "feeling". After a cursory reading, you may not even know what the original book says. How can you have a "feeling"? Reading is shallow, of course not deep. Only by reading carefully can we feel something and feel deeply. If you want to read an argumentative essay, you must find out its arguments (opinions and propositions), or criticize any wrong opinions, think about what you are inspired by, and find out what the arguments and conclusions are. If it is a narrative, you should make clear its main plot, how many characters there are, what is their relationship and what is the story. It is also necessary to find out what kind of spiritual quality the work reveals, what kind of social phenomenon it reflects, what thoughts and feelings the author expresses, which chapters of the work are touching, why it is so touching and so on.
Second, be friendly.
As long as you read the original work carefully, an article can be written as a review. If you feel deeply about the center of the original, you can write it as a post-reading, if you feel deeply about other contents of the original, you can also write it as a post-reading, and if you feel about individual sentences, you can also write it as a post-reading. In short, as long as you have feelings about the content of the original, you need to express what you know, so that you can write your thoughts after reading.
Third, choose the right feeling point.
An article can express many feelings, but a comment can only talk about one center, and can never cover everything. So the next step is to screen and compare these feelings, find out the one that you feel the deepest, the latest angle, the most realistic pertinence and the smooth feeling when you write, as the center of review, and then demonstrate it in words.
Fourth, the narrative should be short.
Since the feeling after reading is caused by reading, it is necessary to describe the facts that cause this feeling in the article, and sometimes I need some examples that I associate with it. In a word, the feeling of reading is indispensable, but it is different from the requirement of narrative in narrative. The "narrative" in the narrative pays attention to concrete, vivid and image, while the "narrative" in the post-reading feeling is. The common problem is that the narrative is not concise, but actually becomes a retelling. This is mainly because the author can't grasp the spirit and main points of the part to be quoted, so he can't be concise. Concise means that the fewer words, the better, concise.
Fifth, Lenovo should pay attention to form.
There are many forms of association, such as association (there are similarities between related things), anti-association (there are opposites between related things), association (there are similarities between related things), inheritance association (there are similarities between related things) and similar association (there are similarities between related things).
How to write a comment after editing this paragraph?
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I. Format and writing method
There are usually three ways to write the feeling after reading: one is to abbreviate the outline, the other is to write the feeling after reading, and the third is to extract good sentences and paragraphs. The topic can be "After Reading"; You can also use your own feelings (one or two sentences) as a topic. The next line is reading feelings. The first line is the main title, and the second line is the subtitle.
Second, choose what you feel most, which is the key to writing a good summary.
Third, close contact with practice, which is an important content of the feeling after reading.
Fourth, we should properly handle the relationship between reading and feeling, and combine discussion, narration and lyricism.
5. Don't narrate the original text too much, but reflect the word "Jane".
Sixth, we must examine the questions clearly.
When writing, you should distinguish between primary and secondary, try to grasp the key points and express your feelings.
Seven, to choose materials.
Reading is the basis of writing. Only by reading carefully can we deeply understand the content of the article, so as to grasp the key points and grasp the thoughts and feelings of the article, and then we can have some feelings. Only by careful study can we find the connection point between reading feelings, that is, the central idea of the article, that is, the sentences that point out the central idea in the article. For a work, what we want to write is the change of our thoughts and actions after reading it.
Eight, to write a post-reading feeling, you should start with a brief introduction of the content of the work you read, and then write your experience.
It is often appropriate to summarize the original content in 3-4 sentences. In the end, most of them will return to the works they have read. We should focus on the word "feeling" and remember to connect with our real life.
Nine, be reasonable and write the true feelings.
Matters needing attention in writing after reading
(1) writing after reading is by no means a copy or simple retelling of the original text, but a premise of writing "experience".
Write with true feelings. It should be from the heart, not a critical letter or guarantee.
Write unique and fresh feelings and try to be innovative to attract or infect readers.
4 it is forbidden to write a running account!
When editing this paragraph, what should I see about the reading experience of learning?
(1) Citation-Cite materials around sensitive points and briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text.
(2) Summary-summarize the main contents of this article, be concise and write down the key points.
(3) Discussion-analyze the materials, improve the sense of language, and clarify the basic views. After introducing the content of "reading", we should make some comments on "reading", which can not only analyze the quoted content realistically; It can also be excavated from phenomenon to essence, from individual to general; It is necessary to analyze the material with profound meaning, and then naturally "highlight" your feelings. You should choose what you feel the most and express it clearly in concise sentences. Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence is the central argument of this paper. The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the article can be flexible, and it can be at the beginning of the article.
(4) Linking-connecting with practice and expanding vertically and horizontally. Conduct facts and reasoning around basic ideas. The most taboo thing about writing after reading is to talk in general terms. If you can't generalize, the article will be too superficial. Generally speaking, the feeling of reading often lacks pertinence and can't give people a shock. Linking is a close connection with reality, which allows you to contact similar phenomena in real life from one place to another. It is also possible to contact the opposing problems in real life from ancient times to the present. We can look at the big picture or start small. Of course, when analyzing and demonstrating with reality, we should also pay attention to turning back or echoing the "quotation" part from time to time, so that the "connection" and "quotation" are broken. The "silk" connection part is the main part of the argumentative paper, which is an exposition of the basic point (that is, the central argument).
(5) Conclusion-Summarize the full text and sublimate the sentiment. The content of "reading" is not easy.
The above five points are the basic ideas of writing the post-reading feeling, but this idea is not static, so we should be good at mastering it flexibly. For example, "Briefly describe the original text" usually comes before "make your point clear", but the order of the two is also possible. Furthermore, if the facts presented in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, there is no need to write the fourth part.
First, we must pay attention to it.
Read more, read less, and be flexible. For example, "brief the original text" usually comes before "make your point clear", but the order of the two is also possible. Moreover, if the facts mentioned in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, then the fourth part need not be written.
Second, we should attach importance to "reading"
In the relationship between \ "reading \" and \ "feeling \", \ "reading \" is the premise and foundation of \ "feeling \"; "Feeling" is the extension or result of "reading". You must "read" and then "feel". Without "reading", there is no "feeling". Therefore, to write a review, we must first understand the original text, accurately grasp its basic content and correctly understand it.
After reading a book or an article
There will be many feelings and experiences; For the same book or article, different people will think from different angles, have different views and get different enlightenment. Taking the well-known idiom story of "cramming for the last minute" as an example, from the perspective of satirizing Mr. Nan Guo, we can realize that people without real skills will "expose themselves" sooner or later and realize the importance of mastering real talents and learning. If we think about it in Qi Xuanwang and from the perspective of management system, we can further realize that Qi Xuanwang's \ "cauldron rice \" lacks the necessary evaluation mechanism, which provides people like Mr. Nanguo with objective conditions for eating and muddling along all day, thus associating with the necessity of breaking the \ "iron rice bowl \" and abolishing cauldron rice since the reform and opening up.
Fourth, narrative works cannot repeat the original text in a large number of pages.
After reading an article, you can't write many feelings or experiences, so just choose. As a beginner, you should choose the point that you feel most and have something to say. You should pay attention to grasp the angle of analyzing the problem, contact your own actual situation, and choose the most suitable feeling point from many clues as the center of the full text.
In junior high school composition class, in addition to writing "thoughts after reading", teachers will also ask students to write "thoughts after watching a movie, a TV series or attending an exhibition". The writing of post-reading feeling is the same as post-reading feeling. Just give a brief description of what you observed in the first part, and then draw out opinions and discuss them.
Five, how to write the scenery and things after reading?
(1) Briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text, such as the title of the book, the author, the year of writing and the summary of the original book or the original text. This part is written to explain where feelings come from and pave the way for the following discussion. This part must highlight the word "Jane" and never describe the specific content of what you read and the text in large paragraphs, but it is directly related to feelings.
(2) clarify the basic point of view. Choose the point that feels the deepest and express it clearly in concise sentences. Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence is the central argument of this paper. The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the article can be flexible, it can be placed at the beginning of the article, or at the end of the article or in the article. For beginners, it's best to cut to the chase and write your own opinions in the article.
(3) Put facts and reason around the basic viewpoints. This part is the theoretical part of the argumentative paper, which expounds the basic viewpoint (that is, the central viewpoint), proves the correctness of the viewpoint by putting facts and reasoning, and makes the viewpoint more prominent and convincing. It should be noted that facts and reasoning must closely revolve around and serve the basic point of view.
(4) Linking basic ideas with practice. A good feeling after reading should have the flavor of the times and have real feelings. To do this, we must be good at connecting with reality. This "reality" can be personal thoughts, words and deeds, experiences, or a social phenomenon. When connecting with practice, we should also pay attention to the close connection with the basic viewpoints and serve them, rather than blindly connecting and disconnecting. The above four points are the basic ideas of writing post-reading feelings.
(5) Briefly explain the relevant contents of the original text, rewrite your feelings, and don't focus on the introduction and deviate from the theme.