Graduation design graduation thesis, our tutor should evaluate and write comments. The following is my collection of graduation design comments and tutor comments, welcome to read, for your reference and reference!
1. The selected topic in this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the learned knowledge is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The conclusion is reasonable, correct and innovative. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent.
2. The literature research in this paper is comprehensive and systematic, the guiding ideology of topic selection is clear, the experimental design is reasonable and feasible, and it can be carried out according to the experimental plan and achieve the expected results. The writing idea of the paper is clear, the language is fluent and concise, the level is clear, the logic is strong, the words are accurate, all kinds of data and charts are complete and standardized, the literature citation is correct and scientific. This shows that this student has a certain theoretical foundation and scientific research ability. The topic of the paper is appropriate, with certain independent opinions, sufficient argumentation and extensive information, but the theory and examples are not supported enough. English language expression is basically fluent, with only a few grammatical errors, and the paper format meets the requirements of the specification.
3. This paper has a novel topic and a unique perspective, which embodies a solid theoretical foundation of human resource management. In particular, the article can demonstrate and analyze the topic in combination with relevant cases, which has certain practical value. Through the review of the paper, we can see that the author spent a lot of time in collecting data and cases, and also put forward some profound views, but there are still shortcomings in the depth of theory and the citation of some arguments. Generally speaking, this is a qualified paper.
4. The topic of the paper is appropriate, and the viewpoint is correct, but it lacks original opinions, and the argumentation content is sufficient, but it lacks argumentation depth. English is fluent, but there are some grammatical mistakes. The paper format meets the specification requirements.
5. The title of the paper lacks originality, the arguments are not sufficient, there are few concrete examples, there are too many cliches, and the proportion of quoting others' opinions is too large. English basically expresses the meaning, but there are many grammatical mistakes. The format of the paper basically meets the requirements.
6. Inappropriate topics; Incorrect views; There are too many grammatical errors; Plagiarism is serious; The format of the paper does not meet the requirements of the specification; Did not finish the paper according to the time requirement.
7. The research in this paper provides a new basis for XXXX to have strong practical value in controlling accounting information distortion. The author has clear thinking, rigorous discussion process, reasonable analysis and practical results. The writing of the thesis is standardized and the sentences are fluent, which meets the requirements of academic proofreading of dissertations.
8. The topic of the paper is basically the same as the content of the paper, with complete structure and fluent language. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tried to learn from Lev? Looking for the connection between Tolstoy and a character in Cao Yu's novels. From the content, the author has a further understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials. How to draw my own conclusion through the analysis of the data is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author has made great efforts.
9. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to XXXXX's writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also sharp, the paper is clear and reasonable, and the viewpoint is unique, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
10. The title of the paper is very meaningful. On the basis of absorbing academic research results, it is reasonable to have your own experience and put forward your own views. The argument is correct, the material is substantial, the narrative is clear and logical. The words are fluent. Writing conforms to academic norms. In the future, we should further sum up experience, compare music education modes and teach music better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
1 1. The title of this paper is xxx, which is novel and practical. The full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The demonstration method is reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is more thorough. In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the principles of administrative professional knowledge with social reality. Whether it is from the topic selection or viewpoint demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. But innovation is not enough.
12. The paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can well investigate the problems existing in xxx. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
13. The topic of this paper is reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management specialty. The full text takes the theme as the analysis and demonstration, which has reference and reference significance for perfecting China's administrative management. The content demonstration is also more scientific and reasonable, and the format is more standardized. The reference materials are closely related to the theme of the article, but the innovation and arguments are insufficient, especially the last part of the article is too weak and unconvincing. Generally speaking, it basically meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
14. this paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the dilemma of the official accountability system in China is deeply analyzed, and finally effective suggestions are put forward to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
15. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.
16. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. Each part is closely related, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, and the argumentation content is convincing, but the article lacks its own original content.
17. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. The parts are closely related, the opinions are basically accurate, and the argumentation content is more convincing. In the process of argumentation, the basic knowledge principle of administrative major is basically used to analyze the main problems in the article, but the reference materials are insufficient, the article lacks its own original content, and a few viewpoints are not profound and comprehensive.
18. This topic has a novel angle, clear context, fluent writing and clear basic viewpoints. The main problems still exist in the article: students have not thoroughly digested the information they are looking for and the arguments are not strong enough.
19. This article is very novel. Taking xxx as a clue, this paper comprehensively analyzes the problems and reasons of xxx in combination with local standards. And put forward the countermeasures to solve the existing problems. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.
20. This paper meets the professional requirements and reflects the hot issues in society. Therefore, the research of this topic is conducive to promoting the further development of xxx in China. The full text starts with the problem of xxx, and then analyzes the reasons of xxx. On this basis, the related xxx is analyzed. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.
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