Seriously speaking, the cultivation of writing style is a lifelong course and a concept far beyond the scope of poetry. Some friends who are beginners in poetry are often at a loss about the layout of poetry writing, or even don't think about the layout at all, and write at the beginning, which is disorganized. Can that scribbled thing with letters be called poetry?
The skill of writing poems and lyrics itself is really the last skill! Jump out of the framework of poetry, think about the laws of things themselves, and then return to the realm of poetry, and you will find a completely different self. We need to practice repeatedly to improve.
Plan: it's a plan, a plan, a plan.
It is a system, a situation, or the whole process of an event and the event itself.
Layout: it is the planning arrangement of the overall structure of something. The purpose of writing lies in layout, writing first and then layout.
Through the concrete analysis of this word, what do you realize? My personal experience is that planning the layout of articles is an indispensable process in our life, work and even various activities. No matter what you do, you need to have a plan in advance, which is natural, otherwise, like headless flies, you will inevitably hit a wall everywhere. We are sometimes very agile and can make correct and effective responses and actions to the handling of things quickly. However, this "fast" is actually done after "planning". That's just because your thinking and organization skills are strong.
A person's planning and layout ability reflects his comprehensive ability and quality. Anyone who has achieved and has the ability is a master of layout. Every excellent work, whether it is engineering, diplomacy, art or even career, must be written first and then brilliant. We write poems, write lyrics, write poems and write essays, and so on.
Everyone has a different level of writing poetry, and their style, level and taste are also different. What is the difference? Basic knowledge is on the one hand, and more importantly, the ability to make layout. This ability is not a single technical ability, it is the embodiment of a person's comprehensive quality cultivation. So we often hear such a saying: "Kung Fu is outside the poem".
2. Seeking the layout of the composition When writing, ancient Chinese students are afraid of many factors. One of the common phenomena is that they can't get over it and don't know how to find the layout of the composition.
It is very important to write an article brilliantly, skillfully and in a novel form. As far as the item-by-item requirements of composition in the notes of the national college entrance examination are concerned, in the item of "innovation" of "development level", the goal of "novel and ingenious design" is clearly put forward, and specific requirements are put forward for the conception of composition, which should be both novel and ingenious.
This paper discusses some methods of composition structure planning based on usual composition teaching practice. First, the so-called "chord point" is to select several representative "points" and then play on that "point". The fragments connected by several "dots" form a complete article.
For example, the title of the following composition is "Middle School Life": [Example] Feel the middle school life-the third year of senior three in March is really eventful. Entering the third year of high school, entering life, experiencing the March of the third year of high school, experiencing a ups and downs, and having a taste in my heart.
Tension: There is no doubt that the main theme of life is tension. Every time I see the countdown card on the stairs, I feel nervous and even anxious.
After all, ten years of cold window, try your luck here! Every day, the teacher's work is fixed and integrated. The teacher came into the classroom with a stack of papers, and soon came out with a stack of papers.
As soon as the math teacher left, the foreign language teacher came in, and the geography teacher took pains to lift the small blackboard again and again ... Students kept writing in every class every day, busy solving problems they didn't understand, busy asking teachers for advice, and busy correcting test papers ... For the unknown in July, nervousness is the only constant tone. As a result, the school, canteen and classroom are three points and one line, which is a constant curriculum; Take time to eat, take time to ride a bike … just to squeeze out more time to study.
However, the tension did not consume us. In the heavy study, we are experiencing the excitement of enriching life and feeling the rhythm of intense life.
Complaint: In the third year of my life, I often hear such comments: "Alas, the exam is too difficult. I don't think I have much hope. " A is dejected and despondent, with an ascetic face.
"I don't know what TV is for several months, and I don't know what music tastes like." B sighed bitterly.
"Dead meat! I can't watch the football match at 2: 35 tonight. It's really ... "C's mood won the understanding of fans.
"ouch! I almost forgot the big event, and there is a mock exam in history class in the afternoon! " Ding's reminder alarmed the dreamer. So everyone took their positions and quickly prepared for the war.
Complain, for the college entrance examination; The discussion began with the college entrance examination. Anyway, it is not surprising that complaints and arguments are commonplace.
It's natural to listen more, as if it were an indispensable serenade in life. Hope: Rhapsody of Life "The newspaper said that this year's enrollment expansion, we all have great hopes!" "The students who spread the news told everyone happily.
"Yes, yes, if everyone works hard, we will certainly be able to do it!" As the college entrance examination approaches, everyone sincerely encourages each other and cheers on each other-as long as there is a glimmer of hope, we must make 100% efforts. Especially in the parent-teacher conference, the enrollment information released by the school again and again has made our confidence index rise continuously.
"yes! Make up your mind and work hard! " Senior three, senior three! Life in senior three seems to be the most wonderful movement in life. The tense theme excites us, and the bright hope walks with us.
Into the third year of high school, into life, in the near future, will be out of a colorful spring! To tell the truth, such a composition is not easy to write. If the article only records life in chronological order, regardless of priorities, like a running account, it will appear dull, superficial and tasteless, which can neither give people useful enlightenment nor give people a healthy mood after reading.
However, in this composition, the author found another way, skillfully selected three fragments, carefully designed three subtitles, and made a big fuss about the three "points" he chose. In fact, if you grasp that "point", you will not be at a loss when writing, and it will be easier to grasp.
Through three points, this paper describes the special tension and hardship of senior three students, and also describes the special excitement and hope of senior three students, showing the vigorous and enterprising spirit of modern students. Through the analysis of the above exercises, we can see that the "connecting points" method can effectively improve our level of "planning the layout of articles" in composition.
Of course, there is no certain method for writing, but the method of "linking points" is adopted. There are various methods, such as the most common "diary style" and some short and pithy "small scripts", which are all good methods. In addition, when using this method, we should pay attention to two issues: 1 and the number of points selected.
Generally, it is advisable to use three, which will be more or less monotonous or boring. The three "points" not only conform to people's reading, appreciation and aesthetic habits, but also make it easier to express what they want to express clearly.
2. The connection between points. Although choosing "point" is easier to write, it should be noted that the point is not irrelevant and should be an organic whole.
For example, in the last composition, the author grasped the three points of "tension", "dissatisfaction" and "hope", which is very representative. Through these three points, we can basically see the whole life and mental state of senior three students. It can be seen that the selection of points should not be blind, and the selected "points" should have the function of "replacing faces with points".
Second, the so-called "rising" refers to the expression of "rising" in classical poetry, "say something else first." Specifically, it is to say one thing before expounding something, and then trigger it on this basis, so as to explain the relevant truth thoroughly.
Choose a good angle. Qian Qian has many objective things, and everything is always reflected in many ways.
Only by choosing a good angle when writing an article can we correctly reflect what we have written. Generally speaking, we can consider the angle from four aspects: azimuth (front, back and side), visual field (from large to small, from small to large), visual angle (looking up, looking up and looking down) and focus (from the main line or inside of external things). For example, the junior high school textbook "Notes on Vegetable Garden" has written several trivial things about growing vegetables, but they are not trivial. Start with one.
3. Seeking the layout of the composition When writing, ancient Chinese students are afraid of many factors. One of the common phenomena is that they can't get over it and don't know how to find the layout of their compositions.
It is very important to write an article brilliantly, skillfully and in a novel form. As far as the item-by-item requirements of composition in the notes of the national college entrance examination are concerned, in the item of "innovation" of "development level", the goal of "novel and ingenious design" is clearly put forward, and specific requirements are put forward for the conception of composition, which should be both novel and ingenious.
This paper discusses some methods of composition structure planning based on usual composition teaching practice. First, the so-called "chord point" is to select several representative "points" and then play on that "point". The fragments connected by several "dots" form a complete article.
For example, the title of the following composition is "Middle School Life": [Example] Feel the middle school life-the third year of senior three in March is really eventful. Entering the third year of high school, entering life, experiencing the March of the third year of high school, experiencing a ups and downs, and having a taste in my heart.
Tension: There is no doubt that the main theme of life is tension. Every time I see the countdown card on the stairs, I feel nervous and even anxious.
After all, ten years of cold window, try your luck here! Every day, the teacher's work is fixed and integrated. The teacher came into the classroom with a stack of papers, and soon came out with a stack of papers.
As soon as the math teacher left, the foreign language teacher came in, and the geography teacher took pains to lift the small blackboard again and again ... Students kept writing in every class every day, busy solving problems they didn't understand, busy asking teachers for advice, and busy correcting test papers ... For the unknown in July, nervousness is the only constant tone. As a result, the school, canteen and classroom are three points and one line, which is a constant curriculum; Take time to eat, take time to ride a bike … just to squeeze out more time to study.
However, the tension did not consume us. In the heavy study, we are experiencing the excitement of enriching life and feeling the rhythm of intense life.
Complaint: In the third year of my life, I often hear such comments: "Alas, the exam is too difficult. I don't think I have much hope. " A is dejected and despondent, with an ascetic face.
"I don't know what TV is for several months, and I don't know what music tastes like." B sighed bitterly.
"Dead meat! I can't watch the football match at 2: 35 tonight. It's really ... "C's mood won the understanding of fans.
"ouch! I almost forgot the big event, and there is a mock exam in history class in the afternoon! " Ding's reminder alarmed the dreamer. So everyone took their positions and quickly prepared for the war.
Complain, for the college entrance examination; The discussion began with the college entrance examination. Anyway, it is not surprising that complaints and arguments are commonplace.
It's natural to listen more, as if it were an indispensable serenade in life. Hope: Rhapsody of Life "The newspaper said that this year's enrollment expansion, we all have great hopes!" "The students who spread the news told everyone happily.
"Yes, yes, if everyone works hard, we will certainly be able to do it!" As the college entrance examination approaches, everyone sincerely encourages each other and cheers on each other-as long as there is a glimmer of hope, we must make 100% efforts. Especially in the parent-teacher conference, the enrollment information released by the school again and again has made our confidence index rise continuously.
"yes! Make up your mind and work hard! " Senior three, senior three! Life in senior three seems to be the most wonderful movement in life. The tense theme excites us, and the bright hope walks with us.
Into the third year of high school, into life, in the near future, will be out of a colorful spring! To tell the truth, such a composition is not easy to write. If the article only records life in chronological order, regardless of priorities, like a running account, it will appear dull, superficial and tasteless, which can neither give people useful enlightenment nor give people a healthy mood after reading.
However, in this composition, the author found another way, skillfully selected three fragments, carefully designed three subtitles, and made a big fuss about the three "points" he chose. In fact, if you grasp that "point", you will not be at a loss when writing, and it will be easier to grasp.
Through three points, this paper describes the special tension and hardship of senior three students, and also describes the special excitement and hope of senior three students, showing the vigorous and enterprising spirit of modern students. Through the analysis of the above exercises, we can see that the "connecting points" method can effectively improve our level of "planning the layout of articles" in composition.
Of course, there is no certain method for writing, but the method of "linking points" is adopted. There are various methods, such as the most common "diary style" and some short and pithy "small scripts", which are all good methods. In addition, when using this method, we should pay attention to two issues: 1 and the number of points selected.
Generally, it is advisable to use three, which will be more or less monotonous or boring. The three "points" not only conform to people's reading, appreciation and aesthetic habits, but also make it easier to express what they want to express clearly.
2. The connection between points. Although choosing "point" is easier to write, it should be noted that the point is not irrelevant and should be an organic whole.
For example, in the last composition, the author grasped the three points of "tension", "dissatisfaction" and "hope", which is very representative. Through these three points, we can basically see the whole life and mental state of senior three students. It can be seen that the selection of points should not be blind, and the selected "points" should have the function of "replacing faces with points".
Second, the so-called "rising" refers to the expression of "rising" in classical poetry, "say something else first." Specifically, it is to say one thing before expounding something, and then trigger it on this basis, so as to explain the relevant truth thoroughly.
Choose a good angle. Qian Qian has many objective things, and everything is always reflected in many ways.
Only by choosing a good angle when writing an article can we correctly reflect what we have written. Generally speaking, we can consider the angle from four aspects: azimuth (front, back and side), visual field (from large to small, from small to large), visual angle (looking up, looking up and looking down) and focus (from the main line or inside of external things). For example, the junior high school textbook "Notes on Vegetable Garden" has written several trivial things about growing vegetables, but they are not trivial. Start with one.
4. What are the "planning layouts" in the poems? It is not an empty dogmatic concept, but a product of knowledge accumulation and a systematic concept based on comprehensive cultivation.
If you don't pay attention to the cultivation of comprehensive quality at ordinary times, that is, tell you 10 thousand writing rules and laws, will you? Seriously speaking, the cultivation of writing style is a lifelong course and a concept far beyond the scope of poetry.
Some friends who are beginners in poetry are often at a loss about the layout of poetry writing, or even don't think about the layout at all, and write at the beginning, which is disorganized. Can that scribbled thing with letters be called poetry? The skill of writing poems and lyrics itself is really the last skill! Jump out of the framework of poetry, think about the laws of things themselves, and then return to the realm of poetry, and you will find a completely different self.
We need to practice repeatedly to improve. Plan: it's a plan, a plan, a plan.
It is a system, a situation, or the whole process of an event and the event itself. Layout: it is the planning arrangement of the overall structure of something.
The purpose of writing lies in layout, writing first and then layout. Through the concrete analysis of this word, what do you realize? My personal experience is that planning the layout of articles is an indispensable process in our life, work and even various activities.
No matter what you do, you need to have a plan in advance, which is natural, otherwise, like headless flies, you will inevitably hit a wall everywhere. We are sometimes very agile and can make correct and effective responses and actions to the handling of things quickly.
However, this "fast" is actually done after "planning". That's just because your thinking and organization skills are strong.
A person's planning and layout ability reflects his comprehensive ability and quality. Anyone who has achieved and has the ability is a master of layout.
Every excellent work, whether it is engineering, diplomacy, art or even career, must be written first and then brilliant. We write poems, write lyrics, write poems and write essays, and so on.
Everyone has a different level of writing poetry, and their style, level and taste are also different. What is the difference? Basic knowledge is on the one hand, and more importantly, the ability to make layout. This ability is not a single technical ability, it is the embodiment of a person's comprehensive quality cultivation.
So we often hear such a saying: "Kung Fu is outside the poem".
5. The layout of the composition was broken by thousands of books, and the writing was like a god. Interviewee: ★ Fantasy Glass ★-Elementary 4-6 09:52 Accumulate rich vocabulary from the book, so as to gradually improve the writing level.
Interviewee: Tears Stone-probationary level 4-6 10: 13 You have to write a lot to improve your composition. It is difficult to improve your composition at once. When you write, you should feel it, don't make it up. That's all, because gorgeous language can't compare with true feelings! You can write more famous books in the future.
Answer: 0. Pick up shells from the sea. 0. Trainee magician level 2. 4-7. 12: 16. My compositions are basically made up ~ I am also worried about my composition, but I really can't improve my level! I'm bored to death ~ it's not, another composition on the weekend ~ ~ ~ It's so miserable.
I hope my brothers and sisters can also adopt their answers. .. Interviewee: Lonely as snow-trainee wizard level 2 4-7 16:05 My suggestion must be very practical. That's how I got here, and it worked well.
Keep a diary, write it every day, not too long, and it will be effective in a few months. If you still find it difficult, find a good article that is not too long to imitate. For example, the title of the article is My Family, which you can imitate. If imitation is not a problem, you will insist on writing a topic every day. After a while, you will feel a little bit.
This method may be simple and stupid, but it really works. In this way, I improved my composition to the level of school model essay, and I felt happy in writing.
First, the composition should learn to accumulate "reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice". These ancient summaries illustrate the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects. "Usually rely on accumulation, the examination room depends on play", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room.
(A) language to establish a "vocabulary". Vocabulary is the cell of an article.
Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups. There are two ways to establish "vocabulary": the first is reading.
Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, take reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs from a specific notebook, or make reading cards. The second is life.
At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the popular spoken language and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us. Over time, we can say it chapter by chapter and write it beautifully. (2) Strengthen the accumulation of materials.
Materials are the flesh and blood of the article. Because many students usually don't pay attention to accumulating materials, they are worried every time they write a composition, or edit or copy it.
The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials. Usually, you can take a video camera and tape recorder with you, observe life deeply, actively participate in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life and social life in time in the form of sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes.
When recording, we should grasp the details and the characteristics of people, things, things and scenery. The article written in this way is flesh and blood.
(3) We should strengthen ideological accumulation. Opinion is the soul of an article.
The center of the article is not clear, or the thought is not profound, which often shows that the author's thought is superficial. Therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank".
There are two ways: first, be thoughtful. "One more miss, one more gain."
Think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when something happens. So you can see the essence through the phenomenon.
It is also necessary to record the "sparks" of thinking and the conclusions of thinking at any time. The second is compilation, that is, extracting famous sayings and aphorisms.
In short, the composition should be accumulated, and the three writing warehouses of vocabulary, material and thought should be regularly counted, sorted and classified to continuously enrich and expand. Second, to write a good composition, first learn to observe that Mr. Lu Xun emphasized two points when answering the question of "how to write a good article" for literary youth: one is to read more books, and the other is to practice more.
Here, "seeing more" means observing more. This shows that in order to write a good article and master skillful writing skills, it is necessary to observe more and learn to observe, and observation is the necessary premise and foundation of writing.
Russian novelist Chekhov earnestly warned beginners: "A writer must train himself to be a keen observer and never give up! -It is a habit to exercise your own observation, as if it were second nature. " It takes time to hone observation into habit and second nature, which is very useful and remarkable.
Pay attention to the people, events, sights and things around you, and hunt for the materials needed in the composition: be interested in some seemingly insignificant but meaningful things, and pay attention to the cause, process and result of things; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, and learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out, enter the society, meet more people, observe their words and deeds, think about some things, and integrate into your own thoughts at any time. This is the process of observation. In the process of observation, we should pay attention to the following points: (1) Observation should never be limited to "seeing with eyes".
Broadly speaking, more practical observation refers to mobilizing all the five senses of people: listening with ears, feeling with the body and, more importantly, thinking with the mind, so that the observation will be more delicate and profound. (2) Pay attention to the use of "bad writing" in the observation process.
As the saying goes, a good memory is better than bad writing. Many students see a lot and think a lot every day, but they are not good at writing it down at any time, which will waste the observed materials and a lot of valuable things.
(3) Pay special attention to perseverance in observation. Don't make "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not conducive to writing a good composition. You should observe life and think about every day in your life, so that you can write wonderful articles.
Learning to observe plays a great role in laying the foundation and promoting a good composition. Without observation, you often find it difficult to write. May you learn to observe, constantly cultivate and improve your ability to observe, and make great progress in your writing practice.
Third, if the meaning is high, the meaning will be better, that is, to establish the center and intention of the article. So what problems should the article pay attention to when expounding ideas? (A) the thought should be correct, correct is the article.
6. What are the words, sentence patterns, layout and other aspects of the article "A Millennium Dream is Today" that deserve our clever integration of topics and contents?
The title is "The Millennium Dream is Today", and "Millennium" and "Today" are two words to express time. From ancient times to the present, the great span shows people's persistent scientific spirit. The key word is "circle", which is a long and arduous process, and it is this process that has created the vigorous development of science.
The content of the text is also divided into two parts. The first part, write "Millennium Dream". Since ancient times, people have dreamed of traveling in space, and cited the examples of thousands of households in the Ming Dynasty to illustrate people's exploration and practice. Although it failed, it is of great significance to the later development, and people have persistent pursuit of science. In the second half, since the founding of New China, generations of researchers have made persistent efforts, tried again and again, and finally made substantial progress through unremitting efforts. China's space industry has attracted worldwide attention, which makes people proud. It is precisely "the circle is in the present". Therefore, the structure of the text is clear and flexible, and the content specifically expounds the connotation of the topic.
2. The embodiment of scientific spirit is included in the specific research process.
The text is divided into two main lines. One line describes the process of realizing the dream of flying for thousands of years with a lot of facts, such as the dream attempt of thousands of families in the Ming Dynasty and the development of Shenzhou 5. The other line illustrates the spirit and strength behind the dream. The integration of the two lines fully demonstrates the spirit of perseverance, unity and cooperation, silent dedication and courage to explore of China space workers.
Judging from the expression of the text, this lesson mainly has the following characteristics.
1, the connecting function of the inflection sentence
(1) "The people of China, who are full of passion and extraordinary imagination, are not only simply describing the magnificent dream of flying to the sky, but also constantly striving to realize their beautiful wishes in the course of thousands of years."
"Not just" highlights that China people not only have dreams, but also strive to dream, not daydreaming, but trying to turn their dreams into reality in the process of doing it. This leads to the following example of thousands of families in the Ming Dynasty.
(2) "Despite numerous failures and heavy costs, the firm and persistent descendants of the Chinese people have never given up their efforts to fly away from the earth."
The transitional sentence here is a link between the preceding and the following. The scientific experiment is not smooth sailing, but Qian Qian's exploration spirit of being brave in practice encourages the descendants of the Chinese people to continue on the road of scientific research. "Firm and persistent" embodies this point and paves the way for the following.
(3) "While preparing to launch artificial satellites, China scientists began to explore manned space technology hopefully."
As can be seen from the word "at the same time", scientists in China always have more dreams and longer-term scientific plans for the space industry, which leads to the following trial and error.
7. What are the characteristics of the layout of the article? The characteristics of the article layout are answered from the structural form, including the following three structural forms:
1, from the shallow to the deep, from the surface to the inside, from the phenomenon to the essence, in line with human cognitive laws;
2. Care before and after, so that the article is linked from beginning to end, and the structure is round and seamless;
3, interlocking, closely linked, with a strong sense of organization and logic.
Structure is essentially "connecting the past with the future", that is, arranging paragraphs and levels of the article. The structure of the article has three forms: vertical, horizontal and network.
The structure of argumentative paper is relatively simple, and it is basically carried out layer by layer according to the idea of "putting forward problems-analyzing problems-solving problems"; There are many types of narration, such as plot development, orientation change, emotion change, expression change, total score, contrast and so on.
Extended data:
Some tips on article layout;
Cut to the chase, such as: Zhu Ziqing's Spring, Lu Xun's From Baicaoyuan to San Tan Yin Yue, etc.
If you want to promote dharma, you should first suppress it: for example, Lu Xun's A Chang and Shan Hai Jing.
Cohesion transition method, transition in the form of questions, transition of words, transition of sentences and transition of paragraphs.
The elegant method of song ending: summarize the full text and reveal the center; Full of philosophy and thought-provoking; Euphemism is implicit and intriguing; Expand artistic conception and enrich content.
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8. On Idiom Layout in Layout Design
Seeking, here refers to strategy;
Article, filial piety can refer to an article, extended in a broad sense, and can also be said to be national affairs, family affairs, and what's going on in the world;
Layout, planning and arrangement of the overall structure of something.
When planning the layout of the article, we should mainly consider three aspects:
1, arranged by theme.
Because there is no theme, the layout of the article can only be regarded as an illusion. Layout planning according to the theme belongs to the relationship between theme and article structure. By solving this problem, the framework of the article can be basically set up.