2。 The narrative is simple and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
3。 Improper arrangement of details and unclear priorities.
4。 The content is mostly outlined by lines, lacking detailed description based on points.
5。 Not in line with the atmosphere of the times, the content is too old and aging.
6。 Focus, clear center, clear thinking.
7。 The views are clear, likes and dislikes are clear, and people can see at a glance.
8。 Directly highlight the theme in the content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.
9。 The theme is serious, the thought is noble and the enterprise is strong.
10。 The center is not clear enough and the thinking is not clear enough.
1 1。 The theme is vague and obscure, the meaning is vague, and the purpose of writing is unknown.
12。 Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough, but it seems empty and powerless.
13。 The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.