First, the composition topic
Lu Meipo, a poet in the Southern Song Dynasty, wrote in the Snow Notice: "Xue Mei refused to surrender for the sake of spring, and the poet rewarded the chapter. The snow in Mei Xu Xun is three points white, but the snow has lost a plum. " Please read the connotation of these poems, make up your own mind, draw up your own topic and write an argumentative essay of not less than 800 words. Plagiarism or copying is not allowed.
Two. Writing instruction
"Xue Mei refused to drop for the spring, and the poet's pavilion fee was reviewed. The snow in Mei Xu Xun is three points white, but the snow has lost a plum. " After repeated reading and careful tasting, you will feel that although plum blossoms are fragrant and snowflakes are white, the poet seems to have no intention of praising plum blossoms and snowflakes in this cold winter. He just used Xue Mei's Struggle for Spring to express his interest-telling us that everyone has his own strengths and weaknesses, so we should be self-aware, learn from others' strengths, make up for our own weaknesses, and foster strengths and avoid weaknesses.
The title requires us to "understand the connotation of poetry and make our own ideas". As far as the connotation of poetry is concerned, composition is relatively restrictive, which is basically determined around the length of people or the length of everything. Therefore, this material composition does not conform to the proposition spirit of the current material composition. Nevertheless, as long as you accurately grasp the connotation of this poem, you can still write a good article.
As far as students' writing is concerned, the main problem is the lack of material, either an argument is written completely or it is generalized. Therefore, students are still required to read more books, accumulate more materials and write more compositions.
Three. Typical material
The story of the knife and axe
A farmer bought a knife and an axe. The knife asked the owner in dismay, "Why did you buy an axe when you bought a knife?"
"Sometimes with a knife, sometimes with an axe." The host calmly replied: "each has its own uses, and sometimes a knife is not as good as an axe."
The axe was also unhappy and asked the master, "Why buy a knife when buying an axe?"
"Sometimes with an axe, sometimes with a knife." The host still calmly replied: "each has its own uses, and sometimes an axe is not as good as a knife."
The knife and axe didn't understand the master's words, and they had a knot in their heart.
On the day of chopping wood, the master asked the knife, "Can you try?"
The knife looked at the big, thick wood, shook his head quickly, stood aside and watched the axe split the wood easily.
On the day of cutting crops, the master asked the axe, "Can you come and have a try?"
The axe looked at the dense rice and thought it must be better than wood, but when it looked forward, it felt awkward. I saw the knife "brush brush" and quickly cut off a large piece. ...
Carnivores and herbivores have their own advantages and disadvantages.
Ye Wei, a French biologist, noticed that nature gave a herbivore two legs that are good at running and two horns that are good at fighting, so it would never give it sharp teeth and claws. A carnivore with sharp teeth and claws will never have two horns. Carnivores and herbivores have their own advantages and disadvantages, so you can't have both.
Cattle, horses and boats
Gu Sixie, a poet in Qing Dynasty, wrote such a poem: "A good horse can walk on Wan Li Road, ploughing is not as good as an ox, a strong cart can carry loads, and crossing a river is not as good as a boat. It is difficult for a wise man to live short, but it is difficult for a wise man to seek things. Coating raw materials are expensive, so be careful not to ask too much. " Cows and horses have their own strengths, and boats and cars have their own strengths.
Emperor Taizong was ordered.
Li Shimin, Emperor Taizong, thought that anyone should be "like a craftsman's wood. Straight thought it was a shaft, and curved thought it was a wheel; Older people regard them as pillars, while shorter people regard them as horns. There is no difference between good and bad, each has its own advantages. Therefore, a good craftsman does not abandon materials, and a wise man does not abandon scholars. Don't forget an evil good; Don't cover up your strengths with small flaws. Cut the political extension and do what you have. "
Liu Bang and the "Three Heroes"
Liu Bang, Emperor Gaozu of Han Dynasty, said at a celebration banquet after pacifying the world: "My husband won the battle thousands of miles away from me, and I am not as good as my ovary. I am not as good as Xiao He. Even if it is a million troops, the battle will win and the attack will win. I am not as good as Han Xin. These three are outstanding people, and I can use them, so I win the world. Xiang Yu has a Fan Zeng that can't be used, so he was captured by me. " This is Liu Bang's summary of his successful experience in the world. In fact, Liu Bang not only attached great importance to the "Three Masters", but also paid attention to recruiting talents from all walks of life, regardless of their origins. For example, Xiao He is a county magistrate, a nobleman and a tourist, Fan Kuai sells dogs, Han Xin is a bastard, a robber and a drummer, and Guan Ying is a cloth dealer. It can be said that there are three religions and nine streams, and he uses talents and does his best. Therefore, his advisers are like a forest, and he is like a cloud, and finally he has achieved the great cause of reunification.
Street pavilion fiasco
Ma Su, brilliant and with a certain knowledge of military theory, is a rare advisor. Three years after the founding of the People's Republic of China, Zhuge Liang enlisted in the South Middle School, and Ma Su offered a plan: "The husband uses the way of fighting, attacking the heart first, attacking the city next, fighting the heart first, and using troops next. I am willing to serve his heart. " Zhuge Liang adopted Ma Su's plan to capture Meng Huo alive and pacify the south. Ma Su also put forward a plan to alienate Wang Wei and Sima Yi, which temporarily eliminated a threat from Shu Han.
But Ma Su was good at strategy, not tactics, so Liu Bei told Zhuge Liang that Ma Su was "useless". However, Zhuge dismissed Liu Bei's words. Jianxing left the army in Qishan for six years, with Ma Su as the pioneer, and General Wei Zhang He fought in the street pavilion, which was broken by the combination. The soldiers were divided into two ways. The defeat of Jieting not only caused heavy losses to Shu Han, but also ruined the first Northern Expedition and an excellent staff officer.
On the surface, the fiasco of street kiosks was caused by Ma Su's incompetence, but in essence it was caused by Zhuge Liang's improper and insufficient employment.
Four. Sample display
People have self-knowledge and learn from each other's strengths.
"If you were born in, why were you born in Liang!"
The air echoed with this unwilling roar for a long time. Zhou Yu was arrogant, but he let Zhuge Liang lead the way step by step. His pride did not allow him to do so, so he chose jealousy and tried his best to attack and frame him. He couldn't tolerate others, so Jiang Lang died young. Think about it, what would happen if Zhou Yu had self-knowledge? He may learn from Zhuge Liang's strengths and make up for his shortcomings; Play to one's strengths. We often say: gold is not enough, no one is perfect, and everyone has self-knowledge. We should learn from other people's strengths and make up for our own shortcomings, instead of just hating them.
In the arid desert area, the scorching sun is like fire, burning business tax on the earth. Clever lizards dig holes in the ground to keep cool. Naive lizards always dig holes longer than their own bodies, so they are easy to be caught. There is also a poisonous black scorpion, which is too hot to stand. They are not good at digging holes, but they hide on lizards' heads. Because of its toxicity, people are discouraged. Lizards live happily. Scorpions use their virulence to scare people to protect lizards, while lizards use their burrowing skills to provide shelter for scorpions. They get along very well and both know how to make use of each other's advantages to make up for their own shortcomings. Small animals in nature know this truth. What about us?
There is nothing perfect in the world, and it is only a fantasy to combine the advantages of everything in the world. God gave a herbivore two legs that are good at running and horns that are good at fighting, but he never gave it sharp teeth and claws. The same is true of things in the world. Mencius said, "You can't have your cake and eat it." Gu Sixie, a poet in Qing Dynasty, once wrote such a poem: "A good horse can walk on Wan Li Road, a tiller is not as good as an ox, a strong cart can carry loads, and crossing a river is not as good as a boat. It is difficult for smart people to make plans, but it is also difficult for smart people to use expensive raw materials. Be careful not to ask too much. " All these show that everything in the world will not be perfect, so people should have a correct and comprehensive evaluation of themselves, and then use the strengths of others to make themselves stronger. Xunzi once said in "Encouraging Learning": "Gentlemen are different, and good and evil are also things." It also requires us to learn from the strengths of others and make up for our own shortcomings.
How to learn from others' strengths and make up for your own shortcomings?
First of all, we should know our own shortcomings, face them well and come up with solutions. After all, thousands of reasons are not worth a specific plan. Then, we should be good at discovering the strengths of others to learn to make up for ourselves, face those who are better than ourselves with a correct attitude and keep learning, instead of lamenting like Zhou Yu, "If you are born with Yu, how can you understand?" In addition, we should learn to foster strengths and avoid weaknesses, and use our unique charm to make ourselves more perfect and cover up our shortcomings.
People are not sages, they always have many shortcomings, but they can learn from others' strengths and make up for their own shortcomings. (Zhang)
Comments: The article makes good use of materials and demonstrates the viewpoint of "learning from others' strengths and making up for our own shortcomings", but the following "How to" is written in a hurry.
Life will be different if we complement each other.
There is no oriole with gorgeous feathers or peacock with euphemistic voice in this world. It is really "no one is perfect, and gold is not enough." Everything in this world has its own characteristics, but it also has many shortcomings, and so do people. Therefore, we should clearly realize that everyone has his own shortcomings. Only by making up for his own shortcomings and overcoming them can you succeed.
How to locate an excellent guard in NBA? First of all, he should have the domineering spirit of James and the flexibility of Kobe. His vision should be at least as broad as Kidd's, and of course his movements should be as ornamental as white chocolate, and only one person can do all this: Jordan. Jordan created the most brilliant record in NBA history and was called "the uncrowned king". But even such a nearly perfect person has great shortcomings. Jordan once publicly admitted that his three-pointer skills were poor, and he could only be ranked outside the top 100 in the NBA; At the same time, he likes acting a little too much. "My stubbornness sometimes puts the team in a very passive position." He smiled apologetically at the media.
You see, even Jordan has his own shortcomings. Why should we "far from saints" be complacent and supercilious? Therefore, people should not be carried away by their own technology. Only by overcoming your own shortcomings can you have the last laugh.
I remember a saying that is well said: how much water a wooden bucket can hold is not long, but short; Success lies not in how you show your good side, but in how you improve your bad side. Yao Ming is like this. When he first entered the NBA, he was highly anticipated because of his height advantage. However, Yao Ming was not immersed in flowers and applause, because he knew his own shortcomings: his movements were not flexible enough, his physical strength was insufficient, and his free throw percentage was low. Yao Ming didn't shy away from these things. He bravely faced up to and made up for his own shortcomings. Even after the training, he added hundreds of free throws and did physical training. Finally, Yao Ming found her inferiority complex and became our pride.
Yang Lan, the popular host, is more determined to face her past shortcomings. At that time, Yang Lan was in full swing and was deeply sought after and loved by the audience. But what is shocking is that Yang Lan suddenly retired and made the decision to go abroad to study for a doctorate. It turned out that Yang Lan realized her own shortcomings: her knowledge was not wide enough and her hosting style was too single. Yang Lan was not immersed in a temporary victory, but clearly realized that the essence of success lies in correcting shortcomings, fostering strengths and avoiding weaknesses, and making continuous progress. Of course, this decision really changed her life. After she came back from studying abroad, she made great achievements and ushered in another peak of her career.
So, students, a temporary victory is nothing. Only by clearly recognizing your own shortcomings and trying to correct them, the flower of success will last forever and your life will be different. (Jiang Yi)
Comments: The article is informative, detailed in argumentation and analysis, and fluent in language.
Develop strengths and avoid weaknesses to realize the value of life.
A successful person must know how to give full play to his strengths, make up for his shortcomings, fully display his best side, make full use of his strengths and avoid weaknesses, and forge ahead towards his life goals in a down-to-earth manner.
Lincoln is a model of fostering strengths and avoiding weaknesses. On the one hand, he can foster strengths and avoid weaknesses for himself, on the other hand, he can foster strengths and avoid weaknesses for others.
Lincoln is ugly, whether he is running for state legislature or president, it is a disadvantage for him; But every time someone attacks him on this topic, he can take the opportunity to show his wisdom and humor. For example, he ran for president with Steven Douglas. During the debate, Douglas accused Lincoln of being a two-faced man with two faces. Hearing this, Lincoln replied unhurriedly, "If I had two faces, would I still take them?" His self-deprecating courage immediately won unanimous applause from the audience. With this talent, Lincoln became the president of the United States.
Later, however, he had to accept new challenges. When the American Civil War broke out, Lincoln selected several impeccable generals according to the traditional so-called "perfect" standard. However, to his surprise, every perfect general was defeated. Later, Lincoln summed up the lesson and realized that the selection of generals can't be perfect, because no one can be absolutely perfect. So, he appointed Grant, who was addicted to alcohol but had unique military talents, as commander-in-chief. Grant's military talent at that time.
In Tian Ji Horse Racing, the sons of the King of Qi and the State of Qi made great bets on horse racing. Through careful analysis, Sun Bin divided his horses into upper, middle and lower classes. During the competition, let Tian Ji use the inferior horse against his superior horse, use the Chinese horse against his inferior horse, and the superior horse against his Chinese horse. After three games, Tian Ji won one game and two games, and finally won the bet. Sun Bin also won the trust of Tian Ji, and was recommended to Qi Weiwang because of its plan to foster strengths and avoid weaknesses.
In today's society, no matter what you do, you need to know the objective facts, be self-aware, develop strengths and avoid weaknesses, and give full play to your own advantages, so as to better develop yourself and realize the value of life. (Wei Shuang)
Comments: A material about Lincoln, applied from two angles, comprehensively demonstrated the principle of fostering strengths and avoiding weaknesses, and was written with great confidence.
Develop strengths and avoid weaknesses, and be a real king.
Some people say that life is like a play-if it is true, everyone is the protagonist of his own life. People compete to interpret their own stories and dedicate themselves to the beauty of the world. However, what kind of role you choose and whether you shine brilliantly in this role does not depend on how capable others are, but on how you grasp it and how far you can show it.
The key to mastering your own destiny is to constantly improve yourself, and the most effective way to improve yourself is to foster strengths and avoid weaknesses.
The world is full of people. Most of them have tasted the fruits of success, and I think it has something to do with not knowing how to foster strengths and avoid weaknesses!
Speaking of it, Zhou Yu is a typical example. Zhou Yu made great achievements in his life, especially in Chibi, but ended up in a tragic end. Before he died, he sighed, "He Shengliang was born in." If you think about it carefully, his tragedy is not without reason: first of all, Zhou Yu didn't treat people with higher talents than himself with the right attitude. If he didn't frame Zhuge Liang jealously, but leaned down to learn from each other's strengths, there might be more stories in the world. In fact, in the contest with Zhuge Liang, Zhou Yu gradually buried his own advantages, made himself more and more inferior, became jealous, and finally pushed himself to the grave. If he continues to exert his strengths and try his best to the extreme, maybe Wu will dominate the country because of him, and he will succeed and not die young. Zhou Yu's mistakes in these two aspects have to make us think deeply, especially in the era of competitors, it is more important to foster strengths and avoid weaknesses.
How can we foster strengths and avoid weaknesses? This problem has troubled many people. In fact, high-impedance Liu Bang is a model. Liu Bang ascended to the throne from humble cloth, not because he has the wisdom of chinese odyssey, but because he can foster strengths and avoid weaknesses. Strategizing, winning thousands of miles, Liu Bang is not as good as Sean, money and grain management is not as good as Xiao He, and attacking the city and plundering the land is not as good as Han Xin. He doesn't have the advantages of three ministers, which is his weakness, but he is good at employing people. "All three are excellent, I can use them." This is his strong point.
Therefore, as a leader, fostering strengths and avoiding weaknesses is the strength of employing people. Don't wait until you shed tears and behead Masu before you suddenly realize it. As an individual, fostering strengths and avoiding weaknesses means "choose its good and follow it, and change its bad." Also find and have the most dazzling halo beam; As a student, we should learn efficient learning methods from others; As an artistic creator, we should learn from famous artists and finally form our own style of writing and painting. As workers, we should learn more exquisite skills from others. ...
In short, only those who deeply understand the connotation of strengths and weaknesses and put it into practice are the real kings in this world. (Zhai Xinye)
Comments: The article has a clear point of view, progressive discussion and successful revision.