? (4) The second step is to polish: let the children compare their looks with those of their parents, and write the contents of the comparison into the composition. ? (5) The third step is to polish: let the children read the full text, with a smooth tone, fluent sentences and cohesion between contexts? (6) After writing the composition, give the child a "bang".
? Tips: Mom must not be impatient in the process of guidance, let alone beat and scold, otherwise it will be difficult to teach the course smoothly. As long as the child shows a little (such as good words), he should be praised in time (verbally, or in kind if a big project is completed according to the goal).
2. Explaining an idea with concrete facts (writing a composition) is a lot of work.
"Many things grind" is a famous saying, which tells people that nothing can be done as long as they are diligent.
For example, Sun Jing, a Jin Dynasty man, tied a rope to his hair every night and tied the other end to the beam in order not to doze off. Every time his head droops, the rope will wake him up and continue reading after waking up. In this way, he became a celebrity who used a hanging beam to prevent himself from falling asleep. Su Qin, who is also a spy, has been looked down upon by others because he can't be an official in Qin. So he decided to fight for breath. From then on, he studied hard and forgot to eat and sleep. Whenever it's quiet at night, Su Qin is already dizzy and always wants to sleep. He immediately stabbed his thigh with an awl and felt pain, and people woke up. This is Su Qin, a celebrity who woke himself up by stabbing stocks.
Another example is Kuang Heng in the Western Han Dynasty. His family is poor, but he likes reading very much. But there was no oil light in his house at night, and the neighbor's room was lit, so Kuang Heng dug a hole in the wall and read by the light from the hole. This is the story of "digging a wall to borrow light".
There is also the modern Xu Beihong, whose paintings are well-known at home and abroad. When he was young, he inspired himself to learn painting, won glory for our country with his own efforts, and prevented foreigners from looking down on us in China.
From these celebrity stories, everyone must have learned a truth: only by persisting in the end can we make a difference.
You can't do anything half-heartedly, half-heartedly, but you must finish what you started and persevere. Only in this way can we make a difference and make due contributions to the people and society.
Lincoln, the first 16 president of the United States, was a world-famous great orator. His success lies in that he has been practicing his eloquence since his youth, watching and listening more. When he was young, he worked as a farmer, lumberjack, shop assistant, postman, land surveyor and so on. In order to become a lawyer, he often walks 30 miles to a court to listen to lawyers' arguments and see how they argue and gesture. He imitated politicians and speakers while listening to their impassioned speeches. He listened to the evangelists who traveled everywhere, waved their arms and shook their voices in the sky. When he came back, he followed their example and practiced his speech repeatedly in the Woods and cornfields. The success of the speech made Lincoln finally become an eloquent lawyer and finally entered politics.
3. Write an opinion composition 150. Many things happen.
"Many things grind" is a famous saying, which tells people that nothing can be done as long as they are diligent.
For example, Sun Jing, a Jin Dynasty man, tied a rope to his hair every night and tied the other end to the beam in order not to doze off. Every time his head droops, the rope will wake him up and continue reading after waking up. In this way, he became a celebrity who used a hanging beam to prevent himself from falling asleep. Su Qin, who is also a spy, has been looked down upon by others because he can't be an official in Qin. So he decided to fight for breath. From then on, he studied hard and forgot to eat and sleep. Whenever it's quiet at night, Su Qin is already dizzy and always wants to sleep. He immediately stabbed his thigh with an awl and felt pain, and people woke up. This is Su Qin, a celebrity who woke himself up by stabbing stocks.
Another example is Kuang Heng in the Western Han Dynasty. His family is poor, but he likes reading very much. But there was no oil light in his house at night, and the neighbor's room was lit, so Kuang Heng dug a hole in the wall and read by the light from the hole. This is the story of "digging a wall to borrow light".
There is also the modern Xu Beihong, whose paintings are well-known at home and abroad. When he was young, he inspired himself to learn painting, won glory for our country with his own efforts, and prevented foreigners from looking down on us in China.
From these celebrity stories, everyone must have learned a truth: only by persisting in the end can we make a difference.
You can't do anything half-heartedly, half-heartedly, but you must finish what you started and persevere. Only in this way can we make a difference and make due contributions to the people and society.
According to an example I gave myself, the composition explaining a point upstairs is 400 words. If he can write, he still uses you = =, but I'm sorry, I'm looking for it, but I can't find it, just a short paragraph. ...
I believe everyone knows the famous saying "modesty makes people progress, pride makes people lag behind"! Arrogant soldiers fail, you can't be proud, otherwise, "defeat" is your destination!
Now, I will use examples to prove my point. I believe everyone is familiar with the story of the race between the tortoise and the hare, which just proves the correctness of my point of view!
The rabbit boasted about his speed to the animals. "I have never failed," he said. "When I run, no one is faster than me." The tortoise said quietly, "I want to compete with you."
"This is a joke. I can race with you while playing. " Said the rabbit.
The race started, and the rabbit was gone in a blink of an eye, but he felt that he was running very fast, so he took the race lightly and fell asleep on the side of the road.
The tortoise walks slowly, but keeps walking. When the rabbit woke up, he saw that the tortoise was near the finish line. The rabbit lost the game.
Although the proud rabbit is much faster than the tortoise, it lost the race because it was satisfied with its current speed. .
Friends! Who wants to be an arrogant rabbit! I believe that no one, more people, will be willing to be a modest little turtle. The tortoise, approaching slowly like the end, and the rabbit, sleeping! At this time "losing" is a foregone conclusion!
5. Writers who discuss around a point of view are born into this world as a body, and they will always encounter unsatisfactory things and need to face a mentality, that is, tolerance.
Once, due to the influence of living environment, I gradually developed a clear character of love and hate, and I had my own clear judgment on everything. Right and wrong, beauty and ugliness, good and evil, black and white, everything is so clear that there is no room for sand in my eyes. I think it is great.
But the accumulation of survival experience, let me gradually understand a lot of truth in life. Everyone who lives in this world has social attributes, and it is impossible to exist independently, which will naturally lead to the relationship between people. Because everyone's living environment is different, their growth experience is different, and their knowledge and accomplishment are different, they will naturally have their own characteristics of dealing with people. Just because everyone is an independent individual, he will always show his distinctive personality everywhere. In interpersonal communication, other people's preferences also affect you all the time. Of course, there will be behaviors that you don't like but need to accept, which requires tolerance.
Tolerance can resolve unnecessary misunderstandings. Because everyone has different behavior habits and different ways to express emotions, sometimes people often encounter some unpleasant things in social communication, even unacceptable words and deeds. At this time, it goes without saying that they are often unhappy. For extreme words and deeds, if you can't bear them, it will cause bad and unimaginable consequences. In fact, the parties don't necessarily want each other to be unhappy, sometimes unintentionally. If you are more tolerant from the speaker's point of view, you will not pursue details, misunderstandings can be eliminated in the bud, and naturally many unnecessary troubles can be avoided. Why not?
Tolerance can make people feel happy. If you always keep other people's misconduct in mind, you will be very angry. Why do you think there are such people in the world? Then, the more you think about it, the angrier you get, and your mood will naturally get worse. Maybe others really let you down, but if you chase after the irreparable facts and think about how to deal with others, you can imagine the pressure in your heart. How can you be happy when you are preoccupied every day? I once watched the TV series "Deep Feelings, Rain and Dew", in which Yiping was very angry with her father's behavior. She could not understand the harm that Lujia had done to her and her mother, and her mother told her that if her heart was full of hatred, it would be difficult to be happy, and she would not be happy. He Shuheng, who loves Yiping deeply, also wants to face a loving Yiping instead of a hateful Yiping. In fact, everyone is like this. If you tolerate and understand other people's faults within a proper range, your mood will naturally improve and your life will be happier.
Tolerance shows an elegant demeanor. When people encounter some small frictions, it is often a critical moment to test a person's recuperation. Some people can face what has happened calmly, things will often be forgotten, and everything will be calm; If you don't do it, it will often add fuel to the fire, and small things will become disasters, and the consequences will be unimaginable. In real life, there are too many such examples. Some people fight and even risk their lives, which are often caused by trivial matters. If both sides can be calm and tolerant when they meet something, then meet each other halfway and nothing will happen. Tolerance shows a person's good rest and also shows a person's elegant demeanor.
Tolerance can make society more harmonious. Social disharmony is often caused by some people not obeying social rules and doing things harmful to others, from big to small. If people can tolerate others when things happen, don't ignore people on big and small issues, and learn to forgive others, then there will be no undue consequences and no disharmony. It is conceivable that society will become harmonious and beautiful. Living in such an atmosphere will make people feel more comfortable. When a virtuous circle is formed, building a harmonious society will also become a reality.
Of course, tolerance is relative, and the tolerance mentioned here should refer to the attitude that should be taken when it is tolerable. If others have seriously violated their legitimate rights and interests, then, with people's increasing legal awareness today, they will take up corresponding legal weapons to safeguard their legitimate rights and interests, instead of blindly tolerating them.
Tolerance is a virtue. When you can be tolerant, please be more tolerant, for others, for yourself and for society. I believe that with more tolerance, society will become better.
6. Write an essay on the practical significance of Confucianism according to a viewpoint of Confucianism \x0d Confucianism has attracted much attention since it came into being. Its values of paying attention to social orientation, political views with ethical characteristics and moral values of pursuing self-improvement have long been the official ruling ideology in China's feudal era. Confucianism is rational in world outlook; In the purpose of life, it is utilitarian; In dealing with interpersonal relationships, it is harmonious. All these are similar or interlinked with the concepts of modern society. Therefore, in today's market economy, Confucianism still has its positive value and influence. It can be said that Confucianism is an indispensable and important ideological resource for building socialist market economy ethics. Excavating its positive side will play a constructive role in market economy and have important reference significance for modern management. X0d world outlook, Confucianism is a rational culture, which is consistent with the rational world outlook of modern society. Its basic world outlook and social policy-making principles are interlinked with modern bourgeois ideology. Therefore, we can quickly understand and accept modern rational culture, so that East Asian society can choose the road of modernization before other backward areas. \x0d Thus, it is understandable that the specific practical principles of Confucianism are formulated in a certain environment with a rational spirit and according to people's interests. Confucianism is similar or more consistent with the concept of modern society. It is precisely because of the rational way of thinking that South Korea, Taiwan Province Province and Singapore, despite the lack of resources, rationally chose the road of modernization and achieved economic take-off. \x0d In the purpose of life, Confucianism is utilitarian. East Asian Confucianists put the goal of life in this world, pursue success in this world, have strong achievement motivation, and have similarities with the values of modern society. \x0d Under the control of Confucianism, most people in China are utilitarian. Since Qin and Han Dynasties, China has been permeated with a strong utilitarian thought. Under the influence of Confucianism, East Asians generally despise laziness and lack of progress, and advocate thrift and success. People from all walks of life are greedy for the black. Diligence is unusual, but in terms of household consumption, it is very frugal in order to get rich. Due to the low level of productivity in ancient times, it took a long time to accumulate wealth by relying on agriculture. In the long run, China people are world-famous. Because the accumulation of wealth in agriculture is slow and difficult, being an official is a convenient way to get rich. Since the Qin and Han Dynasties in China, except for the monarch, all administrative officials have been open and meritocratic. Since the Sui Dynasty, the imperial examination system has been established. Therefore, the general public regards learning as a shortcut to success and glory. \x0d The powerful achievement motivation of Confucian culture in the view of life purpose is exactly advocated by modern society, which has played a positive role in promoting the success of East Asian modernization. \x0d Therefore, the strong utilitarian motivation of East Asian Confucianists in the view of life purpose is shared with modern society. It is needed by modern society and provides strong psychological support for the modernization of East Asia. \x0d In terms of social relations, the eastern society under the rule of Confucian culture emphasizes the rule of law, but pays more attention to the rule of courtesy, so it has strong educational harmony and stability. This way is conducive to a socialized modern society with close division of labor and cooperation, and this high degree of social integration is the order guarantee for East Asian economic take-off. \x0d The content of Confucian moral preaching is summarized as "eight virtues and four dimensions", namely "loyalty, filial piety, benevolence, faithfulness, harmony" and "courtesy, sincerity and shame". The central spirit of "four dimensions and eight virtues" advocated by Confucianism is to emphasize responsibility and obligation, pay attention to collectivity and harmony, and pay little attention to individual rights. In the process of modernization in East Asia, * * * pays attention to overall harmony, emphasizes perfection, and takes care of the interests of all social strata to realize society. Therefore, all the plans are put into practice by widely listening to opinions from all sides, collecting information extensively, striving for extensive social participation, repeatedly considering, and finally winning recognition from all sides. So it can usually be completed smoothly. The spread of Confucianism has a history of thousands of years. Although today's reform and opening up is far from the end of the Spring and Autumn Period, it still has vitality. This is because with the change of social situation, it is constantly given new meanings. The construction of enterprise culture is not once and for all. In today's rapidly changing market economy, there is no best, only better. Only by adjusting yourself in time can we be better. As the first designer of corporate culture, entrepreneurs should grasp all kinds of changes in time, make new breakthroughs on the basis of inheriting tradition, and pay attention to opening up new channels outside the old communication channels. Let employees get new ideas in time on the basis of accepting corporate values. All these can be classified as: creating a learning organization with teamwork as the basic form, learning from each other's strengths as the basic method, and striving to achieve a common vision as the basic feature. Confucianism, represented by Confucius and Mencius, has attracted much attention since its establishment. In the long feudal society, it has long been regarded as social orthodoxy and washed by the drive of life. It has been deeply rooted in people's hearts, cultivated and cultivated the noble personality and noble husband spirit of intellectuals in previous dynasties, and it still shines today. We should re-examine, interpret and study it from a historical and developing perspective, carry forward the excellent culture of the Chinese nation, and make the ancient Confucianism make new contributions to the all-round rejuvenation of the Chinese nation today and in the future.
7. Use concrete examples to illustrate an idea. The 20th class of the sixth grade in primary school is required to write a 500-word composition. I am also in the sixth grade of primary school, but the teacher wants us to write more than 300 words.
My point of view is "many things grind."
As we all know, the phrase "good things grind more" means: as long as you have perseverance and hard work.
Nothing is impossible.
Lincoln, the first 16 president of the United States, was a world-famous great orator. His success lies in that he has been practicing his eloquence since his youth, watching and listening more. When he was young, he worked as a farmer, lumberjack, shop assistant, postman, land surveyor and so on. In order to become a lawyer, he often walks 30 miles to a court to listen to lawyers' arguments and see how they argue and gesture. He imitated politicians and speakers while listening to their impassioned speeches. He listened to the evangelists who traveled everywhere, waved their arms and shook their voices in the sky. When he came back, he followed their example and practiced his speech repeatedly in the Woods and cornfields. The success of the speech made Lincoln finally become an eloquent lawyer and finally entered politics.
As long as you have the spirit of perseverance, you will make a difference. Let's remember this truth-"Many things grind". This will be my motto, which will always inspire me-as long as I work hard, I can make a difference.
I hope my answer is helpful to you, thank you!
8. Write an example to prove a point. You know, opinions, or conclusions, are based on a lot of facts. Then from the point of view or conclusion back to the source, we will certainly find such a fact.
Actually, we should broaden our horizons. There are Chinese and foreign in the horizontal direction, ancient and modern in the vertical direction and positive and negative angles. There should be many positive and negative examples at all times and in all countries.
For example, maternal love: this is a vulgar topic. Any mother has a maternal love for her children, which is a maternal love in the general sense. There are many forms of maternal love, which are right and wrong: Meng Mu's three moves gave Mencius a good environment, but from another perspective, it also showed maternal love; Mothers of criminals may prefer their children.
For example, cherish time: you can be a little wider. You can write cherish time. There should be too many such examples. On the other hand, to cherish time and cherish good times can be to enjoy family, friendship and love. If it bounces back, it will be a bit excessive and incorrect for those who have an accident at a red light.
I hope my imperfect answer will open your mind and bring you some benefits.
9. Prove an idea through one thing. At school, many things happened with my classmates. Today, let me tell you something about it!
I remember once, I was doing my homework. Suddenly, Gao Hepu, who was sitting next to me, touched me, and the ink dripped on my notebook, and the handwriting was all unclear. I was very angry and said, "What are you doing? You see, you have stained my notebook. " Gao Hepu said, "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to." I thought, well, you've stained my notebook. I deliberately stained Gao Hepu's notebook. I thought to myself, I also avenged the notebook. However, Gao Hepu was so angry that she burst into tears. He said, "I clearly apologized to you just now. Why did you dirty my notebook?" I said, "If the book is dirty, please change it." Just then, Gao Hepu was going to hit me. At this time, the bell rang, and Gao Hepu immediately sat down and said to me, "Let's talk outside after class." My answer is yes. However, I didn't realize that I was wrong about Gao Hepu, who usually attends class, until I stained his book.
Finally, after class, I went outside and saw Gao Hepu outside. I rushed to Gao Hepu and said, "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to. I was wrong about you." Sorry. " Gao Hepu said: "Nothing, nothing, we are still good friends."
This is what happened to me and my classmates!
10. Write a composition belief according to some viewpoints in my belief to guide me to grow. Where there is faith, there is hope, and there is strength for self-improvement. As long as my faith does not die out, I will eventually break through adversity and grow tenaciously.
-Inscription Birthday I-an ordinary tree species, always hope to take root and sprout in a comfortable environment and grow healthily and sturdily. But it always backfires.
On that day, the chilly autumn wind rolled tirelessly and took me to a wasteland. The soil in the wasteland is dry and hard; The night in the wilderness is dark and long; Winter in the wilderness is cold and long.
I left my dear hometown, my lovely friend, and stayed alone in a dark and cold place. Looking up at the night sky, several dazzling stars cut through the silent night, so bright.
I hope that when everything can't be changed, I think I can definitely cross the severe winter and stand on this wasteland. So, I sprouted a belief-I want to live.
Let the sand hit me, let the sand cover me, I have no complaints; Let the snow cover me, let the snow freeze me, I am no longer afraid. Because I firmly believe in that belief.
I am waiting for the geese in warm spring next year, and I am looking forward to the sunshine that melts the ice and snow in the coming year. Nowadays, pain is no longer an injury to me, but a necessary process of growing up.
In the twilight of rebirth, I feel water flowing around my body. I woke up with a start, stretched my feet, and the roots were inserted into the soil that had been softened by snow and water.
Ah, the long-awaited spring has come! I greedily sucked the sweet snow water and stretched my soft body upward. The soil became soft, and the pests frozen in the soil became the nourishment for my growth. Finally, I broke through the ground and poked my head out. The bright light fascinated my eyes. When I opened my eyes, it turned out that a red sun was leaping from the Purple Mountain. I stretch my buds happily and accept the baptism of spring.
I believe that now, I have been deeply rooted in this wasteland. Although the land here is still dry and hard, I have the moisture of underground rivers; Although the night here is still dark and long, there are flowers and plants accompanying me; Although the winter here continues, he always covers me with snow.
Now, I am most afraid of wind, rain and lightning. Therefore, I have a new belief-to overcome all adversity and thrive.
Postscript: Only when faith is immortal will there be immortal power.
And I have been deeply rooted in my beliefs. In the future, I will be stronger and stronger with my faith.