Modification methods of sick sentences in primary school Chinese

Modifying ill sentences is a common question in primary school Chinese examination. Before modifying a sick sentence, we should clearly understand what a sick sentence is. Below, the teaching experts will explain it to you in detail.

1. Improper choice of words caused by vague understanding of the concept of word meaning. Edison discovered the electric light. Confuse the words "discovery" and "invention".

2. Misuse of parts of speech. Improper use of words is caused by confusion of parts of speech. It is sunny today. Confuse "climate" and "weather"

3. The ingredients are incomplete. This sentence lacks the main elements that should not be omitted. (subject, predicate, object), resulting in incomplete sentence structure. Such as; Under the teacher's education, progress is rapid. The magnificent and beautiful Tiananmen Gate. The teacher advised the whole class not to do their homework for ten minutes after class. (fewer objects)

4. Improper collocation. Ill sentences caused by incompatibility of related components in sentences. My hometown is Ningbo. We planted orchards on the same slope. We cleaned the classroom neatly. (Incorrect collocation of joint components and initials)

5. Repetition is troublesome. Too much use of modifiers is superfluous and heroic. At the class meeting, Zhang Jun was the first to speak. "First" and "first" are repeated.

6. The word order is reversed. Ill sentences caused by word order inversion, such as: there is a thick stack of test papers on the teacher's desk. There is no difference in the thickness of the test paper. Obviously, the word order of a stack is reversed.

Guidance on correcting Chinese ill sentences for primary school students

First, the sick sentence:

Refers to incomplete sentences or faulty connections between words in sentences.

Second, the general types of sick sentences:

1, incomplete composition. A complete sentence should be "branches and leaves" complete, with complete and clear meaning.

Example 1: "This kind of neglect of public property should be criticized." This sentence has no theme, so the word "behavior" should be added after "public property".

Exodus 2: "He wore a gray coat and a blue hat." The second clause of this sentence lacks a predicate center (predicate verb), so the word "Dai" should be added before "Ding Yi".

2. Improper use of words. Improper use of words means that the words used in the sentence do not conform to the context, or words with similar or even opposite meanings are used.

Example 1: "She likes reading alone in a quiet environment." -The word "calm" should be changed to "quiet".

Example 2: "Poplar stands on campus." -The word "standing" should be changed to "standing".

Example 3: "The flag-raising ceremony began, and the bright red five-star red flag slowly rose." -"scarlet" should be changed to "scarlet".

3. Improper collocation. A pair of words in a sentence can't match or violate language habits.

Example 1: "In the early morning, the golden sunshine rises from Ran Ran on the horizon." The word "light" should be removed.

Example 2: "Guanyin with a Thousand Hands, a large-scale music and dance performed by China Disabled Art Troupe at the Spring Festival Gala in 2005, was well received by the national audience." -The word "accept" should be changed to "receive" or "get".

4. Semantic repetition. Semantic repetition refers to the simultaneous appearance and use of two or more words with similar or identical meanings in a sentence, which leads to the repetition of sentence meanings.

Exodus 1: "In class, all the students are listening attentively." -Remove "concentration" or "concentration".

Exodus that room is very spacious. -Remove "very" or "very".

Exodus 3: Pine trees stand on steep peaks. -Remove "dangerous peak" or replace "dangerous peak" with "mountain peak".

Example 4: Draw a triangle. -Remove "the one with three sides".

5. Improper classification. Improper classification refers to putting things that do not belong to the same genus together.

Example 1: "I like China Youth Daily, Little Master Daily, Childhood and other newspapers." -Childhood should be deleted, or "newspaper" should be changed to "newspaper".

Example 2: "The Great Wall in Wan Li, the Palace Museum and the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are places of interest that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for." -"He Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge" should be deleted.

6. Inconsistent. Inconsistency refers to ambiguity and contradiction in sentences.

Example 1: "Three minutes before the class meeting, the whole class is basically here." -"Basically" or "All" should be deleted.

Example 2: "It rained heavily all night last night." -"Evening" should be deleted, or "one night" should be changed to "one scene".

7. The word order is reversed. Word order inversion means that the words used in a sentence are not formed in a certain grammatical order, but the word order is reversed.

Example 1: "We should carry forward and persist in the spirit of hard study." -"Carry forward and persist" should be changed to "persist and carry forward".

Exodus 2: "The students marched in neat steps and lined up to the big playground." -The order of "quick march" and "Line up" should be reversed.

8. The reference is unknown. Unknown reference means that things or people in a sentence are not clearly explained, which leads to confusion in the meaning of the sentence. Pronouns are divided into personal pronouns [I, you, he (she, it), we …], demonstrative pronouns [this, that, here, there …] and interrogative pronouns [who, where]. Ill-defined sentences refer to the incorrect use of pronouns. There are two main kinds of this kind of sick sentence. One is that a pronoun replaces several people or things at the same time, causing confusion in reference. Misuse of demonstrative pronouns and interrogative pronouns.

Liu Ming and Jin Gyeong are good friends, and he often invites him to play ball. -"He often asks him to play ball" should be changed to "Liu Ming often asks Jin Gyeong to play ball".

Exodus 2: Where there is trouble, there he is. -"Where" should be changed to "Where".

9, unreasonable. Unreasonable means that the meaning of a sentence is unreasonable and unconventional.

He said with one voice, "The scenery here is really beautiful. -"with one voice" should be removed.

Exodus 2: It's so beautiful that the bright moon is in the sky and the stars are all over the sky. -"Bright moon hanging high" or "starry sky" should be removed.

Third, the method of modifying sick sentences:

First of all, read the original sentence carefully for several times, see the context clearly, understand the content of the sentence, and see if it is smooth; Then, according to the characteristics of the types of sick sentences, find out the reasons and correct them; See if the basic meaning of the original sentence is retained after the revision, and whether punctuation is used correctly.

Exercise 1: modify the sick sentence:

1. The hall was crowded with people watching the performance.

The campus is full of colorful flowers such as white, red and yellow.

I stood on the playground and looked at the students who were exercising carefully.

Our class won the first place in the competition, and everyone's heart showed the joy of victory.

At the panel discussion, everyone spoke fiercely.

6. Say with one voice, "Yes!"

7. Under the teacher's education, he made clear his learning attitude.

8. I like reading extracurricular books such as Little Bee, Xiaoxi and Pupils' Learning Newspaper.

9. After the reform and opening up, people's lives have become more and more affluent.

10 I think the scenery in spring is beautiful.

1 1. The teacher asked the students to be clear about their learning goals and attitudes.

12, you must be responsible.

Miss Li is very strict with us in class.

14, after the implementation of quality education, the quantity and quality of our extracurricular reading have been obviously improved.

15, when handing the teacup, my mother's face showed a happy mood.

16, Xiao Ming's sister was rated as "three good students" for three consecutive years.

We came to the park and watched the beautiful scenery.

19, his Chinese homework is basically completed.

I remembered what happened two years ago.

I'm sure it may snow tomorrow.

22. Everyone must pay attention to the good habit of hygiene.

23. The river is reflected in the clouds, making it whiter.

24. Autumn in Xiangshan is a desirable place.

answer

1. The hall was crowded with people watching the performance.

Types of ill sentences: improper use of words. Replace "full" with "full".

The campus is full of colorful flowers such as white, red and yellow.

Types of ill sentences: improper use of words and semantic repetition. "Full" is changed to "full"; Delete "white, red, yellow, etc."

I stood on the playground and looked at the students who were exercising carefully.

Types of ill sentences: improper use of words. Change "practice" into "exercise".

Our class won the first place in the competition, and everyone's heart showed the joy of victory.

Types of ill sentences: improper collocation. Change "heart" to "face".

At the panel discussion, everyone spoke fiercely.

Types of ill sentences: improper use of words. Change "violence" to "enthusiasm".

6. Say with one voice, "Yes!"

Type of ill sentence: incomplete components. Instead, everyone said with one voice: "Yes!"

7. Under the teacher's education, he made clear his learning attitude.

Types of ill sentences: improper collocation. Replace "clear" with "correct".

8. I like reading extracurricular books such as Little Bee, Xiaoxi and Pupils' Learning Newspaper.

Types of ill sentences: improper classification. Delete "Pupils' Learning Newspaper".

9. After the reform and opening up, people's lives have become more and more affluent.

Types of ill sentences: improper use of words. Change "rich and powerful" to "rich".

10 I think the scenery in spring is beautiful.

Type of ill sentence: word order is reversed. I think the scenery in spring is very beautiful.

1 1. The teacher asked the students to be clear about their learning goals and attitudes.

Type of ill sentence: incomplete components. Add "correct" before "learning attitude".

12, you must be responsible.

Types of ill sentences: semantic repetition. Remove "must".

Miss Li is very strict with us in class.

Types of ill sentences: improper collocation. Change "attitude" into "requirement".

14, after the implementation of quality education, the quantity and quality of our extracurricular reading have been obviously improved.

Types of ill sentences: improper collocation. After the implementation of quality education, the quantity and quality of our extracurricular reading have been significantly improved.

15, when handing the teacup, my mother's face showed a happy mood.

Types of ill sentences: improper collocation. Change "mood" to "expression".

16, Xiao Ming's sister was rated as "three good students" for three consecutive years.

Types of ill sentences: improper use of words. Replace "one by one" with "continuous".

We came to the park and watched the beautiful scenery.

Types of ill sentences: improper use of words. Change "scenery" into "scenery".

19, his Chinese homework is basically completed.

Types of ill sentences: inconsistent. Delete "basically".

I remembered what happened two years ago.

Types of ill sentences: inconsistent. Remove "just".

I'm sure it may snow tomorrow.

Types of ill sentences: inconsistent. Remove "probably".

22. Everyone must pay attention to the good habit of hygiene.

Type of ill sentence: incomplete components. Add "training" after "must".

23. The river is reflected in the clouds, making it whiter.

Type of ill sentence: word order is reversed. "River" and "cloud" are interchangeable.

24. Autumn in Xiangshan is a desirable place.

Type of ill sentence: word order is reversed. Autumn in Xiangshan was changed to Xiangshan in Autumn.

Exercise 2 of modifying ill sentences

0 1, no matter how hot the weather is, everyone still keeps exercising.

02. The task given to me by the company commander has been successfully completed.

After education, the victims of "FxG" have polished their eyes and raised their awareness.

Students must obey the traffic rules to prevent accidents.

05. In class, Xiaohua keeps her eyes fixed on the teacher.

I bought a pen, a ruler, an eraser and some stationery, and then hurried home.

No matter how good you study, there is no reason to be proud.

Martha is wearing a blue trench coat and a yellow hat.

09. Tonight, the sky is like a mirror and there are many stars. What a beautiful night scene!

10, the square was crowded with countless people.

After treatment, Xiaoming's illness has recovered.

Great changes have taken place in China since the reform and opening up.

13, after listening to the teacher, I was very educated.

I visited most of the scenic spots in the Summer Palace.

15. In the deep mountains in the northeast, earth coal mines are scattered everywhere.

He sat there listening to the teacher with rapt attention.

17. After writing a composition, you should learn to correct incorrect typos.

18, in the course of working, our hands stained the soil.

19, I whispered when I heard the news.

Only about seventy-two people attended the meeting this time.

2 1, his hands are almost completely frozen.

Many trees are planted in the campus, such as Chinese rose, begonia, phoenix tree, pine and cypress.

There are many toys in the children's shop, such as building blocks, dolls, electric trains and football.

On Sunday, the students took bread, eggs, apples, bananas, cookers and food to have a picnic.

She is wearing a bright red scarf and a white shirt.

I read books all day this morning.

27. It is shameful that this kind of food is not cherished and wasted at will.

28. The quantity of commodities on the market has greatly increased.

The students all said that yesterday's activity was a pleasant day.

Answer:

1. Change "No matter" to "No matter" 2. Replace "implementation" with "completion". How about "letting go" of the victim?

4. "Prevent" and "Don't" collide, and remove one. 5. "Don't blink" means "stare" and move one away.

6. Replace "and" with "and so on". "Although ... but" was changed to "8" and "dressed".

9. It is scientific common sense to change "starry sky" to "moon stars are scarce". 10. "Many" and "countless" are combined into one

1 1. "Sick" and "healthy" go 12. Add personal name before "Delete 13". "Very educated, for example, students.

14. "All" and "Most" conflict, let one go 15. "Sparse" and "less" are combined into one.

16. "concentrate" and "concentrate" one 17. Become "incorrect"

18. The order of "our hands" and "dirt" is 19. Who am I talking to? Change "I" to "We"

20. "72" is so accurate and still "around"? Go to Left and Right 2 1. Leave one for "almost" and "completely"

22. Replace "trees" with "plants". 23. "Football" is not a children's toy. Remove. 24. "Food" has been removed.

25. Replace "harmony" with "wearing" 26 "morning". 27. Add "phenomenon" after "waste"

28. Replace "quantity" with "quality". Remove one from "activity" and "day".