This lecture is about educational information.
First, the teaching content:
Weave your fairy tales
Second, the proposition trend:
(A) "Chinese Curriculum Standards" requires: "Encourage students to write imaginary things and stimulate them to expand their imagination and fantasy." "Reduce the restrictions on students' writing and encourage free expression and creative expression." "Students develop creative imagination so that they can have rich images of daily life in their minds." "Master metaphor, personification, exaggeration and other methods. "
When writing fairy tales, you can get a basic score if your language is fluent, your imagination is reasonable, your content is substantial, your center is clear, your thoughts are healthy and your feelings are sincere. If there is innovation, such as rich imagination, such as interesting or profound themes, and warning function, you can get high marks.
(2) about fairy tales:
Fairy tales are a kind of children's literature. Through rich imagination, fantasy and exaggeration to shape the image, reflect life, and carry out ideological education for children. Generally speaking, the plot of the story is magical and tortuous, the content and expression are vivid and simple, and the description of natural objects is often anthropomorphic, which can adapt to the acceptance of children.
2. Classification:
Fairy tales can be roughly divided into four categories:
1) anthropomorphic fairy tales. That is to give life to animals and plants or all inanimate things in the world, imitate people's words and deeds, and become characters in fairy tales.
2) Fairy tales of characters. That is, fairy tales featuring ordinary people. However, the behavior of these characters in fairy tales can be more exaggerated and imaginative than people's social practice in real life.
3) Superman fairy tales. That is, the characters in fairy tales belong to some supernatural, fantasy and imaginary images, such as immortals and ghosts, or the author personifies some concepts (such as goodness, evil, courage and happiness). Seventh grade fairy tale composition
4) Knowledge fairy tales. That is, science fairy tales. Based on strict scientific theory and practice, it uses fairy tales to show the magical scientific world or the future prospect of scientific development, so as to arouse children's strong interest and reverie.
3. Features:
Three characteristics of fairy tales: first, exaggeration; The second is to adopt anthropomorphic techniques; Third, everything in fairy tales has symbolic significance.
First, things in fairy tales (including animals, plants, abiotic and natural phenomena, etc. ) I have the same thinking, feeling, behavior and language ability as people, which makes people feel particularly cordial after reading it; Second, in order to emphasize some characteristics of the description object, the author often enlarges or narrows things in fairy tales intentionally through imagination, and even makes the actual phenomena in real life bizarre, which makes people feel novel and interesting after reading it; Third, things in fairy tales often imply that they can represent someone or a phenomenon in life, and people can get some enlightenment from reading.
Third, the problem-solving method guidance:
(A) the role of fairy tales:
"Students regard composition as a foreign object, and the idea of composition can be given by the teacher. Language comes from books or from copying others.
I don't have my own language or my own thoughts. The only purpose is the exam. "Experts and scholars feel the same way as colleagues in the Chinese language field, so in recent years, it has been put forward that" rich emotion and vivid and beautiful language "is an important measure to judge the quality of composition.
1. Develop imagination and cultivate delicate emotions.
2. Use diplomatic language to express ideas and make the language poetic.
3. Cultivate a sense of life.
(2) How to make fairy tales?
1, fairy tales usually use personification to praise beautiful things or explain a certain truth or lesson, which is often ironic or admonitory.
1) You can write the theme of mutual help and love, and educate people that only unity can succeed: for example, brotherhood; Dialogue between blackboard and chalk; Dialogue between battery and electronic watch; Disputes in dictionary kingdom, etc.
2) You can write a theme about environmental protection to warn people to protect the environment, such as The Crying of a River; The distress of the sea dragon king; The sorrow of squirrels, etc.
3) you can write a theme that praises truth, goodness and beauty and hates falsehood, ugliness and ugliness: for example, praise a flower that helps others; Whip mice for greed, cruelty, etc.
4) You can write a truth that reveals the advantages and disadvantages of everything, and educate people not to only see the shortcomings of others and their own advantages, such as the story of pottery pots and tin cans; Dialogue between hat and automatic umbrella, etc.
2. Writing fairy tales is different from making up stories in general, and it is especially necessary to play the role of imagination.
1) Bold, beyond common sense. When writing fairy tales, we often have to go beyond common sense and endow things other than human beings with human thoughts, feelings and behaviors, so that they can vividly interpret their own stories.
2) We should boldly break the conventional mode of thinking.
3) Imagination should conform to people's good wishes and social morality.
3. The protagonists who imitate the human body in fairy tales are mostly anthropomorphic living or inanimate things except human beings. Animal fairy tales are one of them.
1) First of all, we must clearly take animals as the leading role, expand our reasonable imagination and determine the center of the story.
2) Obviously, in order to make the fairy tale written more concrete and organized, we must develop the animal's thinking, language, behavior and activities around the established center. That is to say, organically combine the activities of each animal, properly use anthropomorphic methods, personalize the animals, and plan the stories between them more carefully, but we can't make them up. It is logical and reasonable to write fairy tales.
3) Writing animal fairy tales must reflect the authenticity of animals themselves, so as to make readers feel true and cordial. Example 1: The next day was sunny and sunny. The sun shines on the green burdock. Mother duck took her children to the stream. "plop!" She jumped into the water. "gung! Hey! " She cried, and the ducklings jumped up one by one. The water flooded their heads, but they came out at once and swam very beautifully. Their calves paddle flexibly. They are all in the water, and even the ugly little gray people swim with them. -Ugly duckling
Example 2: The next year, the snail was still lying in the same place under the rose tree, basking in the sun. Rose trees with bones and flowers are always so refreshing and fresh. The snail stretched out half its body, leaned out its tentacles, and then retracted its tentacles. "Everything seems to be the same as last year! No progress! The rose tree is still blooming its roses, nothing new! "
-"Snail and Rose Tree"
Exercise instruction: 1. Describe a thing with personification and endow it with certain feelings or philosophies.
2. unfold fairy tales.
Expanding fairy tales is to inspire students to expand the original simple fragments into concrete and vivid fairy tales through reasonable imagination.
3. Continue to make up fairy tales.
The continuation of fairy tales means that a fairy tale that is not well written or may continue to develop downwards is extended into a complete story through reasonable imagination.
Fourth, the model essay analysis:
Disease analysis:
Analysis prompt: whether the image description is concrete and true; Whether the center is prominent.
Goshawk wins the championship.
It is gratifying and enviable to gain success, but the course of struggle is arduous.
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On a certain day of a month, the Phoenix Queen of the Bird Kingdom sent larks to put up a poster made of leaves on a big tree: The first bird flying competition will be held in Wumeng Mountain in 2008, and all masters are invited to sign up for the competition to show their majestic posture. Seventh grade fairy tale composition
After the news came out, a large number of birds, such as Swift, Falcon, Swan and tern, which can fly 320 km, 9500 m and set a record of 17600 km, were eager to try. Among the many applicants, one goshawk just turned one year old is the least favored by the contestants. They said: it is really beyond their ability. Toad wants to eat swan meat!
The goshawk didn't care about the cynicism of others, and it began hard training under the leadership of its mother. Every day from sunrise to sunset, no matter the cold and heat, no matter the wind and rain, the goshawk never stops training. After two years of hard training, the goshawk's body has finally become streamlined, its chest muscles are particularly developed, and its wings are stronger. It looks forward to the early arrival of the decisive flight.
The game was held as scheduled. Seeing the contestants such as experts and strong hands like clouds, the goshawk said timidly, "Mom, their flying skills are superb. I can't compete with them. I don't want to participate. " Mother encouraged it patiently and said, "son, you have to believe in yourself." Aren't you waiting for this day after all you've suffered? " As long as you let go of the courage to fly, success will definitely belong to you! "
With the command of Uncle Goose, the director and referee of the organizing committee of the competition, the birds sang in unison and the flight competition officially began. The goshawk firmly remembered his mother's instructions, full of confidence, and bravely flew with powerful wings. Can keep pace with swift better than other birds.
Seeing that the finish line was coming, the goshawk made a final struggle and flew over the finish line first. In a flash, there was a warm cheer around. The success of the goshawk brought unexpected surprises to everyone. I saw it wearing a glittering gold medal and threw it into my mother's arms happily.
The story of goshawk winning the championship tells people that we should always keep the attitude of "flying" on the road of life, and only by unremitting pursuit can we reap success.
(2) Analysis of excellent model essays:
The distress of the sea dragon king
"What? There are hundreds less octopus families! " When the sea dragon king patted the dragon chair, his face turned red, and even the drooping dragon whiskers became warped. "How do humans stop? In the past few days, the octopus family has decreased at an average rate of 80 ~ 100 per hour. In this way, it won't be long before the whole octopus family is finished! " Then, he turned to Prime Minister Gui and said, "Go to the coast, first check whether the garbage will block the estuary, and then investigate the source of the garbage." "yes." Prime Minister Turtle promised and left the Dragon Palace.
In recent years, the residents of Crystal Palace have suffered from marine pollution, and the sea dragon king has racked his brains for it. Finally, the octopus family stepped forward and took on the heavy responsibility of garbage disposal, and set up a "garbage disposal plant" to transport the garbage off the coast and then treat it uniformly, which greatly improved the living environment of the residents of Crystal Palace. Unfortunately, however, when humans found that octopus approached the coast in large numbers, they actually started fishing in large numbers, which greatly reduced the number of octopus family members.
A few hours later, Prime Minister Turtle came back, pale and with tears in his eyes. When he saw the sea dragon king, he burst into tears. The sea dragon king was surprised and asked, "What's the matter? What's the matter? " Prime Minister Tortoise choked and said, "Your Majesty, our crystal palace is almost gone! 40 meters from the shore, barely able to swim; At a distance of 20 meters from the shore, the seawater is smelly, black and turbid. There is no living thing underwater, and human garbage and waste water are everywhere. These scenes are masterpieces of human beings! "
The sea dragon king was sad and angry when he heard the sound of Prime Minister Turtle. A terrible idea suddenly occurred to him. He stared at the direction of the garbage dump coast and gnashed his teeth and said, "If it's human, give it back to them!" " "
That night, the sea dragon king invited Er Shen to help. Feng Yu Ershen listened to the story of the sea dragon king and was deeply dissatisfied with the bad behavior of human beings. He decided to help the sea dragon king and teach mankind a lesson.
The next day, the evil wind roared, and the strong wind rushed to land with huge waves, and then it rained cats and dogs. The sea is beginning to flow back! A large amount of water overflows from rivers, streams and rivers and rushes to cities and human settlements.
Humans panicked, cried and ran frantically to higher places. The sea dragon king stood above the clouds, looked at Wang Yang and smiled sarcastically.
After the water receded, the ground was full of rubbish and mud. When the sea dragon king saw it, he naively thought, "After this incident, they should not be stubborn again. At least, they have to understand that water will be angry! " Seventh grade fairy tale composition
One day a few months later, the sea dragon king ordered Prime Minister Gui to go out of the palace to investigate the water quality, and then went to "Tian Bo House" to read the documents. Soon, the prime minister turtle stumbled into the house and turned purple: "Your Majesty, there is garbage on the coast again." Wang Hailong only heard half of it, and he realized that what Premier Tortoise said was rubbish. He opened his eyes wide, shook his head violently and shouted, "That's impossible." "Yes, it's true!" Prime Minister Turtle said in a mosquito-like voice that he almost collapsed. The sea dragon king still can't believe it. He plans to go to the seaside to have a look himself.
He was silent when he saw a mountain of garbage returning to the coast. He doesn't know what to do to stop this stupid behavior of human beings.
Five, help you accumulate:
1, Dolphin-I can't help but think of the beautiful boundless sea in my hometown, lively and lovely fish and shrimp, and unrestrained games. Every time I recall these things, there is always a warm current in my mind. Every time a friend listens to a story, there is always a melancholy and emotion in his eyes.
She is a very beautiful little butterfly. There are many red, black and light yellow patterns and spots on her soft wings, much like fairy clothes in fairy tales.
On this day, the little butterfly danced all day. When night fell, she was tired and rested on the grass under an old ginkgo tree.