The reason for the sick sentence here is the improper collocation of one side and two sides, which leads to the confusion of sentence expression.
The "quantity and quality of reading" in the original sentence should be expressed from two aspects. The latter "improvement" means the improvement of quality, level and degree, and "quality, level and degree" is abstract. Here, "quality" is the performance of quality, which can be matched with improvement, but "quantity" is a concrete thing and cannot be matched with improvement.
The quantity here can be matched with words with quantitative changes, such as "increase" and "decrease", so that the sentence can be revised as follows: after the implementation of quality education, the quantity of our extracurricular reading has increased and the reading quality has improved.
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Modifying methods of sick sentences:
1, complement grammar: it is often used to modify ill sentences with incomplete components.
For example, "I won the first place in this competition" (lack of subject) was changed to "I won the first place in this competition." (Supplementary subjects)
After listening to the teacher, I got a great education. (Supplementary subjects)
Everyone should set up lofty ideals. (complement predicate)
We should educate teenagers in patriotism. (Complement object)
2. The deletion method is generally used to modify redundant sentences, redundant components, improper collocation and improper classification.
For example, "I conclude that it may rain tomorrow." I'm sure it will rain tomorrow.
3. Variations are mostly used to modify ill sentences such as improper collocation, improper words and unclear references.
For example, "his grades have improved significantly." Change: "His grades have improved obviously."
Whoever breaks the discipline will be criticized.
His writing level has improved significantly.
He seems to have infinite power.
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