[composition topic]
Read the following text and write as required. (60 points)
Go your own way and let others talk! (Dante)
People who often ask for directions won't get lost. (Polish proverb)
You should listen to others' opinions patiently and seriously consider whether the person who accuses you is reasonable. (Leonardo da Vinci)
Trust everyone, doubt everyone, their mistakes are the same. (senac)
Faced with all kinds of statements, some people think: Who should I trust? Some people think that it is most important to believe in yourself. Please take "believe in yourself and listen to others' opinions" as the topic, make your own suggestions, choose your own style, set your own title and write an article of not less than 800 words. What you write must be within the scope of the topic.
The title of China's first composition is "Believe in yourself and listen to other people's opinions". The relationship between "believing in yourself" and "listening to other people's opinions" is not equal. If you say that you should not only believe in yourself, but also listen to other people's opinions, it is contradictory. Of the two, you must make an either-or choice. In other words, in a specific article, you can only choose one of the viewpoints to write.
If you agree with the idea of "believe in yourself", then you must try to find examples for it. These examples are both positive and negative; Both ancient and modern. And some examples are analyzed. For example, there are ancient cases of self-recommendation, ancient cases of "honest people buying shoes" and ancient cases of contemporary college students hitting a wall in job hunting. If the article is only written here, it is still not enough. Because it will mislead people: any behavior that believes in yourself, including blind self-confidence, is also good and too dialectical. Therefore, we have to write another paragraph to clarify that we can't blindly believe in ourselves. In this regard, we can take Masu in Street Pavilion as an example. Finally, a conclusion can be drawn.
If you agree with the idea of "listening to other people's opinions", you must first prove it positively. A positive example is the ancient story of "remonstrating, qi king". In modern China, the * * * production party listened to the opinions of various democratic parties. Then prove it from the opposite side. The opposite example is the old story "Li Wang stopped slandering". Then turn over a new chapter and make it clear that listening to others' opinions must be combined with your own. If you don't listen to others' opinions independently, it will inevitably lead to a confused ending. In this regard, we can quote the story of the cartoon "The Old Man, the Children and the Donkey". Finally draw a conclusion.
You can also contact specific people and things for analysis and discussion. For example, in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, there is a story about Guan Gong's careless loss of Jingzhou. Guan Yu lost Jingzhou, although the reason of "carelessness" is not ruled out, but there are undeniable reasons, too trusting himself and not listening to other people's opinions. It is these three fatal injuries that not only made Guan Yu lose Jingzhou, but also made the "generation of warrior saints" take their lives.
Explanation of proposition
This topic is highly speculative. In the face of all kinds of statements, do I believe what others say or myself? "Believe in yourself and listen to others' opinions" is a related topic, and the examination of topics that meet the meaning of the topic should show this relevance. Focusing on this relevance, the harmonious and proportional use of two forces is "fitting the meaning of the topic". To understand this relationship clearly, we only focus on one hand and deny the other hand, or avoid talking about the other hand as "basically fitting the meaning of the topic"
The topic insists on examining the rational thinking and understanding level of candidates. The material that leads to the topic is a set of famous aphorisms. Careful observation of these sentences shows that "go your own way and let others speak" emphasizes "believe in yourself", "people who often ask for directions will not lose their way", "you should listen to others' opinions patiently and seriously consider whether the person who accuses you is reasonable", which shows that you should be good at "listening to others' opinions" and "trusting everyone means doubting everyone". Accordingly, the composition can be customized, or at least there are three kinds: one is to believe in yourself and not to be influenced too much by other people's opinions; Second, talk about not being blind and confident, but being willing to accept other people's useful opinions and suggestions; Third, dialectical thinking, explanation or elaboration, we should not only believe in ourselves, but also actively listen to other people's opinions. It is worth noting that no matter what kind of ideas you hold, you should not be too absolute when expressing them, but try to be objective and thorough. In other words, for "believing in yourself" and "listening to others' opinions", we cannot completely deny the former just because we emphasize the former, nor can we completely deny the former just because we emphasize the latter. Be careful not to be too absolute when making arguments, but to think dialectically. You can write an argumentative essay full of literary talent and philosophy, or you can make up stories to reflect philosophy.
Is it "going your own way" or "listening to other people's opinions", or both? The four different topics given in this year's college entrance examination composition have caused many candidates to fall into a "trap". In fact, these four topics complement each other. As long as the candidates decide to "go their own way" as the main point in the article, they should also "listen to other people's opinions", which is what we often say, "choose the good and follow it, choose the bad and change it". Such compositions are basically above 42 points.
However, there are still a large number of candidates who are ill-considered, unilaterally expounding composition topics such as "going their own way" and "living a confident life", ignoring "listening to others' opinions" or blindly discussing "the importance of listening to others' opinions" and ignoring the point of sticking to their own goals. No matter how excellent their literary talent and creativity are, their composition scores can only wander between 3 1-37. Some candidates write fables with the theme of "Pony Crossing the River" in primary school Chinese textbooks, some write that Pony insists on crossing the river confidently in his own way, and some focus on how to listen to other people's opinions in the process of crossing the river. All these are because unilateral discussion can only enter the ranks of three types of compositions.
Because this year's college entrance examination composition proposition is relatively clear, almost half of the candidates scored around 42 points, and the endless stream of 589-point compositions is even more eye-catching. "In this year's college entrance examination composition scoring standard, the development level is more than last year's 10, and the candidates' literary talent and creativity are more valued. "On the premise of correct conception, the rating of development level is not comprehensive, but it must be" profound, rich, literary and creative ". Among them, "profound" requires candidates to go deep into the essence through phenomena and reveal the reasons for the problems, and the views are enlightening; " "Rich" means rich materials, full image and profound artistic conception; Literary talent requires vivid words, flexible sentence patterns, good use of rhetorical devices and meaningful sentences; Creative candidates have novel ideas, fresh materials, ingenious ideas, unique reasoning and imagination, and personality characteristics.
You are a landscape.
Believe in yourself, you are a landscape.
Although you are a stream, you have raised a pool of elves and irrigated the fertile side.
Although you are a drop of water, you reflect the colorful light of the sun and let people see the most beautiful colors in the world.
No matter how small you are, you are still writing fairy tales of life in this land of Xiaotian, creating miracles in this vast world. In fact, you are a landscape.
"The snow in Mei Xu Xun is three-thirds white, but the snow has lost a piece of plum fragrance." Plum blossom has its charm, and snow also has its charm. Graceful willows, beautiful bamboos, quiet bluegrass and magnificent pine trees all show their individuality in nature, don't they? "The eagle hits the sky, the fish jumps shallowly, and all kinds of frost fight for freedom." Everything has its own advantages. Mount Tai is majestic, Huashan is dangerous, Huangshan is strange, Emei Mountain is beautiful, peony is graceful, lotus is clear, plum blossom is proud, orchids are simple and elegant, snow falls in Wan Li in the north, long grass grows in the south of the Yangtze River, camel bells ring beyond the Great Wall, and flutes sound in water towns. Can you say that Mount Tai is not as good as Emei, peony is not as good as orchid, and northern China is not as good as Jiangnan? You can't. They have their own merits. Your hibiscus is picturesque, my room is full of poetry books, and my stomach is full of poetry books. You have the lofty sentiments of galloping in politics and leaping into shopping malls, and I have the indifferent state of mind of small bridges and flowing water and clear springs and bright moons.
We don't need to hide in a dark corner and enjoy loneliness alone. We have the same blue sky above us and the same land under our feet. We shouldn't always forget ourselves. You are no more than others and no less than others. We can't always praise others and belittle ourselves. Don't forget, believe in yourself, you are a landscape.
Believe in yourself and go your own way without listening to other people's advice. Believing in yourself is your courage to ride the wind and waves, your will in Ao Shuang and Ling Xue, your soil to bloom in flower of life, and your belief to go forward bravely. Believe in yourself, make the impossible possible, and make the possible a reality.
Friends, believe in yourself! Even the pottery figurines with the same specifications in ancient brick kilns must consider themselves the most unique and outstanding one.
Friends, believe in yourself! Others are mountains, so are you. The mountains stand tall, and the peaks are equally tall and strong.
Friends, believe in yourself! Even if you stand on a tall building and look at the scenery, you should firmly believe that the scenery will naturally look at you.
Believe in yourself, you are a landscape!
Title: Lost kites, lost dreams.
In May, roses are full of excitement, gloom, sand and fragrance. On the grass and fields, beautiful and light kites are flying, carrying childhood laughter and childhood dreams.
I-I am a senior four, looking at those innocent smiling faces, those real and beautiful dreams, the liquid that has been suppressed in my body for a long time, finally flowed out happily.
I like kites and sky very much. The dream of a kite is destined to be in the sky, and white clouds are its wings. Living in my dream is flying.
I am eager to pursue the freedom of entanglement with the wind. I prefer to fly only in my own world, so I choose to be aloof, paranoid, believe in myself and live only in my own world. Yes, I only saw the flying kite, but I ignored the weak but flexible thread.
My friends gave me countless smiles, countless forbearance and countless comforts, only for my intimacy and my sincere acceptance, but they were all thrown at the crossroads in the wind by my indifference, and my persuasion and suggestions were forgotten by my paranoia. Finally, my friend left me, and I felt very weak when I saw the stubborn kite swaying in the wind.
My parents' earnest teaching, gentle edification, my angry face and no one crying in the middle of the night can not change me. I like that sentence: go your own way and let others talk! Their teachings were forgotten by me. I am addicted to novels, wandering in internet cafes, content with nihility and narcissism again and again.
Friendship, I have given up and longed for.
Family, I am tired of it and cherish it.
In this way, I lost the sunshine in my life and was pale and powerless because of distrust. The kite carrying my dream is gone because the thread is broken. This is a magnificent life exile.
That seemingly weak line is actually to protect yourself and others. Don't trust yourself, and don't trust others.
I failed, I suddenly woke up, sat in the classroom of senior four and started over, reassessing my life with a different maturity, living for myself and others.
Unreal dreams have gone with my kite, but I still have ideals and a more realistic future. Choose the road that suits you and pick other people's fresh fruit nectar all the way, and the future sky will be broader and clearer.