Fan Zhongyan, word Xi. With Bao Zheng, he was a famous minister, politician and writer in the Northern Song Dynasty, and was born in Wuxian (now Jiangsu).
He was not only a famous politician and commander in chief in the Northern Song Dynasty, but also an outstanding writer and educator. The Li Qing Reform led by him became the prelude of Wang Anshi's Xifeng Reform. He improved some military systems and strategic measures to make the western border defense stable for a long time; A large number of scholars he recommended laid the foundation for the academic prosperity of the Song Dynasty. His thought of worrying about the world first and the moral integrity of people with lofty ideals are brilliant spiritual wealth in the history of Chinese civilization; Zhu called him "the first-rate figure in the history of heaven and earth"! Today, the remains of Fan Zhongyan in various places have been protected and commemorated by people.
Fan Zhongyan created many works in his life, including excellent poems, words and essays, as well as many good works that were patriotic and concerned about the people and reflected social reality. Famous articles include the prose "Yueyang Tower", the word "Fisherman's Passion" and the poem "Fisherman on the River".
The writing background "Yueyang Tower" is a famous work of Fan Zhongyan in the Northern Song Dynasty. Because of the phrase "worry about the world first, and be happy after the world", it is famous in history. In the fifth year of Song Renzong Qing Dynasty (1045), Fan Zhongyan, who advocated political reform, touched the interests of the court conservatives, was removed from the post of assistant prime minister and relegated to Dengzhou (now Dengxian County, Henan Province).
In June of the following year, Teng, who was in charge of Baling, rebuilt the Yueyang Tower, which was about to be completed. I asked Lin to take notes and attached a picture of Dongting in late autumn. The historical masterpiece Yueyang Tower was written on September 15 this year.
Yueyang Tower, a famous cultural building, stands at the west gate of Yueyang City, Hunan Province, beside Dongting Lake. Since ancient times, there has been a reputation of "Dongting is the world's water and Yueyang is the world's building". It was built around 200 AD and has a history of about 1700 years. It, together with Wang Tengting in Nanchang, Jiangxi and Yellow Crane Tower in Wuhan, Hubei, is called the three famous buildings in the south of the Yangtze River (the other is called the four famous buildings in the south of the Yangtze River, including Xie Shoulou in Xuanzhou, Anhui).
The architecture of Yueyang Tower is very distinctive. The whole building is exquisite in structure and dignified in shape, and its style can be summarized as "pure wood, four columns, three floors and cornices".
The main building is 15m high, with three floors in total. Four nanmu columns bear the weight of the whole building, and then 12 original wooden columns are used to support the second floor, and 12 catalpa eaves columns are used to support the cornices. The beams, columns, purlins and rafters of the whole building are connected with tenons, which are mutually meshed and stable as a rock.
Another feature of the building is that the shape of the roof resembles a general's helmet, which is both majestic and unusual. Yueyang Tower has been developed from generation to generation based on The Yuejun Tower of Lusu in the Three Kingdoms.
Before the Tang Dynasty, its function was mainly used in the military. Since the Tang Dynasty, Yueyang Tower has gradually become a scenic spot for tourists and romantic poets to visit and compose poems.
At this time, Baling City has been changed to Yueyang City, and Baling Building has also been called Yueyang Building. In the Northern Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan's well-known "Yueyang Tower" made Yueyang Tower famous all over the world.
For thousands of years, countless literati have visited places of interest here, expressed their feelings on the railings, and recorded them in words, recited them in poems, and painted them in form. Arts and crafts artists also describe the scenery of Dongting with Yueyang Tower as the theme, making Yueyang Tower the subject of repeated description and writing in artistic creation for a long time. Now Yueyang is rebuilt in 1984, imitating the shape of Guangxu in Qing Dynasty when it was built in six years.
Climb Yueyang Tower and you can browse the lakes and mountains of Dongting Lake in 800 miles. Yueyang Tower is the only one of the three famous buildings in the south of the Yangtze River that keeps its original appearance, and its architectural artistic value is unparalleled.
1988 1 was designated as a national key cultural relics protection unit by the State Council, and was listed as a national key scenic spot protection area in August of the same year. 200 1 year 1 month, approved as the first batch of national AAAA-level tourist attractions. It is the only scenic spot in Hunan on the Yangtze River Golden Tourism Line, an important window for Yueyang to open to the outside world, and the leader of Yueyang tourism.
In the spring of the fourth year, Li Qing stayed in Baling County. In the second year, the government was harmonious and everything went smoothly.
Is to rebuild Yueyang Tower, add its old system, and engrave Tang Xian's poems on it. It belongs to the composition to remember.
Guanfu Baling wins in Dongting Lake. Take a distant mountain, swallow the Yangtze River, and make a vast soup, boundless; It's sunny in the morning and cloudy at night.
This is the grand view of Yueyang Tower. Everything the elder said is ready.
But the northern martial arts, the Antarctic Xiaoxiang, and the poets who moved abroad will all be here, and they will look at things well. If it rains, the moon will not open, the evil wind will howl, and the turbid waves will be empty; The sun, moon and stars are hidden, and the mountains are hidden; Business travel is bad and ruined; Twilight is boundless, tigers roar and apes crow. When you go to the temple building, you are homesick, sad, sad and sad.
If it is spring, it is calm and the sky is high and the clouds are light; Sha Ou Ji Xiang, swimming in the brocade scale; The coast is blue and green. Or the long smoke is exhausted, the bright moon is thousands of miles away, the light is shining, the static shadow is sinking, and the fishing songs are answered. How happy I am! When you arrive at Dunsi Building, you will feel relaxed and happy, forget the humiliation, and leave the wine in the wind, which will make you feel happy.
Hey, honey! Is it to taste the heart of the ancient benevolent, or to do something different? Don't rejoice in things, don't grieve for yourself. If you live high in a temple, you will worry about your people; If you stay away from the Jianghu, you will worry about your husband.
It's worrying about going in and going out. But when will you be happy? It must be said that "worry about the world first, and then enjoy the world."
Hey! Wes, who are we going home with? September 15th, six years. In the spring of Li Qing's fourth year, Teng was demoted as the satrap of Baling.
In the second year, political affairs went smoothly, people lived and worked in peace and contentment, and various waste businesses were established. So the Yueyang Tower was rebuilt, its old scale was expanded, and the poems of celebrities and modern people in the Tang Dynasty were engraved on it.
Entrust me to write an article about it. I think all the beautiful scenery in Baling County is in Dongting Lake.
It connects the distant mountains and breathes the water of the Yangtze River. Vast and boundless; It's sunny in the morning and cloudy at night. This is a spectacular sight of Yueyang Tower.
The previous account is (already) very detailed. However, it leads to Wuxia in the north and Xiaoxiang in the south. Most of the exiled politicians and poets meet here, and the feelings caused by seeing natural scenery will probably be different, right? Like a rainy day, it doesn't clear up for months, the cold wind howls and the turbid waves rush to the sky; The sun and stars hide their brilliance, and the mountains also hide their shapes; Businessmen and passengers can't move forward, master.
2. Imitate Yueyang Tower and climb Jinmao Tower.
-Imitation of Yueyang Tower
1978 Spring, China implemented reform and opening up. For more than 20 years, the government and the people have lived in harmony and everything has flourished. Yu Naideng Jinmao Tower overlooks Shencheng. But when I saw the winding Pujiang River and high-rise buildings, I suddenly had mixed feelings and wrote it down in my composition.
Yu's victory city is on the coast of the East China Sea. Facing the East China Sea, the Yangtze River comes first. Huangpu flows eastward, running through the city. It's sunny in the morning and cloudy at night. This is the grand view of Shencheng, which was prepared by modern people. However, it connects Jiangsu to the north and Zhejiang to the south. Chinese and foreign celebrities will come. Is there anything unusual about how you feel about things?
It's sunny and sunny. The sky is clear and sunny. The sky is blue and green, and there are no clouds in Wan Li. Business travel is ok, and the talent group is perfect. The trees along the road are green. When you arrive in Sisha, you will see a prosperous city with beautiful environment, trees and trees, heroes everywhere and people extremely happy.
If you go to Shencheng at night, you will feel sultry. The banks of Pujiang River are brightly lit. The sky is far and wide. Light, like day, changes alternately. The light is green, reflecting left and right. High-rise buildings complement each other. What is this scene! When you go to Sisha, you will feel relaxed and happy. The sky is particularly high. You can see it from the railing and you will be very happy.
Hey, honey! I try to ask my young people's hearts, or do the same thing to them. Why? Full of energy and joy. If you live on the vast grassland, you will look up at the universe. In the quiet alley, you can clearly see flowers and plants. It's fun to be broad and quiet. But why are you always happy? It must say, "Young people are like the sun in the morning." Hey, with my classmates, make progress every day and climb the peak forever.
3. Appreciation of the Postscript of Yueyang Tower-Ouyang Xiu was a famous essayist and poet in the Northern Song Dynasty. When I mention him, I will never forget his "Drunken Pavilion". By describing the beautiful natural environment and harmonious social atmosphere, he implicitly and euphemistically expressed his special mood after being demoted.
In this essay, there are descriptions of scenery, descriptions of personnel and expressions of emotions, all of which vividly show Ouyang Xiu's special feelings at that time. With the description of the scenery in the article, we see a leisurely and happy world: "There are mountains around the Chu River, and the peaks in the southwest are beautiful, and the viewers are beautiful and deep.
Six or seven miles up the mountain, I gradually heard the sound of water gurgling, overflowing the spring between the two peaks. When the peak turns, there are pavilion wings on the spring, and the pavilion is also drunk. "
There are no rugged rocks and cliffs in the mountains here, and the water here is not breathtaking. The mountains are undulating, covered with green shade, deep and beautiful, quietly extending around; Water, like a winding silver belt, gurgles down, melodious and beautiful; There is also a pavilion, the corner of which is inclined, like a bird, flying quietly by the thin water. What a soft and quiet scenery.
The description at the beginning of Zuiwengting brings us to a beautiful environment and produces a pleasant feeling. The same is true of another scene description: "If the husband is in the forest at sunrise, the clouds will return to the cave, and the changers will be in the mountains."
The wild fragrance is rich, the wood is beautiful and the shade is beautiful, the wind and frost are noble and clean, and the water is clear, and it is also in the mountains at four o'clock. "Here, I wrote about the light fog floating in the morning, the smoke clouds gathered in the evening, the fragrant wild flowers in spring, the green trees in summer, the frost in autumn and the bare stones in winter.
Everything is so quiet and simple, elegant and natural. This is a description of the scenery in prose. Let's look at the description of personnel in the prose: "The satrap and the guests come here to drink, and they get drunk with less, so they call themselves drunkards."
"As for the loser who sings on the road, the walker rests on the tree, the former calls, the latter answers, lowers his head, supports, never stops, and the Chuhe people swim. Fishing near the stream, deep fish fat in the stream, spring wine making, spring fragrant wine bottles; The pheasant is just a predecessor and a satrap feast.
The joy of a feast is not silk or bamboo. Among shooters, players win, money is intertwined, those who sit up noisily, all guests are happy with white hair, and those who are humble are drunk. ""Yes, the sunset is on the mountain, the figure is scattered, the satrap returns, and the guests follow. "
It describes not vigorous social events, nor extraordinary heroic acts, but relatively ordinary social life and personal life, without contradictions and conflicts. Prose describes the daily life of the people and the fragments of the old satrap's life, showing a scene of leisure, happiness, tranquility and peace. The author feels infinite happiness, can't help but feel relaxed and happy, and forgets all the honors and disgraces in the world, so that he forgets "drink less and get drunk" and drinks as much as he can.
As a result, the surrounding songs filled the air, people sat up and quarreled, but he was "depressed" and couldn't get drunk. This was the highest state of happiness. Ouyang Xiu expressed his inner feelings through the description of scenery and the narration of personnel.
His sincere feelings melted into the scenery and events, which made the article more affectionate: "The meaning of drunkenness is not in wine, but also between mountains and rivers." "The joy of mountains and rivers, the heart of wine."
"... the tourists went and the birds were happy. However, birds know the joy of mountains, but they don't know the joy of people; People know the pleasure of swimming from the satrap, but I don't know that the pleasure of the satrap is also fun. "
This is the relief of a person who has experienced vicissitudes and has been bumpy in his career for decades. From the eighth year of Tiansheng (1030), Ouyang Xiu, who was only 23 years old, began his political career. Back and forth, he tried his best to actively assist Fan Zhongyan in reforming his internal affairs. Finally, he was rejected by evil spirits and demoted by officials.
His ideal could not be realized, but after being demoted to Chuzhou, he achieved gratifying results, which was a comfortable enjoyment for Ouyang Xiu, who was busy and tired! The happy life of Chuzhou people gave him great comfort, and the scenery in front of him brought him into a quiet realm. He was intoxicated, but not by wine, but by beautiful scenery and quiet life. Here, birds are happy because of the mountains, people are happy because of the travel of the satrap, and the satrap is happy because of the happiness of the people. He has a beautiful environment, pleasant body and mind, comfortable and carefree, and can't help getting drunk.
Ouyang Xiu was pale and white-haired, sitting in the crowd with his eyes closed slightly. The scenery in front of us is beautiful and people are very happy. Ouyang Xiu was also enveloped and intoxicated by this harmonious atmosphere. Ouyang Xiu claimed that "the meaning of drunkenness is not in wine", and he was broad-minded and self-released, getting rid of the ups and downs of the official sea and the disturbance of the world. In this landscape far away from the city, he immersed his mind in a leisurely and quiet situation and gained a sense of balance and harmony.
This feeling pervades the Zuiweng Pavilion, making the article picturesque, elegant and natural, and smooth. Appreciation of poetry and painting, colorful-comment on Ouyang Xiu's Zuiweng Pavilion, which is a beautiful prose.
This essay is poetic and unique in style, which is really rare in China's ancient literary works. Beautiful artistic conception.
Good prose should be poetry, creating beautiful artistic conception. The so-called artistic conception, including meaning and context, is an artistic picture that permeates the author's subjective feelings.
Excellent prose should have beautiful pictures, giving readers a unique aesthetic feeling and pleasing to the eye. The ideological meaning of Zuiweng Pavilion is a word of "music", which is the music in "drunkenness", like a colored line, connecting all kinds of pictures.
And "the meaning of drunkenness is not wine" and "care about mountains and rivers". Indulge in trees and mountains is the author's real intention.
The conception of prose is like setting up a notebook, and the author writes a beautiful "environment" according to this "meaning", so as to achieve the blending of emotion and scenery and the harmony between meaning and environment. The author describes the realm of prose from these aspects.
First, the beauty of mountains and rivers. In the author's pen, the distance of Zuiweng Pavilion is a landscape painting.
There are mountains, springs, forests and pavilions. But the author does not use ink in isolation, but interweaves it together, which is both beautiful and diverse. The "magnificent" Wolf Mountain has wonderful scenery and continuous winding.
Please imitate the fourth paragraph of Yueyang Tower and write the most beautiful moonlight in your heart. The third paragraph is about 200 words, looking at people who are sad.
The general idea of this paragraph is: if it is rainy season, it will not clear up for several months in a row; The evil wind roared in the sky, and the turbid waves on the lake vacated; The sun, the moon and the stars cover their brilliance, and the mountains also cover their bodies; Business travelers are afraid to travel, and all ships are damaged; When everything is shrouded in darkness at dusk, only the sound of tigers whistling and apes crying keeps coming into our ears. At this time, when we climb Yueyang Tower, leave the capital and miss our hometown, we will feel sad, worry, and be afraid of the slander and ridicule of villains, and we will feel extremely sad.
First, the grand view of Yueyang Tower has been exhausted by predecessors. What's the point of repeating those old sayings? In this case, there are two ways. One way is to write conviction, and others say yes, but I can't. Another way is to avoid being familiar with others and find another way. I won't say what others say is not good. From another angle, find a new topic and say my own way. Fan Zhongyan only adopted the latter method. The title of the article is Yueyang Tower, but he cleverly avoided writing it.
Second, taking notes, writing scenes, expressing feelings and discussing in an article are concise, extravagant, lyrical and incisive. Some expositions are short in words, but they have the function of commanding the full text, so some people say that this is a unique argumentative essay. The discussion skills in Yueyang Tower are really worth learning.
Third, the language of this article is also very distinctive. Although it is prose, it is interspersed with many four-character antitheses, such as "the sun, the moon and the stars are hidden, and the mountains are hidden." "Brocade swimming in Ji Xiang, Sha Ou." "The smoke has gone out, and the month is thousands of miles away; These compound sentence added color to the article. The author's efforts to refine the sentences are also very deep. For example, the words' topic' and' swallow' in these two sentences just show the vast momentum of Dongting Lake. " The succinct eight words "don't be happy with things, don't be sad for yourself" are as inspiring as the motto.
If it is too long, you can refer to the following tips:
The third paragraph of advice: write the sentimental feelings that touched the poet when it was drizzling.
The third paragraph of writing tips: use compound sentence more often, with neat sentences and concise and vivid language; Use appropriate rhetorical devices (parallelism and antithesis); Compare the following paragraphs. (just say a little)
The fourth paragraph of advice: write the joy of touching the poet to go upstairs to see the spring scenery.
Tips for writing in the fourth paragraph: use more parallelism sentences, the sentences are neat, and the language is concise and vivid; Use appropriate rhetorical devices (parallelism, antithesis, metonymy); In contrast to the above paragraph. (just say a little)
5. Ask for an essay similar to The Story of Yueyang Tower. If it rains heavily, the moon will not open, the evil wind will howl, and the turbid waves will be empty; The sun, moon and stars are hidden, and the mountains are hidden; Business travel is bad and ruined; Twilight is boundless, tigers roar and apes crow. When you go to the temple building, you are homesick, sad, sad and sad.
If it is spring, it is calm and the sky is high and the clouds are light; Sha Ou Ji Xiang, swimming in the brocade scale; The coast is blue and green. Or the long smoke is exhausted, the bright moon is thousands of miles away, the light is shining, the static shadow is sinking, and the fishing songs are answered. How happy I am! When you arrive at Dunsi Building, you will feel relaxed and happy, forget the humiliation, and leave the wine in the wind, which will make you feel happy.
6. Explain the words added in the text. (2 points)
① Ye Si who climbed the temple building: ② It was refreshing:
7. Explain the word "ran" in the following sentences. (3 points)
Despair everywhere (Yueyang Tower):
Guangwu ("Chen She Family") However:
Although the public loss plate is a ladder for me, I will take Song (Public Loss) as an example:
8. Which two fishing songs can remind you of Three Gorges? (2 points)
A:
8.( 1) (7 points) 6. (2 points) 1s: This, this. ② Pleasure: Pleasure, Pleasure and Harmony. (3 points) ① ... ② ... ③ ... ④
6. Write a classical Chinese article similar to Yueyang Tower with the theme of "Lotus Hill". In the spring of four years in Song Renzong, Teng was demoted to Yuezhou and became the year of knowledge. In the second year, the government was smooth and the people were happy, and many things that had been abandoned were set up. So the Yueyang Tower was rebuilt, and the original scale was expanded. The poems of celebrities and contemporary people in the Tang Dynasty were also engraved on the upstairs. Entrust me to write an article about it.
I saw the beautiful scenery of Yuezhou, all in Dongting Lake. It embraces distant mountains and swallows the water of the Yangtze River. Water is boundless. The sun shines in the morning, and the yin condenses at night, and the scene is ever-changing. This is a magnificent sight of Yueyang Tower. The previous account has been very detailed. In this case, it leads to Wuxia in the north, Xiaoshui and Xiangjiang River in the south. Most of the relegated historians and poets come here to get together and enjoy the natural scenery. Can it be any different emotionally?
7. Imitation writing
Yu's vote in Sohu is a gathering of infatuated fans. In the network, smoke fills the air and parents fight side by side; In the blog, you talk to me, you are obsessed with your passion, and you are constantly writing beautiful articles. The mouse is the key to the pen. China, Taiwan, Korea and Japan, * * * work together; Good news spread frequently, rejoicing, ready to fight; Many relatives, who didn't share during the day, came through thick and thin. But I love you, and I don't think I want anything in return. Charm, no one can stop; True feelings exist; Huan country, the Han river to the east, white waves surging; Snails fly to the sky and sing in the evening; Although thousands of miles away, I will forget everything and enjoy it when my shoulders are sore, my back is sore and my back hurts! This is actually the fun of voting!
8. Write a short essay of 100 words according to The Story of Yueyang Tower. Yueyang Tower is one of the four famous buildings in China. Today, I'm going to visit my mother, brother, sister, grandpa and grandma.
Yueyang Tower is famous for Fan Zhongyan's The Story of Yueyang Tower. One of them is very famous: worry about the world first, and then enjoy the world.
Do you know why Fan Zhongyan wrote this poem? Teng Amethyst begged him to write this letter. After rebuilding Yueyang Tower, Teng wanted someone to write an inscription for Yueyang Tower, but Fan Zhongyan had never been to Yueyang Tower, so Teng sent him a letter and a painting. So, Fan Zhongyan spent a month writing this song "Yueyang Tower".
We are going to see Yueyang Tower today, and I am very excited. I really want to know what Yueyang Tower looks like. As soon as I entered the gate, I saw the model of Yueyang Tower in Tang, Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties, and Yueyang Tower was basically rebuilt once every dynasty. Yueyang Tower in Qing Dynasty is now well preserved. It has three floors. You can see its splendid roof from a distance, some are pointed and some are rolled. We climbed to the top floor and saw that the houses around Yueyang Tower were built according to ancient customs, probably because they were close to Yueyang Tower! We also visited Dongting Lake, which is 800 miles long and the second largest freshwater lake in China. When I first saw it, I thought it was the sea!
I bought a souvenir of 18 yuan under Yueyang Tower, and asked my aunt to carve my name and the date of my visit to Yueyang Tower for me to remember when I came.
I also want to go to the Yellow Crane Tower, Wang Teng Pavilion and Penglai Pavilion to collect souvenirs from four famous buildings and visit the great rivers and mountains of the motherland!