High school students' composition evaluation 1 1, the case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in the same strain as the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings about … in a few words, which is touching.
2. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
3. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
4. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
5. The article is detailed, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.
6. Close-ups are unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.
7. This article can describe things about … in fresh and interesting language. Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece.
8. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article, and it is also the content of this article ... richer and more vivid.
9. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, which is worth learning.
10, the full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
1 1, the full text is easy to understand and interesting.
12, the full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting.
13, pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this paper.
14, the article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.
15, the article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.
16, this article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, great originality, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.
17, tell us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is unforgettable.
18, Xu Shu has a compact natural and vivid structure and a prominent natural coherence center.
19, the description language of scenery is concise and accurate, while association is the natural fusion of touching the scene.
20. Enrich the characters' language and actions, and set off their ideological quality.
2 1, the article is lyrical while narrating.
22, make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing and supplemented by metaphor personification and other techniques.
23. The little author observes and narrates in an orderly way.
24. The use of some subtle words adds a lot of interest to the article.
25. The article is elegant, beautiful, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.
26. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It is very artistic to contrast the emotions of the characters through the depiction of the environment.
27. Be brief at the beginning.
28. The language of the article is easy to understand and close to real life, which makes people feel very cordial to read.
29. This metaphor is appropriate and vivid.
30. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
3 1, the first shot is particularly attractive to readers.
32. The beginning touches people's hearts and has real feelings.
33. The beginning of the article is clear.
34. The selected articles in the novel aroused readers' desire to continue reading.
35, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.
This article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.
37 ... is both practical and contains simple and profound philosophy, which is both exciting and emotional to read.
This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
39. The full text is fluent in language and free and easy in writing, which is a relatively successful work.
40. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions and interesting reading.
4 1, the structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
42. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
43. This article narrates the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent and the level is clear, which seems to be enjoyable from beginning to end.
44. The full text has a lively rhythm and fresh language, and it is always full of humor and fun to read.
45. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and fluent, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
46. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.
47. The author is clever in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.
48. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
49. Describe ... with passion.
50. Pay attention to specific details and content.
Composition evaluation, a senior high school student, 2 1. You are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with great potential.
2. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
Sorry, the teacher didn't understand this paragraph. Would you like to explain it to the teacher again? Thank you.
Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style. what do you reckon ?
5. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and attractive. Work hard and create more glory!
6. Your article is like a slow stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
7. The style of writing is sharp, with extensive quotations and deep roots. Although the analysis of social problems is still absolute, the article is still moving with a kind of enthusiasm and frankness. Further research and thinking on history books and social commentary. I believe your article will become more mature and lasting!
8. It is wise for a teenager who is not deeply involved in the world to approach a complex society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is very casual, as if leading readers to stroll on the Yuan Ye of the mind. The disadvantage is that the discussion is slightly angular. You know, incisive arguments can make the finishing point and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will be better!
9. The writing of this article is beautiful and fresh, full of certain philosophy. It is written that "I" walked by the sea, and the sea not only gave me the enjoyment of beauty, but also caused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea has given me a space to swim, and I am immersed in life for the sea, making the sea a "person" with noble personality strength. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of beauty and is thought-provoking.
10 except for classes, school life seems dull, but this paper is good at finding out from the ordinary.
Ordinary, but also with relish: nervous morning, fighting noon, tired night, every time I chose a very interesting lens to move. The fresh and lively language vividly shows the positive mental outlook of contemporary middle school students.
1 1. This article is highly ideological and artistic, which makes people think for a long time after reading it. Clever in conception,
In contrast, the theme has deepened; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
12, the introduction of father in the article is comprehensive: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!
13, snow can be associated with the pursuit of life. Starting from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?
14, the quotation of several common sayings in the full text is just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
15, your article is very creative-complete the idea in the form of geometric proof questions. The full text is very literary!
16, the author has a strong ability to control, and the whole article is written in one go, giving people a comfortable feeling that shines at the moment!
17, as a casual feeling, your article is smart and full of wishes. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
18, you are an independent student, and you don't lack real knowledge. I quite agree with you, but it would be even more icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact.
19, this article has chosen a brand-new angle, and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
20. Such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling. This teacher really should learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
2 1, the style of writing is like a person, and your article is as simple and open-minded as yours. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
22. Words can speak, and I think the article is a reflection of your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
23. Wen Neng Yi Qing. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.
It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.
25. It is really "writing like a god". It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.
26. After reading your article, it seems that a stream flows in front of my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
27. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are a good young man who makes progress. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.
28. Reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh conception of your article. As the saying goes, "Climbing a mountain is full of emotion and watching the sea is full of meaning". You are a conscientious person in life, and you touched others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.
29. Exquisite and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom. Steady and down-to-earth, is the direction of your writing efforts in the future.
30. Careful conception and profound thinking show that you grew up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to write in the future. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.
3 1. Although writing is not your favorite, you keep writing like a snail at every step, never stopping. Your spirit is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break into your own world.
Although you can live happily in your own world, the development of society has been globalized, so you should devote yourself to collective life with a brand-new attitude to adapt to the development of society.
33. There are always many absurd stories in the life of teenagers; There are always many magical dreams in the hearts of teenagers. This essay, like a boat full of dreams, is full of the author's innocence, dreams, yearning and just beginning to mature, and sails far away.
Caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. From the article Accident, we can see that in your heart, there are not only childlike innocence, books and schools, but also endless concern for social worries. This article is full of twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.
35. The language is appropriate and romantic, and the context is smooth, showing the image of a bookworm's bosom friend. The affection between "I" and "bosom friend" is smart and elegant.
Composition evaluation, a senior high school student, 3 1. Through vivid language description, readers seem to be in a dream.
2. The article has clear clues, prominent themes and closely focuses on …
3. The article is not long, but the process is clearly described, and the activities of the characters are also described in detail, which is authentic, vivid and interesting. The full-text structure is compact and complete, and the writing is smooth. The article is consistent from beginning to end, with clear center and complete structure.
4. The article is well-founded and convincing, highlighting the personality of the characters, natural context, clear organization, coordination from beginning to end, and finally pointing to the theme and highlighting the central idea.
Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions and interesting reading. Use spoken English in daily life to make the article more natural and friendly.
6. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and it is very artistic to set off the emotions of the characters through environmental description. Miscellaneous but not chaotic, can be detailed, focusing on the end is just right, the center is clearly placed, the language is concise and profound, and it is intriguing.
7. At the beginning of the article, xx is quoted as a direct hit on the theme, which makes people shine. Later, flashbacks were used to attract people's attention, and I couldn't stop this article. Clever use of writing skills to achieve the best effect of this article is an excellent composition.
8. The article is clear in theme and rich in content, citing xx classic cases, which is convincing and can express the author's views more effectively. At the end of the topic, there is a well-founded ending echo.
9. This article imagines fantasy, which not only comes from life, but also transcends life, broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm.
10, the content before and after is not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast and not coherent enough.
1 1, the beginning of the article is too complicated, the level is unclear, the process is detailed, but the end is short and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.
12, although there is a central theme, its expression is not strong enough, untrue and empty. The narrative is simple and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
13, the selection of materials is too popular and unrepresentative, but the content of the article skillfully uses personification, which makes the image in the article have the characteristics of human behavior, thought and emotion, and adds some highlights to the article.
14, the works are ingenious in conception, concise and fluent in writing, bold and creative in imagination, novel in articles and attractive to read.
15, based on real life, with appropriate materials, very innovative, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.