Comment on the Composition of Mediocrity and Happiness
Read the following materials and write as required (60 points).
Recently, Hong Chau's "I am mediocre, I am happy" Recently, Hong Chau's "I am mediocre, I am happy" has been put on the desk by many people. Many people put them on their desks. In the book, the author describes many interesting trifles in the process of her daughter's growth, and sincerely expresses her hope that her daughter can have a normal and happy life. The author believes that pursuit is the source of pain and hope. The author thinks: "Pursuit is the source of pain, and mediocrity is the foundation of happiness. It is the foundation of happiness. "
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Write an argumentative essay on "Music". Make up your mind to write an argumentative essay on this topic. Self-determination,
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Meaning analysis of the topic 1. Clarify the proposer's propositional intention. In writing practice, some students often ignore the proposition intention of the composition. In writing practice, some students often ignore the proposition intention of the composition and just make the results according to their own wishes, which is far from the topic. Out of the requirements of the composition, the result is out of the requirements of the composition, which is too far from the point. To find out the proposition intention, we should combine the composition materials, the proposition intention, the composition materials and the relevant sentences in the materials. Use the relevant statements in the materials. The proposition intention of this composition should be-the proposition intention that candidates want to talk about should be to let candidates talk about their understanding of the relationship between mediocrity and happiness. Understand.
Second, analyze the meaning of the topic, and clarify the connotation of the topic concept.
What is mediocrity? According to the material, what is mediocrity? Combining with the materials, we can know that the meaning of "mediocrity" should be ordinary, not mediocrity. Then, the meaning should be ordinary, not mediocre. Then, why is it that "ordinary" is relative or comparative and called "ordinary"? Ordinary is relative, it can be reflected in many aspects, such as poverty can be reflected in many aspects, such as poverty is relative to wealth, humility is relative to wealth, humility is relative to nobility, humility is relative to attention, and obscurity is relative to. What is happiness? Happiness should refer to the spiritual aspect. What is happiness? Happiness should mean that the spirit is also embodied in various forms, for example, happiness in poverty, happiness in wealth, poverty and wealth.
Since the proposition intention of the composition is to let candidates talk about their understanding of the relationship between mediocrity and happiness, we can start from two angles: ① standing-happiness in mediocrity and happiness in mediocrity ② breaking-unhappiness in mediocrity and unhappiness in mediocrity.
Analysis of the meaning of the problem
Third, we should pay attention to dialectical thinking in specific writing, and pay attention to dialectical thinking in specific writing. The comparative structure reasoning effect will be stronger when discussing evidence, and the comparative structure reasoning effect will be stronger when discussing evidence. For example, there is happiness in mediocrity. For example, the part "There is happiness in mediocrity" can be written like this-even if you are poor, you will soon become rich. Music, though rich, is very painful, and so on; Mediocrity without happiness and mediocrity without happiness are partially reversed-happiness because of wealth, happiness because of wealth, pain because of poverty, and so on. Suffering from poverty, and so on.
Example 1 "Reject mediocrity" example 1 Reject mediocrity "
God sowed countless seeds for the world. Most seeds God sowed countless seeds for the world and chose flat land in the warm sunshine. Choose a flat land. In the soft sunshine, in the faint spring breeze, beautiful flowers bloom, but in the spring breeze, beautiful flowers bloom, but even the most beautiful flowers can't stand the cold wind, so the flowers are scattered. The flowers scattered because of the cold wind. Some seeds chose the cliff, so on the cliff, they chose the cliff, so on the cliff, in the crevice of the stone, they planted the above, echoing the title, inheriting and summarizing the above, echoing the title, pointing out that they are not afraid of the hardships of the environment and grow into a pine, a root, a pine and a cypress in the stone. When the climbers saw this scene, the pine and cypress showed the true colors of life! "This is life!" Pine and cypress show the true colors of life! Flowers fall because they choose mediocrity; ② Flowers fall because they choose mediocrity, which is the contrast between the two life forms. The author's preference for the comparison between the two life forms also makes them depressed, thus enjoying a comfortable life. Obviously, the latter's praise is obviously unable to face the blow of wind and rain. Pool, unable to face the blow of wind and rain.
Ancient people attached great importance to nature, so they also attached great importance to nature. They see it in endless flowers and plants, and they must get out of mediocrity and see it in endless flowers and plants, so that they can enjoy real life. Only in the war-torn Jin Dynasty can we enjoy real life. In the war-torn Jin Dynasty, most people were attached to power. But Tao Yuanming didn't, mostly attached to power. However, Tao Yuanming did not. He refused to retire from the countryside, and only then did he have the carefree feelings of "picking chrysanthemums under the hedge and retiring from the countryside", and only then did he have the mystery and expectation of the Peach Blossom Garden. Leisurely Nanshan has the mystery and expectation of Peach Blossom Garden. Yan "Li Bai refused mediocrity in the footsteps of his ancestors, so Li Bai refused mediocrity in the footsteps of his ancestors. Only with such a poet, only with such a poet, did he have the heroism of" selling all his sorrows with you ". Sad heroism in ancient times.
The ancients, born unwilling to be mediocre, cited from the front, cited from the front, Ann can destroy the eyebrows and bend the powerful, ④ "Ann can destroy the eyebrows and bend the powerful, which makes me unhappy" explains the meaning of "rejecting mediocrity". Explain the meaning of "rejecting mediocrity".
(5) The ancients did this, but how about today? The present material life has impacted the ancients. So, how was today? Look in the eyes, many people are addicted to the life of drunkenness. Seeing, many people are addicted to the life of debauchery and dogs, and live a mediocre life. When life asks them for results, they live a life of mediocrity. What can they come up with when life asks them for grades? When night falls and everything falls silent, what can they think of? When night falls and everything falls silent, will they fall into loneliness? Mediocrity is a corrosive agent. Will they be lonely? Mediocrity is a corrosive agent. Before it can corrode, it is a positive case argument, before it is a positive case argument. Now in the fifth paragraph, the human soul is only an empty shell, and the human soul is only an empty shell. This is a negative argument in busy traffic. One positive and one negative is a negative argument. One is right, and the other is wrong. It is about wandering the streets and living a meaningless life. Wandering the streets and living a meaningless life. Tighter. Tighter. 6 refuse mediocrity and be a pine tree on the top of Mount Tai. Let's reject mediocrity and be a pine tree on the top of Mount Tai. Let's end a sentence, short and pithy, short and pithy, pithy and pithy, and become a "desert boat" carrying lonely people's pursuit of ideals, and the problem naturally comes. Pets in the greenhouse. Pets in the greenhouse. 7. Reject mediocrity and let life show infinite power. Reject mediocrity and let life show infinite power.
Brief comment (50 points) Brief comment 50 points This article is entitled "Rejecting mediocrity". The title of this article is "Rejecting mediocrity". The general idea of the article is that you cannot be willing to accept a mediocre life. The general idea is that you can't be willing to accept a mediocre life. You should choose a life full of passion and challenge to realize your brilliant choice of a life full of passion and challenge. The glory of. Rejecting mediocrity, "rejecting mediocrity and letting life show infinite power" expresses this concept. Quantity "expresses such an idea. But whether the examples in the article are appropriate or not is worth thinking about. Whether this example is appropriate is worth considering. The material is saying "reject mediocrity" from beginning to end, and it is not particularly appropriate to say "reject mediocrity" instead of "happiness" from beginning to end. Not saying "happy" is not particularly suitable for the material.
Example 2 "I am mediocre, how can I be happy?" I am mediocre, how can I be happy? It is Fan Zhongyan's happiness to have fun while playing. It is Fan Zhongyan's happiness to pick chrysanthemums under the east fence and have fun. Tao Yuanming's happiness lies in "picking chrysanthemums". In the second paragraph, this group of rhetorical questions is very imposing, and in the second paragraph, this group of rhetorical questions is very imposing. "Maybe in the dictionary, leisurely seeing Nanshan is Tao Yuanming's happiness. Perhaps in the dictionary, from an affirmative rhetorical question and a negative rhetorical question, from an affirmative rhetorical question and a negative rhetorical question, people have no perfect definition of rejecting mediocre happiness. But who says mediocrity must be happy? There is no perfect definition of happiness. But who says mediocrity must be happy? Impulse. I am mediocre, I am happy, the author said: impulsive. I am mediocre, I am happy. The author said: "Pursuit is like" (2) If pursuit is the source of pain, mediocrity is the foundation of happiness. Li Taibai's pursuit is the source of pain, and mediocrity is the foundation of happiness. " That Li Taibai's talent is outstanding, Su Dongpo's talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent, talent Don't Fang Zhongyong's "silent people" deserve the greatest praise? Like?
This turning point is a bit puzzling. The clouds in Dongting, the clouds in Chibi and the apes in Sichuan are crying. This turning point is a bit puzzling. The clouds in Dongting, the clouds in Chibi and the apes in Sichuan are the happiness of Li Taibai. It is Li Taibai's happiness to worry about the world first; "Worry about the world first, worry about the world later" and "mediocrity" are not paved enough.
3 if you are alive, you must live a full life; If you live a full life, you must live a full life, which is earth-shattering and raining. Earth-shattering, living a rainy life. If you are timid and do nothing for the sake of temporary comfort, it is not true happiness. Cowardice and mediocrity are not really happiness. The whole sentence, the whole sentence, is a vigorous debate. Life should have a pursuit, and life should have lofty sentiments beyond the dust to be happy. Great pioneers of the democratic revolution can be happy. The great forerunner of the democratic revolution and patriotic Dr. Sun Yat-sen, especially Dr. Sun Yat-sen, fought for freedom and equality in China all his life, and pursued it all his life. He can be described as the leader of hundreds of millions of people in China. Does it mean that Mr. Sun has suffered all his life for pursuing freedom and equality in China? Mr. Wang has been dead for 80 years, and he is still suffering for his life? Mr. Wang has been dead for eighty years, but the words of his predecessors are still there: the words of life are still there: "I have devoted myself to the national revolution for forty years."
In 2000, its aim was to seek freedom and equality in China. Climbing Four aims at seeking freedom and equality in China. Ten years of experience, ten years of experience, I know that to achieve this goal, we must arouse people to follow Sun Yat-sen's example and give positive help, which shows that people should unite with the nations that treat me equally in the world, and the nations and people who treat me equally in the world should transcend mediocrity and pursue something; When beyond mediocrity, pursue something; You can also go beyond struggle! Fight! "If Mr Facing foreign invasion and willing to pursue narrow, happy for others. Narrow pursuit for oneself, happiness for others. Mediocrity, not asking for help from the country, mediocrity, not asking for help from the country, then history will not give us the opportunity to admire Mr., history will not give us the opportunity to admire Mr., it will not shock our hearts, and he will not be deeply happy about it. The children are shocked at heart, and he will not be deeply happy about it.
(4) mediocrity, what happiness is there? Life is short and mediocre, what happiness is there? Another set of complete sentences fills readers with lofty sentiments. Another set of complete sentences fills readers with lofty sentiments. ? Heart is precious, how can I be mediocre and accomplish nothing? And precious, how can I be mediocre, dreaming in nothingness, so that my soul will not be tired, dreaming in it, so that my soul will not be tired, and the pace is vigorous and ambitious, with great ambition and strength; Only when you have desire and extraordinary ambition can you get real happiness. My hero is Ling, and he can get real happiness. A good man has Ling Yunzhi, and a man should be superior. To work hard for your dreams, a gentleman should be superior. Work hard for the dream, quote arguments, quote arguments, and echo the last quotation of Li Bai. Seek and struggle. Accumulate blood and express the great cause of the future. Seek and struggle. Full of blood, express the great cause of the future through Li Taibai's lofty sentiments of "laughing at the sky and going out", (5) through Li Taibai's "laughing at the sky and going out, is our generation an Artemisia?" Taking advantage of the pride that "the first generation is Artemisia"; Make use of the talent of "cranes in the clear sky row clouds and lead poems to Bixiao", and lead poems to Bixiao when they row clouds ". Fight for a better tomorrow, spur it, fight for a better tomorrow, truly get rid of mediocrity and enjoy the prosperity of the world. Music transcends mediocrity and enjoys the prosperity of the world.
Comment (56 points) Comment 56 points This article jumped out from the introduction of "I am mediocre, I am happy", put forward the topic of "mediocrity, how to be happy" and criticized the topic of "how to be happy". "Pursuit is the source of pain, the source of pain, and mediocrity is the basis of happiness". It is proposed that there is a dream in your heart, work hard for it, have a dream in your heart and work hard for it, and you will be truly happy and truly detached from mediocrity. Give powerful examples and quote this view appropriately. The examples are powerful and convincing. Body, enhance persuasiveness.
Better topic: better topic: mediocre people are happy because of mediocrity. I am mediocre, I am mediocre, I am happy and have mediocre habits, and I enjoy being a happy mediocre person. Thank mediocrity and refuse mediocrity. Can I be happy?