Homework on April 22nd
1. Organize materials to form an overall understanding of the characters.
The materials I have collected at present are not enough, and my overall understanding of Zeng Guofan has not yet formed.
It's all fragments:
Why do you want to watch the biography of Zeng Guofan?
The headmaster said, "Because of Zeng Guofan's direction in dealing with people, the values he upholds are exactly what we should adhere to as writers."
We should learn from Lao Zeng's book, such as his way of dealing with people, his values, his spirit of fighting without losing, and his "clumsiness":
"He never beat around the bush in his life, did not take shortcuts, and always did it in the most clumsy and practical way. Trickle accumulation, dripping water wears away the stone, pursuing solid and thorough, step by step. He pays attention to "sincerity" in his life. Everyone is fake. I am sincere and don't play with my mind. He led the troops to pay attention to "fighting hard in a down-to-earth manner", never relying on clever tricks, only relying on perseverance and steadfastness to the end. This way is like "the epee has no front". The surface looks dull, but it is actually sharp. Just like the Eighteen Dragons of Guo Jing, on the surface, they are simple and clumsy, but in fact they are powerful and invincible. This is the secret of Zeng Guofan's success in his life, and it is also the truth that he often confides to others. "
Zhang Hongjie, the author of the Biography of Zeng Guofan, wrote an essay "Anatomy of Zeng Guofan" on 1997. His doctoral thesis and postdoctoral thesis are all about Zeng Guofan's economic life. In the past twenty years, Zeng Guofan is the most famous figure in his works. He wrote more than one million words and published five books about Zeng Guofan.
He collected a large number of research materials and achievements about Zeng Guofan, Xiang Jun and the political and social history of the late Qing Dynasty, and completed the interpretation of Zeng Guofan block by block. Finally finished this biography of Zeng Guofan.
I admire the author's concentration, from which I realize that to write a good character, a book is not a one-off event, it needs a lot of reading and accumulation, and then insist on doing one thing well.
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Reading allows us to chat with great people, stand on the shoulders of our predecessors, learn lessons, sum up experience, and establish and improve our self-awareness.
Reading a good book, even if you can't finish reading an excellent article, can make people grow up in the process of reading and have unlimited possibilities.
A person who insists on learning will change his world outlook, improve his literacy, mind and pattern, and make his life plan more and more clear.
I like reading and writing, because many of my inner pains can be released and alleviated in the process of writing.
2. Try to write the beginning, don't improve, just consider the material and write it out.
Yesterday, Mr. Dan explained to us 12 common beginnings.
On the first three elements of Phoenix: attraction, simplicity and viewpoint (what is it)
At the beginning of writing characters in new media articles, we should do the following:
Attracting readers, drawing characters, and throwing out opinions are simple and not complicated.
Next, our task is to apply theory to writing and start writing.
At the beginning, the most important thing is to consider the materials, the overall situation and the overall framework. It starts with the phoenix head. We can't put a sparrow's body down there. It doesn't seem appropriate.
When I was writing Ma Li San, I started with a story. When I revised it, I thought my opening was not exciting enough, so I changed it. As a result, Mr. Dan told me that I still used the first opening, and the second opening was not appropriate. Although it is wonderful, it has nothing to do with the theme.
3. Write down the current difficulties in writing. Why?
My dilemma now is that after Mr. Dan gave me suggestions for revision, I knew the direction of revision and how to change it, but I was unable to write.
The reason is that my knowledge reserve and vocabulary are not enough, and the ideas in my mind can't be turned into words, and I can't find the right language to express them.
Solution: Read more books, recite more, write more and repeat in your own words.
The fourth assignment, I don't know what the teacher means.
I think, let's write an article called "Forgotten Spring".
To practice taking pictures and improve the level of picture matching?
Why is it a description within 100 words?
To prevent wordiness, is it simple or not?
I don't want to write a thesis, but I still like taking pictures. Put one in your hand and hand in your homework.
In April, the world is full of wheat straw. In April, Spring Festival, cherry blossoms and peach blossoms have all withered. At that time, Bai Yutang appeared quietly, piece by piece, with great momentum! This is not a unique program, but a group of people, which amazes me!
If white clouds are the wings of the sky, then flowers are the eyes of the earth. ...
Is it too much? I'm an empty talker without a theme.
I seem to hear the headmaster drinking on my head: "What do you want to say? You give me a summary! "
Ha ha ha, I don't know what I want to express. I just want to talk. I'm leaving.
However, although I have many shortcomings, I also have the advantage that I can correct my mistakes.
Being scolded by the headmaster, I dare not be wordy in front of him, and my speech has become organized. I even listed 123. ...