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Answer: analysis: writing guidance. Book review is an article that analyzes and comments on poetry, drama, movies and even artistic music works. It is usually called book review or drama review, film review and so on. Focus on the ideological content, material selection structure, artistic techniques, language characteristics and aesthetic value of the works. You can comment on a certain point, a certain side, or make a complete and systematic comment in many aspects. Book review is not the same as reading it. Post-reading feeling is the subjective feeling after reading an article, mainly "feeling". Book review is an objective evaluation of articles, focusing on "evaluation". Even in the book review, you can write your own feelings, but you can still evaluate the article by reading it, and you can also write some comments on it, but that is to draw out your own feelings. Taking the Lost Street Pavilion as an example, if you want to comment on the article, you can discuss the following titles from different aspects: The Lost Street Pavilion's Pride goes before a fall-profound ideological connotation, focusing on ideological content, two vivid artistic images, focusing on characterization, and From Masu and San Xiao to Kongming, crying three times-talking about comparative art, focusing on characterization. All these should be deducted from the work itself for analysis and evaluation. The more objective and accurate, the deeper the excavation, the better. Writing book reviews should focus on "feelings" and combine narrative and discussion. When writing book reviews, we should pay attention to "comments", combine narration with discussion, and avoid becoming abbreviations and retelling of the original text. Generally, you can introduce the content and source of the original text in a very general way at the beginning, then put forward your own views and make a clear-cut positive or negative evaluation. Then, taking my own point of view as the key link, I cite the contents, materials and language in the original text as the basis for analysis to demonstrate my own point of view. If you don't have your own judgment on the right or wrong of the original text and just repeat it blindly, it will become a summary of the content or a story, and it can't be called a book review. The most common mistakes in learning to write book reviews are empty judgments, abuse of rhetoric, profound themes, vivid images, fascinating language, etc., which are piled up in articles at will and are unconvincing. It is necessary to make a concrete analysis: where the thought is profound, how can the characters see clearly ... analyze the article and nail it with your own point of view. Of course, this first requires the author to have strong reading and analysis skills. It is difficult for a novice to write a book review for a long time, and it is not appropriate to make a comprehensive evaluation of it, so it is most likely to be vague, or even inconsistent. I'd rather open my mouth a little and comment on a person, a scene, a technique and an idea in the article, so it's easier to write more concretely and profoundly with concentrated brushwork. Especially for newspapers and periodicals, it is not appropriate to cover everything and become a simple generalization. It is more desirable to have some new ideas and unique opinions, even if there is only one opinion. Example: Clear water gives birth to hibiscus and natural carving —— Comment on the artistic style of Gui Youguang's famous Ji Xiang Xuan Paper in Ming Dynasty. The tone of the full text is kind and sad, and there is a lonely and sad atmosphere between the lines, full of uncontrollable feelings. It is very touching to read, but the full text is only over 800 words, and the seemingly insignificant daily chores are chosen in simple words that are not carved. It can be said that "clear water produces hibiscus, and natural carving is exhausted." I am deeply attached to Xiang, a "century-old house" and his deceased relatives for three generations. However, in the author's pen, this kind of cordial memory and lingering homesickness did not resort to the feelings of tumbling over the river, nor did it rely on vigorous language and action to render. As if telling a story that is unforgettable without thinking, the author truly and flatly tells the story of "how happy and sad" in the string of sweetness connected by incense, and outlines some touching details of life, but the vivid characters are vividly on the paper, and readers clearly feel the endless feelings and full sadness rushing out of the author's heart. The most vivid description of the maternal love of the old nanny in the article is: "The room is connected with the western boudoir, and it tastes at first." Every time Yu said, "Somewhere, my mother is here." You said,' Your sister was crying in my arms, and your mother knocked on the door with her finger and said,' Is your son cold? Want to eat? I responded outside the board meeting. Before I finished, I cried, and so did I. "There is no tedious portrait description, no detailed action description, only honest" objective "introduction, but a silent and loving mother image is extremely full in front of readers. Speaking of "cold children? "Do you want to eat?" In a word, the characters are vividly portrayed, which can be described as "in a word, nature is eternal and luxury is exhausted." Why use a knife to cut simple feelings? What other words in the world can be more touching than the natural maternal love in spring? When I read this, a warm current came to my face, and two lines of pure tears slipped quietly. No wonder I cried. I cried, too. The memory of my grandmother in the article is only a fragment of my daily life: "I was in the reading room, and one day, my mother said to me,' Son, long time no see, why are you here silently?" "Instead of walking, he closed the door with his hand and said to himself,' My family's study has been ineffective for a long time, but I can wait for my son to succeed!' After a while, he held an elephant in his hand and said, "This is the way for my ancestors to go to North Korea. You should use it one day!" " Looking at the ruins, it seems like yesterday, and people can't control the trombone. "A sentence of warm and affectionate family talk, a sentence of ardent blessing and expectation, makes readers seem to see the figure of a loving grandmother" closing the door "and hear her love words." Looking at the Ruins tells people how to avoid trombone control. At the end of the article, the memory of his dead wife is even more lamentable and sobbing. The author didn't notice the tenderness in the boudoir and the charming voice of his wife. Instead, it tells the story of my dead wife "coming to the porch to ask me about the past, or learning books from a few books", and relayed the words of her sisters "I heard that my sister has a cabinet. What is a cabinet? "A few strokes have vividly described the touching feelings of like-minded, loving and tender feelings between husband and wife. But there was a lot of fun in the past. This is a good time to recall and look back on the past, making people "want to cry without tears first." At the end of the article, the phrase "The imperial court had lute material, and my wife planted it herself when she died, and now it is graceful as a cover" even reveals the sadness of "things died in human life" and the sadness of "I don't know how many people went to court, but old flowers came in spring". Readers can clearly hear the sigh of "long illness and boredom" and "I am lying in an empty bed listening to the rain from the south window, who will burn the midnight oil to mend my clothes"; Obviously, when he rebuilt Nanting, he was "heartbroken everywhere, even if he went on strike." In this sentence alone, the sadness of "the past is like smoke and dreams are hard to find" and the desolation of "who to talk to, although there are thousands of customs" are all in the air, which is memorable. As Wang Xijue said: "I didn't mean to be touching, but I was full of joy." This is the characteristic of Gui Youguang's prose. This feature has been fully expressed in Xiang, and the artistic power of "clear water produces hibiscus, natural carving" runs through. When commenting on "it's fun to travel after my husband dies", the author appreciates the artistic style of "auspicious and mysterious" and comments on its characteristics. The greatest feature of the article is that it takes "comment" as the center, quotes serve "comment", and "quote" and "comment" combine with nature and are integrated. Not "oil is oil, water is water". The author has a wide range of knowledge and an appropriate introduction.