First, starting from the relatively complete formation process of materials, take the materials at a certain stage of the formation process, that is, the longitudinal section method.
Second, choose the material of one side from the whole or the many sides that exist side by side in the whole, that is, the cross-sectional method.
Third, the combination of vertical section method and horizontal section method.
Whether it is local auxiliary material or global core material, the above three methods can be used to intercept the material. But the interception method is different from the general topic selection. Because the general topic is determined before entering the conception process, and the interception method only enters the conception stage, after refining and determining the theme, what range of materials are selected to reflect which theme, but this method further narrows the topic and its original theme has not changed.
2. How to use the five-paragraph method of composition 1 Basic structure of five-stage method
The structure of the "five-segment method" model is various, mainly including the following:
1, subtitle type. The full text is divided into three subheadings, each with an angle.
2. Chapter style. The full text is divided into three chapters, marked with "one", "two" and "three".
3. staggered. The full text is divided into three sections, one line between each section.
4. Poetry leads. Three poems lead to three parts.
5. Three-stage linkage. There are no obvious signs, but there are umbrella words at the beginning of the paragraph or closing words and transitional words at the end of the paragraph. This makes the hierarchy very clear.
Second, the whole story of the "five-paragraph method" composition
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"Five-paragraph method" composition is also a variety of ways to expand, generally speaking, there are the following:
(1) analogy method, that is, the first paragraph leads to the theme of the full text through analogy. This form is generally used by natural phenomena, which leads to social phenomena.
(2) Metaphorical point method. In other words, the first paragraph uses wonderful metaphors, preferably parallelism or metaphors, to point out the main idea. This form can change from reality to emptiness, adding literary talent.
(3) Discuss the topic method, that is, directly point to the topic with a wonderful discussion at the beginning. Generally speaking, this argument must be incisive and powerful.
(4) Inscription method, that is, designing a wonderful inscription, using accurate language to buckle the topic and lead to the text. In this way, we must pay attention to the language of the inscription.
(5) Situation introduction method, that is, first set a situation, and then naturally expand by this specific situation, leading to the text. This method is generally to write that you are triggered by the outside world, and then trigger a series of associations. This method has its own advantages in showing literary talent.
(6) Cut to the chase, that is, directly enter the main part of the article, without too much entanglement at the beginning.
Step 2: the ending
There are various methods at the end of the article. As far as the "five-paragraph style" is concerned, the generalization method can generally close the beam, that is, the three words that make the finishing point can be summarized and sublimated. Of course, in order to make the leopard tail strong, we can do some processing. We can refer to examples and find some concrete methods and shortcuts.
Third, the main body of the "five-paragraph composition"
The main body of the "five-paragraph method" composition consists of "three angles" and "three sentences that make the finishing point". These three angles are the concrete development of the topic, and these three sentences are a concise summary of these three angles.
Angle segmentation
Finding the right three angles and summarizing these three sentences is the key to the success of the "five-paragraph method" composition. As long as we can find these three angles, our thinking will suddenly penetrate and it is not difficult to write.
The way of angle segmentation is very flexible and varies from text to text. This is a process of concretizing and clarifying the theme. When segmenting, we can sometimes start with the concept, divide it into several sides first, and then associate relevant examples. But sometimes, when the idea is not easy to open, we can also associate relevant examples first, and then consciously analyze it from different angles, so as to find three suitable angles. There are two specific segmentation methods:
(1) plane segmentation
That is to think about the topic from one level and find out its different aspects. At this time, these three angles are juxtaposed. This is the most commonly used method of this composition mode, and the above example can be said to be typical in this respect.
(2) Vertical segmentation
That is to think about the topic from different levels, and the three parts are in-depth step by step. At this time, these three angles are progressive or inherited. If sometimes you can't open your mind and explore from three levels, you can consider dividing an angle into positive and negative sides, which becomes "three"
3. Interception composition 400 aunt picked up her sleeves and rolled up her trouser legs.
She moved slowly in the stream, raised her left foot slightly, took a small step forward, and dragged her right foot forward slowly, as if wearing a thousand-pound shoe. She twisted her hat, hunched her back, lowered her head, narrowed her eyes, and her hands seemed to be holding something.
At this time, she stopped, stopped looking around, stared at a place on the right, and suddenly reached into the water with a small fish in her hand. She picked up chopsticks, reached for brightly colored dishes, gently picked up a piece, put her left hand under the chopsticks, and followed them carefully.
The veins stood out suddenly, and the veins stood out for a while. She put the dish in her mouth carefully and tasted it carefully.
Grandma stretched out her right foot and slipped into the shoe. Her muscular hands clung to the door frame and gently lifted her left foot. The tight foot is carefully inserted into the shoe mouth, and then plunged into it. Then she stomped a few times to make her feet comfortable and went out contentedly. 4, near, closer, the team leader finally came to his side, like a Taishan standing in front of him, shouting: "Hand in homework, hand in homework!" He smiled "hey hey", his expression was so funny and mysterious. Suddenly, he plunged into it, broke away from the leader's arm like a slippery loach, and his feet ran away like oil.
There is an old woman at the crossroads, with a slight hunchback and a fat figure, walking hard on the empty road with an umbrella.
4. What is the beauty of writing a composition by interpolation? hbjbjbnnnnnnnnnnnnjhuijbhu
The classroom was quiet, and the wind and rain outside the window made the teacher's speech sound a little sad. The door rang twice and thought it was raining. It was a long time before I thought it was a person. The teacher opened the door. As the door opened, a thin unkempt head came in. I paused and stood up: "Dad!" When my father saw me, he grinned and bowed deeply to the teacher: "Sorry! Excuse me! " The rainy day in March makes people tremble with cold. Seeing my father's wet clothes, I felt pity and resentment: "What are you doing here on a rainy day!" " ""If it rains, don't delay your work, take a ride, and don't charge money ... Hehe. " Father smiled shyly. He is still worried about his vegetable garden. I'm a little tired of his haggling over every ounce. Once, I went into a restaurant with him, and he only bought two very cheap dishes anyway. After eating, he ate a plate of fish left at the same table with relish in full view. I just feel ashamed. When I came to the dormitory, my father took out an old-fashioned cotton-padded coat. Oh, my God! I have two sweaters, a sweater and a leather jacket, which is enough. "The night before, I dreamed that your hand was burned. Your mother said she was afraid that you would catch a cold. Hey hey. "I was speechless. My retired parents help me calculate at home every day. A tree died in front of the door, a crow crowed, and everyone came to see me once. Once I said, "What if I don't pass the exam? My father's eyes suddenly dimmed: "There is nothing I can do. I am afraid that you will be bullied in the future. " Looking at his back, which has become bent after decades of poverty and criticism, I know the meaning of this sentence. His hand is still in the homemade canvas bag. After a while, he took out a plastic bag of oranges: "Hey, there are 23 * * *, please count them. I immediately understood that he had been bargaining with others for a long time before buying it at the fruit stand. I didn't count it twice, so I'm too lazy to count it again. As the exam approaches, my father knows that I am very depressed. Father curled up in the rainy night and walked into the wind and rain step by step. A gust of wind blew, and his thin, bent figure trembled, just like a statue carved from the roots of a dead tree, solidified on the stormy path in front of my eyes. My heart suddenly couldn't help shivering. Oh, this is my father, a statue that has been eroded by wind and rain for 67 years! Comments: This article vividly depicts the image of a father who takes good care of his son, which naturally reminds us of our own father and thousands of such fathers around Qian Qian. In the process of depicting the father's image, the author used two interpolation. First, it appears in the fifth paragraph, describing a time when the father and son went to a restaurant for dinner. The father bought two extremely cheap dishes anyway and ate the fish left at the same table, which supplemented his father's haggle over every ounce. This episode highlights the father's frugality, describes the hardships of his father's life and the difficulties of training his son to go to school. Another parenthesis in the seventh paragraph is that my father gave me a cotton-padded jacket, which reminded me of my father's concern for me all the time. A tree died, a crow crowed, and they all came to see me once, which fully showed how much my father cared for me. Through a conversation with his father about his studies, this paper reveals the reasons why his father expects his son to succeed in his studies. These two interludes enrich the content of the article, increase the content of the article, and well supplement the analysis of "Father's Love Answers": interludes are to help the development of the plot or the characterization of the characters. In the process of narrating the central event, narrative clues are temporarily interrupted and a narrative method related to the main plot is inserted. For example, "the trust of comrades" is to show that Mr. Lu Xun is the "most credible comrade". Write the secret letters, manuscripts and reading letters that Mr. Lu Xun received from Fang Zhimin first, then insert the manuscripts and secret letters entrusted to Mr. Lu Xun after Mr. Fang Zhimin was arrested and imprisoned, and then write how Mr. Lu Xun treasured the secret letters and manuscripts and handed them over to the CPC Central Committee according to the sequence of events. Insertion is a common way in narration. In the process of narrating the main plot or central event, the author temporarily interrupts the narrative clue, does not insert another story fragment or event in chronological order, and makes necessary bedding, care, supplement and explanation for the main plot or central event, so as to make the plot more complete, the structure more rigorous and the content more substantial. The original narrative answer will be added after insertion. From the content, there are the following common forms: (1) pursuit. Tracing back to the source is to recall the past, help readers find out the cause of things, or describe the plot retroactively. For example, in Lu Xun's Hometown, when "I" and "Mother" talked about the leap soil, a friendship fragment between the young leap soil and "I" was inserted to show that due to too much hardship, pain and mental destruction, the leap soil has injected a strict concept of hierarchy into its mind and acquiesced in the insurmountable boundaries between childhood partners. It not only makes the image of moistening the soil more vivid, but also deepens the theme. (2) Supplementary narrative. Supplementary narrative is a supplement to situations and events, which generally does not occur in the original plot, but only supplements the deficiency of the original narrative and enriches the narrative content. (3) Reverse narration. Retrospective narration means that the inserted narrative is retrograde, that is, from near to far, from today to ancient times. Interpolation method: (1) The author directly narrates, introduces and explains, or interpolates through what the characters see, hear, feel and experience in the works; (2) Interpolation through the characters themselves or other people's languages (such as dialogues and monologues). (3) By interpolating the psychological activities of characters such as memory, missing and imagination, we should proceed from reality and not just pursue formal changes and use them indiscriminately. The content of interpolation is only related to the original narrative but cannot be connected, and the connection becomes flashback. Interpolation is not the center of narrative, but a segment that serves the center. Moreover, the connection between front and back should be natural and the boundaries should be clear. After the narrative is finished, we should return to the original narrative clue, and don't break away from the original narrative clue and develop it into another clue, let alone rock the boat and become a free part of the article. Don't write flashbacks.
5. Write the growth path of 400 words in the growth composition by means of lens splicing.
The road to growth is bumpy and smooth. Many things in the rough need your efforts, and friends and relatives in the flat will give you some help. The road to growth is monotonous and colorful. Monotonia spends most of her time studying, but Colorful still has time to do her own thing. The road to growth is boring and interesting. Boring, I have to do a lot of things I don't want to do, and I am interested in doing what I want to do when my parents are away.
The first morning star when I was growing up was my mother, who brought me to this strange world and helped me get familiar with it. It was my mother who taught me to walk and let me have fun with my feet; It was my mother who taught me to speak, so that I could express my thoughts better. It was my mother who taught me to read and let me discover the history of words; It was my mother who taught me to read and let me discover the long and interesting history of China. The second morning star is my first teacher, who brought me into the ocean of knowledge and let me know the fun of learning; Bring me into the river of books and let me understand that reading is an interesting thing; It brought me into the stream of my classmates and made me gain pure friendship.
It is inevitable to stumble on the road of growth. I remember once, I went to an essay contest with confidence. I thought it must be the first prize, but I didn't expect to get an excellent certificate because of my hard work. I am disappointed, but failure is the mother of success. In order to strive for this tone, I studied the composition book hard, often took part in composition classes, actively signed up for an composition competition, and finally entered the final in an composition competition, although I don't know the result yet.
Let's work together on the road of growth.
6. Writing method of composition-what does "breaking the topic" mean? Hello! The topic was originally the first part of the eight-part essay, and the essence of the topic was broken in one or two sentences.
We no longer write eight-part essay, but just borrow it, which generally refers to the beginning of the article. When articles contend together, a good beginning is often referred to as "Phoenix Head", and some people even exaggerate: "The beginning is great, and the article is half."
So, how can we write a good beginning? It is important to have a sense of innovation. Breaking the topic, being innovative and extraordinary will leave a good first impression on readers, thus greatly increasing the bright color of the article.
Here are three innovative problem-solving methods-first, the famous saying method: this is a problem-solving method that imitates a sentence according to a famous saying and then takes it as the core to make the opening part innovative. The steps are: 1. Choose a famous saying related to the topic or theme, including idioms, proverbs, aphorisms, poems, famous sayings, etc.
2. According to the writing content, change some words in the original sentence to make them new. 3. When writing, you should quote the original words first and then turn them into new sentences; Then explain, and finally ask questions.
[Example] A poem says, "Wan Muchun is ahead of the sick tree." That's true, but I want to say, "there is still spring at the root of the old tree."
The old tree died, leaving different forms and strange roots. People dig out these roots, give full play to their imagination according to the general shape, and process them into major works of art with images, artistic conception and beautiful enjoyment.
This is the art of root carving. Root carving created the second youth of trees.
I like root carving, which brings me endless fun. (Root Carving Music) This is the beginning of root carving music, and the method of "solving problems with famous sayings" is innovative.
First, the author quotes the famous poem "Wan Muchun in front of a sick tree" by Liu Yuxi, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, and then explains the new poem according to the content of the composition, so that readers can understand the reasons, and finally skillfully places and topics. Touching Tang poetry is an innovation. It is interesting and amazing to use the touched poems to illustrate the art of root carving.
Second, the voice of the problem: this is a problem-solving method that gives readers a strong impression by constructing wonderful paragraphs with the help of some expressive techniques. The steps are: 1. Choose materials related to the topic or theme as the beginning of the article, and try to be typical and fresh enough to arouse readers' interest.
2. Determine the parts to be highlighted in the material, and make use of the characteristics of the material according to the needs of conception. 3. When writing, use expressions as much as possible to strengthen the artistry of the whole paragraph.
[Example] It exploded! It is neither a Soviet nuclear bomb nor an American hydrogen bomb, but it has amazing power, exploding over Seoul and echoing in every corner of the world. In an instant, every molecule in the air is shaking, no less than the smoke spread of mushroom clouds over Hiroshima.
"0:3" China women's volleyball team lost! ("I hope to explode again") It is very artistic to start with "grabbing the sound". The first natural section captures the shock brought by the defeat of the women's volleyball team to the Chinese people, and divides the "explosion" into sections, which is amazing.
The power of the second "explosion" is even more shocking. The third paragraph introduces the central event: "0:3" China women's volleyball team lost! At this point, the author has not yet started the discussion, but the sound of explosion has "town" the readers first.
Look up at the topic: "I hope to explode again", who doesn't "hope" to see it! Third, the alienation method of writing style: the expression of writing style is deliberately changed here, which makes the writing style change, thus giving people a new sense of doubt. For example, the beginning of an argumentative essay is written in a lyrical style; Narrative, and then send an incisive exposition to lead to the following; As for the explanatory text, the opening or narrative or argumentative text, or descriptive or lyrical text, so as not to be easy to understand.
The application of this problem-solving method requires higher language, which gives people a lively, smooth, elegant and concise aesthetic feeling. It is a pleasant thing to see chrysanthemums in September. In the autumn wind, when flowers bloom, suddenly seeing a pot or a cluster of blooming chrysanthemums and smelling a ray of elegant fragrance in the clear air can really make people feel a kind of vitality from the bottom of their hearts.
(The heavier the frost, the thicker the color.) This is the beginning of an expository article, which uses the method of "alienation of style" to give people a sense of beauty. The author avoids plain narration and introduces "snow-filled" and "elegant" chrysanthemums in a lyrical style under the background of "autumn wind", expressing the feelings of "joy" and "vitality". Beautiful writing arouses readers' love for chrysanthemums, and thus arouses their desire to continue reading to learn more about chrysanthemums, which is really beyond the reach of conventional writing.
Of course, problem-solving methods and innovative methods are far more than these three, which need to be discovered in writing practice. However, what needs to be emphasized here is that the innovation of topic-breaking is only a partial change, so we should obey the needs of full-text writing and resolutely oppose the wrong tendency of giving up the basics.