-I want to strengthen myself.

"After the storm, there are the most beautiful rainbows, the most dazzling diamonds in the cooled lava, and the most mellow wine in the jar that has been dusty for thousands of years." "The sun is always after the storm ..."

Jade does not polish beauty, and people do not polish it. Hone yourself, cultivate yourself in tempering, reshape yourself in tempering, and maximize the value of life. Life is tempered everywhere. What we have to do is not to decide to give up in tempering, but to learn to be self-reliant in tempering.

These two days, I helped my mother sort out the old newspaper, and I came across a news story: 1 1 years ago, a rural family in Henan suffered a major change: her father suddenly suffered from intermittent mental illness, and her grief-stricken mother left without saying goodbye. There is also a younger brother and an abandoned baby who was picked up by his father after illness. The burden of this family fell on the eldest son, Hong Zhanhui, who was only 12 years old.

So, 1 1 year after year, while studying, Hong Zhanhui overcame unimaginable difficulties, took care of his father who was often ill, and raised his sister ... During this period, he also wavered and tried to escape, but a responsibility finally made him "just walk silently and unwilling to give up". He started to work, started a small business, saved money for the whole family, refused donations from others many times, and insisted on supporting his family with the money he earned ... Isn't this Hong Zhanhui's constant self-improvement? This is a good example of learning to stand on your own feet through tempering.

Self-improvement is the mother of luck. If life is a play, then tempering is the soul of the play. What you temper is all kinds of disappointments in life, such as study, work and so on. For some people who can't stand the test, without the tempering of life, they will be very helpless and depressed when they encounter these things; On the contrary, for a person who often hons himself and has a strong will, he will stand up from adversity and rush out in prosperity!

"It takes time and patience to hone yourself. To hone yourself, you need to be able to withstand loneliness and loneliness. Hone yourself and be fearless of the difficulties in life. Hone yourself and overcome your inertia and selfishness. " Indeed, even an eagle will only be vigorous after the baptism of the storm; No matter how big the tree is, it will go through the sun and rain, and people will thrive when they are trampled. In today's world, that kind of famous great man is not tempered, difficult to get along with, or in adversity? Napoleon once said: Self-improvement, like honor, is an island without a beach.

Honing is not only a sentence, but also a journey that everyone must take on the road of life. But who can go on after this journey depends on your one percent luck and ninety-nine percent luck.

The more the brain is honed, the more flexible it is, and the more thoroughly it is honed; The more honed and developed the limbs, the more determined the will. Only a tempered life can lead a full life, and only a tempered youth can be more brilliant.

Exercise is neither too easy nor too painful. It is up to you to decide whether to give up or learn to stand on your own feet in the process of tempering. But you have to remember: although one success does not mean eternal success, a good beginning is half the battle; On the contrary, if you can't stand the blow and lose to yourself once, you may lose to yourself forever. You know: it is difficult for smooth sailing people to achieve extraordinary results; There is no skill to beat others except self-reproach, and there is no skill to beat others except self-improvement.

Honing is a precious wealth of life, and self-improvement is a witness to this precious life course. Life is training ―― everyone should strive for self-improvement!

2. Write a composition according to the materials. The composition of the mid-term exam questions in senior three Chinese is a composition aimed at materials.

Our correspondent expects this: God convened a meeting to understand how animals have been used since they were given wings. The eagle said, "I fly in the sky with my wings." At this height, all the prey can't escape my eyes, so I live a carefree life. "

The ostrich said, "I run in the desert with my legs, but my wings have been useless." This has become a heavy burden for me. " Penguin said, "I turned my wings into fins, which enabled me to move freely in the depths of the ocean like a fish."

God suddenly found a man sitting on the scene and asked strangely, "What are you doing here without wings?" People say, "God, although you didn't give me wings, my soul can fly. He took me to places that I couldn't reach under any steps. " Hearing this, God was sad for a long time.

In fact, what "that man" said also inspired us all a lot. Faced with such a material, how should we write a composition for it? I think that writing a good material composition should pay attention to the following four points: first, choose a good angle to set the topic.

First of all, we should read the material carefully and summarize the writable angle from it. From the words of "that man" in the material, we can sum up the following angles: 1, let the wings of the soul fly, 2, do not rely on the gifts of others, 3, do not complain about God's injustice, and 4, God is fair.

From the same wings, different animals have different uses, which can be summarized as follows: 5. The road is made by people. Our destiny is in our own hands. You can also talk about the idea that "eagles, ostriches and penguins" adapt to the environment and survive and develop in harsh environments.

Then choose the most relevant and familiar content to write from multiple angles, so that it will be handy to write. Ji Min's essay "Flying with the Wings of the Mind" draws up an eye-catching and vivid topic.

Second, the structural arrangement should be reasonable. The structure of material composition should be composed of at least three parts.

That is to say, look at the materials to summarize the arguments, combine the actual analysis of the arguments, and summarize the full text to emphasize the views. The reading part should be concise and clear, and it is forbidden to copy the original text.

Connecting with the actual part is the focus of the full text, so it should be written in detail. Summarize the full text at the end, taking into account the materials and topics, and be concise.

Third, use rhetoric to express beauty. A good article should not only have a correct point of view and a reasonable structure, but also have beautiful language.

Using metaphors in an article will make it more attractive. The use of personification in the article will make the language club lively, interesting and full of vitality.

The use of parallelism in the article will make the article more verve. A rhetorical article, carefully chosen words, will add a lot of bright colors to the article.

Fourth, words should be infectious. As the saying goes, writing is like a person.

A person's kindness, cruelty, humility, arrogance, elegance and rudeness will all be shown in his articles. Do you want your article to infect people with kindness, humility and elegance? Then don't write questions with vicious, arrogant and rude meanings in your article.

After reading a composition with neat copying and fluent sentences, people will think that the author is a serious and responsible person. The marking teacher will always give you extra points.

For an article full of typos and scribbles, it is natural to treat it coldly and even be scolded. Whether the writing style is infectious and whether the copying is neat is also a very important part of the exam composition.

The composition of senior high school entrance examination can be divided into two categories: one is propositional composition, including full propositional composition and semi-propositional composition; The second is to write a composition based on materials, including topic composition, reading composition and picture composition (topics, articles and pictures are all materials). The characteristic of writing materials is that candidates read the materials first, and then write their own compositions according to the materials.

Writing materials is the highlight of the composition of the senior high school entrance examination over the years, so it is the focus of composition review; When candidates do this kind of composition in previous years, it is easy to deviate from the topic, so it is also the difficulty of composition review. The key and difficult points have been broken, and other types of compositions will be solved easily.

How to write a composition for the material? The first step is to accurately grasp the main idea of the material. This is a step and the most critical step in writing this kind of composition.

In previous years, it was easy for candidates to digress from this kind of composition because they didn't accurately grasp the main idea of the material. So, how to accurately grasp the main idea of the material? Here are some easy-to-master methods.

1. Pay attention to the title of the material (article) (if any). In some articles, the title is the theme of the article.

2. Pay attention to the beginning of the material (article), and some articles point out the center of the article at the beginning. 3. Pay attention to the end of the material (article), and more articles point to the end.

4. Pay attention to the lyric sentences in the materials (articles). The author often points out the center of the article by discussing the lyric period in the article.

For example, there is a composition material for the senior high school entrance examination. First, write the stories of two calligraphers, one trying to look like the ancients and the other trying to be natural. The last paragraph of the material is: "Mr. Qi Baishi said:' If you learn from me, you will live like me.

If you can't get out of the framework of your predecessors, naturally you won't have your own world. "This passage is about.

Considering this discussion in combination with the story, it is not difficult to see the theme of the material: to dare to innovate. 4. Pay attention to the requirements or tips behind the materials.

For example, an essay question for the senior high school entrance examination is attached with the original text, and then asked, "After reading the article" One Tree, Three Classes ",we are greatly inspired. Please write an article about one of them (such as success and failure, temptation, opportunity, etc. ), write your own topic, choose your own style and write an article of no less than 600 words. "

It is not difficult to find that the three meanings in the material "success and failure", "temptation" and "opportunity" are three areas of writing, and you can write according to one of them. 5. Pay attention to the logical relationship between the contents in the material.

Some materials, especially pictures, have no punctuated sentences or hints, which depends on the examinee to grasp the main idea of the material according to the relationship between the contents of the material. For example, a question about reading the composition "Donkeys Eat Sketches".

There are five pictures: 1. Two donkeys on the same rope are grazing in opposite directions; 2. Both donkeys were caught by the rope; 3. Two donkeys get together to discuss; 4. Two donkeys walk to the left and eat grass together; Two donkeys go to the right and eat grass together. Seen from the front.

3. Write a composition according to the materials. Precious things always grow slowly-this is the focus of this material and the main sentence of the article.

Taking life experience as an example, many fake pearls are actually pearls. People put big plastic balls into mussels and let them secrete substances to wrap the plastic. After a few months, they can get a big pearl. Because the shell of a pearl is thin, a little polishing will expose the plastic inside. Where are the real pearls? This is caused by tiny gravel wrapped in mussels. This process will take at least a few years, to decades or even hundreds of years. There are natural differences between real pearls and fake pearls, whether it is medicinal or decorative, or the price. Therefore, precious things grow up slowly because they have to stand the test of time.

Well, it can be extended now. What can stand the test of time and become a treasure? Ideas, literary classics, and good works may all have taken the author a lot of time, even his whole life. However, it is precisely because they are hard-won and have stood the test of time that they are even more precious.

Of course, you can also combine many fast food consumption and fast food culture to express your views.

Good articles should not only accumulate, but also learn to spread. Come on! !

4. Write a composition according to the material and analyze the problem.

1, this topic belongs to the composition topic that leads to the writing scope by the material. Material is a famous saying of John Lennon, a world famous rock musician. The famous saying has two meanings: the first is "If you can't change yourself, you will change the world"; The second layer is "If you can't change the world, you can change yourself". In short, one is to change the world, and the other is to change yourself. The material is concise and philosophical.

2. Think deeply, this sentence by John Lennon reveals a basic social reality-in the relationship between man and the world, there will always be a history of "conflict-harmony". This sentence embodies dialectical philosophy from the ideological source, and "changing the world and changing yourself" is in the contradictory movement of unity of opposites.

3. "Ask" candidates to write this famous saying to arouse their own thinking. They can write their own experiences related to this famous saying, and they can also show their understanding of this famous saying. Whether it is "experience" or "understanding", it must conform to the style of your choice. In writing, you can choose to write "change the world", "change yourself" or both, but no matter how you write, you must reflect the internal conflict between them. If you choose to write on one side, you should also take the other side as the background. If you completely abandon one side and write the other side in isolation, it is obviously not a digression in concept, but it is obviously not the best angle.

For example, the article "Change yourself" in the examination room has three sub-arguments, focusing on the specific methods of "change yourself". To change the mentality, ideas and methods, the focus of his writing falls on the mentality, ideas and methods, ignoring the opposite of "changing the world", and naturally it is impossible to get high marks.

4. The material is about the choice between "changing yourself" and "changing the world", which is both a restriction and a hint. If the candidates only use examples to confirm the tips and cover everything, it is impossible to get high marks without their own analysis and sentiment.

For example, candidates rigidly apply step-by-step formulas such as "what is to change themselves and the world", "why should they change themselves and the world" and "how to change themselves and the world". Although such an article will not stray from the topic, it can basically be judged that the article does not have its own thinking and feelings only by looking at the arguments.

Conceptual perspective

"The perspective of an article can distinguish the thinking and comprehensive ability of candidates." Clear angle is the premise of high score composition, and scattered angle will lead to no central argument or profound and thorough writing in the limited space of 800 words. Chen Miaoyun once said that it is better to write an 800-word composition from only one angle. If you write from two angles, it is equivalent to the examinee reducing the level of the composition to 400 words.

What elements should a good "angle" contain?

First, be realistic and targeted. "The article is timely", and any article should be based on the present and reflect the attitude of paying attention to life and reality. This topic is directly related to "democracy and freedom", "innovation and development", "social harmony" and "following the trend". The article is best based on reality, thinking about fashion and future through history and tradition.

Second, be thoughtful. Writing ability is thinking ability first, and the ideas expressed in many candidates' articles are superficial and outdated, lacking in thinking. The article is closely related to the facts and has no new ideas and ideological content. This is firstly related to the choice of conceptual angle, and secondly, students lack the basic views of knowing the world and self, and often make a mistake by generalizing.

Structural language

First, multi-field+individual thinking. Candidates should choose the stylistic theme they are good at. After understanding the meaning of the question and determining the basic point of view, they should quickly search the material database for personal life experiences and various materials that can demonstrate their views, and choose touching life experiences to write narratives or relatively novel ideas and relatively fresh materials to write argumentative papers. At the same time, candidates can try different and reverse ideas to achieve a breakthrough in the theme. For example, in addition to the relationship of exclusion and opposition, changing yourself and changing the world can also be unified and transformed. It can be said that "changing ourselves is the first step to change the world" and "although we can't change the world, we don't need to change ourselves". This idea shows the personality and depth of students' independent thinking.

Second, there must be a point of view that dominates the whole article. The content of your own article has internal logic, so as to avoid the article looking fragmented. Many candidates write in three paragraphs, and this structure is correct. However, if the candidates fill in the content in a three-paragraph format mechanically, the three paragraphs will be out of touch and isolated from each other.

Third, it can be summarized that the materials, viewpoints and materials in this paper are unified. For example, in order to conform to the point of view, many students give wrong examples of changing themselves, which are exactly examples of changing the world, or examples do not explain how he changed himself or changed the world. There is also a view that "change yourself", but it is obviously difficult to justify it with "Jobs" and "Qu Yuan" as examples.

Before you start writing, you should have a good idea, make clear the central idea, the layout of paragraphs, the detailed distribution and so on. And you should have a well-thought-out plan. Thinking while writing is not advisable. Do you want to write a sub-argument to highlight the structure? If the sub-argument can have a general argument to sum up and focus on, you might as well write a sub-argument; If you don't write sub-arguments, you should pay attention to "poor examples, synonymous decomposition".

Detailed reference: primary and secondary school composition reading answer network

Please write a composition of about 600 words to teach children to learn to stand on their own feet.

"Sweating by yourself, eating by yourself, doing things by yourself, relying on the sky, relying on the ground, relying on ancestors, not heroes." This is an example of Zheng Banqiao's godson, a great painter in Qing Dynasty and one of the "Eight Eccentrics of Yangzhou". Be strict with him and never spoil him. Zheng Banqiao's teaching method has given us profound enlightenment: parents should first teach their children to learn to "do" and master some basic life skills, so that children can learn to stand on their own feet in practice, which is an effective way to cultivate their good character.

Go your own way and create your own life. It's better to live by yourself than by the weather. In order to completely eliminate children's dependence on their parents, today's parents should attach importance to the cultivation of children's self-improvement spirit, and parents should play an important role in it.

The so-called spirit of self-improvement refers to the spirit of striving to exert subjective initiative to overcome all difficulties, independence and perseverance. It is an independent ability to find and solve problems. The spirit of self-improvement is an excellent tradition of the Chinese nation. From Kuang Heng, who stole the column, to Sima Qian, who wrote a book with humiliation and burden; From Lu Xun, who gave up medicine and saved the people by writing, to Zhang Haidi, who was physically disabled and determined to challenge himself, the spirit of self-improvement of many people with lofty ideals inspired generations of young people.

Self-improvement is the foundation of success. With the spirit of self-improvement, children will have the motivation to move forward, actively solve problems, and show perseverance and tenacity in the face of setbacks.

On the contrary, many children in real life seriously lack the spirit of self-improvement. They pursue enjoyment and have a weak will. Even if there is an ideal, it is for all kinds of honors and enjoyment after realizing it. Facing the reality, there is no countermeasure and I am unwilling to work hard. If you don't get anything, you will be depressed and even disheartened.

Self-reliance is the inevitable result of children's physical and mental development. Middle school students are eager to take care of themselves and hope others can recognize their adult status. If this kind of psychology is not satisfied, they will become very dependent and timid because of "overprotection".

To get rid of children's strong dependence, we must first change our parents. Parents should try their best to create opportunities for their children to exercise. Start with trivial things in life and let children do what they can. Encourage them to actively participate in the activities of schools or social organizations. Take on more tasks in the activities, so that you have the opportunity to face problems independently. Children should be encouraged in time after completing something independently to enhance their self-confidence. When a child encounters setbacks, give him more help and understanding, analyze the reasons for the failure with him, and study ways to solve the problem.

"If you want your child to be independent as soon as possible, then you should teach him how to work, how to complete tasks and how to achieve results."

6. According to the following materials, write an article of at least 600 words, be brave in innovation and break through yourself.

Einstein said, "People who walk in others' footsteps will never leave their own footprints". In the journey of life, we need to innovate.

Take someone else's road, and you will always take someone else's road.

You will never forget the story of the famous inventor Edison. In those days when there was no light at night, people could only work and study by candlelight. Edison, who is diligent and studious, had a whim: Maybe something can be invented to change this situation. With this curiosity for invention and love for knowledge, he started the road of exploration. Repeated failures did not discourage him, but gave him motivation to move forward and inspired his fighting spirit. How many people advised him to give up and stop wasting time, and how many people saw his repeated failures and laughed at him. After people's ridicule and countless failures, he succeeded. The world's first electric light bulb turned on, giving off dazzling light in the dark. Edison also got the title of "King of Invention".

Edison was very lucky. He dares to break through himself and innovate. It is he who makes people live a bright life at night. If Edison, like everyone else, was willing to be busy in the dark night and satisfied with the environment at that time, then the electric light would not have been invented. Maybe one night today, you still have to study and work on tiptoe. Edison told us with practical actions that life needs innovation and science needs innovation.

Coincidentally. Mr. Lu Xun, a great thinker and writer in China, grew up in a dark feudal society and was oppressed by feudal thoughts. However, Mr. Lu Xun, an advanced thinker, was not bound. He knew that if he wanted to save China, he must first emancipate the people's minds. But it was not easy in China at that time, but the determined Mr. Lu Xun did not flinch. He knew that as a native of China, he had to shoulder the heavy responsibility of defending the motherland, so a vigorous "vernacular movement" arose. As the initiator of the vernacular movement, Mr. Lu Xun was oppressed by many feudal people at that time. No matter whether it is spiritual or material persecution, how can our Mr. Lu Xun be easily defeated? He resisted the pressure of feudalism and secularism and created a large number of literary works, such as Wandering and Scream. These works are like a sword in Lu Xun's hand, which is used to analyze the feudal system of cannibalism in feudal society. Mr. Lu Xun set off the ideological emancipation movement with his "vernacular movement" and liberated people's minds. Lu Xun was brave. He was a member of the feudal society who dared to resist and was also the initiator of the vernacular movement.

Unfortunately, Mr. Lu Xun lived in a feudal society, but he dared to resist and took up the "sharp weapon" in his hand to fight against the feudal society.

Innovation is like a closed door, we need to open it and be brave in innovation, you will find a lot, be brave in innovation, and you will know a lot. Only those who are brave in innovation are strong in life.

= = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = And I'm never afraid of headwinds, because I know how to open the sails and steer well.

Of course, I also know that the bigger the sail, the more you can ride the wind; The stronger the wind, the more you can sail. But I know better: the boat can't use too many sails, and the wind will upset my boat.

It is precisely because I know how to restrain my desires and know whether I am in adversity or prosperity that I can become a successful sailboat; .

Not all people can succeed. I wonder if you have heard the story: someone asked three bricklayers what they were doing, and the first one said, "Bricklaying." The second man said, "Make money." The third worker: "I am building the most distinctive house in the world." Later, the first two men were ordinary bricklayers all their lives, and the third worker became a famous architect.

Why the third person became an architect is worth thinking about. You know, having your own ideals is the first step to success. Romain rolland once said: "A man without ambition is like a kite with a broken line, which will only swing in the air and eventually lose its future." Ideal is the beginning of success. Ideal is very important, in other words, without hard work and effort, nothing will be achieved. Only when you have an ideal, do your best not to become weak before the storm, but to be tenacious. Of course, there are bound to be setbacks and failures on the road to success, and many people shrink back because they can't stand it. Only those who don't want to frustrate failure and bow their heads have their own ideals, and those who make unremitting efforts are entitled to enjoy success.

I am a small sailboat, sailing on the vast sea. Sometimes the sea breeze is calm, and sometimes the sea is rough. This is not a setback, it is a test of nature, but many partners sank to the bottom of the sea on the way. I am still a small sailboat, carrying ideals and hopes to the invisible shore. I am convinced that I have my own success and my own infinite glory.

Li Bai once received such a sentence: "One day I will ride the wind and waves, sail straight up and cross the deep sea." Is to tell us that success is the result of unremitting efforts, don't believe in giving up, and don't lose the determination to struggle. Success is not far away.

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