When I was young, I enjoyed luxury, misspelled it, and the sentence was not good. Luxury and luxury are adjectives, and "life" can be added later.

There are many typos, just correct them, don't type them one by one.

There is no problem with the overall structure, and the description is clear and organized. It's above average. The test reference score is 57.

One more question, don't trust Mr. China too much. Teaching level and literary accomplishment are completely different.