1. The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's intelligence and wit, full of family life interest, and his writing is smooth and lively.

2. You are very good at grasping the characteristics of things and describing them in detail, which shows that … emotion permeates between words.

The article is very convincing and thought-provoking. From the point of view of writing, the plot is vivid and the article is ups and downs, which is very enlightening to read.

4. The theme is concise, profound and powerful, and shocking.

5. The use of accurate and rigorous words, plain and natural language, personification and other rhetorical devices makes the article even more icing on the cake.

6. The main feature of this composition is that it narrates specific details, vividly describes true feelings, and uses rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification to write … vividly, expressing … love for ….

7. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

8. The article has clear clues and prominent themes. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read and love to read.

9. Although it is a trivial matter, the author describes it vividly. An indispensable pen at the end highlights the theme of the article.

10. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters on the contrary, which is the success of this paper.