I suggest that you briefly describe your assumptions, research methods and contents, research status at home and abroad, research problems, experimental methods and other key things in the paper in the email, and then send your written paper in the attachment of the email, and politely ask the tutor for guidance.

Send your paper to the teacher and say it in simple and polite language. I'm sure the teacher won't care too much about how many polite expressions you use. What he really cares about is the quality of your paper. We can't do everything. Today, our school announced the graduation thesis tutor, asking students to contact actively, and gave each teacher's phone number and email address. I choose to send an email to my teacher.

How to write a good paper

The title of the paper has the function of making the finishing point. The title should be very relevant to the content of the article. This is often overlooked. Some titles are too big; Some of them are too limited. There is an article entitled "Research on the Kinematics of Humanoid Arm of Service Robot", which is the author's kinematic analysis of a seven-degree-of-freedom arm when developing a service robot.

"Humanoid" is not important, what is important is that the author puts forward the inverse kinematics solution method of this redundant degree-of-freedom arm, which can not only be used for service robots. If the topic is changed to "Solving the Inverse Kinematics of a Humanoid Arm with Seven Degrees of Freedom", it is of both academic significance and the author's research project.

There is also a paper entitled "Research on Joint Lubrication Technology of Lunar Landing Robot", which is about the preparation and characteristics of a solid lubrication film. The topic of this paper is too big. Moreover, if the robot landing on the moon is explicitly mentioned in the title, experiments simulating the ultra-low vacuum, ultra-low temperature and strong dust environment of the moon are needed, and the conditions are not yet available.

If the title is changed to "Study on Preparation Method and Characteristics of Molybdenum Sulfide-based Solid Lubricating Film", the scope will be narrowed and the experiment that cannot be carried out at present will be avoided. For example, there is a doctoral thesis entitled "Dynamic Walking Control of Humanoid Robots", which is static when walking, but definitely not, and even static is dynamic.