Example 1: Long Strait Feelings-Comment on the Deep Meaning of Homesickness-Comment on Content: Homesickness is a poem with rich and profound connotations, which tells the long feelings of people on the other side of the Taiwan Strait who miss their homeland in the mainland with a unique style. In the first three verses of this poem, the author has played up a strong homesickness. At the end of the poem, the author skillfully and appropriately compares homesickness to a strait isolated from the mainland, thus pinning the author's long homesickness for the mainland and relatives in his twilight years. Due to the rendering of the first three verses, this "homesickness" is more intense, and it is not difficult for us to taste the bitter taste, that is, the disappointment that we failed to taste for various reasons, thus deepening the theme of the poem and receiving good artistic effects. (Huang Hengcan)
Example 2: Jumping Nostalgia —— Comment on the artistic features of Nostalgia —— Comment on its artistic appeal. Homesickness is the shadow of my heart and the projection of my emotions. The poem "Homesickness" contains true feelings in simplicity and eternity in the middle, which gives people a profound artistic appeal. Homesickness in the poem is jumping and tossing, from "small stamps" to "narrow boat tickets" to "low graves" to "shallow bays", but homesickness is eternal in the author's mind. In order to reflect "homesickness now", the whole poem focuses on the layout of the pattern, and the last paragraph is caused by the accumulation of the first three paragraphs, which not only exaggerates the strong color of homesickness, but also sublimates and sinks homesickness. Readers can easily extract its artistic essence from this sad little poem, which is the result of emotional people. (Zhao Siyi)
Example 3: You don't have to cry if you want to —— Comment on metonymy in Nostalgia —— Comment on the writing technique Nostalgia is characterized by using metonymy rhetoric to express strong homesickness. The poet is original, using "small stamps", "narrow boat tickets", "short graves" and "shallow bays" to replace the homesickness in different periods, such as childhood, growth, later and present, and make it materialized. At first glance, it seems a bit free and easy to "let's wave goodbye", but after reading it several times, you will feel the tears of the poet, and you will be moved by the deep affection between mother and son, the relationship between husband and wife, and the wanderer's longing for the reunification of the motherland. It is stamps, boat tickets, graves and straits that show the poet's constant sadness; Crying, no tears, is achieved through agency. General comment: These three micro-literary comments, some commenting on the ideological content of Homesickness and some commenting on its artistic features, are quite legal. They all focus on a little, the angle is not big, the evaluation is pertinent, the pen and ink are concentrated, the analysis is reasonable, and the words are concise. As for the bright structure, it is clear at a glance, needless to say; Clear hierarchy and fluent language are also the same characteristics. Proper use of some literary criticism terms in writing is more characteristic of literary criticism. In addition, the title of each article is quite artistic, which also adds elegance to micro-comments.