People pay great attention to choosing a good angle when taking pictures. Take portraits as an example, you can shoot from the front, side, top or back ... It is very important for photographers to choose a good background angle to shoot vivid expressions of characters. Composition, like photography, should pay attention to the angle. The degree to which you choose to express the theme of an article can often determine the quality and success of an article. I remember when Mao Dun, a great literary master, died, a class teacher arranged for everyone to write a composition to commemorate him. Many students didn't pay attention to the choice of angle before putting pen to paper. As a result, the article is either vague or lacking in originality; And there is an article entitled "The Last Work", which is Mao Dun's formal request to the Party when he was dying, hoping to become a glorious China party member, and discussed it, saying that Mao Dun was "a letter to the Central Committee of the Communist Party of China" at the last moment, and his work was a continuation of a large number of outstanding literary works created in his life, which was called "the last work" in an ingenious way. Deeply praised the great literary master's lofty ambition of pursuing truth with "blood and faith". Because of the good choice of angle, this article stands out among similar articles and is very innovative. From this point of view, to write a good article, choosing the best angle according to the meaning of the topic can not be ignored. Although the propositional argumentative paper stipulates the "scope" of discussion, it does not stipulate the writing angle. If the angle is well grasped, the articles will be fascinating together. Different general views on what is being discussed can be displayed. As mentioned above, looking at the "material" in the composition of materials can often provide a variety of writing angles. After opening your mind, you must choose the best writing angle to enter the discussion, which is the same as the reason for choosing the writing angle in the proposition composition. So, how to choose the best writing angle? The key is to choose a writing angle that can profoundly reveal the meaning of the topic, has social value, has real experience and can inspire people. The so-called "self-starting" means that the writing angle you choose must be that you have something to say, well-founded, and you can't feel strange, even countless and insincere. Specifically, the best writing function should meet two requirements: First, the angle should be small. If the angle of choice is too large, it will inevitably involve a wide range, and it is easy to cover all aspects and talk in general terms. The angle is small, concentrate and write in writing, and the effect will be good. The "Last Work" mentioned above grasped the perspective of Mao Dun's "Application for Joining the Party" and made an in-depth discussion, but did not summarize many deeds of Mao Dun's life. In this way, the angle of the article is very small, but the theme is very concentrated, from small to large, reflecting Mao Dun's glorious life and profound ideas. Second, the angle should be new. The so-called "new" is to be unconventional. We say that we have different views on the same problem and thing from different angles. Some articles look familiar, as if they have been seen somewhere. In addition to outdated materials, the main reason is that the writing angle is not new, not new. We must understand that only by observing things from a new angle can we discover their new characteristics and analyze things from a new angle can we have a new understanding of things. After reading the text Lost in the Street Pavilion, a classmate expressed his views on the plot of "beheading Ma Su" and wrote down his thoughts on "starting with the beheading of Ma Su by Kong Ming". Because he chose the writing angle of "Kong Ming uses people", the paper puts forward that "instead of" nature ",if you want to be innovative, you need to have profound thoughts, and at the same time, you need to make new creations in language, and strive to achieve the realm that" creative words are not equal to teachers "; You also need to have a wealth of knowledge. If you have a little knowledge of the meanings of "enforcing the law like a mountain" and "appointing people on merit" and don't understand the relationship between them, it is difficult to discuss the problem of "Lost Street Pavilion" in an original way. Small angles and angles ... >>
Question 2: Writing skills behind 10 Writing skills of "memorizing":
The back of Zhu Ziqing's prose shapes the image of a great father with simple and concise words. This article is a retrospective essay, which can sort out the author's emotional development and change route, from not understanding his father at first to understanding and then to regret and nostalgia. It can be said that "Back" was written by the author with tears of missing. First, compare the characters with the background. The author explained the writing background of the article with concise pen and ink, and skillfully compared the personality characteristics of the characters through the writing background. At the beginning of the article, it was explained that "in that winter, my grandmother died and my father's errand was unloaded." It's a day when it never rains but it pours. " The author did not directly write how strong his father was, but reflected his father's strength from the side. Although this background exists in the author's memory, we can see from it that the author remembers that period vividly. The word "it never rains but it pours" points out the bleak and miserable situation of the family at that time. To what extent, the author used the word "disaster", which is clear at a glance. Second, it seems that writing a pedantic article about his father, but actually writing an article that he regrets, lies in being able to arouse readers' * * and stimulate readers' thinking. In the fifth paragraph of the article, the plot of father bargaining with porter is more real and vivid. Prose is about trivial matters at home, expressing the deep affection between father and son in plain language, which has strong artistic appeal.
The Back is a famous documentary prose, which has been selected as a Chinese textbook for many years and has nurtured several generations. The reason why it lasts for a long time and leaves a deep impression on readers is that it is full of love between parents and children, which is an eternal theme and a tradition of the Chinese nation. Secondly, this essay is conceived from different angles, with plain language and deep homesickness between the lines, which is very touching.
Question 3: Dad's Flowers Fall Behind "Dad's Flowers Fall" has two narrative clues ―― one is "graduation ceremony" and the other is "memory". Graduation ceremony is written to evoke memories, and the article expresses the theme through "memories". "Memory" is the main line of the article, and "graduation ceremony" is the sub-line of the article.
There is only one narrative clue behind, and the plot is conceived and the theme is expressed with the clue behind.
Question 4: The feeling of writing Zhu Ziqing's back from the perspective of composition. I recently read Zhu Ziqing's essay "The Back" and was deeply moved by the fatherly love described in the article.
This article describes that Zhu Ziqing's grandmother died and his father lost his job. After the funeral, my father wanted to find a job, and Zhu Ziqing wanted to go back to school, so they went together. When Zhu Ziqing was going to the station, his father planned to let the waiter accompany him, but his father changed his mind temporarily and personally sent Zhu Ziqing on the train. His father was going to buy oranges for his son to eat on the road, but he had to cross the railway track to buy oranges. His father is very fat and climbs up and down.
After reading it, I found out how much Zhu Ziqing's father cares about him. When they arrive in Nanjing, his father intends to find someone to send him and then find a job by himself. He thought that finding a job was the most important thing, but Zhu Ziqing's father finally saw him off in person, worried about the children who were away from home. In addition, from the back of Zhu Ziqing's father buying oranges, we can see his sincere and meticulous care for his son.
Although the article does not describe his father's words and deeds in detail, it only mentions his father's "back" many times, which reflects a father's anxiety, care and love for his children who are away from home, as well as his son's gratitude and yearning for his father.
I also have a loving father who has made many efforts to arrange my life and study for me. Sometimes I fail the exam. Instead of blaming me, he comforted me and helped me find out the reason. Every time I see more and more white hair on my father's head, I think of his hard work for me. When I grow up, I feel this kind of deep fatherly love more and more.
Reading Zhu Ziqing's Back ―― Thoughts of Yu Huiqing
The Back is a very famous article written by Mr. Zhu Ziqing in his early days, and it is also a famous prose in the history of modern literature. The full text is only 1500 words, concentrated on a fragment, but touching and well-known. In the past, this essay has been selected as a teaching material for a long time, as Mr. Wu Han said: "This essay was selected as a middle school Chinese teaching material. In the eyes of middle school students, Zhu Ziqing has been combined with his back. "
After reading it, I got the first impression that the author tried his best to show the most sincere feelings in the world-the sincere feelings between father and son, which always showed delicate, true and profound feelings.
The Back was written in 1927, which recorded the back of my father in my memory. It happened on 19 17: My grandmother died, and my father's job as director of Xuzhou Tobacco and Alcohol Company was also handed over. After the funeral, the father and son went to Nanjing together, and my father sent the author to the north by train. This happened in the winter when the author was twenty years old. On that particular occasion.
This sincere feeling between father and son is vividly expressed by the author. He never trusted the waiter, but wanted to deliver it himself. From choosing a seat, never talk; From buying oranges in person, it reflects dad's love. All kinds of things are extremely trivial, but the feelings expressed from them are extremely precious, which makes the author unforgettable for a long time, and readers can't help but be moved by it after reading it.
The author wrote a lyric prose to express his feelings through simple narration. Everything written by the author is shrouded in emotion. It is very different from objective narration, but uses narration as a lyric tool. Between the lines of writing, the affection between father and son is revealed, which is exactly where the article can impress readers. Although they are memories ten years later, they are all described according to the situation at that time. In all these beautiful things, a father's love for his son is everywhere. The father still treats his 20-year-old son as a child, but his son is not satisfied. He thinks his behavior is "not very pretty" everywhere. At that time, the son could not understand his father's affection. The author gave a hint in the truthful narrative: "I think about it now, it was really smart at that time!" I was really smart then. In my memory, I blame myself and understand the fault of not understanding my father's mood. These places have enhanced the lyricism and appeal of the article.
The author can express his feelings so profoundly, which is inseparable from his deep feelings. If the author did not have such a life and experience, he would never have written such an article. Of course, when we read it today, we may feel that the author's feelings are too delicate and touching, and the tone of the full text is too low, but this is related to the author's thinking at that time ... >>