Comments on the defense of master's thesis
excellent
The completion of the thesis shows that students have solid basic theory and systematic professional knowledge; From the completion of the project, it can be seen that the student shows strong ability of scientific research, independent analysis and problem solving.
The content of the paper is substantial, the arguments are sufficient, the writing format is standardized, the level is clear, and the narrative style is smooth. The self-narrative in the defense is clear and focused, showing good language expression and organizational skills; The defense thinking is clear, the thinking is quick, and the questions are answered correctly.
The defense committee unanimously agreed that * * * students' dissertations meet the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis, agreed to pass the thesis defense, and recommended that a bachelor's degree in engineering be awarded.
okay
The completion of the thesis shows that students have solid basic theory and systematic professional knowledge; From the completion of the project, it can be seen that the student shows strong ability of scientific research, independent analysis and problem solving.
The content of the paper is substantial, the arguments are sufficient, the writing format is standardized and the level is clear.
The self-narrative in the defense is clear and focused, showing good language expression and organizational skills; The defense thinking is clear, the thinking is quick, and the questions are answered correctly.
The defense committee unanimously agreed that * * * students' dissertations meet the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis, agreed to pass the thesis defense, and recommended that a bachelor's degree in engineering be awarded.
middle
The completion of the thesis shows that students have a solid basic theory and systematic professional knowledge. The content of the paper is substantial, the arguments are sufficient, the writing format is standardized and the level is clear.
The self-narrative in the defense is clear and focused, showing good language expression and organizational skills; The defense thought is clear, the response is quick, and the questions are basically correct.
The defense committee unanimously agreed that * * * students' dissertations meet the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis, agreed to pass the thesis defense, and recommended that a bachelor's degree in engineering be awarded.
pass
The completion of the paper shows that students have a general grasp of basic theories and professional knowledge; The completion of the project is average. The content of the paper is not substantial and the writing format is not standardized. The student can state the main contents of the paper within the specified time, but the organization is not clear enough, some questions can not be answered, or the answers are not appropriate enough, but they can be supplemented after being prompted.
The defense committee unanimously agreed that * * * students' dissertations meet the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis, agreed to pass the thesis defense, and recommended that a bachelor's degree in engineering be awarded.
Defense evaluation form (30 points)
More than 27 points
The content of the paper is substantial, the arguments are sufficient, the writing format is standardized, the level is clear, and the narrative style is smooth. The self-narrative in the defense is clear and focused, showing good language expression and organizational skills; The defense has clear thinking, quick response, correct answer and wide knowledge.
24-27 points
The graduation thesis is fluent and structured. The theoretical analysis is comprehensive and objective, and the conclusion is complete and accurate. The paper conforms to the format specification, the quality of words and drawings is good, and there is no principled expression error.
The defense is well prepared and meets the time requirements. The language expression is more accurate, the focus is prominent, and the argument is correct. The answer has theoretical basis, clear concept and wide knowledge.
2 1-23 points
The student's thesis writing basically meets the standard, the length is appropriate, the language expression is basically clear, and there are some mistakes in some places. In the process of defense, the self-report content is relatively complete and clear, and the questions raised by the teacher can basically be answered correctly.
The defense is well prepared and meets the time requirements. The language expression is more accurate, the focus is more prominent, and the argument is correct. Answering questions has theoretical basis and clear concept.
18-2 1 point
This student's professional thesis writing basically meets the standard, and the quality of words and drawings is good, but there are some expression errors. In the process of defense, the self-report is relatively complete and clear, and can basically answer the questions raised by the teacher correctly.
The defense is well prepared and meets the time requirements. The language expression is more accurate, the key points are more prominent, the arguments are more correct, and the answers to questions have certain theoretical basis and clear concepts.
Comments on master's thesis defense II
1, the topic is novel, closely combined with clinical practice, and the design is reasonable, which belongs to the research hotspot of this discipline, and the research work has certain theoretical significance and practical value. The content of the paper is basically consistent with the topic, with complete structure, standardized format, clear hierarchy, clear organization, fluent language and rich content. The collected literature is rich and detailed, basically covering the main literature related to this discipline, which has a certain inductive effect on the development trend of this discipline. Sufficient data, rigorous discussion process, clear thinking, comprehensive application of learned knowledge to solve problems, proper selection of analysis methods, and credible results. The paper is carefully written, the reasoning is logical, and the conclusions and suggestions are of practical significance. It is a master's thesis with high academic value.
2. From the defense, it can be seen that this student has a solid professional foundation, is well prepared, is very familiar with the content of the paper, can concisely and clearly state the design ideas and processes, systematically display smoothly, answer questions well-founded, have clear basic concepts, and have some innovations in the paper. I hope to continue to improve some words and symbols in the paper and strive for standardized use.
3. An empirical study on the influence of online shopping website experience on consumers' online purchase intention, the master thesis of 3.xxx, on the basis of relevant literature research and dynamic analysis of current events, studies the elements of website experience and the influence of website experience on consumers' online purchase intention, and its topic selection has certain theoretical value and practical significance.
4. The documents cited in this paper are representative and scientific, and the relevant Chinese and foreign documents are comprehensively analyzed and summarized, and the research background, research status and development prospect of xxxx are mastered, and the literature review is rich and standardized.
In the ten-minute presentation, the student introduced the main points, content and structure of the paper, as well as the writing process of the paper. The organization is clear, the language is correct, and the teacher's questions are basically answered correctly, which reflects a certain professional quality. However, there are some minor problems in the design process and the flow chart is not perfect. I hope to correct it in time.
6.xxx's dissertation "Analysis and Research on Data Model of Undergraduate Specialty Setting Prediction System Based on Data Mining" is selected from the undergraduate specialty setting prediction system project entrusted by the Ministry of Education of Sun Yat-sen University. The research results of this paper have certain guiding significance for the construction of undergraduate specialty setting prediction system in colleges and universities.
7. In the five-minute presentation, the student introduced the main content and structure of the paper, as well as the research conducted for this purpose, which showed that he had a certain understanding of the research issues. The video design is beautiful, but it doesn't meet the professional requirements. It will be better to design the implementation process from the perspective of computer science.