Where are you from? Who are you? Where are you going? ..... Only when a person finds his connection with history, individuals and ethnic groups through time can life be located. Only when he has a "context" and a coordinate system can he "stand" and hold the identity card of life. (Excerpted from Wang Kailing's "Being a Man with Ancestors")
What kind of thinking did the above materials inspire you? Please write a composition of not less than 800 words according to your own experience and sentiment.
Teacher analysis
This is a kind of material with a rational point of view, and it is no longer a simple requirement for expressing material composition writing. There are three consecutive questions before the ellipsis sentence, and the sentence after the ellipsis sentence is the answer to the previous question. The general way to examine this kind of composition is to grasp the whole and the essence. The first step is to find out the key sentences, and the second step is to deeply understand the key sentences, make them concrete, clear and popular, so as to form accurate ideas.
The key sentence: "Where are you from? Who are you? Where are you going? "
Tips for selecting materials: Socrates explored the essence of human beings in suffering all his life. "Who am I who never gave birth to me? Who was I when I was born? It's me when I grow up. Who is it when I close my eyes? " This was a big problem that the emperor shunzhi could not solve for a long time in Qing Dynasty. It can be seen that other similar materials can be properly used in the article as long as they can effectively answer these three questions, and talk about their own views and feelings.
Key sentence 2: A person's life can only be defined if he travels through time and finds his connection with history, individuals and ethnic groups. ...
Tips for selecting materials: the key to the composition of this material lies in the understanding of the answers to philosophical propositions. Wang Kailing answered these philosophical propositions with the theory of "crossing time to find his connection with history, individuals and ethnic groups". He has his own unique views and needs certain philosophical accumulation and speculative ability. When examining the topic, we need to find the key words such as life orientation, context, life role and life identity card. Combining with the key sentence "Get through time and find your connection with history, individuals and ethnic groups", we can confirm that Wang Kailing's proposition is to determine people's sense of life, that is, to be an ancestor in spirit, culture, emotion and scenery memory. If it is specific, you can refine the scope of material selection into people with motherland, people with homes and heirlooms. Great life experience, that is, national cultural tradition and national history; Small life experiences, that is, our family tree and hometown history.
Writing requires combining one's own experiences and feelings, that is to say, candidates can rely on materials to start thinking, thinking about life individuals, life groups and the whole mankind, and can use their unique experiences to express their understanding of "life experience" when selecting materials. If you understand the "sense of life" emotionally, you can write excellent prose or vivid narrative; If you think rationally about the connotation of "life experience", you can write a wonderful argumentative essay with your own feelings.
High score material
Famous article: "With people, we begin to have history." This is probably the last sentence that Engels, the great mentor and leader of the proletariat all over the world, needs to explain in depth.
Material revelation: whoever understands life will understand the context of life, and life will become a profound book. What is history? Not only the words printed on books, but also the words around us. Today's news is tomorrow's history. Therefore, recording the lives of people around you is another kind of history.
News material: CCTV has a program called "Where do the guests come from". This is a celebrity root-seeking program. In the first season, there were Yi Zhongtian, Chen Chong, Ma Weidou and others. They started with a clue to find the details of their ancestors' life trajectory and fate.
Material inspiration: Although "Where did the visitors come from" borrowed from a foreign program "Who are you" in form, it is of great significance to China people, because there is nothing in culture and spirit that respects "returning home from ancestor worship" more than traditional China, and it can help us to be "China people"-the default "China people" in our bones. Yi Zhongtian's works, etc. , are just statements, but today is the foundation. China people need a way home. This road, once bustling, is now sparsely populated. This is called "the heart is not ancient."
Hot material: Jackie Chan insisted on speaking Chinese in overseas performances, and then Han Han blasted China for "closing his eyes and thinking he was in Oxford, but opening his eyes and being in Tianjin", denouncing the spread of English in China.
Material inspiration: As China people, we should first learn our own mother tongue, then inherit and develop it, and then learn foreign excellent cultures. Mother tongue is the first language that people naturally learn, so we have reason to maintain it and carry it forward. Only by adhering to and carrying forward our traditional culture can we build a country and better absorb the cultures of other countries. Only by adhering to our roots can we carry it forward.
Material practice
Seek the roots and ask the ancestors
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By chance, I opened the book "Smile by the Xianghe River" by Singaporean woman writer You Jin, and a proverb came into view: "A person without ancestors will always be lonely." From this perspective, asking ancestors is a good way for people to get rid of loneliness.
Where are the ancestors? In my hometown. In the place where our blood originated, the stories of ancestors kept happening and spreading, and generations were born and died. Blessed are those who live in their hometown, because they have traveled through time and can wander in the stories of their ancestors, thus confidently answering the three questions of the soul: Where are you from? Who are you? Where are you going? After that, they will finally find their own life position.
Sadly, people in China today often regret it after forgetting their ancestors. Wang Kailing once talked about a friend in his book: He left his hometown to work hard in Beijing, and finally earned a house in this land and golden land after many years. But one day, I looked up at the "home" I bought with my youth downstairs, only to find it in the dense windows. I couldn't tell which one was mine, and a great sense of weightlessness flooded her.
Yes, an empty house is crowded into thousands of identical rooms. Such a place has no "ancestors" and no roots. Loneliness will crush everything here. In the silent midnight, people will shed tears for no reason. Without ancestors and hometown, people seem to be dying alone.
So how do you ask Zu? I think I might as well go back to my hometown and find the root of my life where my blood originated. From then on, our life will be linked by the word "ancestor", and we will no longer drift with the wind, but thrive, because our hometown cannot take root and sprout everywhere. No wonder Ye Saining, the son of nature, also said, "I won when I went back to my hometown."
This reminds me of Solzhenitsyn, who once looked down on his compatriots and wandered outside for half his life. He finally returned to his motherland. The great writer is like a lion, and his eyes say profoundly, "If you don't understand the past, it means there is no future." So he returned to the place where his ancestors lived, found his roots under the apple tree after the rain in his hometown, and his life continued.
Haizi also shouted: "I want to go home/I want to turn back to my hometown/I want to be silent or speak loudly under the sky of my hometown!" " "Yes, we need this kind of root-seeking in an independent world. When we turn back to our hometown or visit our ancestors, no matter what way we use, we have to ask our ancestors, ask our hometown, and then the wind blowing from our ancestors' world will drag away the confused clouds and let us see the coordinates of our lives clearly.
Go back and smell your hometown. It's the smell of ancestors and roots. Seeking roots from ancestors is to find the way home for the soul.
Teacher's comments
It is human nature to seek roots and ancestors. This article is an excellent work closely related to "Seeking Roots and Asking Ancestors" to explore the "sense of life experience". At the beginning, I quoted you Jin's words, entitled "Ask the Ancestors". In the second paragraph, the content of the material is expounded. Then, taking "China people often regret when they forget their ancestors" as an example, we retaliated with Youjin's words, and told a truth that if no ancestors lost their hometown, there would be a great sense of weightlessness. Then through Ye Saining, Solzhenitsyn, Haizi and other materials, this paper expounds and analyzes the importance of root-seeking, with sufficient arguments, concise reasoning and strong logic.