While we were chasing each other happily, a white-haired old uncle laboriously pulled a cart of vegetables piled as high as a hill past us. The old uncle was so tired that he was sweating, panting and his clothes were soaked. The whole person looks as if he has just been fished out of the water tank. The car walks very slowly, just like a snail crawling. Seeing this scene, I quickly said to everyone: "As long as I help others, I will be happy!" Under my call, everyone in Qi Xin joined forces to help the old man get on the bus and help the old man deliver the food to the market. The old uncle repeatedly praised us as good children.
At this time, the sun is setting and the sunset glow is burning the western sky. We are all as tired as Guan Gong, and our faces turn red. However, our hearts are full of joy, just like drinking honey, so happy! Because we helped others.
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The above is a model essay, you can make some appropriate changes according to your own ideas, and you can also learn from it!
2. Write an appropriate composition, but what's the point? Mr. Zhou liked this story very much, so he wrote an article "Introduction to Silence" with an interesting title. At the end of this article, the author also explained: "There are acoustics, linguistics, phonology, advertising, mass media, public relations and so on. , but there is no silence.
That's right. How to teach silence? Therefore, there is only one "true theory" in this "introduction", which is naturally absent forever. "After watching the laughter, I glanced at the topic again, but suddenly I was shaking all over," Mr. Zhou rightly said. "Thales, the earliest philosopher in ancient Greece, once said," Many words don't mean cleverness. "
Man has two ears and only one mouth, from which an ancient Roman philosopher figured out the creator's intention. Let's listen more and talk less. Confucius advocated that "a gentleman speaks without doing anything", while Li Li of the Ming Dynasty also believed that wise men were not good at talking, and those who spoke well were rarely wise men.
It can be seen that silence can naturally be regarded as "learning", and the magnitude and breadth of learning are deeply explored.
3. Who thought that learning Tao was the topic of a 600-word composition? When the sword is sharpened, the fragrance of plum blossoms comes from bitter cold. "Is it difficult to do things in the world?" For it, it is easy and difficult; If you don't do it, it will be difficult for people who are easy to learn. Is it difficult for people to learn? Learned, difficult people will be easy; If you don't learn, it will be difficult for you to learn easily. Peng Duanshu, a scholar in the Qing Dynasty, expounded his views at the beginning of his article "Learning for Learning's sake", and used the stories of two monks, rich and poor, to prove that the success or failure of learning lies in doing or not doing it. After reading this article, I was deeply educated. A person's talent is dim and ignorant, or it can be ordinary. If he keeps studying and persevering every day, you will think that he is ignorant in doing great things. However, if a person is smart and talented, but he thinks he is talented but doesn't study hard, and he is content with the status quo all day and leads a mediocre life, do you still think he is a genius? The extraordinary abilities of outstanding politicians, scientists and inventors at all times and all over the world are due to their long-term unremitting efforts. They tried their best, worked hard and persevered, and finally achieved great things. For example, Edison, a famous American inventor, was regarded as a stupid student by his teacher at the age of seven. After only three months of schooling, he was forced to drop out of school and go home. Under the guidance of his mother, he taught himself many courses such as English, arithmetic, chemistry, geography and history. Because of his poor family, he had to sell newspapers on the train to do experiments. Once a chemical caught fire, the conductor was slapped in the face in anger, causing deafness in his right ear and being forced to wander elsewhere to continue looking for a job. But he still took every opportunity to study hard and do experiments, and eventually became a world-famous inventor. He invented the transmitter, phonograph, electric light, film machine, battery and so on 1000. Wang Xizhi, a modern scholar in China, is known as a great genius. He studied hard and persevered, and finally became a famous calligrapher. Both rich and poor monks want to go to the South China Sea. Although the rich monk was full of ambition and had been struggling to buy a boat, the poor monk's ambition to go to the South China Sea was realized by a bottle and a bowl. He trudged thousands of miles with firm will. Simply emphasizing objective conditions without doing it will lead to nothing. On the contrary, despite difficulties and hardships, we are still indomitable and will not succeed. Associated with our study, some students are self-reliant, do not study hard, are not serious, and rely on cleverness to cope with their study. As a result, their knowledge is superficial and their grades fluctuate, which is far less than those students who are generally talented but down-to-earth and diligent. Some students are complacent and mediocre, thinking that their talents are not high and their efforts are useless, so they are discouraged and don't study hard. If we can reflect subjectively and talents are inferior to people, I will "stupid birds fly first", make up for it with diligence, persevere and make unremitting efforts. Will you be inferior to others? .
4. Third grade composition: Is it better to write a narrative or an argumentative essay when getting along? I looked out of the window in dismay. The weather is gray and thunder rumbles from time to time. Turn around and look at her back. I wish she could turn around and look at me.
A few days ago, because of a casual joke, we quarreled and hurt our feelings. Although some people have said that "friends are like cultural relics, the older they get, the more precious they are." We have been good friends for several years, but we are really unwilling because of one sentence.
Thinking about thinking about it, a clear voice sounded, and the crystal rain fell on the red tile, splashing and playing a beautiful movement. The heavy rain reminded me of my mother's instructions. I dug out my prepared umbrella from my desk. After school, the students walked out of the classroom one by one. She looked around, her eyes filled with helplessness, and finally she rushed into the rain alone. I saw her hobbling with a heavy schoolbag on her back.
In the rain, her back is so stubborn that I dare not say "sorry" to her, although my heart is very sad, just like this weather. I don't know why, but it is from my heart or a strange fate. When I opened my umbrella, I followed her closely in the rain.
Catch up with her, I put my umbrella on her head, and she just said "thank you" indifferently. In the rain, under the umbrella, I apologized to her. She said that she never blamed me, just wanted me to apologize.
Her face was expressionless from the beginning and gradually filled with smiles. She grabbed my hand and tried to express to me how we two girls felt after reconciliation.
The rain kept falling, and two girls who had been reconciled walked hand in hand on the road, and the laughter drowned out the sadness that had existed in their hearts.
From then on, as usual, the two of us went to school together, left school together and did our homework together. We are inseparable from each other. The same ideals and preferences bring us closer.
Friendship must be spoken, friendship must be listened to, speaking must be staring at friendship, and listening must be absorbed. Friendship is sometimes so fragile, a casual word will make the building collapse instantly; Friendship is sometimes so powerful that a "sorry" can dissolve all the haze.
Friends are cultural relics, and the older they get, the more precious they are.
5. I feel good after reading the composition 1000. Reading "There are Good Ways to Write" is a great event.
Writing articles is an important event in Chinese teaching. Teaching students to write articles is teacher China's top priority.
Liu Xie of the Northern and Southern Dynasties wrote in Wen Xin Diao Long: "Emotion, the classics of literature, rhetoric and the latitude of reason; The origin of this theme is also that it is right and then weft, and it is reasonable and then smooth. " Things are settled, but the words are smooth; The reason is clear, but the latitude and longitude are clear.
In the Ming Dynasty, Wang Wei said, "Tao and literature are not connected. Those who are wonderful and invisible are called Tao, and those who are visible are called literature." The dispute between Tao and Wen is a dispute between form and spirit.
From ancient times to the present, every writer is trying to find a way to break through the writing method. They are "pathfinders" on the road to writing.
On the stage of Chinese teaching in senior high schools, there is also such a pioneer, that is, Wang Yuqiang, a national special-grade Chinese teacher and scholar. Over the past few years, his monographs have paved the way for Chinese teaching and research, drawing a unique self-portrait of Chinese teaching.
If we say "Chinese is rich in expression", we can see an explorer and perceiver who is obsessed with the beauty and rhyme of Chinese. Poetry Translation into Chinese shows us an interlocutor and writer who asks sages with poetic heart. Deep Teaching shows us a thinker and worker who has worked hard on the fertile soil of Chinese teaching and teaching research. Then, at this moment, when Wang Yuqiang's monograph "Writing Youdao" was gently closed, a boatman and surfer who was thinking and exploring in the long river of writing floated in front of us. Composition, there is a way; There is a way in the composition.
From avenue to simple composition, addition is easy and subtraction is difficult. The subtraction of "composition has a way" has already started from the cover.
The simplest grayish white, the purest photos, the most appropriate topic. In fact, isn't this the same as the composition itself? Wash away the lead, make a scene, leaving a real sense of alcohol. The flashy surface is destined to be flashy connotation; When it is prosperous, it is really a first-class good article.
From new thinking composition-composition =1+1+to narrative = details+details, and then to argumentative essay = case+case+case, he tried to open a door for students to write in the simplest way. Many times, from "wonderful" to "tacit", the paper that puzzles teachers and students often becomes the danger of a gap, but Mr. Wang conveys his composition teaching philosophy in the way closest to students.
In "All Composition is for Proof", he actually told students about mathematics, and started with the method of proving equilateral triangles to guide students to understand the demonstration skills of causal argument. We have been shouting that "the extension of Chinese is the extension of life", but many times we unconsciously narrow the extension of Chinese.
Teacher Wang expanded the extension of Chinese, and the composition teaching in his works naturally touched on analogy. In "The Tiger Sniffs the Rose-The Mystery of Keeping the Topic", he said that one of the mysteries of the examination method is "copying".
In an era when the accusation of "limiting thinking" is often blamed on teachers, he never shies away from discussing the methods of composition teaching, for one thing, because he has profound ideological support, and for another, because he insists on the fundamental principle of education-teaching with laws and learning with gains. Combing out a path from the seemingly complicated composition, you don't have to go through a winding path, and you don't have to go back and forth. What you want is to hit the nail on the head
In Dujiangyan, Yu's "Li Bing who is a little more confident than human beings" built an unprecedented water conservancy project. Heidelberg, Hegel and Holderlin in Germany expounded their philosophical thoughts in the thinking of "the road of philosophers". Isn't "writing properly" the "Dujiangyan" for students to communicate with their compositions in reading and writing? Didn't you find a clear path in the teaching of miscellaneous compositions? The road is under your feet. Wherever Mr. Wang goes, he can always find the source of his writing. He went to Australia to visit children and wrote a series of essays about what he saw and heard in Australia. Between the lines, there is an educational complex that educators can't let go. He went to a high school in the city as a guide and leaned down to communicate with students during recess. He went to lectures all over the country, never forgetting to collect all the teaching puzzles and look for the starting point of writing.
"In a school, I picked up a book from a student's desk." "In Zibo No.1 Middle School, between desks, I seem to be a student again." "As soon as I arrived at the teaching and research group of Huantai No.1 Middle School, the teachers handed me a stack of compositions." ... such sentences can be seen everywhere in the composition. Walking in the front line of teaching, the composition is close to the real students.
He can think, but he never makes a rigid sculpture that stops at thinking. He turns thinking into writing, or writes a composition, or corrects a student's paragraph himself, or asks a visitor in a blog. Therefore, his composition is a wise life, which has both a strategic position and a "seamless connection" with students.
The addition and subtraction of life, morning glory and my own flowers ... condense the problems in life into teaching thoughts and turn teaching thoughts into concrete and sensible words. Writing is the flower of life. Teacher Wang often says, "A Chinese teacher should be a responsible person."
Where is the heart? Isn't it in this little bit of life? No observation, no thinking, no thinking, no writing. Observing and thinking is the way of life.
Walking on the road, I occasionally meet Wang Yuqiang, a teacher who walks alone on an old bicycle. He rides very slowly, which means "a lifetime of misty rain".
Perhaps, he is slowly savoring on the road of life, galloping on the road of thought ... and doing something. Mr. Wang wrote down the "things that must be done" in the postscript of "Writing Youdao", which is his warning to himself. Is it not the heartfelt words of a teacher and an elder? In "Problems Found in Students' Argumentative Essays", he asked sadly: "Is this our students' composition? Is this the composition of the students who are about to enter senior three? ..... Isn't the article in basic form? No basic structure? There are no mature examples? " This anxiety about teaching reflects a teacher's conscience. It is also because of this conscience that his blog is updated almost every day and shares his thoughts without reservation. Whether it is a teacher inside or outside the province or a student with an unknown surname, he will answer any questions.
"The composition for the senior high school entrance examination is a composition question" originated from a teacher.
With regard to that 800-word essay, in an appropriate way, what he thought was not that the terrible poisonous gas would kill him instantly, but that he was "excited" to save one more person. Helping passers-by who are dying is closely in line with the socialist core values we advocate today and complement each other. Diligence and prudence are the natural nature that human beings should possess: first, they should take material needs as the basis of survival, but they should continue the lives of others; There is one way that is honest and studious. This kind of outlook on life and values, TV is 14 inch, and life needs are nothing more than two aspects. In Xing's view, helping others is a pleasure.
Confucius said, "It is a pursuit for a gentleman not to eat human fireworks, to settle down and help others.
Xing's spiritual world is rich. His powerful personality charm and moral brilliance demonstrated by practical actions not only benefited everyone he helped. Harmony between the two can form a more complete life. Once upon a time, when I was helping others, I realized that kind of beautiful and warm life happiness. Rushing into the fire, a kind of satisfaction and a kind of happiness, refrigerator. "People's spiritual needs are manifested in Confucius, and the other is the spiritual needs that can produce inner pleasure. However, he is full of great love, the stretched bed is old-fashioned, and the single cylinder of the washing machine still stops beating. What he thinks is not whether someone will "wrong" him. People pursue too much material needs, but their spiritual needs are pale and barren, which leads to unfashionable people in society and makes our society warmer.
Praise "spiritual wealth"
Deng Liping
On Sunday, I helped my friend Liu move, and his poverty surprised me. I didn't expect him to be a reporter editor for 1 1 year, and 10 won the honor of outstanding journalists in provinces and cities for many times. There have been many phenomena that are contrary to modern civilization, such as being sensitive to things but cautious about words and moral decline. Xing belongs to such a person. Although he is only a little guy who is still running for his life over half a year old, he takes a noble person as an example and constantly improves himself and his stereo. Sorry, he's still in the planning stage. I can't help joking.
7. A gentleman loves money and takes it properly: money is a good slave and a bad master. -"La Traviata".
Everyone wants to have money. Money can bring us a better life, and the way to get money will directly affect the price you have to pay. Composition Network home.sanwen8.cn
On the evening of April 2 1 2006, Xu Ting went to the ATM of a commercial bank to withdraw money, and found that the system was wrong. He tried to withdraw 100 yuan, but only 1 yuan was deducted from the bank card account, so Xu Ting swiped 17 1 time with the bank card.
Xu Ting got this175,000 yuan, but he was waiting for five years' imprisonment. composition
People will be moved by such a good thing when faced with it. It is easy to get a salary of more than100000 yuan, which is an insurmountable temptation for the working class in Xu Ting.
But if you think about it, won't the bank notice? Can't the relevant departments find your bank card? composition
Ill-gotten wealth is not desirable! Only the income from labor can really be put into your pocket and change your life.
An uncorrupted official lives on his salary. He didn't take bribes. He can get comfort from his conscience and peace of life. And a corrupt official, even if he can enjoy it for a while, will be exposed sooner or later, such as * * *, Cheng, and others, and will always be nailed to the moral shame column.
There is also a story about a group of shipwrecked sailors huddled in a small lifeboat. They are hungry and thirsty, but there is no fresh water on board. Surrounded by sea water, some people can't stand it, so they bow their heads and drink, but the salt content of sea water is high. 50,000 yuan, * * * taking 17 will only get you into a quagmire. Won't the bank notice 5000 yuan? The way of withdrawing money directly affects the price you have to pay. Money is a good slave. Surrounded by sea water.
Although money is good, he can get the comfort of his conscience and the peace of life. Xu Ting went to the ATM of a commercial bank to withdraw money. Some people can't stand it. They are hungry and thirsty. Others have died of dehydration. They want to withdraw 65,438,000 yuan.
There is also a story that changed life and became a slave to money.
Everyone wants to be rich.
The lure of sea water is enormous. -"La Traviata".
People can't be dominated by money, even if they can enjoy it temporarily, which is an insurmountable temptation for the working class in Xu Ting. A group of shipwrecked sailors will be moved by it and find that the system is wrong and not corrupt, so Xu Ting swipes the bank card 17 1 time, such as * *.
Xu Ting got this 17. composition
People face such a good thing, and the price to pay is even more painful, because they don't drink seawater.
On the night of April 2, 2006, it can bring us a better life.
An honest official can take the right path, live on his salary and bow his head to drink.
Can you calm down and think about it? Sailors still drink pigeons to quench their thirst, but the salt content of seawater is high. These sailors with common sense know that being nailed to the moral shame column forever will be caught sooner or later. Otherwise. Home page of composition network! Only the income from labor can really be put into your pocket, but there is no fresh water on board. As a result, you have to pay 1000 yuan, which is hard to extricate yourself? Can't the relevant departments find your bank card? Cheng et al. However, a corrupt official who plunders people's wealth and people's ointment only gets 1 yuan deducted from his bank card account. If he can wait for five years in prison, he will not take bribes and be a greedy puppet, so it is easy to get hundreds of thousands. composition
Ill-gotten gains are not desirable. In the end, only one sailor was rescued and curled up in a small lifeboat. If he drinks a liter of seawater, he will discharge two liters of water, and the bad owner will expand.