In 20 10, a 92-year-old famous Japanese educator Daejeon gave a wonderful speech to his counterparts in China in Tsinghua University. At first, he told a story: one of his farmer friends cut him an apple and pointed to the seeds in the apple core, saying that each seed had its own design. My job is to cultivate, fertilize and water it, so that it can grow into high-quality apples according to its own design. Only apply organic fertilizer, not chemical fertilizer and pesticide, and let the seeds germinate and grow freely. Although it takes more sweat and effort to do this, it is not suitable for the market economy, but the apples planted are fragrant and sweet. If inorganic fertilizers are applied, apples grow fast and big, but they are not sweet.

It is required to choose a good angle, define the concept, clarify the style and draw up a good title; Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.

The concept of examination:

1. Rules: Do things according to the rules, don't encourage others, don't be eager for quick success.

2. Personality: Respect personality, let nature develop, and don't stifle nature.

3. Environment: create a good environment, provide a good platform and give room for development.

Make the finishing point:

Let nature take its course, grow freely, and refuse to catalyze. Nature is the best. Follow the law, don't pull out the seedlings to encourage, let the fruits grow freely, and be the seeds of free growth. Free fruits are the sweetest, conform to nature, follow the inherent law, and grass grows in spring. Success should follow the laws of nature. Education should not be rushed. What does our education need? "There is a kind of love called letting go." "How can you succeed if you pull out the seedlings and encourage them?" "Don't imprison it."

Classic material:

1. Dulangkou teaching mode

2. Guo Tuo's experience in planting trees

3. The growth track of Jobs

4. Wolf Dad Godson (Counterexample)

5. Battle Hymn of Tiger Mother (Counterexample)

7. Jiang's growth experience

8. Han Han's successful enlightenment

There is a problem:

(1) has deviation. Without the context, there is no overall grasp of the meaning of the material. Such as: diligence; Pay is rewarded; Gains and losses; Success comes from hard work; Food safety.

(2) The materials are lengthy. Argumentative papers do not summarize materials when giving examples, which leads to too much narration, too little discussion and weak persuasion.

(3) structural disorder. Parallel structure, progressive structure, comparative structure and freestyle structure can be used, no matter which one is used. But some compositions are disorganized and unclear, which makes people confused and unintelligible. The following composition has a good structure and is worth learning from:

Respect the law

Sub-argument 1: Only by respecting the law can we grow into pillars.

Sub-argument 2: Only by respecting the law can a hundred flowers blossom.

Sub-argument 3: Only by respecting the law can we really succeed.

(4) There are not enough words. A considerable number of compositions are short of words, which affects the score. Or half-written, or incomplete at the end, or a few lines missing less than 800 words.

(5) There are many typos. Judging from the title alone, there are many typos. Such as: weir seedlings encourage growth, self-reliance, respect for the law, the key lies in themselves, respect for the law of development of things and so on.

Appreciation of excellent works:

Education should not be eager for success.

In today's society, no matter what you do, you pursue a fast pace, such as "fast food", "express delivery" and "snapshot". People regard "fast" as a sign of improving efficiency. In fact, everything is not entirely like this. As Japanese educator Daejeon Yao said, education should not be eager to achieve success.

Gardeners should respect the seeds' own design drawings. Each seed has its own design, and the gardener's job is to cultivate soil, fertilize and water it, so that it can grow into high-quality fruit. Steve Jobs, the former president of Apple, was very lucky. His father asked him to choose his future direction according to his hobbies. Although my father was very interested in machinery and hoped that Jobs would become a mechanical engineer in the future, he still fulfilled Jobs' wish. Jobs was able to finally realize his dream of "changing the world" by virtue of his love and wise mind in many electronic industries, making computers and electronic products simple and civilian, making once expensive and rare electronic products a part of modern people's lives and becoming a great inventor after Edison.

Gardeners should let seeds germinate and grow freely. Growth is the seed's own business, and gardeners must never exceed their authority, otherwise it will only be counterproductive. Dulangkou teaching mode, which is popular all over the country, is an efficient classroom mode that constantly tries to carry out new curriculum reform and practice students' dominant position. This reform has brought gratifying changes, and changes have brought laughter. In class, students actively raise their hands and speak loudly; A lively discussion and debate; Ask and answer questions and solve problems; Multi-angle practice and innovation; Smile and have fun in class. The teaching quality of this school has also risen from the original county to the top. Dulangkou's teachers deeply understand the truth of letting seeds germinate and grow freely. They just cultivate the soil, fertilize and water themselves, and do a good job as gardeners.

Gardeners should only apply organic fertilizer to seeds. Organic fertilizer is a kind of pollution-free and pollution-free green fertilizer, which will promote the development and growth of seeds and bear sweet fruits. Inorganic fertilizer, catalyst, etc. Will make the fruit fast and big, but not sweet. At present, the removal of inorganic fertilizers is an urgent problem in China's education. "Cramming teaching", "sea tactics" and "various cram schools" are all over our education. Although these seem to be "efficient", they don't last long, just like adding inorganic fertilizer to apples. At first glance, it is gratifying, but in fact it is endless, and its disadvantages will be highlighted in the near future.

Let the eagle soar in the air in order to exercise its vigorous wings; Let squirrels jump between branches to create agile skills; Let the fish fight in the big waves and show their tenacious life. Only by providing a relaxed environment, respecting individuality and not rushing for success can we cultivate real talents.