Improving writing language is equal to improving thinking.
Many people mistakenly think that they can't write a thesis well, but in fact, their thinking is not good and their expression is unclear ―― it may indeed be true, because the unclear language will lead to a decline in the perception quality of the thesis (the respondent only needs 3 minutes to read a master's thesis). However, reflective thinking is a godsend, and people who are good at thinking will certainly not stick to the weakness of language, thus causing such troubles. Suppose everyone who is reading this article is a language beggar, and to improve everyone's paper, we only need to simplify the question into the language of the paper, and we don't need to doubt our own life. Even if you doubt life, you still have to face your own thesis. So remember that language always comes first.
Writing in any language, including writing papers, should not be too subtle and obscure, and readers will think that you are mystifying. Sorry, mystifying is not clever at all, because you are not good at writing metaphors like Kant, Hegel and Nietzsche. This era is an era of national fraud. Any reader, including your tutor, thesis defense committee member and plagiarism detector, will be wary of mysterious language. Because everyone is scared. That's why there is such vigilance. At the same time, it should not be too straightforward, because plain language that lacks tempering is often vulgar, after all, it is learning. After graduation, you have decades to abuse how pedantic the academic school is, to dance your square dance, to play billiards in your square, to swear and many other vulgar things, until you enter the grave. But before you get your diploma, please remember that you study well because you think what you have learned is. I hope that no matter what subject you study, you should consider and solve problems from an elegant knowledge, that is, an academic point of view. Another point is that when the language of some articles is modified, it often makes people feel at a loss, because modifying these key sentences will affect the change of structure, which involves logic, so it is a headache. The essence of logic is actually an order. Anyone who has seen the film knows that two shots show a person entering the room. In the first shot, he pushes the door open, and in the second shot, he is sitting in the room. This is a logical order. If these two shots are played upside down, it will become an anti-logic, and the actions of the characters will not be related, but will have another meaning. Writing a thesis is not making a movie, so it is best to establish a logical standard first, so pay attention to the order of sentences. Furthermore, the logic of the paper is often modified not in the language of sentences, but between sentences, which requires everyone to master it flexibly.