The teacher who writes "composition evaluation" like this is really superb!

Advantages:

1. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.

This article is short and pithy. The language is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and makes people feel kind to read. Son, this semester, the teacher saw that your homework was fast and the content of your composition was enriched a lot. All this is due to your hard work.

3. The article is full of emotion, lyrical and picturesque at the same time, and few family sentences add some literary interest to the article.

4. The article covers many aspects, including the description of characters and the narration of events.

Insufficient:

1, the language is too brief, which seems to be an outline narrative, but it fails to grasp the outline, with incomplete meaning and dull, dry and lifeless narrative.

2. Some sentences may be a little long, so you can simplify the expression as much as possible to make the article more concise and clear.

Although the language expression of the article is beautiful, some words may not be accurate enough, so you can try to express your meaning more accurately.

4, the language is not fluent enough, the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling.