Summary of Full Score of Chinese in College Entrance Examination (1) Promoting and Revitalizing China
Heaven is strong and self-improvement. Accumulated practice leads to dry work, and accumulated impatience leads to abyss. The embankment of a thousand miles can collapse in the ant nest; A single spark can start a prairie fire. Born strong, not arrogant. When you are full, you will overflow, and arrogance will decline.
The rise and fall of history and the choice of dynasties have always been changes between the strong and the weak. From strong to weak, it often lies in subtleties. The commander's indecision led to an impasse in the Battle of Garipoli. From weak to strong, it often lies in reluctance. Gou Jian, the king of Yue, has a new taste of courage, and three things can be seen in Wu. Hopping wood was born at the end of the old times; Nine-story platform, starting with tired soil; A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
There is no natural success, only tempering high strength. A building, starting from the ground, starting from a tile, starting from a steel bar, a bag of cement, starting from the construction of workers and machinery day after day, towering buildings can rise day and night, and the Flame Mountain can be built quickly.
From Leonardo da Vinci's "The Story of Noodles and Eggs", we understand that a picture is accumulated from one picture to another, and it takes several spring and autumn periods to work hard day and night; When we came to Wang Zhi to practice calligraphy, we said that holding a pen every day, bit by bit, the pool water was also mixed with black; Learning from the Monkey King, we know that the power of martial arts also comes from the incompetence of dealing with monsters.
Qin Shihuang was also a wise monarch who tried to govern the country. What a powerful force it is to unify the world to unify currency, words and car tracks! However, he praised Shukeng for being absolutely civilized, building the Great Wall, wasting people's money, being cruel and belligerent, forcing the camp to be forced, making the people miserable and eventually becoming tyrants. In the end, Qin Ershi was chopped to pieces by hundreds of hard labor, and was defeated by one stroke. How weak he is! A great dynasty fell from the altar to the deep lake, even the country was destroyed and the strong became weak.
The founding of the people's Republic of China is also a model from small to large. The development of People's Republic of China (PRC) for more than 70 years, from small to large, is vividly in the eyes of the world. From achieving national independence to persisting in reform and opening up, from proposing the "Belt and Road Initiative" to building the common destiny of mankind and assuming the responsibility of a big country, China is moving forward, and no arm can stop it.
In 2020, a small society will be built in an all-round way, and the school situation will be installed at once. However, we closed the door to the outside world, boycotted by the whole people, and took reasonable measures to control the situation in time, resumed production and life, and promoted the development of China to a new level.
The strong are not complacent, and the weak are not sad. Avoid steps, take Wan Li Road, build a big country, and build a strong country.
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Content: Power transformation, dialectical thinking. Candidates carefully examine the questions, grasp the core of the materials, and discuss that under certain conditions, the change of strength, congenital deficiency and acquired efforts, the change of things occurs between quantitative change and qualitative change, and strength also occurs in people's will and efforts.
Expression: the language is changeable and the short sentences are powerful. Candidates have a solid language foundation and strong expressive ability. They use short sentences and are good at summarizing events and stories accurately. Every event needs only a few short sentences to make it clear and unique.
Features: rich in materials and sufficient in argumentation. This argumentative paper summarizes these events concisely and fully demonstrates them with examples. From the martial arts of painting and calligraphy to the changes of the country and society, it has been further promoted step by step.
Summary of Full Score of Chinese in College Entrance Examination (2) Dream of a strong country for a hundred years and be the hardest Long Lin.
Mao Zedong said in the article "Sports Research": "The weak are born without self-pity. I was born weak, or the temptation of heaven made me strong. I have no idea. " These two sentences accurately predicted the struggle history of the Chinese nation from poverty and weakness to national prosperity in the past century, and predicted the hard struggle of China * * * production party to realize the dream of a century-old power from 192 1 to 202 1.
Since modern times, people's livelihood in China has declined, and the Oriental Dragon has been bullied. In the memory of humiliation, foreign warships rampaged on the Yangtze River. There is the collection of Beiyang navy; There is a fire in Yuanmingyuan; There are knives and fish at the Paris Peace Conference; There was an explosion heard by the temple army in Baogu; There are guns on Lugou Bridge; Nanjing is a river of blood ... The Chinese nation is facing a major crisis!
However, the Chinese nation's "dream of a strong country" has never stopped. The China * * * Production Party, which represents the advanced elements of the Chinese nation, has not only made the Chinese dream of "a strong country" clearer and clearer, but also led the Chinese nation to realize its century-old dream of "a strong country". The once scarred Oriental Dragon is flying to the center of the world stage!
Without the hardest work of Longlin, the dragon can't take off. During War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression's period, the heroic sons and daughters who died for their country suffered the most from Longlin; During the fight against pneumonia, countless scientific researchers and medical staff who trusted each other with their lives were the hardest Longlin; 832 poverty-stricken counties, such as Wang Xinfa, Guan and others, are the hardest. The hardest work of Long Xian is Qian Sanqiang who gave up foreign preferential treatment and resolutely returned to China, and Guo Yonghuai who gave his life to protect data in the air crash; The hardest dragon is Huang Xuhua, the "father of China's nuclear submarines" who anonymously serves the country, and Shang Longping, who is indifferent to fame and fortune and focuses on the field; The hardest dragon fresh is the "Chinese power" against emotions and the "China sky" roaming in space. China women's volleyball team has reached the highest podium in the world; The most difficult Longlin is Shenwei, Light of Taihu Lake, FASr, Beidou satellite navigation system and quantum computer. The most difficult dragon fairy is the heroic spirit of selfless life and indomitable spirit, the firm belief of not forgetting his pioneering spirit and his perseverance, and the spirit of being United as one and helping each other in the same boat. Only the hardest dragon can weave the strongest dragon armor, and the strongest dragon armor can help the Oriental dragon take off for the first time.
We are facing a once-in-a-century great change. Today's world is changing, the game between big countries continues to intensify, regional frictions continue to increase, the global situation is ups and downs, and the situation is still grim ... If we want to be invincible in this complex international situation, we need stronger economic strength, military strength and scientific and technological strength, which requires each of us to forge the hardest Longlin.
To be the hardest dragon forest, you need to be ambitious, intelligent, talented and responsible; We need to dare to think, do and be the first in the world; We need to work hard, work hard, plead for the people and seek the law with our bodies; We should integrate ourselves into the motherland, integrate our struggle into our study, and help the Chinese nation realize its dream of great rejuvenation with youth and sweat.
Standing at the historical intersection of "two hundred years" and looking back at China, which was weak a hundred years ago, we are more confident than ever that the new generation of China will work with the people of the whole country to build China into a vibrant world power next year!
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Content: The theme is clear and the content is rich. From the beginning, Mao Zedong's theory of "the effect of sports" was taken as the breakthrough point, and the theory of striving for a strong country was discussed with the metaphor of physical fitness, which led to a grand theme. Cut in with a small mouth, put pen to paper with a big place, open and far-reaching ideas, and show personality and the spirit of the times. Then write the humiliating history of the Chinese nation's poverty and weakness, and write that the dream of realizing the country's prosperity and strength cannot be separated from countless "hardest dragon forests", and then discuss how to become the "hardest dragon forest", with novel ideas, strict logic, clear organization and natural transition. Expression: Use figurative rhetoric skillfully. The metaphors of "Oriental Dragon" and "The Hardest Dragon Forest" are unique and memorable. Write the humiliating history of the Chinese nation, avoid listing abstract historical events, and make the article more vivid and touching with vivid language. The use of parallelism in many places makes the language of the article vigorous and powerful.
Features: The title "Dream of a Powerful Country for a Hundred Years, Be the Hardest Long Lin" not only accurately expresses the theme of the article, but also uses rhetorical devices such as antithesis and metaphor, which is full of literary color. The fourth paragraph of the article praises "The Most Difficult Longlin", first praising the collective and the individual, then praising the scientific and technological achievements, and finally praising the national spirit. It is both broad and deep, and it is worth learning by the majority of candidates.
Summary of Chinese Full Score Composition in College Entrance Examination Paper (3) The ups and downs are interactive, and the strength depends on things.
When talking about "the function of the body", Sports Research pointed out that the human body changes every day. The body can be strong, from weak to strong; Long-term gratitude will also make physical fitness decline day by day, from strong to weak. "If we look at it from its own point of view, then the increase of heaven and earth can't be a problem." The body is changing, everything remains the same, the transformation is mutual, and the strength depends on things.
Born weak, diligent in self-exercise, take advantage of what it can't do, and then turn weakness into strength. Shi Jun, a congenital group of teenagers, is born with symptoms such as dyskinesia, sensory disturbance and language rejection, but he is not to be outdone. He overcame the difficulty of emphasizing Asia and practiced hard. In the college entrance examination in 2020, he scored 623 points, which was higher than the first line of science in An Sangu 108 points. Yao Si 'an came with a collision, and Mu Jun was the punisher. He is a well-deserved strongman who can practice hard and do well in the exam. So "the eyes are not clear, but the ears are not clever." Facing the difficulties, Pan will also "go against the sky and govern", break the yellow media and become a strong man of the times.
Born strong, abusing its power will turn strong into weak. Fang Zhongyong, a child prodigy, failed to make good use of his talent and eventually became a genius. An "old brand" in Beijing, after more than 60 years and at its peak, was forced to close down because of innovative factors and conformism. From this perspective, no matter individuals, enterprises or countries, they can't enjoy the success in the big waves. Even if they are strong, don't make progress and abuse their power, they will become losers for a long time.
Don't be strong and happy, don't be weak and sad, strengthen your faith and move towards prosperity. Modern China, which was in dire straits, was called "the sick man of East Asia", but China did not fall into it. The democratic revolution made China stand up, and the reform and opening up made China rich and strong. The people of China, who are constantly striving for self-improvement, paint a bright future and a beautiful face for the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation with their unyielding will and unshakable faith. Born in peace, but the lure of heaven makes China stronger, you know!
The ups and downs are mutually causal, and the strength depends on right and wrong. The weak, self-improvement, unremitting struggle, can change from strong to strong; The strong, not self-improvement, use their strength, but also from strong to weak. Natural strong people don't have to be complacent, and strangers don't have to feel sorry for themselves. This is true for individuals, and it is also true for countries and nations. Therefore, we should never be rabbits in the "tortoise-rabbit race" or Jiang Yan who is "exhausted by Jiang Lang". We should seize the opportunity, strive for self-improvement, strengthen our faith, be a strong man of the times, and build the road to the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation!
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Content: This examinee comes straight to the point, connecting "the effect of sports" with "all things remain", and comes to the view that "prosperity and decline interact, and strength depends on things". The article grasps the key content of the material, closely follows enlightenment, changes from the body, discusses the change of everything, and makes an extraordinary argument.
Expression: The language of this article has its own style, such as the use of sentences in the title, which is very neat and full of vitality. Secondly, the examinee used a variety of rhetorical devices from beginning to end, or quoted directly or indirectly, each with its own ingenuity and elegance. The sentence "born weak, but the temptation of heaven makes China stronger, really clear" is wonderful.
Features: Comparative argument is full of dialectical thinking. Whether analyzing individuals or analyzing collectives, the strength of comparison needs ups and downs. For example, Yao, a boy with a congenital brain, studies hard and skillfully compares his weaknesses and strengths. The examples of prodigy Fang Zhongyong and others are in sharp contrast with those of Yao Junlie.
Summary of Chinese Full Score Composition in the New Senior High School Entrance Examination (IV) With the self-improvement of teenagers, they have become the pillars of China.
19 17, Mao Zedong said in the article "Sports Research": "You don't need to be complacent when you are born strong, and you don't need to feel sorry for yourself when you are born weak." In my opinion, this is of enlightenment significance to contemporary youth and even the nation. The strong are not always strong, but should be prepared for danger in times of peace; The weak are not always weak, so we should catch up. In the great changes of the times, our youth should focus on the future, live up to their youth and strive for self-improvement.
Light the torch of the times with the fire of youth. "The role of sports" should not only keep the body strong, but also become the spiritual strength of the younger generation, thus promoting the prosperity of the country. The launch of Chang 'e V is inseparable from the hard work of countless young people. The launch of "Tian Wen No.1" is inseparable from the hardships of generations of young people; The perfect ending of poverty alleviation is inseparable from the silent dedication of countless young cadres. We are on the road of great rejuvenation in the new era and shoulder the great mission of the new era. Just as students and teenagers are in their prime, they should strive for self-improvement and become the pillars of China.
Let the voice of a powerful country awaken the national dream. Today's China has already grown from a South Lake painting boat a hundred years ago to a huge ship that leads China to be stable and far-reaching. A hundred years ago, our weak country had no diplomacy; One hundred years later, with the high-level strategic dialogue between China and the United States, China has already become strong. A truly powerful person can only remain strong if he constantly strives for self-improvement. Only by unremitting struggle, not afraid of competition, not afraid of opponents, and constantly surpassing, can we realize our own development and progress and push the country to prosperity and strength. Thanks to the unremitting efforts of countless people in China, China successfully got rid of the humiliation and weakness of the past, achieved today's prosperity and stood among the nations of the world.
Use the stone of struggle to build the road to development. The slackness of the "Sick Man of East Asia" in the late Qing Dynasty nailed the boss China to the shame column, and several generations continued to struggle and wrote an epic of self-improvement. Looking at today, China has become the second largest economy in the world, and the mileage of high-speed rail ranks first in the world, which shows its role as a big country against COVID-19. It is this spirit of self-improvement and hard struggle that enables China to successfully resolve various crises, break through numerous obstacles and achieve better development.
I only hope that you will put the important task of rejuvenating China on your shoulders. After decades of hard work and countless days and nights, generation after generation of young people have built a Chinese foundation with self-improvement, and talented people have emerged in large numbers, and new generations have changed for old ones. The temple of China is about to rise, which requires our young people to work hard and become the pillars of the country as soon as possible.
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Content; Candidates carefully study the composition materials and profoundly put forward the sports theory, which is of enlightenment significance to contemporary youth and even the nation: the strong are not necessarily strong, so they should be prepared for danger in times of peace; The weak are not always weak, so we should catch up. "The arguments are rich and diverse, such as Chang 'e V, Tian Wen I, and tackling poverty can be seen everywhere, and the history of national rise and fall is properly quoted.
Expression: The first sentence of the three paragraphs connecting the main paragraphs of the article is neat and beautiful, which has an outline effect on the whole language. Whole sentences and loose sentences are patchwork and complement each other.
Features: The article connects the main paragraphs with three neat sentences: "Light the torch of the times with the fire of youth", "Let the voice of a powerful country awaken the dream of the nation" and "Build the road of development with the stone of struggle", and discusses it from three aspects: youth, country and practice, with regular structure, in-depth reasoning and strict logic.
Summary of Chinese Full Score Composition in the New Senior High School Entrance Examination (5) The strong are getting stronger and stronger.
"Tian Xingjian, the gentleman is constantly striving for self-improvement."
True strength is not to be strong, but to be strong. To be strong may be weak, and to be strong is endless. Always up, forever strong.
Everything is constantly changing, as Mao Zedong said, "the unknowable is also". What we have to do is to keep advancing and improving. If you are a weak person, don't lose heart. If you keep getting stronger and never give up, you will definitely achieve something. If you have become a strong man, you can't be complacent. You should look at the problem soberly, keep a growing sense of normality and become a strong man.
"Being strong is the mother of luck", and everyone has to go through the process of becoming strong. Getting stronger and stronger, even if there are many difficulties and obstacles, it is just a whetstone. If a person can become stronger and stronger, with such a great quality, then even if he is defeated, he will never be defeated. When Huawei was founded, there were only a few people. In order to promote and attract investment, Ren suffered many supercilious glances, failed countless times, wanted to give up countless times, but insisted countless times to find his own shortcomings and weaknesses. They don't feel inferior, sigh or stagnate. Even if they are under unreasonable pressure now, they will never yield. On the contrary, the more depressed they are, the stronger they are. This is the best portrayal of becoming stronger.
The growth of a person is character, and the growth of a group of people is the rise of a nation.
Our country was arbitrarily carved up by the great powers, our people were slaughtered by the invaders, and our national dignity was trampled underfoot by the enemy ... but the Chinese people never gave up. Encouraged by the spirit of growth, the Chinese people United and rose up against it. Finally, the five-star red flag, Ran Ran, which became more and more red with blood, rose, the lion in the East gradually woke up, and the Chinese nation became stronger and stronger.
Chen Duxiu, Li Dazhao and others created "New Youth" in the hope that the youth of the world would really wake up, gradually strengthen China and bring dawn to the times. In that poor and weak China, many people ask themselves: Can China be saved? China can certainly be saved. Since ancient times, the people of China have become stronger and stronger. As the Chinese nation grows stronger, the people of China will finally stand up.
Fang Zhimin said: Yes, China is broken now, the country is harmful and the people are poor, but who can say that China has no bright future? Because we come from China, we have a strong character in our blood, and we will become stronger, struggle and succeed.
With the arrival of the new era, as young people of our generation, we must carry forward the increasingly powerful and precious spirit and awaken ourselves and others. "The strong are born without complacency, and the weak are born without self-pity. I am born weak, or the temptation of heaven makes me strong, I don't know. "
We won't know until we get stronger.
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The center is prominent and rich in content. The title of this article is the central argument, which is very clear; The first paragraph was rewritten to strengthen the reader's impression. At the end of the article, I took pains to "become stronger and stronger, and then I will know", which was emphasized in the change.
Typical examples and rich content. "Tian Xingjian, Gentleman Strive for Self-improvement" has changed from "Tian Xingjian, Gentleman Strive for Self-improvement" to "Tian Xingjian, Gentleman Strive for Self-improvement", which is not only convincing, but also closely follows the main content of the material, which can be said to turn decay into magic; To quote Fang Zhimin, you should be very measured, not lengthy, not procrastinating, and not diverging.
Clever structure and clear organization. "The growth of a person is a kind of character, and the growth of a group of people is the rise of a nation ..." This golden sentence not only takes care of the materials, but also reflects the thinking of candidates, which is gradual and gradual, and reflects the good thinking quality of candidates.