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Error types of common sick sentences
Modifying a sick sentence means modifying words with obvious language defects without changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, so that the sentence is smooth, correct and more perfect. What are the error types of common sick sentences? The following are the common types of mistakes in ill sentences I have compiled, welcome to enjoy.

Common sentence error types 1 1 Incomplete components: For example, I did a lot of good things for my class. ? It is not clear who has done many good deeds.

Improper use of words: for example: He acts calmly and arbitrarily. Arbitrary? It's a derogatory term. It should be changed to? Decisive? .

(3) Improper collocation of words: For example, at the party, we heard sweet songs and beautiful dances. Do you hear me? With what? Beautiful dance? Obviously not worthy, it should be changed to? At the get-together, we heard sweet songs and saw beautiful dances. ?

(4) The word order is reversed: For example, Chinese is very interested in me. China? And then what? Me? The position of is upside down. It should be changed to? I am very interested in Chinese. ?

5. Inconsistency: For example? I guess he must have made a mistake on this issue. ? The first half of the sentence is not sure enough, and the second half is sure that he is wrong, so there is a contradiction. What happened? People don't understand. Can you change it to? I guess he made a mistake on this issue. ? Or? I concluded that he had done the problem wrong. ?

He rushed into the classroom and happily announced the good news that he would go for a spring outing tomorrow. ? In the sentence? Excited? And then what? Cheerful? All show that he is happy, but one can be deleted.

(7) illogical and unreasonable: for example, when rice is ripe, the fields are green and there is a scene of bumper harvest. ? Rice is golden yellow when it is ripe, but it is unreasonable to use green to describe this sentence.

(8) the concept is unclear: for example? Wan Li Great Wall, Palace Museum and Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are historical sites that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for. ? Here? Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge? Don't belong? Monument? The concept of ownership is unclear and should be changed to? The Great Wall of Wan Li and the Palace Museum are historical sites that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for. ?

(9) the reference object is unknown: for example? Huang Hong and Zhao Yan went to Dengxian Building together. She climbed faster than her. She climbed to the top of Xianlou first. ? In the sentence? She? There are two. Is Huang Hong climbing fast or Zhao Yan climbing fast? Reference unknown should be changed to? She climbed very fast. She climbed to the top of Xianlou first. ? Or? Huang Hong climbed faster than her, and Huang Hong climbed to the top of Xianlou first. ?

(10) What is the misuse of related words? Huangshan Mountain is not only a beautiful place, but also I really want to visit it. ? This sentence does not constitute a progressive relationship but a causal relationship. So, is it necessary to put related words? Not only with? Change to? Because of this? ; Another example? Only by studying hard can you get good grades. ? Is there only justice in the sentence? Improper collocation of related words should be changed to? Only talent? .

Common sentence error type 2 1 ()

A, an excellent basketball coach with more than 20 years of teaching experience came from the national team.

B, in the construction of new China, they are exerting their infinite hidden power.

C. There are all kinds of things that Lenin used in the past.

D. Whether this seed should be changed has aroused extensive discussion among leaders and the masses.

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A, we came to this world-famous museum and saw a dazzling array of art treasures, all of which made people feel proud.

B, the strong and fast rhythm of rock music and the flickering lighting effect make people see things in a blur.

C. If the opinions in an article are problematic, even if the text is good, it is unacceptable.

D, Unless confrontational training is strengthened, it is possible for China football to go global, otherwise even Asia will not be able to rush out.

3 ( )

1. Cotton production in China could not be self-sufficient in the past.

B, I think this reply and the investigation and handling of this problem are irresponsible.

C before liberation, my father and brother didn't earn enough money to support their families.

D, we don't completely deny that this poem does not reveal hope, but that this hope is very slim.

4 ( )

A,1October 1 1 day, with the idea of learning from the Ministry of Aviation, our blackboard newspaper was also published.

B in addition to the tickets issued, members' family members must have family badges. If any of them is missing, they can't enter.

C, it can be seen how weak the attitude of being responsible for the concern of the working class is.

D, recently launched a comprehensive quality inspection activities, in this activity to complete the establishment and strengthening of technical management system and a series of work.

5 ( )

First, now the fishermen have elected their own administrative team leader, who is responsible for mastering the fishermen's life and production management.

B, it's been ten years since Lao Zhang died.

C. People's Republic of China (PRC) was founded and the program was promulgated. Women are equal in law.

D Mr. Kan Kan, although his voice and smile have not changed much, the wrinkles around his eyes seem to imply the hardships and unhappiness of these years.

6 ( )

One, only close contact with society, contact with the masses, can put forward insightful opinions on national security and people's worries.

B, "Reading 300 Tang poems, you can sing even if you can't sing", which is suitable for writing poems as well as writing articles.

C, the dispute over right and wrong on scientific issues should not be forced, especially not to engage in things like literary inquisition. Whoever does this in history has never had a good result.

D. When driving through this place, he found a sign with red letters on it, which looked illegible.

7 ( )

A, "Physician Law" clearly stipulates that registered physicians in many countries and regions in the world must join local medical associations.

B, using the theory and method of social science to study the Internet is a new topic for social science workers.

C, the plaque style is vulgar and grotesque, although indecent; Worship foreign things and obsess over foreign countries is full of colonial culture, which is also a shame for China people.

D. The issuance scale of China's national debt this year is1952 billion yuan.

8 ( )

A. The filter developed by Transportation Research Institute can purify the tail gas of low-grade diesel oil, which has contributed to environmental protection.

B. In order to implement the Teacher Law, Wanshou County reimbursed all the medical expenses owed to teachers on the eve of March 8.

C, the director of the wood processing factory, reported how they introduced advanced technology, actively improved the equipment of the factory and mobilized employees to learn how to use the new equipment, thus launching a series of new products.

D. Shops openly sell pirated software, and we must crack down on this act of trampling on the publishing law.

9 ( )

Since the people of China accepted Marxism, the China Revolution has gone from victory to victory under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong.

Second, reform and improve the new scientific and technological system that conforms to the objective laws of scientific and technological development and adapts to the socialist market economy.

C In September this year, two young people under the age of 30 from "Xihu Dali" were promoted to the important positions of executive vice presidents of knitting branch and clothing branch, which means that "Xihu Dali" began to implement its awareness of snapshot in the cultivation of human resources.

D. 100 years ago, a 57-year-old stubborn single old man could still hear thunder, but he couldn't hear a large symphony orchestra playing his own music. He raised his fist to the roaring sky for the last time and then passed away.

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A, those congressmen who talk about "human rights" but keep silent about "human rights", what kind of "human rights" are imposed on blacks by the white police in the United States?

B, mountaineering clubs in Austria are all over the country. It has 250,000 members who pay a certain membership fee according to their annual income.

C. At present, the most fundamental problem facing China's economy is still insufficient demand. Proceeding from this macroeconomic situation, it is still necessary to continue to implement a proactive fiscal policy, promote economic restructuring, and accelerate infrastructure construction, including promoting the development of the western region.

D in the past ten years, the number of books published each year has more than doubled, while the total print run has remained basically the same, which indicates that the average number of books has more than doubled.

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In the past three years, the total grain output of this county has increased by an average of 20% every year, making great strides.

B, the source of river water is not only groundwater, but also rainwater.

C, Huai Su's bold and unrestrained, Badashanren's personality is the pride of the Han nationality, but Van Gogh's passion and Matisse's rhythm have long been dumped by Chinese people.

D the national conference on the preparation of enrollment plans for colleges and universities was held recently in Taiyuan, Shanxi. According to the plan, the enrollment plans of universities affiliated to the central government for the western region and ethnic minority areas will increase this year, and the admission rate of college entrance examinations in all provinces, autonomous regions and municipalities directly under the Central Government will exceed 30%.

12 ( )

A, this is the mother of a hero, an open-minded mother.

This paper analyzes the strategic characteristics adopted by the proletariat and the bourgeoisie in their struggles in various historical periods.

C, cigarette smuggling is rampant, and China Customs has given priority to cracking down on cigarette smuggling.

D. The limitations of the author's own time and class have to be reflected in his works, which is a problem that we must pay attention to when evaluating ancient literary works.

13 ( )

A, the temptation of surfing the Internet makes modern people unable to refuse, but the expensive online consumption makes netizens feel heartache.

B Recently, it has been confirmed by the relevant departments that the new senior high school students who entered school in September 2000 in China will no longer use the current senior high school Chinese textbooks that have been used for 20 years. According to their own situation, middle schools around the country can decide to choose one of the two new textbooks, the Chinese Experiment Book for Senior High School and the Chinese Experiment Textbook for Senior High School, which are compiled by People's Education Publishing House.

C, overcome the tendency of focusing only on the development of tourism and neglecting the protection of tourism resources, and take practical measures to do a good job in dike protection.

D According to statistics, there are at least 200 million paulownia plants in Henan Province, and the intercropping area between agriculture and paulownia has increased to10 million mu.

14 ( )

A. In Tsinghua University, online testing is adopted, so that candidates can "speak freely" with professors online, and then a number of professors vote to recommend them, and finally the school decides whether to accept them.

If China wants to join the WTO and participate in international competition, it is imperative to properly manage the protection of intellectual property rights and the implementation of trademark law.

C, made a breach in Zhengzhou Huayuankou, which directly flooded more than 6 13 counties in Henan and Anhui provinces, with a population of more than 6190,000.

D. Lu Xun attaches great importance to children's literature creation. He pointed out that the fate of children is the fate of the future.

15 ( )

A: This station will broadcast a TV speech on safety production by the director of the State Work Safety Committee at noon today.

His parents are both middle school teachers, and his mother teaches in Xixiang No.1 Middle School, his alma mater. This time, she also came to Beijing as a school representative.

This magazine is mainly aimed at middle school Chinese teachers and other Chinese workers.

D. Looking down the flute, I saw a young man sitting by the lake playing the flute, which sounded so sad.

16 ( )

A, who can deny that the quality of heroes is gradually cultivated in this kind of hard study day after day?

B at the beginning of the gulf war, Iraq set a large number of false targets to confuse the reconnaissance effect of multinational force aircraft and reconnaissance satellites, and finally saved some aircraft.

C, he didn't tell the other party the date of the game according to the decision of the student union, which led to misunderstanding.

D, I remember when I met him, I was just a child of seven or eight years old, innocent and unrestrained.

17 ( )

1. Macao has been drifting away from the motherland for 400 years. Can it be denied that Macao's return to the motherland is not the common wish of all Chinese people?

B, farmers along the Yangtze River consciously expand the area of green manure, so as to improve soil fertility and ensure the increase of grain production in the coming year.

C. Since last autumn, great achievements have been made in the propaganda work of banning cutting down and selling trees in the upper reaches of the Yangtze River.

D. The "medical green channel" jointly established by Beijing Health Messenger Company and 10 Hospital is a brand-new rapid medical treatment mechanism.

18 ( )

A, I don't think anyone can deny that this play has some negative effects.

Zhang Xiangdong and his son are both teachers. He said, "It was my father's love of teaching and dedication that inspired me to take the stage."

C, he found that he bought a "parallel" shirt and was very angry, so he called a taxi back.

D, he didn't listen to the tutor's suggestion, and revised the thesis point of view, which affected the level of the thesis.

19 ( )

A. After rectification, the order inside and outside the venue has obviously improved, and the audience is no longer crowded with each other.

The economic loss caused by this accident is serious. According to conservative estimates of relevant people, the direct loss is at least 60 million yuan.

The China swimming team participating in the Asian Games consists of 12 excellent players selected from 20 training players.

D. If the U.S. government fails to fulfill its obligations in the Sino-U.S. trade agreement, multi-fiber products agreement and textile agreement, no one can predict that Sino-U.S. trade will not reverse.

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NATO's indiscriminate bombing of Yugoslavia set a precedent for digging its own grave in the history of international relations.

B. Throughout the ages, everything that has achieved a career and made a difference to mankind is the result of down-to-earth and hard work.

C, it is not easy to collect historical materials, and it is even more difficult to identify and use historical materials. Historians in China mostly devote their major efforts to this aspect.

D. The "Golden Jade Clothes" unearthed by Liu Sheng, the King of Zhongshan in the Western Han Dynasty, in China was publicly exhibited in the Palace Museum.

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A. In this competition, Sichuan Men's Volleyball Team tried its best to win the championship in one fell swoop.

B. The big cherries planted by Uncle Zhao are basically sold out as soon as they are picked.

C. I looked at the smiling face sitting under the fluorescent lamp, and a warm feeling suddenly came to my mind.

D. Under the guidance of the tour guide, they strolled among the 19 archways of Quezhuang, filled with emotion.

22 ( )

A, the fierce competition in the market economy will inevitably make some products in an awkward position, making them unable to make ends meet.

B, some people say that his defeat was related to personal grievances, but when he retorted, he denied that it had nothing to do with personal grievances.

C in the high jump, Xiao Chen flew forward, kicked and jumped up. Oh, what a pity. He almost didn't jump.

Emei Mountain is one of the four famous Buddhist mountains in China. During the period, there were pines and cypresses, flowing springs and waterfalls, with beautiful scenery and great momentum, which was known as "Emei is the best in the world".

23 ( )

A. Around Tomb-Sweeping Day, the army sent more than 800 people to plant trees in the suburbs.

B, a good metaphor, or similar in shape, or similar in spirit, or similar in form and spirit, is always inseparable from the fundamental feature of similarity.

The development of science and technology in a country is based on its economy, culture and education.

D, this new drug is very convenient to use, has a long action time, and can last for 12 hours in vivo.

24 ( )

A. In the office yesterday, the teacher had a sincere exchange of views with him.

B, this year's "Examination Notes" has made some new adjustments to the examination content and requirements of Chinese subjects.

C. I feel very encouraged to walk into the experimental building of the newly-built normal school. I really want to study here.

D. Through fact education, all medical staff have improved their understanding of correctly inheriting the medical heritage of the motherland.

25 ( )

A. The Phonetic Evaluation Table of Putonghua Words with Different Pronunciation jointly issued by the State Language Commission and the State Education Commission in 1985 stipulates that "pronunciation" should be read uniformly. n .

B, the origin of the Mid-Autumn Festival "the Goddess Chang'e flying to the moon" story has been widely circulated among the people since ancient times, which is one of its causes.

C. When students are emotional because of external things, I will seize this opportunity to guide students to write their own psychological activities and feelings.

D. Many parents spoil their children too much, which does great harm to their growth.

answer

1, "contained in" A(B) "moved to the front of" infinite ". C "Lenin used to use" was moved before "various". D "Causing" moved before "widespread". )

D (a) "Everyone makes people" is inconsistent with the subject of the previous sentence. B "rhythm" and "let people see" do not match. C "text" is placed after "even if". )

3.B(A) It is "cotton" that cannot be "self-sufficient", not "cotton yield". C "feeding" and "living" do not match verbs and objects. D. improper denial. )

4. B(A) The subject is inconsistent, and the second half of the sentence is changed to "We also run a blackboard newspaper", while C's subject and predicate are not matched, and it is changed to "How weak is care and responsibility?" D

The verb and the object don't match, so "strengthen" is changed to "perfect". )

5. D(A to "master" B to "farewell" C.

"Women's legal equality" is not clear, and it is not clear whether it is "women's own equality" or "men and women's legal equality". )

6.B(A) "insight" and "opinion" are semantically repetitive. C delete "similar things". "d" is ambiguous. )

7. The subject of "join" in B (a) is unclear. C is a misnomer, and "shame" has been changed to "teeth". D the expression is not standardized, and the word "billions" is changed to "billions". )

8. D(A subject is inconsistent, "developed" is changed to "developed" and b "all" is placed after "teacher". C

"Bao" lacks an object, so you can add "Lian" after the original sentence. )

9.D(A) "Since" is placed at the beginning of the sentence. B The word "reform" was changed to "establishment". C Add "quilt" after "young people". )

10, C(A "those" are put at the beginning of the sentence. B Replace "payment" with "receipt". D Replace "double" with "half". )

1 1, D(A) Incorrect collocation of "output" and "development". B go and wait. C "Correct execution-"and "profound understanding" are reversed. )

12, D(A) "A hero's mother" is ambiguous. Whether "he" is a preposition or a conjunction is not clear. C After the original sentence, add "the work of". )

13, B(A is a misnomer, and "online" is changed to "online". C "overcoming" and "tilting" verb-object mismatch. D "at least" and "about" are contradictory. )

14, A(B) is a misnomer, and "manage well" is changed to "do well". C "submerged population" verb-object mismatch. The first half of d is ambiguous. )

15, A(B) "All the way" is placed after "Ye". C delete "oriented". D the subject is inconsistent, and "this flute sound" is removed. )

16, A(B) "Confusion" and "Effect" are not collocated properly. C "the decision of the student union" is ambiguous. The subject of "still only" in D is ambiguous. )

17, D(A) uses more negative words and removes "no". B. The verb-object collocation of "expanding variety" and "area" is improper. C

Replace "and publicity" with "publicity" and put it after "trees". )

18, A(B "he" is ambiguous. C "Call a taxi back" is ambiguous. D what is the "tutor's suggestion" is unclear and ambiguous. )

19, D(A) Delete "mutual". B Delete "above". C Add "from" after "from". )

20.D(A) If "creation" and "precedent" do not match properly, go to "creation". B mixed sentences, remove the "result". C "this aspect" is ambiguous. )

2 1, d (a repetition of "do" and "all". B the contradiction between "basic" and "all". C "feeling" can not be modified by "one share". )

22, D(A) "its" is changed to "enterprise". B delete "no". C delete "no" )

23.B(A) "person-time" can't "participate" and "work", which shows that the subject-predicate collocation is improper. C. go to "it" and add "a country" after "to". D

"Long-term effect" is not properly matched. )

24.B(A) "In the office" is put after "Yesterday". C

Improper word order, the first sentence is changed to "walk into the new experimental building of normal school". D improper use of words, "right" becomes "in". )

25. In C(A), add "──"b" before ",which can be changed to" The story of the Goddess Chang'e flying to the moon, which has been widely circulated among the people since ancient times, is a statement about the origin of Mid-Autumn Festival ". D delete "too". )