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How to write a composition with embedding
1. How to write an embedded composition? Please visit China Tibetan Poetry Network.

1. Definition: Embedding is a Tibetan poem, also known as "Tibetan style", which is a kind of miscellaneous poems. There are three forms: one is the scenery contained in the six sentences of the first couplet and the second couplet, which does not reveal the meaning of the topic until it is connected; The second is to hide the first sentence of the poem in the last word; The third is to hide what is said at the beginning of the poem. The third type is common now. Reading the first word of each sentence together can convey the author's unique ideas.

2. Example: For example, in Water Margin, in order to get Lu Junyi to join in, Wu Yong and Song Jiangsheng, the "wise men", told a story of "Wu earned a jade unicorn with his wisdom", taking advantage of Lu Junyi's fear of avoiding "blood disaster" and occupying four divinatory positions: a boat among reeds, from which Jie Jun and Russia traveled. If an upright man can know this, he can't escape from the bow.

The word "Lu Junyi against" is hidden and widely circulated. As a result, it became evidence of government punishment, and finally "forced" Lu Junyi to Liangshan.

In the Lu drama "Unmatched Destiny", Shuangshou also expressed this intention with Tibetan poems: "I don't stop dressing up in the morning, I can't wait to see Ziyanfei, and I can't come back in spring. It is better to return to the water and land painting building. " Hide the word "early welcome unparalleled".

There are also many masters of Tibetan poetry among literati and officialdom. For example, Xu Wei, a university student in Ming Dynasty, visited the West Lake. Facing the beautiful scenery of autumn moon Pinghu, he improvised a poem: Pinghu is full of autumn colors and lakes.

There are few full moons in the world, and autumn is best when the moon is fine at four o'clock. Among them, the word "autumn moon in Pinghu" is hidden.

Among today's intellectuals, some people can use Tibetan poems appropriately. Wu Xiaoli, director of Hong Kong Phoenix TV Station, immediately sent a congratulatory message when he visited Huaxi Dushi Bao: the light of China, the leader of the western region, the pride of metropolis and small town, and the pioneer of newspaper industry.

It is also a Tibetan poem when read carefully, and the first word of each poem is "Huaxi Dushibao". Like an embedded poem.

With the advent of the Internet age and the prosperity of network communication, Tibetan poems are becoming more and more popular on the Internet. There is not only a special website "China Tibetan Poetry Network", but also writers in various poetry forums have created a large number of Tibetan poems with the theme of net names.

2. What else can you write about summer stories? Miss Xia came at a brisk pace. She also came into this world with her magical "magic ball-fireball". Her figure can be seen everywhere, and her warm hands touch us. In the morning, before I opened my eyes, I heard cicadas hiding in the dense leaves. Singing "cicada, cicada, heat, heat ……", I narrowed my sleepy eyes, only to see the strong sunlight shooting into the room early, forcing me to turn on the air conditioner that had been turned off for a while ... At noon, a strange sight appeared in front of me, only the street in front of me was half wet and half dry. I looked up and saw it. However, there is a dark cloud floating in the air here. Where such dark clouds float, there are showers of flowers. This Halloween is really like the face of a three-year-old doll. It cries when talking, laughs when laughing, and it is uncertain.

At night, by the pond in the park, crickets jump around in the grass to hide and seek, and frogs stand on the lotus leaves and sing "Gung! Gung! Gung! ..... "Little fish are still swimming around happily in the river, playing and watching their performances in the tree when they are cicadas, and singing" Ode to Summer "with them from time to time.

3. How to write a composition in the moonlight, I have the clearest cup; After sunset, I hold a wisp of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I picked up the hottest one; I picked a bunch of the most colorful herbs; In the long life, I want to pick out the most important thing in the world-perseverance. If life is a solemn castle, if life is a lush tree, if life is a flying seabird. Then, faith is the pillar of the dome, the deeply rooted root and the fluttering wings. Without faith, there is no motivation for life; Without faith, the beauty of life will disappear. Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes poor and sick people feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people. Low love, sometimes don't need a vow of eternal love, but she must need meticulous care and greetings; Love, sometimes does not need Liang Zhu to become a butterfly's tragic, but she must need tacit understanding and congenial; Love sometimes doesn't need the follow-up of the man and the woman, but it does need mutual care, support and understanding. Spring silkworms died, but they left behind luxurious silk; The butterfly died, but left beautiful clothes; Thrushcross flew away, but left a wonderful song; Flowers withered, but left a wisp of fragrance; The candle burned out, but it left a bright light; Thunderstorm has passed, but colorful neon still exists, although you are still a seedling. However, as long as you persevere, you will eventually become a towering tree; Although you are only a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Although you are only a young eagle now, as long as you aim high and fall a few times, you will eventually occupy the blue sky. Yesterday's persistence is called foothold, today's persistence is called enterprising, and tomorrow's persistence is called success. If you only see the black spots of the sun, your life will lack warmth; If you only see the shadow of the moon, it is difficult to find light in your life; If you always find the shortcomings of your friends, it will be difficult for you to find a bosom friend in your life journey; Similarly, if you always want to be perfect, assuming that your wish can really come true, then your biggest shortcoming is that you have no shortcomings. The Himalayas go straight into the sky, but there are climbers' flags on it; The Sahara desert is endless, but there are footprints of hikers inside; There are thousands of cliffs in the Alps, but there are explorers among them; The Yarlung Zangbo River is swift and mighty, but there are stories of brave people in it. Every drop of water reflects a colorful world, every pair of eyes is embedded in a colorful world, and every stream with beautiful melody shines with the brilliance of beauty. Don't sigh the helplessness of the world, look at the prosperity and color of the world with a good mood, and savor the beauty everywhere! When the young eagle is still hungry in its nest and looking at the blue sky and white clouds, it has a dream, that is, flapping its wings, fighting with the blue sky and dancing with the white clouds; When the fine horse rested in the fence and held its head high and hissed, it also had a dream, that is, it bravely hoofed the wild and galloped the world. When snow and ice cover, we need fire to keep warm; When the night is boundless, we need a little starlight to keep warm; When the future is boundless, we need a navigation light to keep warm ... In the four seasons, what we can't filter out is worry and sadness, and what we can't get rid of is hardship and pain. In cold weather, what can we use to warm ourselves and stand in the wind? Leave some sincerity to keep yourself warm! A secluded path, twists and turns will always arouse the yearning for relaxation; Huge waves can make a thrilling sound when the tide rises and falls; A story, but there is sadness in sadness; A kind of life, ups and downs, China shows a shocking grandeur. Youth is the flower in March, the sunny rain in July and the red leaves in October. It is the rising sun of the spray, the hundred ge of competition, and the eagle fighting the sky; Is playing the strings of joy, is a bumpy, persistent stream flowing to the sea, is a straight trunk, stretched lush, warmly embrace the blue sky, what poplar, quietly come, leaving no trace, but aroused the light dance of ten thousand colors? What is it, leaving no trace, coming quietly, leaving a season of singing? What comes gently and goes quietly, leaving golden color in the harvest season? What is it, leaving quietly and coming gently, spinning a white dream for the silent earth? The philosopher smiled at the blue sky: "It's time." Children clap their hands with kites: "It's the wind." Bees envy eagles for fighting the blue sky and flying freely, but they don't realize that they can spread pollen and make nature colorful and fruitful; Gravel envied Jasper's lush green and considerable value, but did not realize that he would eventually achieve smooth roads and towering buildings; The ugly duckling envies the flawless beauty of the white swan, but she doesn't know that she is glowing with unique style.

4. How to quote poems when students write a composition, so that your composition will shine.

Make the finishing point and explain the topic. "Half of this article is well written." The topic is the eyes of composition. If a pair of beautiful and bright eyes can be embedded in the composition to make readers fall in love with this article at first sight, then our works will be seen and won more favor. The title needs innovation, highlighting the word "new" and being novel and unique.

Classical poetry has rich symbolic meaning and connotation. Taking them as a topic is unconventional, novel and refined, which makes people feel shocked. Second, readers love it and have a sense of intimacy. San Mao, a writer in Taiwan Province Province, adopted the novel Jade Case written by Xin Qiji, a poet in the Song Dynasty. Lantern Festival, the phrase "Thousands of Baidu searched for him, suddenly looking back, the man was in the dim light"; Peng Jingfeng's "Pear Blossoms on the Postal Road" is a poem written by Lu You, which says "Pears on the Postal Road are everywhere". Qiong Yao's "Deep Courtyard" also used the phrase "How deep is the yard".

I used poetry to enter the topic and played a lot of beautiful eyes. For example, being alone in this mountain (Su Shi's poem), being alone in a tall building (Wang Guowei's words), and stormy Ren Pingsheng (stormy Ren Pingsheng's words) and so on. Another example is: the composition with the title of "sincerity", the composition with the title of "looking for in many ways" and "missing", and the composition with the title of "so-called Iraqis are on the water side", all of which quoted famous sentences, which had strong expressive color and profound pun meaning.

Quoting poems can also be subtitled. For example, in Lu Guang's China Girl, there is a passage about Yuan Weimin's almost ruthless training for women volleyball girls. The subtitle is "Tao is heartless and affectionate", which is a poem written by Liu Yuxi, a poet in the Tang Dynasty. It is both clear-cut and imaginative to write about joys and sorrows with the theme of "full moon and sunny days". Writing about the storm of parents' meeting with "the coming events cast their shadows before them" can make people infected by the tense atmosphere as soon as they come into contact with the topic of composition. Second, flexible citation to stimulate literary talent

It is impossible to write an article with every word. To make the article "brilliant", you can "light up" the readers' eyes with fragmentary and partial quips such as poems and show your language ability. Let your articles fly in the sky.

Quote the beginning of a poem.

The beginning is good, novel, vivid and fascinating. If you put an ancient poem at the beginning and use its distinctive structure to guide the whole text, it will play the role of "the first of the dragons".

5. How to write a composition? How does my classmate describe my classmate?

He is tall, very straight. A pair of watery eyes embedded in the round goose egg face is very magical. Under his eyes is his straight nose, and Zhang Yuanyuan's big red mouth has been an "old neighbor" for ten years! He is a very caring classmate and likes to help others. He is my classmate Liu Zeyu.

One day in self-study class, I made a mistake in my homework, so I looked for an eraser in my pencil box, but I couldn't find it. I started rummaging through the table again, but I couldn't find it for a long time. Oh, what is it? I'm as anxious as a cat on hot bricks-running around. Then I patted my head and remembered that I must have left my homework in my schoolbag yesterday. what can I do? This is only the first class! At this moment, Liu Zeyu just handed in his exercise book and came over. Seeing that I was in such a hurry, he asked me with concern, "What's the matter with you? Why are you in such a hurry? " I replied helplessly, "I forgot to bring my eraser." Liu Zeyu went on to say, "Then you can use my eraser." After that, he handed me a black eraser, and I was very grateful. After the first class, I went over to thank Liu Zeyu: "Liu Zeyu, thank you." He said, "Never mind, good friend, you don't have to be so polite. This eraser can be returned to me after school today. I am afraid that some students don't bring school tools, but bring an eraser and ruler every day. "

I didn't know much about Liu Zeyu before, but after listening to his words, I knew he was a helpful classmate. I'm really glad to have such a good classmate.

6. Ten tips on how to write a good composition and ten tips on how to write a good composition easily.

Tip 1: The writing score depends on the handwriting, and the scoring factor comes first.

In any form of composition examination, when the marking teacher marks the paper, at first glance, it is handwriting. Therefore, writing a composition must be done well. Remember, the composition is about content, not calligraphy. Don't scribble.

Tip 2: Write five or six paragraphs in the exam composition, and mark the papers neatly.

Pay attention to timely segmentation in exam composition, with three or four paragraphs appearing less and eight or nine paragraphs appearing trivial. Unless there are special circumstances, five or six paragraphs are better. In addition, the roll surface must be neat and tidy, and don't arbitrarily alter it. In my opinion, it is best not to exceed five lines in each paragraph of the exam composition, and at most five and a half lines. Do nothing. Once the visual fatigue of the marking teacher affects his psychology, his score will be affected.

Tip 3: Color contrast is also the key. It is suggested to choose blue with a pen.

The test papers are all black printed squares. Students are advised to write their compositions with a neutral blue pen that is neither shallow nor deep, and the strokes are neither thick nor thin. This kind of composition is written, which forms a certain visual contrast with the black box, and has a bright feeling in the eyes, which may be the advantage of the score. When writing a composition, it is recommended to occupy three quarters of the bottom of the box or the lower left corner, so that it looks good.

Tip 4: the beginning and the end should be concise, preferably two and a half lines at the beginning and the end.

In addition to avoiding eight or nine lines, "big-headed composition" is also unacceptable. Candidates are advised to write a composition with two and a half lines at the beginning and three and a half lines at the end. There will be instant fatigue in vision, which will also affect the mood of the marking teacher.

Tip 5: write a topic before writing, and the topic should be as beautiful as a beauty.

Examination composition, generally by the candidates themselves, the topic can not be too long, nor too short. There are two ways to raise a topic. First of all, you can go to Baidu to search for a composition topic, and you can find similar skills that the composition teacher said. Second, parents or candidates should turn over the bound volumes of Reader and Youth Digest in the last year, select dozens of wonderful topics according to the subject matter, and memorize them, so that they may be used in the exam.

Tip 6: punch holes at the beginning and end of the composition to make it colorful and bright.

There are many ways to start an exam composition: six elements, inscription, suspense, quotation, parallelism, personification, questioning, antithesis, metaphor antithesis, combined rhetoric, clever use of allusions, problem solving, celebrity question and answer, and poetry quotation. At least, when you see the composition, the first seven or eight methods mentioned above will flash in your mind.

The ending is also very important. Generally speaking, the conclusion is a summary of the full text. If it is a narrative, pay attention to lyricism. If it is argumentative, we should pay attention to induction. In any case, it's best to get the topic right. How to deduct? If you are really not sure, tell the title of the first sentence of the last paragraph and then summarize the full text.

Tip 7: Don't panic before you start writing. Think about the topic and make an outline.

In the concrete operation, the outline is very important. For example, when writing a narrative, you should design the beginning and the end, and divide your narrative into several levels. A level is a paragraph, and it would be better if a transitional sentence or paragraph could be set in the middle. When outlining, be sure to write the beginning and end in detail, and what quips, famous sayings, poems and allusions are interspersed in the middle paragraphs, so as to be accurate. A qualified student, make an outline, about 5 to 8 minutes. To master time, the outline should be concise.

Tip 8: Think about the theme and style, neither donkey nor horse is desirable.

Write a composition, narrative or argumentative essay. Generally speaking, it is mostly a "total-sub-total" structure. At the end of the narrative, we should pay attention to lyricism and summing up philosophy. Argumentative papers should be "1-3- 1" or "1-4- 1" with 3 or 4 in the middle, which is a hierarchical problem solving. Of course, you can also use narrative and discussion methods flexibly. However, we should be careful not to say so many examples in the argumentative essay without summarizing the theme, and say too much what we forgot to say in the narrative. Therefore, to write an exam composition, you should think well in advance.

Tip 9: clone and "copy" properly, prepare the materials before the exam and save the information.

Before the exam, candidates are advised to read a lot of model essays and accumulate some structure of the exam composition. You can summarize the outline and routine of writing and recite three or five sentences respectively. For example, there was an Olympic Games the year before last, and last year was the 60th anniversary of the founding of New China, and the touching story of the Wenchuan earthquake. , can be used as the topic of the exam composition.

In addition, there are some nonstandard methods, such as touching stories of other families, which can be moved to their own homes. This should be used flexibly and carefully in the exam.

Tip 10: try to fill the space, and write a little more.

Generally speaking, the composition of the senior high school entrance examination requires no less than 600-800 words. If the requirement is about 600 words, then write 700 words at most. Arrange the paper as reasonably as possible and fill it to about 95%. For example, the composition of the senior high school entrance examination is not less than 600 words, and most of the papers are about 800 words. Then, you should try to write 780 words and leave the last one or two lines.

7. How to write embedded couplets? How to write a much-needed embedded couplet? As the name implies, it is a couplet with people's names embedded, that is, the names of people, places or other things are embedded in the relevant parts of the couplet, so that the upper and lower couplets correspond to each other to improve the interest and appeal of the couplet.

Embedding couplets is widely used in wedding couplets and gift couplets, and the embedding methods are also varied according to the situation. Mosaic couplets are generally divided into whole mosaic and sub-mosaic, and sub-mosaic can also be divided into several types.

Writing: 1. Making a fuss about the word "Zi" is to embed the word. Rendering according to the embedded text, properly matching auspicious, blessing, praise, compliment and other statements, splicing association is completed.

According to Zi, the advantage of inscribed couplets is that it doesn't need in-depth textual research and scrutiny, and it is convenient and easy to get, so it is generally used for hasty chapters and sentences. The disadvantage is that "characters" are not targeted and easy to become dull.

Because it has little to do with the donee, it may become a "universal type". For example, Guo Moruo gave Zhang a pair of heavy epaulettes: morality is like iron, and it can shoulder the shoulders; Spirit is as heavy as a mountain.

For example, the couplet given by Cai E: this place is rare; He is like a pearl. 2. Make a fuss about "things" In order to avoid the common disadvantages of embedding associations and increase pertinence, we must contact the actual situation of the embedded objects, such as occupation, career, personality, hobbies, age, etc.

For example, Wen Tianxiang is upright and upright, and he is bold and unconstrained; Auspicious around the blue haze, protect the Song Dynasty to be loyal. Such as * * * Lian Jian Yong, and the four pests are called marshals; Meritorious reputation, courage to recommend the spirit of the public.

For example, Sun Yat-sen combined with China Guangxing, and Dan Xin lit the New Year's fire; The mountains and rivers flow, and the giants overthrow the old emperor. The above triple highlights the identity and achievements of Wen Tianxiang, * * * and Sun Yat-sen respectively, pointing to being single, while others cannot be the same.

The "Wenguang Cup" in Wen Tianxiang Memorial Hall is inscribed with the word "Wenguang" in each sentence, which is closely related to Wen Tianxiang's achievements. One hundred generations of literati: literary talent carries the Tao, literary talent is romantic, literary son is literary grandson, and literary policy is called one hundred generations; Millennium light: light can lead the way and be aboveboard. Light comes first, and the wind shines for a thousand years.

3. It is a broad concept to make a fuss about allusion on "Canon", and all chapters of this article are about allusion. This part mainly discusses the application of allusions in Zi.

The use of allusions in "Zi" means that words must be well-founded, which makes couplets more profound, thoughtful and meaningful. For example, Xu Jingming, a scholar in the late Qing Dynasty, wrote an inscription for Mingcheng School: Honesty is success, learning is teaching; Know how to argue and learn how to gather.

The last sentence "Sincere Success" comes from The Book of Rites. The original text is "be sincere to yourself", and the word "yourself" is deleted. "School teachers teach it" comes from the article Historical Records Biography of the Scholars.

The next sentence "argue clearly" comes from The Mean. The original sentence is "knowledgeable, interrogative, thoughtful, discerning and sincere". Add the word "want" to the clearly argued sentence. "Learning to gather" is the Book of Changes and Gan Gua: a gentleman "learning to gather".