Write a composition on the topic of "turning around at the right time" or "watching flowers bloom"

Original title reproduction

Read the following materials and write as required. (50 points)

Two disciples asked the master for advice: "Master, our work is too painful. Please give us some advice." The master pondered for a long time and drew a bowl of rice on the paper. After reading the painting, if they realize something, one will resign and go home to farm, and the other will stay in the company.

Ten years later, the farmer managed by modern methods and became an agricultural expert. Those who stayed in the company worked hard and became managers. As soon as they met, the agricultural expert said, "Master draws a bowl of rice, and he who knows the times is a hero." The manager said, "It's just a bowl of rice. Why change your mind? "

What does this story make you think? Please write an article on the topic of "going back in time" or "watching flowers bloom" in combination with life.

Requirements:

Choose a topic. The topic is self-made.

Choose your own style, you can narrate, express your feelings and discuss.

No less than 600 words. If you write a poem, it should be no less than 15 lines.

Benchmarking demonstration paper

Marking and grading (first class)

Content 25 points? Express 19 points? Develop 5 points? The total score is 49 points

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Anyone can watch the flowers bloom.

? Liaocheng yi candidates

That winter, when I was in the second day of junior high school, there was a football wind on campus. Choose a football team for each grade, and finally choose the school team to participate in the city's competitions.

Many boys have green dreams, and I am no exception. The leader of the second grade group is Mr. Wang, who teaches us physical education. There was an endless stream of people signing up at his place, and I signed up, thinking about how I would be selected. Unexpectedly, I was the first when Mr. Wang announced the list of unsuccessful candidates.

I was very unconvinced and went to miss Wang angrily: "why can't I let the ball go?" Teacher Wang smiled and said, "You are too young and weak. You have to be knocked down as soon as you go on stage. " I am not convinced: "How do you know that I can't do it if you don't try?"

? I am very determined, and Miss Wang is also very determined to let me be a substitute teacher. In winter training, I was the first to go to the stadium and the last to leave, and I didn't have a rest during the whole class. My contribution, only that bare locust tree knows. But in real games, I'm always forgotten, and I don't even have a chance to come off the bench.

? Think about the history of blood and tears of those stars. I wanted to give up, but I gritted my teeth and persisted. After the training, I worked harder and harder, and I began to show my talents. Miss Wang looked at me, but never praised me.

? In the warm and cold season, I began to have the opportunity to play in the grade team, initially as a substitute and occasionally as a main player. Slowly, I became the absolute main force of the junior two football team. I know that my efforts will not be in vain, just as the days when flowers bloom will not last forever.

? Spring blossoms and everything recovers. The school team is mainly a junior football team. There is a player in Grade One and a player in Grade Two, and I am not one of them. This time, instead of trying hard, I secretly watched the training of the school team and carefully observed their advantages and disadvantages. They practiced on the court, and I sat in on the runway outside. I will practice as long as the school team, even longer than them.

My efforts will not be in vain, and my physical fitness and skills will be improved invisibly. That time, when I was training alone, there was a burst of applause behind me. I looked back and found that the coach's eyes were full of appreciation. He smiled and said to me, "Young man, would you like to join the school team?" I nodded my head hard.

On the day when the locust tree bloomed, I went out with the team With his own performance, he won the starting opportunity in many inter-school competitions. In addition to contributing goals, he also paid a lot of sweat and efforts.

Looking back on those shining days, I know that only by persistence and hard work can we see the flowers bloom. No flower can bloom casually. Only by watering it with persistence and firmness and guarding it with confidence and courage can the flower in your heart bloom invincible forever.

Scoring prompt

1. Close to life, authentic. By describing the fact that "I" finally joined the school football team through unremitting efforts, the article writes out the gains that "I" got from this success: "No flower can bloom casually. Only by watering it with persistence and firmness and guarding it with confidence and courage can the flower in my heart bloom invincible forever. " The content is close to students' life, authentic and easy to cause * * *.

2. The language is plain and positive. The language of the article is colloquial and has a strong flavor of life. The story has a strong sense of hierarchy, and the narrative has a sense of ups and downs, which gives people positive energy. On the theme, the flowering process of Sophora japonica is a metaphor for the growth process of "I", which closely follows the theme and shows the enterprising spirit of "I".

Highlights of scoring: based on life, the narrative is smooth.

Original title feature

Except for the 20 17 essay entitled "This is Youth", the composition of Liaocheng senior high school entrance examination has always been a topic composition. 20 18 also follows this traditional topic composition. This provides candidates with more free space to play, and is more conducive to candidates to show their own characteristics.

The topic material is a story, which is easy to understand and contains profound philosophy. So, how to deal with the story material of topic composition? First of all, we must try to understand the content of the story. The story is simple. It tells that under the guidance of the master, two apprentices chose to persist, one chose to leave, and finally both achieved something. Of course, it is more important to know the hidden truth of the story. Generally speaking, after the story is finished, there are often closing sentences, one is to reveal the truth of the story, the other is to play a cohesive role and lead to the topic. This problem is that there is no finishing touch, which makes some candidates too entangled in the meaning of the story. Which of the two disciples made the right choice? Which choice do experts prefer? In fact, for topic composition, the story material is nothing more than an example, which plays an introductory role, that is, leads to the topic of writing.

Ideological points

1. Learn to turn around and life will be more exciting.

When we encounter a bottleneck, insisting blindly may not have a good result. From a different angle and direction, you may see a whole new world. Maybe this is the direction worth working hard for. As the saying goes, "Don't hang yourself on a naked tree." It can be written that caterpillars become butterflies, darkness becomes light, and life becomes another glory. You can write the story of a celebrity's gorgeous turn, or you can write the story of yourself or people around you turning to save themselves in trouble, from which you can find profound meaning in life.

2. Turning around in time is a kind of wisdom.

The original meaning of "turn" is to turn around, which can be extended to give up, change and choose quickly. Its modifier "timely" means suitable at the right time and opportunity. Among the materials, the apprentice who chose to resign and go home to farm became an agricultural expert, which can be described as "a hero who knows the times". It can be seen that "timely turn" refers to a turn suitable for the right time. Turn around at the right time, you will have a lot less burden, turn a lot of corners, take a lot of detours and gain a lot of wisdom. From this, we can determine the corresponding intention, which can be written as "learn to give up", "change if you are poor", "learn to back down when something happens", "win in turn" and "life needs you to stop and appreciate slowly"

3. Looking at flowers is a kind of beauty.

The original meaning of "watch" is watch, watch, and it means waiting, hoping and supporting each other. "Guarding" is the insistence on the goal, and "looking" is the yearning for the goal, which embodies a persistent spirit. "Flowers bloom" is an abstract statement, which refers to the result of "seeing", a harvest and a beauty. The apprentice who chose to stay in the materials worked hard and was willing to stick to it, and eventually became a manager. It can be seen that "Looking at Flowers" contains the expectation of a better life, represents the pursuit and belief, and is full of positive energy.

4. Watch the blooming dream with your will.

Look at who? Why look? What do you think? What happened after the watch? From the perspective of growth, we can write about the life experience, the hardships and difficulties encountered in the process of chasing dreams, and the fact that we once thought about giving up, but in the end we persisted with a vigilant heart. This topic can tell stories and describe scenes, but it should be emotional and emotional. In addition, it can also be written as an argumentative paper. When discussing, we should pay attention to clear and accurate viewpoints, typical and novel arguments, and appropriate and convincing arguments.