Zhang Jinwen, Guangdong
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Read the following poem and write as required.
If we blindly question, we have lost trust/become accustomed to criticism, then we forget to praise/indulge in resistance and rebellion, and capture the supercilious pleasure/but/if there is only negation and dissatisfaction/where do we put happiness and happiness?
Please write an article according to the content of the poem, combined with your own understanding and experience, with your own idea and title, no less than 800 words.
Writing skills
1. Look at the content and manage the relationship.
Poetry involves two aspects. On the one hand, it is a similar attitude or practice written in front: blind questioning, accustomed to criticism, addicted to resistance and rebellion, denial and dissatisfaction; On the other hand, it is the influence of previous attitudes or practices, which are: "losing trust", "forgetting praise", "capturing supercilious pleasure" and "where to put happiness".
2. Grasp the key and identify the trend.
Judging from the modifiers "blindness", "habit", "addiction" and "supercilious", the questioner does not agree with this attitude or practice, thus asking the question "where do we put happiness and happiness", suggesting that this practice is not conducive to our placement of happiness and happiness.
This is a topic with a strong sense of reality, and the focus of writing is to talk about the view of "blind questioning" in combination with my own understanding and experience. If you avoid the practice of "questioning blindly", just talk about how to be happy (such as "simplicity is happiness" and "happiness is around"). ), or only discuss the reasons why people "ask questions blindly" without talking about the influence of such practices, and the understanding of the topic materials is not comprehensive enough to meet the requirements of the questioner.
Conception guidance
Conception direction 1:
This paper points out the negative effects of the attitude and practice of "questioning blindly" and calls for "trust" and "praise" to create a happy life. Indiscriminate questioning is not good for people and society. Bad for others-hurting feelings, affecting relationships, and dampening enthusiasm. It is not good for yourself-it is easy to form prejudice, become paranoid, lose trust and forget praise, which is not good for personal progress. Bad for society-spreading negative emotions and eliminating positive energy. In the era of paranoia, people's emotions are easily manipulated. The idea can be distilled as follows:
Don't let doubt overwhelm praise (applicable to the relationship between parents, doctors and patients, teachers and students, colleagues and superiors);
Don't let doubt become a stumbling block to doing good;
Leave room for praise, blindly questioning is not conducive to the development of sports;
Adolescent rebellion should be enough;
Objective reports convey strength, blindly question and create panic.
Conception direction 2:
Blind negation is not conducive to social development, while rational questioning is beneficial to people's happiness. Rational questioners are often excellent talents with virtue, knowledge and courage. On the surface, their questioning is opposition to people and things, but in essence it is heartfelt support and persistent pursuit of perfection. The increase of questioning voices is a manifestation of citizens' awareness of participation and attention to citizens' speech. In the long run, all undertakings will make great progress.
Material link
1. The China Academy of Social Sciences released the "Research Report on Social Mentality of China 20 12-20 1 3" (Blue Book of Social Mentality) on October 7, 2065438, showing that the overall social trust ranking of China dropped further, below the "passing line" of 60 points. Interpersonal distrust has further expanded, and less than half of the respondents believe that most people in society can be trusted; The distrust between groups is also deepening and solidifying, which is manifested in the distrust of police and people, doctors and patients, civil and commercial relations and many other major social relations.
2. Lu Ruoqing, the "most beautiful anti-cancer girl", used Weibo to record anti-cancer stories, but she was suspected to be a fictional character in online hype. The beautiful girl who should have been supported has been questioned.
3. A primary school teacher in Haikou received the wallet that the students found. After many twists and turns, he contacted the owner, but was questioned by the other party-"Why is there less money in the wallet?" Doing good deeds but being questioned is an injury to the dignity and reputation of good people.
4. After the Ya 'an earthquake, the China Red Cross called on all sectors of society to actively donate money and materials to participate in disaster relief, but its credibility was questioned by some people, and even there was an incident that "Shenzhen Red Cross raised money for the earthquake and citizens made a detour". Many performing stars have joined the ranks of disaster relief, but with the exposure of the amount of donations, many netizens have doubts about the performance of the stars. The hostess in wedding dress and the entrepreneur who sent money to the disaster area were questioned as "show" and "hype". Shenyang centenarian Guan donated103,000 yuan to Lushan earthquake-stricken area. Some netizens praised him as "the most beautiful grandfather", others suspected that the old man might be suspected of charity fraud, and some even suspected that the old man was "entrusted" and "used as a gun" by the Red Cross.
The "Red-headed Car" public welfare motorcade in Hefei, Anhui has been praised by all walks of life, but this kind of free public welfare service is cold in reality. There are fewer citizens who take the initiative to stop the car. When volunteers stopped to introduce themselves and asked if they needed help, they also met with a "cold face" from the citizens.
6. The incident of child abuse by kindergarten teachers worried parents. It is reported that some parents bugged their children; Some parents go to kindergarten five times a day to secretly observe their children's situation; In kindergartens without monitoring facilities, parents strongly demand the installation of cameras; In kindergartens with cameras, the monitoring room is crowded with parents.
(Excerpted from China Youth Daily on October 8th, 20 12/KLOC-0).
7. Crazy questions blinded my eyes. In the era of paranoia, people tend to lose the ability of independent judgment and their emotions are easily manipulated. For Han Han and Lu Ruoqing, how many skeptics become blind followers in the manic noise, or just to enjoy the superiority and pleasure brought by this questioning carnival.
(Excerpted from Chongqing Times on May 24, 20 12)
8. Many corruption and food safety issues have been made public in the voice of netizens' doubts.
9. Scholar Ai Jun believes that habitual questioning is an inevitable phenomenon in the period of social transformation. As a society becomes more and more open and democratic, there will be more and more doubts, which reflects the improvement of citizens' quality and is also an objective manifestation of citizens' freedom of speech being more and more guaranteed in the process of democratization.
10. In the "20 13 Global Trust Survey Report" published by Edelman, a well-known public relations company, people trusted by "high-knowledge people" in 26 countries were investigated and counted. The "intellectual crowd" here refers to middle-aged respondents who have a certain income and education and are keen on political affairs. The survey results show that intellectuals in most countries are skeptical about the government, but the elites who participate in social affairs in China have great trust in the government.
1 1. Any good system design is to start with distrust and build the final trust. Similarly, in the process of system operation, it can only be said that the system has been successfully implemented if it still stands the "test" under the habitual questioning. This is especially important for public power.
(Excerpted from Yanjing Metropolis Daily on July 6, 20 12)
Excellent example 1
Don't let doubt and dissatisfaction drive away beauty.
Pan Jiaxin of Nanhai Middle School in Foshan City
In a dance rehearsal, the instructor suggested that students with irregular dance movements should not be too prominent. She said that when watching a performance, the audience is always particularly sensitive to shortcomings. You may miss a beautiful dance, but if you take a wrong step, you will be found immediately.
It may be human nature to find other people's shortcomings easily. There is such a kind of people in the society: with their critical eyes, sensitive sense of smell and information network extending in all directions, they can always find something with superhuman insight and sense of trend when people praise and admire it, create a sensational effect of thunder, quickly catch people's attention and lead public opinion in the direction of questioning and denying. Stars donated money to the disaster area, some people called it "hypocrisy" and some people accused it of "donating too little"; Entrepreneurs went to the disaster area to find money for the victims and were questioned as "hype"; The news anchor was hoarse and still insisted on broadcasting the disaster relief dynamics, which was judged as a "show". Even Lei Feng, an example who has been away for many years, was booed: Why do you leave so many photos when you do good deeds without leaving a name? It's really "getting shot while lying down"!
Some people disagree. Without the questioning spirit of "picking bones from eggs", how can society develop and progress? Of course, it is definitely abnormal to say yes to everything in unison. However, will denying and questioning those who really do good deeds and venting their dissatisfaction at will help the development of charity? If there is only blind criticism and endless doubts about this society, can society still develop and progress? Of course not. Questioning those who really do good deeds is likely to block people's way of doing good deeds.
In China, where respecting the old and caring for the young is the fashion, there will be a tragedy in which the old man falls and no one helps him. Saving a life is better than building a seven-level pagoda. What makes people afraid to lend a helping hand? When every stratum and department of a society is questioned and denied, and people are full of distrust, then the society will inevitably be paralyzed and the interpersonal network will inevitably break.
A philosopher once said that the most terrible thing in life is not that there is desert in front of you, but that there is no oasis in your heart. This reminds people of the Nanjing Peng Yu case and the Foshan Xiaoyueyue incident, which have been mentioned too many times. In addition to moral decay and lack of trust, we should think about these events! Don't let doubt and dissatisfaction change people's hearts for goodness and beauty!
I once read an article that a mother forbade her children to read fairy tales before primary school. She believes that fairy tales will make children feel that a beautiful princess will live happily with a handsome prince, and will make children form a world view that "life is perfect", which is inconsistent with the cruel reality. I understand the mother's protection for her children, but I prefer to believe that the world is beautiful and I hope the prince and princess will get married. If you really can't trust the people and things around you 100%, please stop and think before questioning and criticizing, and don't rush to conclusions to vent your anger and get quick success. Because of our irresponsible denial and dissatisfaction, it is likely to affect the happiness and happiness of others, and it is also likely to make ourselves farther and farther away from happiness. Learn to trust, learn to praise, and don't let doubt and dissatisfaction drive away beauty!
comment
Starting from life experience, this paper talks about the characteristics that people like to question, and illustrates with examples that blindly questioning good deeds will hinder people's way of doing good, pointing out the far-reaching influence of habitual questioning and negation on themselves, others and society, and finally puts forward hope. The theme is clear and prominent, the thinking is clear, and the arguments are strong. The materials are typical and novel, with strong practical pertinence. The language is fluent, natural, emotional and thought-provoking.
Example 2 of excellent works
Be afraid on the road
Foshan Nanhai Middle School Huo
I am dragging my suitcase with my left hand and a big bag of gifts for my relatives and friends with my right hand. My messenger bag is full of personal belongings, and my right arm is carrying a heavy computer bag. I am struggling to walk in the crowd entering the railway station, and I am about to embark on my way home.
"Sister, are you going back to Changsha?" A strange man walked up to me easily, smiling like the sunshine at that time. I nodded my head. "Let me help you with it, the luggage has bent you!" The words sound just fell and a strong hand reached out and took my suitcase. I left in a hurry, saying that I don't need a gentleman's appearance, smooth and shiny hair, smooth and shiny shoes, and that smooth and shiny smile. I must be up to no good.
When I got on the train, I turned on my laptop to receive the mail, and a gentle "girl" rang around me. Just then, I snapped the screen closed, hugged the computer tightly and leaned back. "Girl, you don't be nervous. I am a waiter. What would you like to drink? " "No, I brought my own water ..." It was not until the figure of the waiter was far away that I breathed a sigh of relief and found that I was holding sweat in my hand. Who knows if this waiter is a liar, be careful! I remind myself.
The scenery outside the window is fleeting and the sunshine is warm and comfortable. It's almost noon. It's time to sell lunch boxes. People slowly gathered at the meal like a trickle. The car became lively, and my relaxed nerves became tense: many people are prone to problems, so pay attention!
The car smelled of food, and people around it ate with relish. I am hungry, too. I really want to gobble up like this uncle next to me and sacrifice to the five zang-organs temple. However, the reports of "gutter oil", "instant chicken" and "bleached yuba" continue one after another, and the food outside is not credible! So although I am very hungry, I keep comforting myself-the meat in the lunch box must be free of clenbuterol, the Chinese cabbage must be big and strong, and a lot of pesticides are used. The rice may contain some special chemicals, and the lunch box may be unqualified! There is nothing credible in this world, it is better not to eat!
Along the way, people around us got together and had a good chat. They talked and laughed like a family. My eyes glanced out of the window, keeping my distance from everyone, just waiting for the train to reach its destination. A middle-aged woman gave me a look, and I quickly looked at my luggage. Fortunately, they are all here!
"Passengers going to Changsha, please take all your luggage and get off!"
I'm finally happy, I'm home! I was dragging a lot of luggage to get off and was about to step out of the car door. I was shocked-did I get off at Changsha? I began to doubt myself. ...
comment
This article is ingenious, writing about "I" on my way home, nervous, and always looking at people and things around me with questioning eyes. The plot of "doubting oneself" at the end is intriguing, which implies the author's view on the attitude of "questioning blindly". The material comes from life, and the story is like happening around us, with a strong sense of reality. The author describes the behavior and psychology of the characters in detail, and his personality is distinct and outstanding.