Change the law to 1, delete "read" and comma, and change it to "This book has made me deeply educated."

Change the second law, delete "stone" and change it to "I read this book and am deeply educated."

After reading this book, I was deeply educated. This kind of sick sentence is an incomplete component, and the sentence lacks a subject. Change the law to 1, and after deleting "read" and comma, the subject of the sentence is "this book"; After deleting "Yes" in Amendment 2, the subject of the sentence is "I". Both of these changes can make the sentence structure complete.

Extended data:

There are many kinds of common ill sentences, such as improper word order and collocation.

1, incorrect word order.

The workers in the new factory showed great enthusiasm for their work.

Analysis of the improper position of the attribute, "unparalleled" should modify "enthusiasm" rather than "work". The workers in the new factory showed great enthusiasm for their work.

2. Improper collocation

For example, the improvement of working ability depends on whether employees work hard themselves.

The analysis of "improving ability" is one-sided, "whether to work hard" is two-sided, and the front and back are not properly matched. It can be changed to: whether the working ability is improved depends on whether the employees themselves work hard.

References:

Baidu Encyclopedia: Ill Sentences