A very formatted argumentative essay. I don't know what the basic score of your 70-point composition is, but as far as Zhejiang's 60-point composition is concerned, 48-60 points is a composition. The central theme of this article can be regarded as a composition. The article is rich in materials and fluent in language, but it is too technical and not true enough. I think it's about 52-54 points.

The format 1 puts forward an argument that needs forgiveness.

The benefits of forgiveness for yourself and your country.

Forgive but not violate the principle.

4 Combining with reality, calling for forgiveness